专题05 读后续写
（一）
（2025·云南普洱·一模）
Our young family had just moved from the tropical heat of Asia to what we believed would be a winter
wonderland. It was our first winter in Chicago but soon the sense of adventure we had for our new life gave way to
self-doubt and homesickness. And just as the animals were hibernating (冬眠), it seemed that so were our new
neighbors. As newcomers, we felt alone.
Then something happened at the beginning of December. It all began with a simple request from our eight-
year-old daughter, “Mommy, let’s put up a Christmas tree at home.” From her we learned that one of our neighbors,
a graceful woman across the block had put up a brcathtaking, luminous (夜光的) and lush tree, carefully placed in a
window for all to see.
At first, we didn’t pay too much attention to this request, for we had never put up a Christmas tree. But my
daughter’s repeated request made us go ahead with this first step: loaded with layers of clothing to fight the
unfamiliar cold, we tasked ourselves with finding a tree and the tree’s dangling adornments (悬垂装饰物) for our
daughter.
We didn’t realize it then, but that was the first time that we took time to wander around our block and
familiarize ourselves with our new town. We began to pay attention to the fresh air and the approaching Christmas
season.
When we finally selected our tree, we realized we didn’t have a car big enough to get it home. Of course, we
had not considered that. It was our first time. We had no choice but to carry it home. Out of breath, we each held on
to an heavy end of the tree.
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1.续写词数应为150 个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
We had walked only a few steps when a gentleman in the neighborhood stopped us in his truck.
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Not knowing how to decorate the tree, I went to take a secret look at my neighbor’s.
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【答案】We had walked only a few steps when a gentleman in the neighborhood stopped us in his truck.
“Need a ride?” he asked with a warm smile. Surprised as we were, an overwhelming sense of gratitude welled up
within our hearts. With his kind assistance, we managed to load the tree onto the rear of his truck and then hopped
in. Upon arriving home, not only did he help us unload the tree but he also wished us a merry Christmas before
driving away. Excited and overjoyed, we couldn’t wait to set up the tree at home. Still, the tree looked like it was
missing something: the dangling adornments.
Not knowing how to decorate the tree, I went to take a secret look at my neighbor’s. The beautiful lights and
shiny ornaments were truly a sight to behold. As I was looking, the graceful woman came out. Rather than being
angry at my obvious staring, she invited me in for a cup of hot chocolate. She showed me her ornaments and gave
me some advice. That day, I went home with a heart brimming with the Christmas spirit and our tree was later
decorated with love and new-found friendship. It was not until then that we no longer felt lonely or homesick but
started to feel like home again.
【导语】本文以圣诞树为线索展开，讲述了刚迁居芝加哥的来自亚洲热带地区的一家人，在置办和装
饰圣诞树的过程中，在邻居的善意帮助下逐渐融入社区、驱散孤独感的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“We had walked only a few steps when a gentleman in the neighborhood stopped us in
his truck. (我们刚走几步就被开卡车的邻居绅士拦下)”可知，第一段需描写邻居主动提供帮助的温暖场景，
突出社区人文关怀。
②由第二段首句内容“Not knowing how to decorate the tree, I went to take a secret look at my neighbor’s.
(不知如何装饰，我偷偷观察邻居家的树)”可知，第二段应展现跨文化学习过程及邻里互动带来的情感转
变。
2.续写线索：求助运树→获得帮助→尝试装饰→模仿学习→建立友谊→融入社区
3.词汇激活
行为类：
①装树：load the tree/pack the tree/stow the tree
②看见：behold/see/observe
③快速进入：hop in/jump in/climb in
情绪类：
①感到孤独：feel lonely /feel isolated
②归属感：feel like home/ have a sense of belonging/feel at home
【点睛】[高分句型1] Surprised as we were, an overwhelming sense of gratitude welled up within our hearts.
（as 引导的让步状语从句，采用倒装结构）
[高分句型2]The beautiful lights and shiny ornaments were truly a sight to behold.（不定式to behold 作后置
定语）
（二）
（2025·西南（云南 四川 贵州）名校联盟·一模）
When I was young, my father was a secondary school teacher in Edensor, England. As the breadwinner, he
was deeply engaged in his school responsibilities during my childhood. Consequently, I often felt distant from him
because he had few moments to talk or interact with me. My mother, a full-time housewife, managed the household
and took care of my younger bother and me, busting around the kitchen, bedrooms and grocery stores. The back
garden of our house was a special place for me; it was not only a secure spot for kids but also my dad’s favorite
hobby area. Whenever he was home, he would spend most of his spare time looking after his treasured roses, which
my mother also adored.
My father would care for his roses with great devotion and affection. Often, I would watch beside him,
curious or eager for his attention, but he was usually preoccupied ( 全神贯注). He regularly watered the roses,
cleaned the leaves, loosened and turned over the soil, and fed them with essential nutrients. His expectation was the
joy and sweetness brought by their blossoming.
One day, I saw him cut off some branches and stems. Then, with a sharp knife, he carefully made marks on
the main branches. He cut open the marked spots to insert sprouts (嫩枝) into those new cuts and wrapped them
with bandages. After all his efforts, he reminded us never to touch them. From then on, whenever my father
returned home from work, he would go straight to tend to those plants.
