河南省青桐鸣部分学校2024-2025 学年高三下学期5 月全真模拟卷英语
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Under a flat
winter
light
, four women rode their bicycles(主要人物) in northern Colorado's
Roosevelt National Forest. They are competitive cyclists who know the route well(强调背景信息，增加冲
突感). Most of them ride for a team called(过去分词做后置定语) Recycled Cycles Racing, based
out of
Seattle(过去分词做后置定语). As they made their way along a wide section of the path, Wolf led the
way(此Wolf 非彼Wolf). Williams rode alone in the middle and Bergere and Tietz brought up the rear(殿
后)(4 人的基本位置交代完毕).
Suddenly, Tietz saw two large animals emerge from the woods off to the right just after
Bergere passed. She didn't see clearly, so couldn't identify what the two animals were.
No sooner had they identified the animals than the terrible thing happened(No sooner... than 倒装).
The first one ran quickly across the path in front of Bergere, and then rushed to the left and
disappeared.The second followed, but in the last instant it stopped. It
might have been distracted
by the movement of Bergere's bicycle, jumped at Bergere's back, and pulled her to the ground
with teeth and claws(爪子).(动作串) Tietz let out a scary scream, “Oh my, they are cougars(美洲狮).”
Wolf
turned around quickly
. Her first reaction was to put as much distance as possible
between herself and the scary animal(刻画描写人物). But quickly, she pushed down her fear and rushed
to help Bergere(冲突间刻画人物心理). Williams and other friends all came to help. They pulled the
animal away from Bergere's neck.
“Call 9ll," yelled Wolf, Tietz immediately called but there was no response. For 15minutes,
the women were hitting, kicking, punching,and screaming(动名词动作串). Finally, the cougar
released Bergere, and it might turn on any or all of them. Bergere stretched out, and she was tired
and injured-but breathing and awake. “HELLO? THIS IS 911. STATE YOUREMERGENCY,"
The voice of the 911 call center came through Tietz's phone, which was lying on the ground.
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: When seeing another cyclist riding toward them, the women realized it was
their team mate Caswell.
Paragraph 2: Bergere spent five days in the hospital.
河南省青桐鸣部分学校2024-2025 学年高三下学期5 月全真模拟卷英语
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Under a flat winter light, four women rode their bicycles in northern Colorado's Roosevelt
National Forest, They are competitive cyclists who know the route well. Most of them ride for a
team called Recycled Cycles Racing, based out of Seattle. As they made their way along a wide
section of the path, Wolf led the way, Williams rode alone in the middle.and Bergere and Tietz
brought up the rear(殿后).
Suddenly, Tietz saw two large animals emerge from the woods off to the right just after
Bergere passed, She didn't see clearly, so couldn't identify what the two animals were.
No sooner had they identified the animals than the terrible thing happened. The first one ran
quickly across the path in front of Bergere, and then rushed to the left and disappeared.The second
followed, but in the last instant it stopped. It might have been distracted by the movement of
Bergere's bicycle, jumped at Bergere's back, and pulled her to the ground with teeth and claws(爪
子), Tietz let out a scary scream, “Oh my, they are cougars(美洲狮).”
Wolf turned around quickly. Her first reaction was to put as much distance as possible
between herself and the scary animal, But quickly, she pushed down her fear and rushed to help
Bergere. Williams and other friends all came to help. They pulled the animal away from Bergere's
neck.
“Call 9ll," yelled Wolf, Tietz immediately called but there was no response. For 15minutes,
the women were hitting, kicking, punching,and screaming. Finally, the cougar released Bergere,
and it might turn on any or all of them. Bergere stretched out, and she was tired and injured-but
breathing and awake. “HELLO? THIS IS 911. STATE YOUREMERGENCY," The voice of the
911 call center came through Tietz's phone, which was lying on the ground.
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: When seeing another cyclist riding toward them, the women realized it was
their team mate Caswell.
Paragraph 2: Bergere spent five days in the hospital.
