热点话题12 读后续写之追逐梦想类故事
（写作专练）
目录
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架
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思
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02 心中的梦想------------------------------------------------------------------------------------1
03 追逐梦想---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------2
04 梦想成真---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------3
05 人生启迪---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------3
06 素材积累---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------4
07 真题演练--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------5
08 模拟训练--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------7
基础部分--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------7
模拟演练-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------8
追逐梦想类故事大致模型
第一部分 心中的梦想或理想
1.For as long as she could remember, Maya dreamed of standing at the summit. Every day, she would look up at the
peak, imagining what it would be like to stand at the top and see the world from that height.玛雅从小就梦想着站
在山顶。每天，她都会抬头望向那座山峰，想象站在山顶上，从高处俯瞰世界的景象。
2.I was 12 and had spent the whole of primary school not wearing any shoes, but I dreamed of being a teacher. 我
12 岁，整个小学都没穿过鞋，但我梦想成为一名教师。
3.Each day, I felt my dream coming alive again, letter by letter.每天，我都能感受到自己的梦想正一点一滴地重
新鲜活起来。
4.When I was 10 years old, I loved skating and had an Olympic dream. 我十岁的时候，喜欢滑冰，有一个奥运
梦想。
5.Lily had been dreaming of a beautiful doll(洋娃娃)for months, but she knew it was an impossible wish.莉莉几个
月来一直梦想着拥有一个漂亮的娃娃，但她知道这是不可能实现的愿望。
6.She was finally going to participate in the regional kite-flying competition, an event she had dreamed of joining
since she was a little girl.她终于要参加地区风筝比赛了，这是她从小就梦想参加的活动。
7.Volleyball was the most dazzling dream in Lily’s heart, and she dreamed of standing on the provincial-level
competition court one day. 排球是莉莉心中最耀眼的梦想，她梦想着有朝一日能站在省级比赛的赛场上。
8.Mrs Moreno encouraged her daughter to study hard, hoping Yollie would realize her dream of becoming a doctor
one day.莫雷诺夫人鼓励女儿努力学习，希望约利有一天能实现她成为一名医生的梦想。
9.When Tom attended school, he had dreamed of becoming a doctor to help others. 汤姆上学时，就梦想着成为
一名医生，帮助别人。
10.His dream was to become a famous pianist, hoping to charm audiences with his enchanting tunes. 他梦想成为
一名著名的钢琴家，希望用他迷人的旋律迷住观众。
第二部分 为梦想奋斗的过程
1.When she climbed higher than before, the air grew thinner, and every step became a struggle. Maya’s muscles
ached, and her breath became rapid, but she refused to give up.当她爬得比以前更高时，空气变得越来越稀薄，
每一步都变得艰难。玛雅的肌肉酸痛，呼吸急促，但她拒绝放弃。
2.She knew that each step forward, no matter how small, brought her closer to her goal. 她知道，每向前一步，
无论多么微小，都会让她离目标更近一步。
3.She wanted to prove to herself that she was capable of achieving her dreams, no matter how difficult the journey
was. Taking a deep breath and filled with renewed determination, she thanked the climbers for their concern but
decided to continue.她想向自己证明，无论旅途多么艰难，她都能实现自己的梦想。她深吸一口气，满怀新
的决心，感谢登山者们的关心，但决定继续前进。
4.He spent countless hours tinkering with the printer, adjusting the settings, and trying different materials. 他花了
无数个小时摆弄打印机，调整设置，尝试不同的材料。
5.However, creating the leg model was not easy. Nathan faced many challenges along the way. He had to take
precise measurements of Tim’s remaining leg and do a lot of research to understand how a prosthetic leg should be
designed.然而，制作假肢模型并非易事。内森在过程中遇到了诸多挑战，他需要对蒂姆的残余腿部进行精
确测量，并深入研究假肢的设计原理。
6.She added that she would work twice as hard to achieve her dreams.她还表示，为了实现梦想，自己会加倍努
力。
7.He always encouraged her, telling her she could achieve her dream. 他总是鼓励她，告诉她她可以实现她的梦
想。
8.I’ve always dreamed of speaking English well, and this is my chance to prove myself. I know it will be an uphill
battle, but I’m fully prepared to put in the hard work.我一直梦想能说一口流利的英语，现在正是证明自己的好
机会。我知道这会是一场艰难的挑战，但我已做好充分准备，全力以赴。
9.I was one step closer to realizing my dream of becoming a teacher, knowing that all my perseverance had paid
off.我离实现当老师的梦想又近了一步，知道我所有的坚持都得到了回报。
第三部分 梦想成真
1.Encouraged, Eudora took her rainbow carnation to the festival. Not surprisingly, Eudora’s carnation won first
prize at the festival. 受到鼓舞，尤多拉带着她的彩虹康乃馨参加了节日。不出所料，她的康乃馨在节日上获
得了第一名。
2.With the prize money, she bought starter plants to begin her own flower garden, finally making a long-held dream
come true. 她用奖金买了些幼苗，终于种出了自己的花坛，实现了长久以来的梦想。
3.Realizing that all my efforts eventually paid off, I breathed a sigh of relief, a smile lighting up my face. （由that
引导的宾语从句）意识到我所有的努力最终得到了回报，我松了一口气，脸上露出了微笑。
4.After several hours of hard work, Maya finally reached the summit. She stood at the peak, looking out over the
vast landscape below.经过几个小时的艰苦工作，玛雅终于登上了山顶。她站在山顶，眺望着下面广阔的风
景。
5.The view was more breathtaking than she had ever imagined, and tears of joy filled her eyes. 眼前的景象比她