Within a month, we all witnessed the entire process: tender stems grow, form buds, and finally bear blossoms
in various colors. The garden soon became a place of immense beauty, filled with rose blossoms and surrounded by
their sweet fragrance. My parents truly enjoyed themselves there, and so did my brother Tommy and I. Those roses
brought us immense happiness, and no one, especially me, wanted to let go of such beauty.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150 词左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One sunny day, I decided to do something as my dad had done to have more roses.
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Later that day, when my dad saw the great mess I had made, he was totally shocked.
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【答案】One sunny day, I decided to do something as my dad had done to have more roses. Without telling
anyone, I took a pair of scissors and began my “gardening project”. I carefully selected a few branches, and with
trembling hands, I made the first cut, hoping it would lead to a new rose. I then made clumsy marks on the
remaining stems and tried to insert any twigs I could find. The garden soon turned into a chaotic scene, with cut
branches and scattered leaves everywhere. I was so absorbed in my work that I failed to notice how much of a mess
I had created, thinking I was on my way to making the garden even more beautiful.
Later that day, when my dad saw the great mess I had made, he was totally shocked. He froze in his tracks and
his eyes widened in disbelief as he stared at the damaged roses. At first, I was terrified, fearing his anger. But
instead of scolding, he gently asked why I did this. I tearfully told him I wanted more roses like he did. He took a
deep breath, his initial shock giving way to a gentle smile. Kneeling beside me, he placed a hand on my shoulder
and said, “Let me show you how it’s really done.” From that day on, he spent more time teaching me about
gardening, and our relationship bloomed like those beautiful roses in the garden.
【导语】本文围绕作者童年经历展开，讲述了父亲因工作繁忙，作者与其关系疏远。父亲闲暇时热衷
照料后花园的玫瑰，作者常一旁观看。一次，父亲对玫瑰进行嫁接操作。不久，玫瑰绽放，花园美不胜
收，玫瑰不仅装点了花园，更拉近了家人间的距离，给全家带来了幸福。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“在一个阳光明媚的日子里，我决定像我父亲那样做些事情，以便能拥有更多的
玫瑰。”可以预测续写这段主要内容： 受父亲影响，作者瞒着家人开展“园艺工程”，虽弄乱花园，却
自认为能让其更美。
②由第二段首句内容“那天晚些时候，当我父亲看到我造成的一片狼藉时，他完全惊呆了。”可以预
测续写这段主要内容：父亲发现作者弄乱花园后未斥责，而是耐心教导，借此拉近了两人关系 。
2.续写线索：开展“园艺工程”——弄乱花园——父亲未斥责——耐心教导——父子关系更亲密
3.词汇激活
行为类
①开始：begin/commence
②注意到：notice/perceive/take notice of
③凝视：stare at/gaze at
情绪类
①害怕的：terrified/sacred
②愤怒：anger/rage
【点睛】[高分句型1]. I carefully selected a few branches, and with trembling hands, I made the first cut,
hoping it would lead to a new rose. （运用了现在分词作状语和省略that 的宾语从句）
[高分句型2]. I then made clumsy marks on the remaining stems and tried to insert any twigs I could find.
（运用了省略that 的限制性定语从句）
（三）
（2025·云南曲靖·一模）
It was a sunny afternoon in the park. The grass was green, and the flowers were in full bloom. Children were
playing, and people were walking their dogs. Among them was a little girl named Emma. She was skipping along
the path, enjoying the beautiful day.
Suddenly, she heard a faint meowing sound. She stopped and listened carefully. The meowing seemed to be
coming from a nearby bush. Emma walked over to the bush and had a quick glimpse of inside. There, she saw a
tiny, frightened kitten. The kitten was all alone, and its fur was dirty and matted (乱蓬蓬的).
Emma felt so sorry for the kitten. She slowly reached out her hand, trying to coax (哄劝) it to come to her.
The kitten was hesitant at first but then sniffed her fingers and allowed her to pick it up. Emma cuddled the kitten in
her arms, trying to warm it up. She looked around, hoping to find the kitten’s owner, but there was no one in sight.
Emma decided to take the kitten home. She knew her parents might not be too happy about it, but she
couldn’t just leave the poor thing. When she got home, her parents were surprised to see the kitten. Emma
explained what had happened and begged them to let her keep it. Her parents looked at each other and finally
agreed, but only if she took good care of it.
Emma was overjoyed. She gave the kitten a bath, carefully washing away the dirt. The kitten meowed softly
as she dried it with a towel. She then made a cozy bed for it in a box and gave it some food and water. The kitten
ate hungrily, as if it hadn’t eaten in days.
Over the next few days, Emma spent all her free time with the kitten. She named it Whiskers. She played
with it, taught it to use the litter box, and took it to the vet to make sure it was healthy. Whiskers grew stronger and
more playful.
One day, Emma took Whiskers to the park where she had found it. She wanted to show it the place where
their adventure began. While they were playing, a woman approached them. She looked at Whiskers and gasped
(倒吸气).