1. 文章分类及续写思路分析
文章类型：遇险救险/生存类（野外遭遇野生动物袭击）
续写构思思路：
主题延续：强调团队合作、勇气与生存意志。
情感基调：紧张→救援→希望→反思。
框架布局：
第一段：引入新救援力量（Caswell），增强团队希望，衔接911 通话。
第二段：结局（Bergere 康复），升华主题（团队精神/对自然的敬畏）。
实施要点：
保持动作描写的连贯性（如救援、沟通）。
通过心理描写体现人物从恐惧到冷静的转变。
环境描写需简短，突出紧迫感（如天色、森林）。
承接原文事项：
必须包含：911 接通的状态、Caswell 的出现方式、Bergere 的伤势处理。
沿用原文关键词（如“cougars”“scream”“Recycled Cycles Racing”）。
巧妙设计技巧：
让Caswell 携带急救设备，增强合理性。通过对话体现团队分工（如一人指挥，一人安抚
Bergere）。
2. 故事山模式与原文分析
1. 故事山模式：
开端：骑行团队进入森林（平静）。
发展：美洲狮突袭Bergere（冲突爆发）。
高潮：团队合作驱赶美洲狮（紧张对抗）。
回落：911 接通，Caswell 到来（希望出现）。
结局：Bergere 送医（问题解决）。
衔接点与关键分析：
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
人物刻画
Wolf 从恐惧到勇敢的转变
“Her first reaction was to put... But quickly,
she pushed down her fear...”
情感层次
从惊慌（尖叫）到团结（合力救
援）
“Tietz let out a scary scream...” / “They
pulled the animal away...”
关键情节
点
美洲狮第二次攻击Bergere
“The second followed, but... jumped at
Bergere's back...”
语言特色
短句、动词突出紧迫感（hit, kick,
punch）
“For 15 minutes, the women were hitting,
kicking, punching...”
心理描写
Bergere 的虚弱但清醒
“Bergere stretched out, tired and injured—
but breathing and awake.”
动作描写
团队对抗美洲狮的细节
“pulled the animal away from Bergere's
neck”
环境描写
冬季森林的平坦光线（暗示潜在
危险）
“Under a flat winter light...”
隐含主题
人类在自然危机中的互助与脆弱
全篇对抗美洲狮的团队协作
伏笔/冲突
美洲狮可能转向攻击其他人（未
完全解决）
“it might turn on any or all of them”
隐含线索
电话无信号→最终接通（科技依
赖的局限性）
“no response” → “HELLO? THIS IS 911...”
解决方案：
团队协作：通过多人合力驱赶美洲狮。
外部救援：Caswell 到来与911 接通提供医疗支持。
3. 推荐英文例句及翻译
动作描写（突出紧张感和团队协作）
1. "Wolf whipped around, her heart pounding as she sprinted back toward Bergere."
（沃尔夫猛地转身，心跳加速，朝伯格冲去。）
2. "Tietz lunged forward, swinging her backpack wildly at the cougar."
（蒂茨向前猛冲，疯狂地用背包砸向美洲狮。）
3. "Williams grabbed a rock and hurled it at the snarling beast."
（威廉姆斯抓起一块石头，朝咆哮的野兽猛掷过去。）
4. "Bergere writhed on the ground, gasping for breath as the cougar’s claws dug into her
shoulder."
（伯格在地上痛苦地扭动，美洲狮的爪子刺入她的肩膀，她大口喘气。）
5. "The women circled the cougar, shouting and stomping to scare it off."
（女人们围住美洲狮，大声喊叫并跺脚试图吓跑它。）
6. "Caswell skidded to a stop, her eyes widening at the chaos before her."
（卡斯威尔猛地刹住车，眼前的混乱让她瞪大了眼睛。）
7. "The cougar recoiled momentarily, its ears flattening against its head."
（美洲狮短暂退缩，耳朵紧贴头部。）
8. "Bergere’s fingers trembled as she clutched her bleeding arm."
（伯格的手指颤抖着，紧紧抓住流血的手臂。）
9. "Wolf yanked the first-aid kit open, her hands shaking but determined."
（沃尔夫猛地拉开急救包，双手颤抖但坚定。）
10. "The cougar finally turned tail and vanished into the undergrowth."
（美洲狮最终掉头逃窜，消失在灌木丛中。）
心理描写（体现恐惧、决心、希望）
1. "A wave of terror crashed over Tietz, freezing her in place for a split second."
（一阵恐惧席卷蒂茨，让她瞬间僵在原地。）
2. "Wolf’s mind raced—should she run or fight? But she couldn’t abandon Bergere."
（沃尔夫的思绪飞速运转——是该逃跑还是战斗？但她不能丢下伯格。）
3. "Bergere’s vision blurred, but she clung to consciousness, refusing to pass out."
（伯格的视线模糊，但她紧紧抓住意识，拒绝昏过去。）
4. "Williams’ stomach twisted with dread, but she forced herself to step closer."