想象的还要震撼，喜悦的泪水涌上了她的眼眶。
6.She eventually got the scholarship she had once dreamed of（使用了省略关系词的定语从句，先行词为
scholarship）她最终获得了她曾经梦想的奖学金。
7.She couldn’t believe that her dream had come true. Holding the doll tightly, she gave Sophia a big hug, thanking
her over and over again.她简直不敢相信自己的梦想竟然实现了。她紧紧抱着玩偶，给了索菲娅一个大大的
拥抱，一遍又一遍地道谢。
第四部分 人生启迪
1.Looking back on her journey, Eudora realized that the true secret of life, much like growing flowers, lies in
nurturing dreams with love, patience, effort, and persistence.回首人生历程，尤多拉领悟到：正如培育花朵般，
生命真谛在于以爱、耐心、努力与坚持滋养梦想。
2.I always feel that there is something in my mind about putting a story down on paper for friends across the globe
to read and understand, and about finding just the right words to describe what I can see so clearly in my head,
which attracts me like a beautiful song.我总觉得，把故事写在纸上让世界各地的朋友阅读理解，以及找到恰
到好处的词语来描述我头脑中清晰可见的东西，就像一首美丽的歌吸引着我，这让我感到有些东西。
3.She faced each new challenge with the same determination and courage, knowing that she had the strength to
climb any mountain, both in the world and within herself.她以同样的决心和勇气面对每一个新的挑战，因为她
知道她有力量攀登任何一座山，无论是在世界上还是在她自己内心。
4.At that moment, Maya realized that the journey up the mountain was not just about reaching the top; it was about
discovering her own strength and willpower.那一刻，玛雅意识到，攀登这座山的旅程不仅仅是为了到达山顶，
更是为了发现她自己的力量和意志力。
5.She had climbed her mountain, and in doing so, she had discovered the power that lay within her all along. And
from that day forward, Maya never doubted herself again. 她登上了自己的山，也由此发现了自己内心一直蕴
藏的力量。从那天起，玛雅再也没怀疑过自己。
6.She had achieved her dream, realizing it wasn’t just about winning — it was about growing stronger through
every struggle.她实现了自己的梦想，意识到这不仅仅是关于胜利，而是通过每一次奋斗变得更强大。
背精彩句子，让表达出彩
1.The steady income she earned not only improved her family’s living standards but also gave her a deep sense of
accomplishment.她稳定的收入不仅提高了她家人的生活水平，也给了她一种深深的成就感。
2.Hard practice paid off, he and his friends won the first prize. 努力的付出得到了回报，他和朋友们获得了第
一名。
3.It was he who enlightened me and helped me regain confidence to face challenges in my life.正是他让我明白，
也让我重拾信心，勇敢面对生活中的挑战。
4.Hearing that, I was speechless and struck by the fact that it was easier to convince others than to convince myself.
听到这个，我无言以对，震惊于说服别人比说服自己更容易。
5.This experience taught me that at times, these decisions are made for you and that whatever happens is always for
the best.这段经历让我明白，有时候这些决定都是为你而做的，无论发生什么，都是最好的结果。
6.His story and medals deeply touched my soul, making me appreciate the sacrifices made for our freedom.他的故
事和奖章深深触动了我的灵魂，让我感激为我们的自由做出的牺牲。
7.With a heart full of pride, Maya knew that there was no challenge too great for her to overcome.玛雅心中充满骄
傲，她知道没有什么挑战是她克服不了的。
8.His hard work had paid off, and he had not only fulfilled his promise but also gained valuable skills and
experience.他的努力得到了回报，他不仅兑现了自己的承诺，而且还获得了宝贵的技能和经验。
9.Tears blurred my vision as I looked down at the certificate. I thought of my mother, of dusty factory floors, of
those barefoot days and shelved dreams. 泪水模糊了我的视线，我低头看着那张证书。我想起了母亲，想起
了满是灰尘的工厂车间，想起了那些赤脚的日子和搁置的梦想。
10.She made up her mind to buy a jar to store these coins and bills. A new jar would hold more than mere money; it
would contain her dreams and the warmth of her father’s silent love.她下定决心买一个罐子来存放这些硬币和纸
币。一个新罐子不仅能装下金钱，更能承载她的梦想和父亲无声的爱。
11.Keep dreaming and never lose sight of what truly matters. 继续梦想，永远不要忘记真正重要的东西。
12.I had always collected and used a lot of stories to drive home the points I was teaching in my seminars(研讨
会)about the importance of acting from love, believing in yourself and your dreams, always following your heart,
trusting your intuition(直觉), setting high goals, overcoming obstacles, and never ever giving up on your dreams.我
长期收集并运用大量故事，通过这些案例在研讨会上（研讨会）深入阐释核心理念：要以爱为本，坚信自
我与梦想，始终追随内心指引，信赖直觉判断（直觉），设定远大目标，勇闯难关，永不放弃追梦之路。
13.Lily stood there, frozen in shock. All her hard work and dreams seemed to have crashed down in an instant.莉莉
呆立当场，浑身僵直。她所有的努力与梦想，仿佛在瞬间化为泡影。
14.Despite the challenges at home, Sarah studied hard and excelled academically, dreaming of building a brighter
future.尽管在国内面临挑战，莎拉努力学习，学业优异，梦想着建设一个更光明的未来。
15.After graduating from high school with good grades, she was admitted to a famous university to study
psychology. Her dream came true. 高中毕业后，她以优异成绩考入一所著名大学攻读心理学专业，梦想终于
实现了。
[河北省保定市高三摸底]
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One year, a newspaper of the United States published an announcement that the horticultural institute offered a
reward at a high price for the pure white marigold ( 金盏花). The high reward attracted so many people, but in
nature besides golden, the marigold is brown, and it is not easy to grow the white one. So after they were excited
for a time, many people had forgotten the announcement.