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1.续写词数应为150 左右；
2.请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The woman screamed, “That’s my kitten! I’ve been looking everywhere for it!”
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Emma thought about the woman’s proposal for a moment and then nodded.
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【答案】(Possible version)
The woman screamed, “That’s my kitten! I’ve been looking everywhere for it!” The woman exclaimed,
“That’s my kitten! I’ve searched everywhere!” Emma, stunned, clung to Whiskers, explaining, “I found it alone in
the bush, scared and hungry.” The woman clarified Whiskers had escaped days prior. Doubting her, Emma
scrutinized the woman until she showed photos on her phone. Realizing Whiskers belonged to her; Emma was
saddened but agreed to the woman’s proposal: Emma could visit and receive updates.
Emma thought about the woman’s proposal for a moment and then nodded. She gently handed Whiskers to the
woman. The woman thanked her again and again and gave Emma a big hug. As the woman walked away with
Whiskers, Emma felt tears rolling down her cheek. But she also felt a sense of happiness because Whiskers was
going back to its rightful owner. From that day on, Emma visited Whiskers regularly. The woman usually sent
Emma pictures and videos of Whiskers. Emma also made a scrapbook filled with all the memories of her time with
Whiskers.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，本文讲述了小女孩艾玛在公园发现了一只脏兮兮、乱蓬蓬、受惊的
小猫，并将其带回家照顾。几天后，艾玛带着小猫回到公园，遇到了小猫的真正主人。虽然艾玛很不舍，
但最终还是将小猫归还给了主人，并约定可以定期去看望小猫。小猫的主人信守承诺，给艾玛发送小猫的
照片和视频，艾玛也制作了一本相册来纪念与小猫共度的时光。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“女人尖叫道：“那是我的小猫！我一直在到处找它！””可知，第一段可描写
艾玛偶遇走失的小猫并与其建立情感联系，但小猫的真正主人出现，艾玛在确认身份后虽有不舍但仍同意
归还。
②由第二段首句内容“艾玛想了一会儿那个女人的提议，然后点了点头。”可知，第二段可描写艾玛
将小猫归还给主人，虽然流泪但内心也感到高兴，之后她仍定期探访小猫，并制作了一本相册以纪念与小
猫共度的时光。
2.续写线索：
偶遇小猫——建立情感——主人出现——确认身份——归还小猫——流泪不舍——定期探访——制作
相册
3.词汇激活
行为类
①大声说：exclaim/loudly say
②给予：give/offer
③探访：visit/pay a visit to
④制作相册：make a scrapbook/compile a photo album
情绪类
①吃惊的：stunned/shocked
②流泪：tears rolling down/ the face was covered with tears
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Doubting her, Emma scrutinized the woman until she showed photos on her phone.
（句中含有现在分词作状语的结构）
[高分句型2]. As the woman walked away with Whiskers, Emma felt tears rolling down her cheek. （句中含
有as 引导时间状语从句的结构）
（四）
（2025·云南昆明·一模）
As a forest ranger (护林员), I was making an inspection tour as usual on a misty dawn. Boots sank into the
damp path, each step breaking the deep quiet of the ancient woodland. As I adjusted the camera trap on a trunk, its
lens (镜头) was still covered with raindrops from last night. Suddenly, a weak crying sound cut through the fog.
Pushing through wet bushes, I stopped instantly. There, in the shallow muddy river, lay an elephant calf (幼
崽). Its reddish-brown fur was dirty with mud. The calf’s back leg was trapped unnaturally beneath a messy pile of
old wire netting — the kind illegal woodcutters used to mark territories. Old metal pieces were cruel marks of
humans in this wild nature reserve. His dark brown eyes locked onto mine, and unexpectedly my normal forest
check became a fight against time.
The calf struggled with little strength, and its leg got stuck tighter in the sharp metal wires every time he
moved. I thought of Professor Liang, an expert in wildlife protection, who once said, “For endangered species,
humans are both threat and hope.” Therefore, I carefully opened my field work-box. The scissors felt tiny as I tried
to cut the wires. One wrong move could hurt the calf. Just as I started cutting, a roar came from the fog.
Behind me, the bushes shook violently. Out of the mist came an adult elephant, with ears flapping (拍打)
like a storm cloud. She stopped ten steps away, strong muscles tense under gray skin. The morning sunlight cast the
mother’s shadow over the trapped calf. We formed a tense triangle — human, mother and calf — bound by fear. A
sharp cry of a bird cut through the tension. Its black wings broke the quiet, as if nature itself was watching this
delicate moment.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150 个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The mother elephant took a step forward, her eyes never leaving me.
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Hours later, I watched the mother elephant and her calf from a distance through cameras.
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【答案】 The mother elephant took a step forward, her eyes never leaving me. I stood still, my
heart pounding wildly. She approached cautiously and gently nudged the calf with her trunk. The trapped leg was
now even more tightly caught in the wires. I knew I had to do something fast. With trembling hands, I resumed
cutting the wires, all the while keeping an eye on the mother elephant. To my relief, she seemed to sense my
intention and remained calm. After what felt like an eternity, the last piece of wire fell away, freeing the calf’s leg.