（威廉姆斯的胃因恐惧而抽搐，但她强迫自己靠近。）
5. "For a fleeting moment, Tietz wondered if this was how it would end—here, in the
woods."
（一瞬间，蒂茨想，这是否就是结局——在这片森林里。）
6. "Caswell’s arrival sent a surge of hope through the group."
（卡斯威尔的到来让团队燃起希望。）
7. "Bergere’s thoughts drifted to her family—she had to survive, no matter what."
（伯格的思绪飘向家人——她必须活下去，无论如何。）
8. "Wolf’s fear morphed into fierce determination—she wouldn’t let the cougar win."
（沃尔夫的恐惧转变为坚定的决心——她不会让美洲狮得逞。）
9. "The 911 operator’s voice was a lifeline in the chaos."
（911 接线员的声音在混乱中如同一根救命稻草。）
10. "As the ambulance siren grew louder, relief washed over them like a tide."
（救护车的警笛声渐近，如潮水般的宽慰席卷了他们。）
环境描写（渲染紧张氛围）
"The forest loomed around them, its shadows deepening as dusk approached."
（森林在他们周围耸立，暮色渐浓，阴影加深。）
"A cold wind rustled the leaves, carrying an eerie silence between their panicked shouts."
（冷风吹动树叶，在他们惊慌的叫喊之间带来诡异的寂静。）
"The fading winter light cast long, jagged shadows across the trail."
（渐暗的冬日光线在小径上投下参差不齐的长影。）
"The cougar’s growl echoed through the trees, sending chills down their spines."
（美洲狮的咆哮在树林间回荡，让他们脊背发凉。）
"The ground was slick with frost, making every step treacherous."
（地面因霜冻而湿滑，每一步都充满危险。）
"The distant howl of a coyote added to the sense of isolation."
（远处郊狼的嚎叫加深了孤独感。）
"The scent of pine and damp earth mingled with the metallic tang of blood."
（松树和潮湿泥土的气味与血液的铁锈味混合。）
"The undergrowth crackled ominously, as if hiding more unseen threats."
（灌木丛发出不祥的沙沙声，仿佛隐藏着更多未知的威胁。）
"The first stars blinked into view, indifferent to their struggle below."
（最初的星星闪烁出现，对下方的挣扎漠不关心。）
"The ambulance’s flashing lights sliced through the darkness like a beacon."
（救护车的闪光灯如灯塔般划破黑暗。）
高级替换词（分类场景）
1. 恐惧/紧张
Basic: scared → Advanced: petrified (石化般的恐惧) / terrified (极度惊恐)
Basic: afraid → Advanced: apprehensive (忧虑的) / dread-filled (充满恐惧的)
Basic: nervous → Advanced: jittery (神经质的) / on edge (紧张不安的)
2. 决心/勇气
Basic: brave → Advanced: resolute (坚定的) / undaunted (无畏的)
Basic: strong → Advanced: tenacious (顽强的) / steadfast (坚定不移的)
3. 动作/战斗
Basic: hit → Advanced: pummel (连续猛击) / thrash (猛烈击打)
Basic: run → Advanced: bolt (狂奔) / sprint (冲刺)
4. 环境/氛围
Basic: dark → Advanced: murky (昏暗的) / foreboding (不祥的)
Basic: quiet → Advanced: hushed (寂静的) / eerie (诡异的)
5. 受伤/疼痛
Basic: hurt → Advanced: agonized (极度痛苦的) / throbbing (抽痛的)
Basic: bleeding → Advanced: gushing (涌出的) / seeping (渗出的)
4. 固定搭配、词法解析及语料积累
"let out a scream" (发出尖叫)
近义：uttered a cry / shrieked
反义：fell silent
例句：
"Tietz let out a blood-curdling scream when the cougar attacked."
"The sudden noise made her let out a startled yelp."
"pushed down fear" (压下恐惧)
近义：suppressed terror / steeled herself
反义：succumbed to panic
例句：
"Wolf pushed down her fear and charged forward."
"Despite her trembling hands, she pushed down fear and acted."
"brought up the rear" (殿后)
近义：trailed behind / took the last position
反义：led the way
例句：
"Bergere and Tietz brought up the rear, chatting casually before the attack."
"In military formations, the slowest soldiers often bring up the rear."
"skidded to a stop" (急刹车)
近义：halted abruptly / screeched to a standstill
反义：accelerated away
例句：
"Caswell’s bike skidded to a stop, kicking up gravel."