Years flew away. One normal day after 20 years, the horticultural institute that had published the
announcement accidentally received a letter and 100 seeds of pure white marigold. On that day the news spread
like wildfire.
It turned out to be an old woman of over 70 years old. The institute had always been hesitating over the fact
that the letter said with certainty that the seeds could bloom pure white marigold, and the need for verification (验
证) became the focus of the debate. Whether they would make an experimental verification or not became the
controversial focus at one time.
Some said you would never live up to the old man’s wish. Those seeds finally took root in the earth. The
miracle appeared after one year: large patches of pure white marigold waved in the breeze.
Accordingly, the old woman who was always unknown to the public became a new focus.
Originally, the old woman was a flower lover. When she occasionally read the announcement in the newspaper
20 years ago, she was eager to try. But her eight children strongly opposed her decision. After all, a woman who
never knew the seed genetics (遗传学) couldn’t complete what the experts could never achieve, so her thought
seemed very foolish.
注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150 左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已经为你写好。
Paragraph 1:
Still, the old woman didn’t change her mind and went on working without hesitation.
Paragraph 2:
Finally, after 20 years on the day we all know, in the garden she saw a pure white marigold.
【参考范文】
Still, the old woman didn’t change her mind and went on working without hesitation. She planted some of the
most common seeds and took good care of them. A year later, when the marigold came out, she chose the faintest
one from those golden and brow flowers and got the best seed. The next year, she again grew them and chose…
Day after day, year after year, through many seasons, the old woman’s husband died, her children flew far, but only
the wish to grow the pure white marigold took root in her heart.
Finally, after 20 years on the day we all know, in the garden she saw a pure white marigold. It was not nearly
white, but as white as silver or snow. A problem even scientists couldn’t deal with was solved by an old woman
who didn’t understand genetics. Was it magic? To take root in the heart, even the most common seed, can grow into
a miracle!
【解析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。文章讲述了一位超过70 岁的老人种出了纯白色的金盏花的事情。
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，园艺学会以高价悬赏纯白色的金盏花，但这并不
容易。就在人们渐渐忘记这个事情的时候，在20 年后的一个普通的日子里，一位70 多岁的老人寄给园艺
协会一封信和100 粒纯白色的金盏花的种子。在人们的质疑声中，一年后，这些种子种出了大片纯白色的
金盏花。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：尽管如此，老人还是没有改变主意，毫不犹豫地继续工作。接下
来应该描写老人种植纯白色的金盏花的过程，以及在这个过程中遇到的困难，比如丈夫的去世和孩子的离
开，但老人并没有放弃。第二段开头是：终于，在20 年后我们都知道的那一天，她在花园里看到了一朵
纯白色的金盏花。本段应该写老人的坚持获得了成功，她种出了纯白色的金盏花。并阐述这个事情所体现
出的道理，只要坚持，即使是普通人，也能创造奇迹。
最后还要注意所续写短文的基础时态为一般过去时，词数应为150 左右，注意遣词造句，不要出现语
法错误和中式英文，按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：hesitation, took good care of, deal with,
understand, miracle 等高级词汇和短语；文章恰当的使用了定语从句，如“Finally, after 20 years on the day
we all know, in the garden she saw a pure white marigold, which was not nearly white, but as white as silver or
snow.”和“A problem even scientists couldn’t deal with was solved by an old woman who didn’t understand
genetics.”，使文章表达更加地道。
第一部分 基础训练
一、读后续写情景运用—单句
根据汉语意思完成相关句子。
1 ．The judges announced the winners, and to Anna’s surprise, she had won first place.
_________________________ as she accepted the award.
评委宣布了获奖者，令安娜惊讶的是，她获得了第一名。当她接过奖项时，喜悦的泪水涌上了眼眶。
2.____________________, she rushed to spread the news, which made her mother and Mrs. Brown hurry over to
see what had happened.她兴奋地冲出去传消息，母亲和布朗太太也急忙赶来，想看看发生了什么事。
3．The morning before the festival, Eudora checked on her plant. _________________, it had transformed into a
towering rainbow carnation.节日前一天早上，尤多拉去查看她的植物。令她惊讶的是，它已经变成了一株高
耸的彩虹康乃馨。
4．They stared in amazement at the beautiful flower, __________________________, thrown away by Mrs.
Brown, had turned into something so remarkable. 他们惊奇地望着美丽的花，无法相信布朗太太扔掉的一株简
单的杂草，竟然变成了如此非凡的东西。
5．This important lesson became a guiding principle _______________________.这个重要的教训成为她永远
的指导原则。
【参考答案】
1. Tears of joy filled her eyes
2. Filled with excitement
3.To her amazement
4.unable to believe how a simple weed
5.she would carry with her always
二、读后续写情景运用—段落
请运用相关单词或高频语块，把下面的语篇补充完整。
One sunny morning, Chad got a nice-packaged delivery. 1._________________________（看到崭新的封
面）, Chad immediately fished out the phone to break the news to his grandma. “Grandma!