Hours later, I watched the mother elephant and her calf from a distance through cameras. They were
walking slowly but steadily towards the heart of the forest. The calf occasionally stumbled, but the mother was
always there to support him. Seeing them disappear into the greenery, a wave of emotion washed over me. This
encounter reminded me of the delicate balance between humans and wildlife. We have the power to destroy, but
also the ability to heal. As long as we choose hope over threat, there will always be a chance for coexistence.
【导语】本文以护林员救助幼象的经历为线索展开，讲述了护林员在执行巡逻任务时，发现一只幼象
被困在非法伐木者留下的铁丝网中，正当他试图解救幼象时，幼象的母亲出现，现场气氛紧张。
【详解】段落续写：
由第一段首句内容“母象向前迈了一步，眼睛始终没有离开我。”可知，第一段可描写母象靠近幼
象，护林员克服内心恐惧，在母象的注视下继续解救幼象的过程。
由第二段首句内容“几个小时后，我通过摄像机从远处观察着母象和幼象。”可知，第二段可描写幼
象和母象逐渐远去，护林员对此事件进行反思，表达人类与野生动物和谐共处的期望。
续写线索：母象靠近 —— 护林员紧张 —— 继续解救 —— 幼象脱困 —— 母象和幼象离开 ——
护林员反思
词汇激活
行为类
①靠近：approach/come close
②解救：free/rescue
③离开：walk away/disappear
情绪类
①冷静的：calm/inexcitable
②感动：a wave of emotion /a wave of affection
【点睛】[高分句型1] I stood still, my heart pounding wildly. （运用了独立主格结构）
[高分句型2] After what felt like an eternity, the last piece of wire fell away, freeing the calf’s leg.（使用了连
接代词what 连接的宾语从句以及现在分词短语做状语）
（五）
（2025·云南保川腾冲第五中学·一模）
In the busy world of healthcare, a young nurse named Mary boarded on a journey to specialize in cardiac (心
脏的) care, a field as challenging as it was rewarding. With a heart full of hope and a mind eager to learn, Mary
began her career at a local hospital, where every day was a new lesson in life and death.
One sunny morning, Mary received an invitation to attend a cardiac arrest (心脏停搏) training course at the
Dartmouth-Hitchcock Medical Center. Excitement coursed through her veins as she prepared to join her colleagues
in a simulation room designed to imitate the intensity of a real emergency. As they gathered, the atmosphere was a
mix of nervous energy and focused determination. The training began with a lecture on the latest agreement for
responding to cardiac arrests, the importance of every second in saving a life. Mary listened intently, her eyes wide
with the gravity of the knowledge being shared. The hands-on practice was where Mary truly came alive. With each
attempt, she felt her skills sharpening, her confidence growing. She learned the art of teamwork, the dance of life-
saving measures that required understanding and precision.
Her colleagues became her lifeline, and together they navigated the complexities of each situation. The
training was not just about the physical act of saving a life; it was about the mental courage required to face the
harsh realities of cardiac care. Mary understood that she would carry the weight of her patients’ lives in her hands,
and the responsibility was not one to be taken lightly.
As the day drew to a close, Mary felt a sense of accomplishment. She knew the road to becoming a cardiac
care specialist was long and tough, but she was ready to face the challenges head-on. With each step, she was not
just saving lives; she was fulfilling her destiny, one heartbeat at a time. Mary was more than a nurse; she was a
guardian of hearts, and her story was just beginning.
注意：1.续写词数应为150 个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
At the closing ceremony of the course, Mary suddenly felt dizzy and collapsed.
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Mary came to life with her fellow nurses around her.
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【答案】范文
At the closing ceremony of the course, Mary suddenly felt dizzy and collapsed. The young nurse had gone into
cardiac arrest, forcing her colleagues to jump into action and save her life, with no time to review the exact
procedures. With quick thinking, they began to revive Mary with chest compression. Luckily, the critical care team
from a local hospital was attending a different training course only a few doors down. They rushed in to help guide
the nurses through the situation until a doctor and nurse from another department came in with a crash cart. It was
only about 15 minutes from the time she fell unconscious to the time she got into an emergency room. It worked
out.