"The car skidded to a stop just inches from the pedestrian."
"clung to consciousness" (保持清醒)
近义：fought to stay awake / resisted blacking out
反义：succumbed to unconsciousness
例句：
"Bergere clung to consciousness despite the searing pain."
"After the crash, he clung to consciousness until help arrived."
可积累的生词短语
"emerge from" (从…出现)
词性：phrasal verb 近义：come out of / step out from 反义：disappear into
例句：
"The cougars emerged from the woods without warning."
"The sun emerged from behind the clouds, bathing the forest in light."
"turn on" (突然攻击)
词性：phrasal verb 近义：lash out at / attack 反义：retreat from
例句：
"The cougar might turn on the others if provoked."
"Even a friendly dog can turn on its owner if scared."
"stretch out" (伸展/躺下)
词性：phrasal verb 近义：lie down / extend 反义：curl up
例句：
"Bergere stretched out on the ground, exhausted."
"He stretched out his injured leg with a grimace."
"call through" (电话接通)
词性：phrasal verb 近义：get a connection / reach 反义：drop the call
例句：
"The 911 operator’s voice finally called through the static."
"I tried calling, but the signal wouldn’t go through."
"turn tail" (逃跑)
词性：idiom 近义：flee / retreat 反义：stand ground
例句：
"The cougar turned tail and vanished into the trees."
"When the police arrived, the thieves turned tail and ran."
5. Possible Versions(4)
Version 1(借鉴董老师)
Paragraph 1: When seeing another cyclist riding toward them, the women realized it
was their teammate Caswell. Instantly, hope flickered in their eyes. Wolf waved frantically
while Williams called out to Caswell, her voice shaking(独立主格). Understanding
the urgency
(现
在分词做伴随动作), Caswell threw her bike aside and dashed to Bergere’s side. Blood covered Bergere’s
sleeve, and her eyes fluttered weakly. Caswell knelt down, unzipped her pack, and pulled out a
bandage roll and antiseptic wipes(动作串描写). “You’re going to be okay,” she said steadily, as she
pressed gauze against
the worst wound
(救援语境词汇). Tietz relayed updated position to the
emergency rescuer. The women worked like clockwork—one comforted, one treated, and
another scanned the woods for danger(并列). Though the cougar had disappeared into the forest, its
terror still clung to the air. Moments later, the faint hum of an approaching vehicle grew louder(无
灵主语句). They exchanged glances filled with
exhaustion and relief
(过去分词做后置定语). Rescue had
arrived—not just in the form of medics, but in the courage they’d shown together.
Paragraph 2: Bergere spent five days in the hospital. During those five days, Bergere
remained under close observation, receiving
stitches and physical therapy
(现在分词做伴随动作). Her
body ached, but her heart felt full. Her teammates visited with smiles, snacks, and shared
stories that filled the sterile room with laughter. "I remember the way you held my hand," she
told Tietz, her eyes welling up(独立主格). “That meant everything.” The media labeled them
heroes, but the women shrugged off praise. To them, they had only done what friendship
demanded. After her release, Bergere wrote a reflection for a local cycling magazine,
emphasizing
the importance of emergency readiness and group support
(现在分词做伴随动作). A week
later, she and her teammates returned to the trail—not to erase the memory, but to reclaim it.(递
进描写) As their tires spun over the earth, she whispered to herself, "This is not fear anymore. This
is strength on wheels."
Version 2
Paragraph 1: When seeing another cyclist riding toward them, the women realized it
was their teammate Caswell. Wolf’s voice cracked as she yelled, “Caswell! Over here!”
Caswell pedaled faster, then leapt off her bike(动作串描写，场景动作) when she saw the bloodied scene.
Without asking questions, she dropped beside Bergere and checked her pulse. “It’s faint, but
there,” she said, her hands already unrolling a pressure bandage(独立主格). Williams removed
her jacket to support Bergere’s head, while
Tietz
called 911 again,
pleading
for urgency
(现在分词
做伴随动作). Though their hands shook, they worked in harmony—steady, focused, driven by
instinct and care(adj 并列). The cougar had vanished, but the threat still echoed in their minds(环
境描写). Caswell looked into Bergere’s pale face and whispered, “Stay with us, okay?” A few tense
minutes passed before the distinct crunch of tires on gravel signaled the arrival of help. An officer
rushed over, and the group stepped aside, their faces pale but eyes fierce(独立主格刻画人物形象). In that
frozen forest, they had held on—for Bergere and for each other.