2._________________________（我们成功了！）” Chad exclaimed, 3._________________________（他的
笑声在温暖的空气中回荡） “You really make my day, sweetie.” Grandma replied with a satisfied smile playing
on the weathered but peaceful face. Meanwhile, Chad sighed with relief, 4._________________________（他肩
上的重担卸去了）. The book More More More quickly climbed the charts, becoming a bestseller, reflecting
Chad’s utmost efforts in 5._________________________（实现奶奶梦想） and providing warmth and
affection.
【参考答案】
1.At the sight of the new cover 2.We made it! 3.his laughter carrying through the warm air. 4.a heavy burden
lifted from his shoulders 5. realizing his grandma’s dream
第二部分 模拟演练
1.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。（2025 届河北省保
定市三模）
When I was seven years old, my family moved from Mexico to America. In Mexico, I was a cheerful girl
who loved making people laugh with my jokes and inventing fun games to play with my friends. However, when I
arrived in America, I found it hard to fit in, and I became quieter.
We lived in a small house with a modest yard where we grew vegetables-my responsibility. While I took
pride in watching them grow, there were times when I dreamed of having a beautiful garden like my schoolmate
Luella’s, with its delicate tulips (郁金香). Although Luella lived in the same neighborhood as me, we barely knew
each other.
It was after a tornado that Luella and I finally became close friends.
The tornado struck on a Sunday afternoon. The gentle breeze transformed into a strong wind, and thick gray
clouds filled the sky. Gradually, the tornado took shape, starting as a thin rope and growing into a large black funnel
(漏斗). My entire family gathered in the bathroom, seeking shelter from the storm. Terrified, I sat close to my
mom, knees in my chest. After the storm had passed, our worries and fears were replaced by relief that we were
unharmed and that our house had remained undamaged.
As I stepped outside, I witnessed the extent of the damage the tornado had caused to our neighborhood.
Across the street, a tall tree had fallen, crushing Luella’s garden in front of her yellow house. We hurried over to
check on it. Fortunately, her family seemed to be away at the time, and no one was injured. However, her once-
beautiful garden was in ruins, with the fallen tree destroying the tulips and debris ( 碎片) spread everywhere. I
could only imagine how heartbroken they must feel seeing this.
Then my mom’s usual words rang in my ear, “It is more blessed to give than to receive,” and my family
started to think about how we could help.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Just at that moment, Luella’s family returned in their car.
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Even after the debris was cleared, I could still sense Luella’s sorrow for her lost garden.
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【参考范文】 Just at that moment, Luella’ family returned in their car. Empathy surged within me as I saw their
shock and disbelief. Approaching Luella, I tightly held her hands and said, “I’m so sorry for your loss, but
thankfully you’re all right.” She weakly nodded, still puzzled by the shocking scene. My family volunteered to help
clean up the mess, cutting down the branches and removing the fallen trees. To lift Luella’s spirits and give her
comfort, I tried my best to cheer her up while tidying the garden with her, during which my own joyful personality
seemed to revive a bit.
Even after the debris was cleared, I could still sense Luella’ sorrow for her lost garden. My heart went out to her,
knowing how much she had cherished those tulips that she had devoted so much energy to. Determined to restore
the beauty of the garden, I suggested we rebuild the garden, which Luella delightedly agreed. Carefully planted and
watered, the new tulip seedlings once again filled the garden, which symbolized the beginning of our friendship, as
well as the turning that I finally got embraced by this new environment. My mom was right: it’s more blessed to
give than to receive because when you give, you may receive something unexpected in return.
【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，主要讲述了作者七岁时从墨西哥搬到美国后变得沉默寡言，难以融入新
环境。作者家有个种着蔬菜的院子，作者梦想拥有像同学露卢埃拉那样美丽的花园。一场龙卷风袭击了作
者所在的街区，卢埃拉家的花园被毁，作者一家决定帮助卢埃拉一家清理废墟，作者也借此机会和卢埃拉
成为了亲密朋友，还一起重建花园，最终作者也重新找回了曾经开朗的自己并逐渐融入新环境的故事。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“就在这时，卢埃拉的家人开着车回来了。”可知，第一段可描写卢埃拉一家看到花
园被毁后的反应，作者及家人对他们的安慰，以及大家一起清理废墟的过程，同时要体现作者在这个过程
中情绪的变化
②由第二段首句内容“即使在废墟被清理干净之后，我仍然能感觉到卢埃拉对她失去的花园的悲伤。”可
知，第二段可描写作者感受到露埃拉的悲伤后决定采取行动，即提议重建花园，重建花园的过程以及花园
重建后带来的意义。
2.续写线索：卢埃拉一家看到花园废墟的反应→作者安慰露埃拉→作者一家帮忙清理废墟→作者在清理过
程中恢复开朗→废墟清理后卢埃拉仍悲伤→作者提议重建花园→一起重建花园→花园重建的意义→感悟给
予的道理
3.词汇激活
行为类：
① 走近：approach/get close to
② 清理：clean up/clear away
③ 种植：plant/sow
④建议：suggest/recommend
情绪类
① 震惊：shock/astonishment
② 高兴的：delighted/joyful
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Empathy surged within me as I saw their shock and disbelief.（运用了 as 引导的时
间状语从句）
【高分句型 2】To lift Luella’s spirits and give her comfort, I tried my best to cheer her up while tidying the
garden with her, during which my own joyful personality seemed to revive a bit.（运用了动词不定式作目的状语，
while 引导的时间状语从句以及 “介词 + 关系代词 which” 引导的非限制性定语从句）
2．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。（2025 届四川省
新高考第二次联合诊断性考试）
It was the day of the school’s art exhibition. Students from various classes had been preparing their artworks
for weeks. The exhibition hall was filled with many paintings, sculptures, and handicrafts, each one carefully
crafted and placed to display the students’ best efforts. The walls seemed to come alive with colors and shapes, as
the morning sunlight streamed through the high windows, casting a warm light over the displays.