Mary came to life with her fellow nurses around her. Their quick reaction saved her, altering her perspective to
cherish every moment. They basically pushed her through this whole life-or-death experience, which really
changed her viewpoint on how she viewed life. She urged that people hug their family a little longer because it
might be the last time they did so and just treasure life for what they’ve been given. This reminder highlights the
importance of living intentionally, appreciating relationships, and not taking life for granted. Life is precious and
she did not realize how precious it was until she nearly lost it.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一位名叫玛丽的年轻护士在当地的一家医院开始了她的职业
生涯。某次她去参加心脏骤停培训课程，结果在课程结束的时候玛丽晕倒了。多亏了在场的医护人员及时
对她进行了急救，挽救了她的生命。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“在课程的闭幕式上，玛丽突然感到头晕目眩，昏倒了。”可知，第一段可描写
玛丽昏倒，在场的医护人员提供急救。
②由第二段首句内容“玛丽在护士同事的陪伴下活了过来。”可知，第二段可描写玛丽复苏后的感
悟。
2.续写线索：课程结束——玛丽昏倒——进行急救——送往急诊室——玛丽复苏——玛丽感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①开始：begin/start
②使复苏：revive/ come back to life again
③意识：realize/be aware of
情绪类
①宝贵的：precious/valuable
②感激：appreciate/show gratitude to
【点睛】[高分句型1] She urged that people hug their family a little longer because it might be the last time
they did so and just treasure life for what they’ve been given. (运用了that 引导宾语从句和because 引导原因状
语从句)
[高分句型2] Life is precious and she did not realize how precious it was until she nearly lost it. (运用了how
引导宾语从句和until 引导的时间状语从句)
（六）
（2025·云南丽江·一模）
It was a bright and sunny day in Green Valley, the kind of day that made the town’s name seem particularly
fitting. The streets were busy with activities as people went about their businesses, the laughter of children playing
in the park mixing with the distant noise of traffic. High school student Emily was walking to school from home,
her mind filled with thoughts of the upcoming science fair. She had been working on her project for weeks, pouring
her heart and soul into it, and today was the day she would present it to the judges. Her project was about
renewable energy, focusing on a novel solar panel (太阳能板) design that could potentially increase efficiency by
30%. She was confident that it would impress everyone, not just because of its scientific advantages, but because it
represented a step towards a greener future.
Emily had spent countless hours researching, experimenting, and perfecting her project. She had even
managed to get a small fund from the local community government, which allowed her to purchase some of the
more expensive materials needed for her project. Her classmates, teachers, and even her parents were all excited to
see the results of her hard work. As she walked, she mentally rehearsed (预演) her presentation, making sure she
had all the key points memorized and that her explanations were clear and accurate.
The science fair was not just an academic competition for Emily, it was also a platform to showcase her
passion for environmental sustainability. She knew that the judges would be looking for innovation, practicality,
and a deep understanding of the scientific principles involved. She was ready to prove that she had all of these in
her model. With each step, her excitement grew, and she could hardly wait to show her project to the world.
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However, when Emily opened the box to show her project to the judges, her heart dropped.
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【答案】
However, when Emily opened the box to show her project to the judges, her heart dropped. There, staring
back at her, was not the perfectly functioning solar panel she had spent weeks perfecting. Instead, it lay in pieces,
some of the delicate components broken and others disconnected. Her mind raced, trying to process what had
happened anxiously. How could this be? She had double-checked everything before leaving home. Tears welled up
in her eyes, but she quickly blinked them away, knowing that there was no time to lose. The judges were waiting,
expecting her to present her groundbreaking work.
She took a deep breath and decided to show them what she had learned from this problem. “Excuse me,
everyone”, Emily said, her voice shaking just a little. “What you see here is not a failure, but a lesson.” She talked
about the mistake she had made and how she hadn’t thought about how the panel would hold up in real life. “This
project,” she went on, “shows us that having good ideas is important, but we also need to make sure they work in
the real world.” The judges, who had been looking unhappy, started to nod as they listened. Emily’s honesty and
her willingness to learn from her mistake changed the way they felt. Instead of just showing off her project, she was
teaching them all an important lesson about how science is about learning from our mistakes and not giving up
when things get tough.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了高中生艾米丽带着精心准备数周、关乎可再生能源的太阳能
板项目去参加学校科技展，满怀期待却在向评委展示时发现作品损坏，随后她迅速调整心态应对的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容 “然而，当艾米丽打开盒子向评委们展示她的项目时，她的心都掉下来了。”
可以预测续写这段主要内容：艾米丽发现作品损坏了。
②由第二段首句内容 “她深吸一口气，决定向他们展示她从这个问题中学到了什么。”可以预测续
写这段主要内容：艾米丽对本次经历进行总结，评委们对艾米丽的表现展开讨论，最终认可了她在困境中
展现出的科学态度。
2.续写线索：作品损坏后艾米丽冷静解释原因 —— 评委聆听提问 —— 艾米丽阐述收获 —— 评委
认可评价 —— 艾米丽坚定决心
3.词汇激活
行为类：
发生：happen /take place/occur
期待：expect/anticipate
说：say /utter
情绪类：
焦虑地：anxiously/in anxiety
不高兴的：unhappy/displeased
【点睛】[高分句型 1]Her mind raced, trying to process what had happened anxiously.（运用了现在分词作
状语和what 引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型 2]The judges were waiting, expecting her to present her groundbreaking work.（运用了现在分词
作状语和不定式作宾补）
[高分句型 3]The judges, who had been looking unhappy, started to nod as they listened.（运用了who 引导
的非限制性定语从句和as 引导的时间状语从语）
（七）
（2025·云南文山壮族苗族自治州广南县第十中学校·一模）
There are so many sweet souls in animal shelters that are just waiting for their owners to find them and take
them home. Sadly, bigger and older dogs are usually overlooked in favor of smaller pups. Some people mistake
them for being too frightening. But these big animals are actually sweethearts who will love you unconditionally. A
dog named Petey is a typical example of this. After being stuck at a shelter for over a year, he finally found his
forever home.