Paragraph 2: Bergere spent five days in the hospital. Those five days brought healing
not just for her body, but also for the bond between the women(递进). Her teammates took turns
visiting, reading aloud
from cycling blog
s, and placing
silly stickers on her
bed
(动作串并列).
The pain was sharp, but laughter dulled its edge(环境描写). “You were all incredible,” Bergere
whispered one evening, eyes damp(独立主格刻画人物形象). “You saved my life.” The hospital staff,
moved by the group’s dedication(过去分词短语做原因状语), called them “a rare kind of family(环境描写).”
When she was finally discharged, the first thing Bergere did was text her teammates: “Ready
for a ride?” That weekend, under grey skies and brisk air, they cycled together again—this time
slower, more mindful, and infinitely closer(adj 并列). The scars on her arms would fade, but the
memory of courage, connection, and survival was permanent. They didn’t just ride as a
team—they rode as survivors(递进描写)who had faced the wild and stayed whole.
Version 3
Paragraph 1: When seeing another cyclist riding toward them, the women realized it
was their teammate Caswell. Realizing(现在分词做伴随动作) it was Caswell gave them a brief sense of
hope amid the panic. Wolf was waving her arms quickly , shouting
for help
(现在分词做伴随动作)
while
keeping a watchful eye on the cougar
that still lurked nearby. Caswell, noticing
the
scene(现在分词做伴随动作), jumped off her bike and rushed over immediately(动作串). Without hesitation,
she grabbed a stick and joined the others in forming a protective circle around Bergere.
Meanwhile, Tietz picked up her phone and updated the 911 operator, urgently explaining the
situation and their location(现在分词短语做伴随动作). The women took turns comforting Bergere, whose
breaths were shallow but steady. Blood stained her jacket, and her voice trembled as she
whispered, "It hurts, but I’m okay." Despite their fear, the group showed remarkable
unity,
courage, and quick thinking(名词并列). Soon, the sound of sirens echoed through the trees, bringing
a sense of relief(现在分词做结果状语). The forest, moments ago a place of terror(对比描写), now felt like a
place of survival.
Paragraph 2: Bergere spent five days in the hospital. After undergoing surgery and
treatment for deep wounds on her back and shoulders,her recovery went well. Her teammates
visited daily, bringing(现在分词做伴随动作)flowers
, encouragement
, and tales
of their continued
rides(名词并列). Lying
in bed
(现在分词做伴随动作), Bergere reflected on the terrifying incident with a
newfound gratitude for her friends and their bravery. "You saved my life," she told them, her
voice thick with emotion(独立主格刻画人物情绪). Back on the trail weeks later, the women honored the
experience by riding together once again, more bonded than ever(adj 短语做补语). The memory of that
winter ride remained sharp(无灵主语句), but so did the reminder that even in the face of danger,
solidarity and quick action could make all the difference.
地道搭配：jump off one’s bike; form a protective circle; bring encouragement;
thick with emotion
情绪描写：trembled, thick with emotion, a brief sense of hope, relief, gratitude
动作描写：waved her arms, grabbed a stick, joined the circle, updated the
operator
同义替换：shouted (yelled), rushed (hurried), noticed (spotted), whispered
(murmured)
替换积累：
1.
grateful = appreciative, thankful, relieved
2.
rush = dash, charge, spring
3.
whisper = murmur, mutter, breathe
4.
例句积累：
Despite the danger, they remained calm and acted swiftly.
Her voice trembled with both pain and relief.
The sound of sirens brought a wave of comfort.
They formed a protective circle, shielding their injured friend.
官方：
When seeing another cyclist riding toward them,the women realized it was their
teammate Caswell. It took Caswell a moment to process what she was seeing. She ran and
screamed when she saw bloodied Bergere attacked beyond recognition(过去分词做后置定语), and three
more of their teammates were surrounding Bergere protectively. But Caswell didn't stare at the
scene for long. She took Bergere's pulse, and found it was weak. Then she radioed for help and
45 minutes after the attack, an officer pulled up to the scene in a forest-service vehicle.
Bergere spent five days in the hospital.Someone took care of her after the cougar attack.
Bergere thought about those who had saved her from the cougar and felt a sense of gratitude
for their risking their own lives to save hers that day.When they visited her in the hospital,
Bergere gratefully looked at them, glanced at their faces,and smiled(动作串描写), “This is not a
tragedy," she told her friends as the women's eyes welled up with tears
. “This is such a great thing,
a great moment to be alive, together.