Miss Smith, the art teacher, was walking around, admiring the students’ wonderful work. Suddenly, she
noticed that Jack, one of her most talented students, was standing alone in front of his painting, looking rather
depressed. His painting, which was usually filled with lively colors and unique perspectives(视角), seemed dull and
unfinished today. The edges were rough, and the colors seemed to mix together without the usual harmony.
Miss Smith went over and gently asked Jack what the matter was. Jack hesitated, and then admitted that he
had been going through a tough time lately. His parents were pressuring him to focus more on academics and were
considering making him quit art classes. This had been weighing heavily on his mind, and he had lost his
inspiration. He had spent many sleepless nights wondering how to balance his love for art with his parents’
expectations.
Miss Smith understood the situation all too well. She knew Jack had a real gift for art and didn’t want to see
him give up so easily. She told Jack that she would talk to his parents and try to make them understand his passion.
She told stories of famous artists who had faced similar challenges but had gone on pursuing their dreams. She also
showed Jack some sketches(素描)she had made when she was young and had faced doubts about her own artistic
path. Jack’s eyes widened slightly as he saw the familiar struggles in his teacher’s past works.
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Jack and his parents walked onto the award stage, happy and proud.
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Greatly inspired by his teacher, Jack headed for his art studio. Miss Smith, noticing Jack’s potential, reached
out to his parents. She told them about Jack’s talent and the value of art. Initially hesitant, his parents gradually
understood. With their support, Jack picked up his brush, painting with new enthusiasm. After days of hard work,
Jack finished his painting and submitted it to a local competition. To his delight, his piece was selected as the
winning entry. Jack excitedly shared the good news with his parents, and together they got ready for the award
ceremony.
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Jack and his parents walked onto the award stage, happy and proud. Jack scanned the audience and spotted
Miss Smith, whose eyes sparkled with pride. In that moment, Jack knew he owed his success to her. His parents,
now beaming, had come to appreciate his passion. The painting that had once been a source of despair was now a
symbol of his triumph. As the applause washed over them, Jack vowed to continue his artistic journey, forever
grateful to those who had believed in him.
【解析】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了在学校艺术展览日，艺术老师Miss Smith 注意到她最有天赋的学
生之一Jack 独自站在自己的画作前，显得非常沮丧。Jack 的画作与以往充满活力和独特视角的作品相比，
显得黯淡且未完成。通过与Jack 交谈，Miss Smith 了解到Jack 近期因为父母施加的压力，要求他更多地关
注学业，并考虑让他放弃艺术课，这使他感到非常沉重，失去了创作的灵感。Miss Smith 深表理解，并分
享了自己年轻时面对艺术道路疑虑时的经历，以及一些著名艺术家面对类似挑战但仍坚持追求梦想的故事，
鼓励Jack 不要轻易放弃。
1.段落续写
①由第一段首句内容“受老师的极大鼓舞，Jack 朝他的艺术工作室走去。”可知，第一段可描写Smith 老
师告知Jack 父母他的才华以及艺术的价值，Jack 得到了父母的支持后，在比赛中获奖的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“Jack 和父母走上颁奖台，满心欢喜，无比自豪。”可知，第二段可描写Jack 获奖后
发自内心感谢Smith 老师的支持并决定坚持自己的艺术之路。
2.续写线索：劝说父母——表示理解——得到支持——作品获奖——感谢老师——决定继续艺术之路
3.词汇激活
行为类
①注意：notice/take notice of
②理解：understand/comprehend
③挑选：select/pick out
④为……做准备：get ready for/make preparations for
⑤欣赏：appreciate/admire
情绪类
①兴奋地：excitedly/feverishly
②感激的：grateful/appreciative
【点睛】[高分句型1]Jack scanned the audience and spotted Miss Smith, whose eyes sparkled with pride.（运用
了whose 引导非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]As the applause washed over them, Jack vowed to continue his artistic journey, forever grateful to
those who had believed in him.（运用了as 引导时间状语从句，who 引导限制性定语从句）
3．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。（2025 届河南省
九师联盟高三下学期押题信息英语试卷（一））
Last summer holiday, I worked part-time in a small store, which had almost everything you might need in
daily life. I was responsible for helping customers locate what they wanted and sometimes carrying things out to
their cars. The store owner clearly told me that I couldn’t accept tips from customers for helping carry their
purchases. I strictly followed the rule.
Though I earned only five dollars an hour, I loved working there because I was allowed to read books when
there were no customers. I enjoyed losing myself in the world of reading, dreaming of becoming a writer.