Petey was known for his cheerful behavior and was popular in the shelter. He is bigger and older than other
dogs, which made some people mistake him for being too frightening, so he had run out of time at a small
overcapacity shelter with no potential adopters lined up for him.
That’s when the staff of the shelter reached out to the Society for the Prevention of Cruelty to Animals
(SPCA) of Wake County to help him find his forever family.
Despite these developments, Petey never lost his spirit and was excited about the move. “As soon as he got
here, he was pulling on the leash trying to get through the door. He ran into the building with his tail shaking,”
recalls Simon Ranlet, a staff member of the SPCA．“He was super friendly and very playful from day one. We
couldn’t believe that nobody wanted him.”
To help Petey find his forever family, Simon got Petey’s detailed information including some photos and
videos from the shelter. One morning, Simon and his colleagues were watching Petey’s photos and videos. They
wanted to find a way to help Petey.
“How cheerful his behavior is! So friendly and playful. Can we post his photos and videos on social media to
help Petey find a suitable adopter?” one of Simon’s colleagues suggested.
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Simon agreed and took action immediately.
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【答案】Simon agreed and took action immediately. He posted some detailed information and some pictures
and videos of Petey with his adoption status on social media. In just a few weeks, Simon received many comments
and some people showed great interest in adopting Petey. Finally, Simon accepted a family’s adoption application.
So Petey had his forever home, as his sweet face and cheerful behavior attracted the adopter and the adopter
couldn’t wait to meet him. Now, he has moved in with his family.
Petey quickly adapted to the new life in his new home. Petey is settling in perfectly in his new home. He loves
sleeping in the bed, playing fetch, sniffing around the yard and playing with any other doggy friends he finds. He’s
the perfect addition. He is so loved, opening up and showing the new family his beautiful personality. One of the
new family’s members said, “We are so happy to have him and we also believe more and more people are
concerned about the animals like Petey and are willing to adopt them.”
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Simon 和他的同事通过社交媒体发布老狗Petey 的照片和视
频，成功地为他找到了一个合适的领养家庭。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“西蒙同意了，并立即采取了行动”可知，第一段可描写Simon 他在社交媒体上
发布了一些关于Petey 的详细信息和一些照片和视频，以及他的收养状态以及最终有家庭要收养Petey。
②由第二段首句内容“Petey 很快适应了新家的新生活”可知，第二段可描写作者Petey 在新家的快乐
生活以及家庭成员的态度。
2.续写线索：发布视频和照片——有家庭收养——Petey 的快乐生活——家庭成员的态度
3.词汇激活
行为类
①展示：show /showcase
②吸引：attract/appeal to
③喜欢：love /fall in love with
④拥有：have/possess
情绪类
①快乐的：happy/pleased
②愿意的、渴求的：willing/ eager
【点睛】[高分句型1] So Petey had his forever home, as his sweet face and cheerful behavior attracted the
adopter and the adopter couldn’t wait to meet him. (运用了as 引导的原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] We are so happy to have him and we also believe more and more people are concerned about the
animals like Petey and are willing to adopt them. (运用了省略that 的宾语从句)
（八）
（2025·云南保山市·一模）
When I was seven, my sister Lucy, who was four, and I were eager to be independent and earn some money
to show our parents that we were capable beyond our years. The only idea I could come up with was to offer our
services as gardeners, going door to door to propose weeding neighbors’ gardens for 2 dollars each.
Our proposal was fair, yet unexpectedly, only Mrs. White, living three blocks from our house, accepted the
offer. Maybe that was because no one would take children’s words seriously. We agreed on the weeding at 8:00 the
next morning. Having the first client, Lucy and I couldn’t contain ourselves and felt as if we had achieved a
monumental task, hearts swelling with pride. We were going to be gardeners! But the excitement of the moment
was fleeting, and the next day, the attraction of play and the forgetfulness of childhood overtook us. We forgot
about our commitment.
Concerned about our absence, Mrs. White contacted our mother. As we walked into the kitchen through the
back door at 11:00 a. m. , Mom had just hung up the phone. She asked about our little gardening business.
Surprisingly, she wasn’t angry, instead, she found our initiative amusing. She explained that Mrs. White had called
her, expressing disappointment over our broken promise. Faced with the mistake, we admitted our oversight and
promised to make a sincere apology sometime. Instead of criticizing us, Mom busied herself with lunch
preparations as if nothing had happened. We did feel a touch of guilt, but it was quickly overshadowed by what
Mom said next.
As we mouthed on sandwiches, Mom casually asked, “Would you was like to go to Disneyland this
afternoon?” We sprang into action, bathing and dressing, which was like getting ready for a birthday party. We
rushed outside, not wanting to miss the bus that would take us downtown. The sun was high in the sky as we stood
outside, our bags packed and hearts full of anticipation.
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On the landing, Mom said, “Girls, we are not going to Disneyland today.”
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On the landing, Mom said, “Girls, we are not going to Disneyland today.” Lucy’s eyes widened in disbelief.
Our excitement gave way to disappointment. “But Mom, you just promised!” I exclaimed, confusion clouding my
thoughts. She looked at us seriously and explained, “I didn’t keep my promise either, and now you know how it
hurts. You need to learn that actions have consequences. Disneyland can await, but learning to be responsible and
trustworthy can’t.” Mom’s words hit us hard, the white lie making us realize the gravity of our mistake. Instead of
moving to Disneyland, we had to go back to confront our responsibilities and make things right．
We knocked gently on Mrs. White’s door, heads down and hearts heavy. When she opened it, we saw a hint of
surprise in her eyes. We quickly apologized for not keeping our promise and for letting her down. Mrs. White
smiled warmly and forgave us, saying that she understood how easily children could forget. Together, we worked
hard to remove the weeds. Mom taught us a true lesson which would stay with us forever. It was a lesson about the
importance of keeping our word and the impact our action could have on others. That day, we not only weeded
Mrs. White’s garden but also planted the seeds of responsibility and integrity within ourselves．
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者七岁那年，和妹妹迫切地想要独立，于是开始了一项园
艺生意，为邻居们除草来赚取费用。令她们惊讶的是，只有怀特夫人接受了她们的提议。然而，第二天她
们却忘记了她们的约定，导致怀特夫人联系上了她们的母亲。面对她们的错误，她们感到内疚，但很快就
被母亲提出的惊喜提议所分散了注意力——她打算那天下午带她们去迪士尼乐园。但是临出门时母亲又说
不去了，母亲用不去迪士尼乐园的策略让孩子们意识到他们的错误。接下来，通过道歉和实际行动，孩子
们挽回了失信的过失，学会了履行承诺的价值。
【详解】1. 段落续写
①由第一段句首内容“在楼梯平台上，妈妈说：“孩子们，我们今天不去迪斯尼乐园了。””可知，
第一段描述母亲通过实际行为告诉作者和妹妹被食言的感受。
②由第二段句首内容“我们轻轻地敲了敲怀特太太的门，低着头，心情沉重。”可知，第二段可描写
作者和妹妹去帮助怀特太太的花园除草，履行自己的承诺。
2. 续写线索：妈妈食言——伤心——教导——明白自己的错误——道歉——完成承诺——感悟。
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①大喊：exclaim/shout out
②意识到：realize/aware of
③信守诺言：keep one’s word/keep one’s promise
情绪类
①兴奋：excitement/enthusiasm
②惊讶：surprise/amazement
【点睛】【高分句型1】You need to learn that actions have consequences. (运用了that 引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Mom taught us a true lesson which would stay with us forever. (运用了which 引导的定语从
句)
（九）
（2025·云南昆明市第一中学·一模）
Every spring, the posters appeared around our neighborhood, inviting parents to sign up their kids for the
National Basketball League. It was a fun way to spend weekends in spring, and introduced kids to the joy of the
game on ball courts.
But things were a little different in my family. My father knew next to nothing about basketball or sports in
general. His most genuine wish as a boy came when he was taking PE class, “Please, please, please don’t let the
ball come to me.”
He later became the father of eight-year-old me, who was interested in the sport. Saturday mornings, he had
to take me out to the playground and we’d play ball with a few other young boys and their dads. He was so glad
those fathers could coach and knew the rules of the game.
He’d play catch with me, and thanks to his weak arms, the ball would drop near his feet before I could get in
position to catch it. After a few too many misses one day, I sank to the ground and said, “How am I ever going to
make the major league?”
Deep down in my heart, I wanted to tell him, “You are the wrong dad!” I meant it! I still clearly remembered
that when he’d gone to the sporting goods store, he bought me a pair of gloves for a baseball player. How could a
basketball fan want gloves for the game he had no interest in at all? That’s how clueless he was.
Still, he wanted to find some way of giving me confidence on the court, the confidence he’d never had since
childhood. There was an official Teen League in our area, but it was super-competitive and only welcomed older
boys. He wanted something that welcomed younger boys like me, something that welcomed athletically talented
fathers like most fathers, and most importantly, something that welcomed with-no-athletic-talent fathers like him.
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He shared the idea with a couple of neighbors.
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【答案】He shared the idea with a couple of neighbors. To his surprise, they loved it. One dad, who coached
soccer, offered to design simple drills. Another, a teacher, suggested organizing friendly matches. They decided to
create a “Little Champions League” where every kid could play, regardless of skill. Fathers like mine would assist
with scoring or cheering, while sporty dads coached. We practiced on weekends, laughing at clumsy passes and
celebrating every basket. Slowly, my frustration faded as I realized even imperfect play could be fun.
Finally, a non-profit organization helped. They provided funding for jerseys and court rentals. Our first game
drew dozens of families. Watching Dad proudly hand out water bottles, I suddenly understood — his love wasn’t
about basketball expertise. When I scored my first point, he cheered louder than anyone. By season’s end, our
league had become a community tradition. Dad’s quiet determination taught me that true support means showing
up, even when you’re out of your depth.