One noon, I was reading a book when an old lady came in. She was in her mid-eighties, almost five feet tall
and might weigh ninety pounds. She had perfectly-done hair and wore colorful blouses. She was just a well-put-
together woman.
I immediately put down my book and greeted the lady, learning that she wanted some new chairs for she was
redecorating the apartment she rented recently. She was a sweet and pleasant woman, and it only took us about five
minutes to find a chair that she liked. She bought two of them. When she made the payment, she asked to have her
chairs sent to her apartment. Due to her age and the fact that she lived alone, my boss got her address and told her
that the chairs would be delivered that afternoon.
That afternoon, my boss said to me, “Dan, why don’t you deliver the chairs to that lady?” I immediately said
yes, grabbed the chairs and headed to the destination.
When I entered the apartment, my attention was drawn by the large number of books on the shelves and I
nearly got stumbled over (绊倒) by some old chairs. The lady apologized, explaining that she was trying to throw
the old chairs away. The moment I set the new chairs, the lady grabbed my right hand and put a $20 bill in it. I
refused the tip and told her the store rule.
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2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
She suggested it be a secret between us.
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She suggested it be a secret between us. Even though her tip was worth four hours of my work, I still
declined it. The lady paused and then smiled, “How about borrowing books from my collection instead? I’ve
noticed you love reading.” Though touched, I hesitated. Sensing my reluctance, she gestured to the old chairs and
suggested, “You can help me clear these if you like.” That seemed acceptable — a practical exchange of effort, so I
nodded slowly. Her eyes twinkled and said, “Take any book you like anytime.”
I gladly accepted her new offer. Over the holiday, my visit to the old lady became a routine; each time, she
would recommend classics or hand me poetry collections, sparking my writing inspiration. In return, I helped clear
her unwanted items and redecorate her apartment when I was available. Our exchanges grew beyond chores — she
shared stories of her youth while I read my drafts of writing to her. Those days surrounded by books and her
wisdom shaped my writer’s soul far more than any tip ever could.
【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了去年暑假，作者在小商店兼职，尽管工资不高，但他喜欢这份工
作，因为空闲时可以看书，他梦想成为作家。一天，一位优雅的老太太来买椅子，由于她年迈独居，商店
安排作者送货上门。送货上门时，作者拒绝了她的20 美元小费，却意外获得借阅她丰富藏书的机会。整
个假期，她为作者推荐经典书籍，作者帮她整理公寓，这段经历对作者的成长影响深远。
1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“她建议这是我们之间的秘密”和第二段首句中的“新提议”可知，第一段可描写作
者拒绝了老太太的这个提议，然后老太太表示可以把书借给作者阅读，并让作者清理杂物以顾全作者的自
尊，作者同意了。
②由第二段首句内容“我欣然接受了她的新提议”可知，第二段可描写作者在假期里定期拜访老太太，借
书阅读，也帮她做一些杂务，两人建立了深厚的友谊。
2. 续写线索：老太太建议保守秘密——作者拒绝——老太太给出借书阅读的提议——作者欣然同意——作
者定期借书阅读，帮忙做事——两人的友谊
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①拒绝：decline/turn down/reject
②停顿：pause/stop/halt
③察觉：sense/perceive/detect
④激发：spark/stimulate
情绪类
①感动的：touched/moved
②不情愿：reluctance/unwillingness
【点睛】[高分句型1] Even though her tip was worth four hours of my work, I still declined it. (Even though 引导
让步状语从句)
[高分句型2] In return, I helped clear her unwanted items and redecorate her apartment when I was available.
(when 引导时间状语从句)
4．阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应
为150 左右。（2025·湖南省长沙市周南中学高三上学期第四阶段模拟）
You’d think that after hearing Mom and Dad talk about The Trip for a year, I’d be eager to go. But I didn’t
even want to think about it. “Aren’t you excited?” asked Dad, looking up from his laptop. “This is the trip of
lifetime. I’ll bet none of your friends will be driving across the United States this summer.
Exactly, I thought. Nobody I knew was going to pile into an old van, and drive from California to New York
and back in 58 days. Fifty-eight days! That was practically my whole summer! But I knew it was useless to protest.
When Dad was offered a summer off for the first time in his career, he said that he’d always dreamed of
driving across the country. So we were going. This was Dad’s chance.
I picked up my cat, Max, and buried my face in his fur. He pawed at my ears playfully. Good-bye, summer
vacation. Good-bye, diving at the lake. Good-bye to hanging out and doing absolutely nothing. Good-bye, Max. I
was going to miss this ball of fur. I put him down and laughed as he batted a button across the floor like a soccer
player. He was interested in all small objects.
The closer The Trip got, the harder it was going to ignore. Thick envelopes arrived from places like Indiana,
Tennessee, and Arkansas. Night after night, Mom and dad huddled around the computer, plotting every inch of our
8,000-mile journey.
Three days after school got out, The Trip was finally here. Everything was packed and ready to go. Mom
said that we were supposed to leave at 9 a. m. But when dad noticed a wet spot under the van, I realized we
wouldn’t be going anywhere for a while. Dad crawled under the van. Car parts sprang up around the van like
mushrooms.
Minutes turned into hours. By the time Dad gave Mom the news, it was late afternoon. “I fixed the leak.” said Dad,
“But now I can’t find one of the the fan bolts(螺栓).” Mom organized a search, but in vain.Paragraph 1: Dad
called the stores but none carried the bolt that fitted this old van.