【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了父亲虽然对篮球一无所知，但为了支持儿子的兴趣，努力寻
找适合的篮球活动，并最终通过非营利组织的帮助，实现了愿望。
【详解】1. 段落续写：
① 由第一段首句内容“他与几个邻居分享了这个想法。”可知，第一段可描写父亲与邻居们讨论并
推广这个想法，最终获得支持的过程。
② 由第二段首句内容“最后，一个非营利组织提供了帮助。”可知，第二段可描写非营利组织如何
帮助父亲实现他的计划，并描述活动的成功开展，作者也理解了父亲对自己的爱。
2. 续写线索：
父亲分享想法——邻居支持——非营利组织帮助——活动成功——理解了父爱
3. 词汇激活：
行为类：
① 决定：decide/determine
②庆祝：celebrate/observe
③分发：hand out/distribute
情绪类：
① 使某人惊讶的是：to one’s surprise/to one’s amazement
② 沮丧：frustration/dismay
【点睛】[高分句型1] One dad, who coached soccer, offered to design simple drills. （由who 引导的非限
制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]They decided to create a “Little Champions League” where every kid could play, regardless of
skill. （由where 引导的限制性定语从句）
[高分句型3]When I scored my first point, he cheered louder than anyone.（由when 引导的时间状语从
句）
（十）
（2025·云南玉溪·一模）
Undoubtedly, Mother Nature is always attractive to kids. In our childhood, how often did we turn a deaf ear to
our parents’ advice? Very often! Thus, we landed ourselves in a situation where we greatly regretted our act of not
having listened to the advice of the wise.
Such an unforgettable experience I had at the age of 7 gave me an invaluable lesson, after which I deeply
understood why my gentle mother was repeating the boring suggestions and I would try to take her suggestions
seriously.
In my childhood, I was so crazy about nature that even playing among the colorful flowers in our garden could
make my day. Our house was next to the woods which had always stirred up(激起) great curiosity in me in wanting
to find out what was within. Every time I saw fascinating butterflies dancing from the woods, my curiosity grew.
But my mother didn’t like me wandering off on my own and always ensured that I was within her sight. Even
if she allowed me to explore the surrounding area on my own, it was only to be somewhere near the house. Being
as curious as the cat, I always desired to explore the woods. It seemed as if my mother had understood my desire,
so she had warmed me on lots of occasions never to enter the woods alone.
“Mom, can I go out and play in the garden?” I asked.
“Sure,” she would reply each time. “Kate, you can play in the garden but you must promise me one thing—
only when I’m with you can you go into the woods. There are no cases of animal attacks on humans, but it’s still
dangerous for a little kid like you. It’s too easy to get lost in the woods.”
“Sure, you’ve said that many times!” I answered without patience at her repeated reminders.
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However, curiosity got the better of me one morning.
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【答案】
However, curiosity got the better of me one morning. Ignoring my mother’s reminder, I slid into the forbidden
world. How fascinating! Among various colorful flowers danced butterflies. With excitement, I chased after the
graceful creatures, running deeper into the woods. Suddenly they flew over trees and disappeared. What’s worse, I
got lost! I rushed around, crying for help, frightened and helpless, but in vain. I repeated the useless efforts until
sunset. “If only I followed Mom’s reminder!” I curled up under a tree, in bitter regret and cried again.
“Kate?” Behind the trees covered by the rays of the setting sun came my mother’s voice. “Mom! I’m here!”
Wild with joy, I rushed towards where the voice came from. Behind a tree appeared my mother. She dashed up,
hugged me tight and checked whether I got hurt. “I’m so sorry! I should have appreciated your suggestion!” I burst
into tears. Wiping tears from my muddy face, she repeated the reminders, which weren’t boring any more, but wise
and affectionate, and were implanted in my life forever.
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However, curiosity got the better of me one morning. I summoned up my courage and decided to take a
chance. Hardly had I entered the woods when I was totally attracted by the sight. The wandering clouds, the
blooming flowers and the vigorous trees all kept me spellbound. At the sight of a beautiful butterfly, I tiptoed along
the path, bent over, cupped my hands gently and danced with it down the track. Time flew and before I knew it, I
was deep in the woods, unable to find the way out. With a feeling of horror totally holding me in its power, I
squatted down under a tree, tears rolling down my cheeks.
“Kate?” Behind the trees covered by the rays of the setting sun came my mother’s voice. Hearing my mom’s
voice, I yelled in a quivering tone, rushed towards her direction and threw my arms around her. Noticing my misty
eyes, she patted me on the shoulders and checked whether I got hurt. Choked with emotion, I whispered, “I am OK,
Mom. I will never go into the woods without your company and permission.” Shooting me an approving look, she
added, “Next time you want to come, keep me informed!” In the setting sun, we headed back and this time, I held
my mom’s hand tightly.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述我对家附近的小森林充满了好奇心，但是妈妈总是提醒我不能
独自进入森林。
【详解】1. 段落续写
①由第一段首句内容“然而，一天早上，好奇心战胜了我。”可知，本段可以写我被森林里的一切所
吸引，越走越远，然后就迷路了。
②由第二段首句内容““凯特？”在夕阳的余晖笼罩下的树林后面传来了母亲的声音。”可知，本段
可以写妈妈找到我，我明白了父母建议的重要性以及其中的智慧。
2. 续写线索：我进入森林深处——我迷路——我哭泣后悔——妈妈出现——我明白道理