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【参考范文】Dad called the stores but none carried the bolt that fitted this old van. I gasped. Maybe we were not
going on The Trip after all. According to Mom, messing up our agenda—even by one day—would send our
schedule toppling like dominoes. Reservations would need to be canceled; destinations would be changed. My soul
silently rejoiced. But then I saw Dad. He was leaning over the engine, his hands black with grease. His dream—
The Trip of a Lifetime—was vanishing before his eyes. “So much for seeing everything from ‘sea to shining sea,’”
Dad said with a weak smile. Earlier, I would have celebrated. But not this moment. I couldn’t bear to see Dad so
disappointed. I stared at the lifeless van—the reason that his dream was fading. Where did that bolt go? I couldn’t
help but wonder.
Then it hit me where the bolt might be. “Max!” I shouted, “Find Max!” Without knowing why, everyone
scrambled to look for the cat. I found him at the end of the driveway near the garage. As usual, he was batting
something around. I scooped up Max, and sure enough, there was the bolt. I grabbed it and waved it like a flag.
Dad’s face lit up. An hour later, I was in the van with my family. Dad glanced back at me in the rear-view mirror.
“Thanks!” he said. I smiled. As our van chugged down the freeway, I thought this trip might not be so bad after all.
Good-bye, regular old summer vacation. Hello... Trip of a Lifetime?
【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，主要讲了我的爸爸一直想要开车横穿美国旅行，今年暑假他有了一个假
期，因此他想要实现梦想，不幸的是，一切准备好时却发现老货车漏了，修好了渗漏，车子的一个螺栓不
见了。而我完全不想参加这场旅行，因为我舍不得我那只喜欢玩小物件的猫，参加旅行也意味着我没办法
潜水、没办法悠闲地度过我的暑假了。最后，尽管不想去，但是为了帮助爸爸完成梦想，我从我猫Max 那
里帮爸爸找到了螺栓，最终愉快地开始了我们的旅行。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“爸爸给商店打了电话，但没有一家商店有适合这辆旧货车的螺栓。”可知，第一段
可描写父母没找到螺栓的沮丧和难过；我虽暗自窃喜，但看到爸爸的沮丧和难过，决定要帮忙找到螺栓。
②由第二段首句内容“然后我突然想到螺栓可能在哪里。”可知，第二段可描写找到Max 和螺栓后的开心
和激动，修好车子，我们出发旅行。
2.续写线索：给商店打了电话——没有适合这辆旧货车的螺栓——作者决定要帮忙找到螺栓——想打了
Max——成功找到了螺栓——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①取消：canceled /called off
.
②消失：vanishing /disappearing
.
③抓起：grabbed/ caught
情绪类
.
①失望的：disappointed/ despondent
.
②好奇：wonder / be curious about
【点睛】[高分句型1]. As our van chugged down the freeway, I thought this trip might not be so bad after all.
（运用了As 引导的时间状语从句。）
[高分句型2]. I stared at the lifeless van—the reason that his dream was fading. （运用了that 引导的同位语从
句。）
5.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。（2025·河北省3 月
高考模拟）
Parents do and sacrifice so much for their children. That’s why many kids can’t wait until they grow up and
find themselves in a position to give back to Mom and Dad.
When David Orgeron was a college student, he learned that his father, Christian Orgeron,was interested in
classic cars and had always dreamed of owning a vintage (老式的)Ford Mustang. David was so eager to make his
father’s dream come true that he even fantasized about winning the lottery (彩票)and buying Dad with the car as
thanks for the hard work he had put in to give him a good life.
While David had not been lucky enough to be a lottery winner, he did pretty well for himself as a vlogger
and fitness instructor after graduation. He never forgot his father’s dream and had saved what he thought was
enough for it. He was ready to take action and give Dad a surprise.
Over a talk with his father about Ford Mustang, David asked a seemingly innocent question: What was his
favorite model year and color? Dad said a blue 1966 Mustang. David kept that answer in mind during his search for
the perfect car. And, finally, he found it!
David contacted the dealing agent and checked the car to make sure it was in good condition. Thinking that
such a gift called for an equal reveal, David managed to get the help of the agent in giving Christian a great
surprise. The two found a suitable roadside spot one day and staged the Mustang there, with a“for sale” sign and
the agent passed a friend off as the owner of the car. The only thing left to do was to take Christian there to check it
out.
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David went home and told Dad of his discovery of a blue 1966 Mustang.
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David went home and told Dad of his discovery of a blue 1966 Mustang. His father’s eyes widened with
surprise and excitement as David described the car in detail and how he had found it after a long search. Christian
couldn’t believe his ears. It felt like a dream come true. David reassured him that everything was ready, and they
just needed to go and take a look. With a heart full of anticipation, Christian agreed, and they set off on the journey
that would change everything.
The Mustang enthusiast immediately walked over to the car. As he approached, he noticed the “for sale” sign
and the supposed owner standing nearby. But before he could say anything, David stepped forward and revealed
the surprise. Christian was speechless, tears of joy welling up in his eyes. He hugged David tightly, whispering
words of gratitude in his ear. It was a moment they would both cherish forever, a testament to David’s love and
determination to make his father’s dream a reality.
【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，主要讲述了David 为实现父亲拥有老式福特野马汽车的梦想，努力工作
攒钱，最终找到理想车辆并精心策划惊喜，展现了他的孝心与行动力。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“大卫回到家，告诉爸爸他发现了一辆1966 年的蓝色野马。”可知，第一段可描写
大卫向父亲描述他发现的那辆汽车，父亲听后感到惊喜和激动，两人出发去看车。
②由第二段首句内容“野马爱好者立刻走向汽车。”可知，第二段可描写父亲走向汽车，大卫揭示惊喜，
父亲感动落泪，两人紧紧拥抱。
2.续写线索：大卫发现汽车并告诉父亲——父亲感到惊喜——两人出发去看车——父亲走向汽车——大卫
揭示惊喜——父亲感动
3.词汇激活：
行为类：
①寻找：find/search for/hunt for
②走近：approach/step close to
③拥抱：hug/embrace
情绪类：
①惊喜：surprise/amazement
②感激：gratitude/appreciation/thankfulness
【点睛】【高分句型1】His father’s eyes widened with surprise and excitement as David described the car in
detail and how he had found it after a long search.(运用了as 引导的状语从句，how 引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】With a heart full of anticipation, Christian agreed, and they set off on the journey that would
change everything.(运用了that 引导的定语从句)
6．（2025·河北省保定市博野县博野中学高考信息卷）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写
两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Luna was the kind of girl who always had her head in the clouds, thinking about how wonderful her life
might be if she could reach for the stars and make her dreams come true. She had big dreams of growing up to be a
really good artist, seeing all the amazing places in the world, and doing something to help others and make their
lives better too.
One bright day, Luna finally made up her mind to turn her dreams into reality. She set off on an adventure to
find the most perfect canvas (画布) for her very first masterpiece. She walked and walked, covering miles of land.
She passed through thick forests and climbed over rolling hills that seemed to go on forever. At last, she came upon
a beautiful meadow. It was like a colorful wonderland, filled with wildflowers.
Luna’s eyes lit up because she just knew this was the place she had been searching for. She quickly got out
her painting tools and started to paint. As the brush moved across the canvas, something magical happened. A sense
of peace and pure joy filled her heart, a feeling she had never known before. In that moment, she was certain that
painting was what she was born to do.
Time flew by, and days turned into weeks. She painted mountains that stood tall and proud in the distance,
the mysterious forests that held so many hidden stories, and the cute animals that called those places home. She
painted the people she met on her journey, showing their feature and their stories on her canvas.
As Luna painted, she began to understand that reaching her goals wasn’t just about the final painting or the
places she would go. It was about all the experiences along the way. She had learned so many things about herself,
her patience, her creativity, and her ability to keep going. She had also seen the kindness and hardships of the world
around her. And she knew that this was just the start of a long and beautiful journey.
注意：1.续写词数应为150 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
While packing paints, Luna heard a cry and found villagers in need one day.
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Years passed, and Luna gained fame, traveled, and helped others.
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【参考范文】
While packing paints, Luna heard a cry and found villagers in need one day. She followed the sound and
found a group of villagers struggling to build a bridge over a violent river. Without hesitation, she joined them. She
used her creativity to design a bridge structure. With the villagers’ combined efforts, the bridge was finally built,
connecting the isolated community to the outside world. Luna’s kind act was deeply appreciated, and she realized
the power of using her skills for the greater good. This experience added a new aspect to her understanding of
making a difference.
Years passed, and Luna gained fame, traveled, and helped others. Her artworks were displayed in galleries,
touching the hearts of many. She journeyed to various countries. Along the way, she held art workshops for those
poor children, inspiring them to pursue their dreams. Luna continued to grow, not only as an artist but also as a
person who brought positive change. Her story spread, becoming an inspiration for countless individuals to chase
their dreams and make the world a better place. And with that, Luna knew that she had achieved her greatest goal
of all.
【解析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述露娜怀揣着成为艺术家等梦想，踏上寻找完美画布的冒险之旅。在
美丽的草地，她开始创作，感受到绘画带来的独特快乐。她不断创作，逐渐明白实现梦想不仅关乎最终成
果，更在于途中经历，这只是她漫长美好旅程的开端。
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“有一天，在收拾颜料的时候，露娜听到了一阵呼喊声，发现有村民正处于困境之
中。”可以预测续写这段主要内容：露娜收拾颜料时听到呼喊，见村民建桥困难便加入。她发挥创意设计
结构，众人合力建成桥，其善举获赞，她也对用技能助人有了新认知 。
②由第二段首句内容“时光荏苒，露娜声名远扬，她四处游历，还帮助他人。”可以预测续写这段主要内
容：多年间，露娜成名、游历各国，借作品与艺术工作坊助人，持续成长，其故事激励众人，她也实现了
最大目标。
2.续写线索：帮村民建桥——善举获赞——帮助更多的人——激励众人——实现自己目标
3.词汇激活
行为类
①连接：connect/link
②意识到：realize/understand/recognize
③感动：touch/move
品质类
①友好的：friendly/kind/amicable
②积极乐观的：positive/optimistic
【点睛】[高分句型1] With the villagers’ combined efforts, the bridge was finally built, connecting the isolated
community to the outside world.（运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2] Luna continued to grow, not only as an artist but also as a person who brought positive change. （运
用了who 引导的定语从句）
[高分句型3] And with that, Luna knew that she had achieved her greatest goal of all.（运用that 引导的宾语从
句）
