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一、书信类
1. 求助信
【首段】
① I’m writing to seek help from you/ask you to do me a favor/give me a hand, as I meet 
with/come across some problems while planning a Green Campus campaign.  我写信请你帮忙,因
为我在策划一个绿色校园运动时遇到了一些问题。
② Faced with/In the face of so challenging a problem, I have no alternative but to turn to you for 
help. 面对这个难题,我别无选择只得向你求助。
【正文】
① What bothers me is that I am at a loss/have no idea how to review what I have learned by 
myself at home. 困扰我的事情是我不知道如何在家里复习功课。
② I have much trouble/bother in concentrating on online classes, making me really frustrated.  
我很难专心上网课,使我很苦恼。
【结尾】
① I would be very grateful if you could spare me some time to help me deal with the problem.  如
果你能抽时间帮我处理这个问题我将不胜感激。
② I’d appreciate it if you could give me some guidance/instructions/help/assistance. 如果你能给
我一些指导/帮助,我将不胜感激。
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
I am ______(自我介绍) . I am writing to seek for your help in______(写信目的). 
Now, I struggle a lot in ______(遇到的困难). I’ve found that ______(描述自己的困难). 
For one thing, ______(困难一). For another, ______(困难二). Therefore, could you please 
put forward some practical suggestions? I am convinced that I will benefit a lot from 
your valuable and timely advice.
I would appreciate it if you could respond at your earliest convenience.
Your sincerely,
段落要
点
首段
求助目的
正文
具体求助内容
结尾
再次表示期望和感谢。
Li Hua
2. 建议信
【首段】
① Knowing that you would like to improve your spoken Chinese, I am offering you the following 
suggestions. 知道你想提高你的汉语口语,我给你以下建议。
② To help you do better in it, I’m writing to offer my suggestions, which are listed as follows. 
为了帮助你做得更好,我写信给你提出我的建议,如下所列。
【正文】
① Personally/As far as I’m concerned/From my point of view, it would be a wise choice if you 
stay at home and avoid going outdoors unless necessary.  在我看来,除非必要,如果你待在家里
并避免出门是明智的。
② If I were you/Were I you, I would work out regularly in order to keep healthy.  如果我是你,
我会经常锻炼以保持健康。
【结尾】
① I hope my suggestion is helpful for you and I am looking forward to solving the problems 
quickly. 我希望我的建议对你有用,期待你能尽快解决问题。
② I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into consideration.  如果您能考虑我
的建议,我将不胜感激。
【
  写作
 
 模板】
 
 
Dear ______ (称谓)
Learning from your letter that____________, I am writing to share with you my personal 
suggestions and perspectives (观点) for your reference (参考).
Firstly, you are supposed to ______ (建议一) . Additionally(For one reason), it makes sense to 
______ (建议二/理由一) . Moreover(For another reason), ______ (建议三/理由二)is also a good 
choice . Do bear in mind that (Therefore)______ (建议四/理由三)
I am fully convinced that use the tips above and we will______ (以上建议的好处) . I would 
appreciate it if you could take my suggestions into account (表达希望接受建议).
段落要
点
首段
写信目的
正文
提出建议、说明原因
结尾
表达期望和祝愿
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
3. 推荐信
1. 推荐物:推荐电影,书,歌曲,说明你喜欢的理由。
2. 推荐人:推荐历史人物,老师,主持人,学生会主席,受尊敬的人等,介绍人物,并说明
你推荐的理由。
3.推荐事(行为):推荐来中国旅游(景点,线路,特色)、来中国留学、过中国节日等,说
明推荐理由。
【首段】
① Learning from your last letter that you are eager to explore traditional Chinese culture, I think 
the Ancient Poetry is your best choice. 从你上一封信中得知你渴望探索中国传统文化,我认为
古诗是你最好的选择。
② Delighted/Pleased that you are going to pay a visit to Xi’an, I’m writing to recommend to you 
some tourist attractions deserving visiting. 很高兴你要去西安游玩,我写信向你推荐一些值得一
游的景点。
【正文】
① As one of the world wonders, the Great Wall is regarded as the symbol of China, which you 
can’t afford to miss. 长城是世界奇观之一,是中国的象征,不容错过。
② Visiting the Summer Palace by yourself is bound to greatly promote your understanding of the 
profound traditional Chinese culture. 游览颐和园一定会大大促进你对中国悠久传统文化的了
解。
【结尾】
① I do hope you can take my recommendation into account and whenever you need help, don’t 
hesitate to let me know. 我希望你能考虑我的建议,无论何时你需要帮助,请及时让我知道。
② Hope my recommendation will help you. Wish you a good time/journey.  希望我的推荐能帮
到你。祝你玩得开心/旅途愉快。
【写作模板】
段落要
点
首段
写信目的--推荐事项
正文
推荐理由
结尾
感谢
Dear ______ (称谓)
In response to your request for ______(推荐事由), I would like to recommend ______(具体推
荐事项). I recommend it mainly for the following three reasons.
Firstly, ______(推荐理由一) . Additionally/Aside from it, ______(推荐理由二) . Plus, 
______(推荐理由三) . If you want details, please______(联系方式) .
Your taking my recommendation into consideration will be highly appreciated/expected. Keenly 
anticipate your prompt reply.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
4. 申请信
【首段】
① Learning that the school basketball team is looking for new members, I’m excited to apply to 
be a member of it.  得知校篮球队在招收新队员,我激动地申请成为队员。
② From the advertisement I know a host is needed for the coming music festival, so I can’t wait to 
apply for the position. 我从广告中得知即将到来的音乐节需要主持人,我迫不及待地申请该职
位。
③ I’m Li Hua and writing to apply to be a member of our school English drama society. I have 
confidence that I am a suitable candidate for the society. 我是李华,写信来申请成为我们学校
英语戏剧社团的一员。我有信心,我是一个合适的候选人。
【正文】
① Active and sociable, I do believe I’m perfectly qualified for the job as a volunteer. (性格特
征)
我很活跃,善于交际,我的确相信我完全符合志愿者工作的条件。
② With a good command of English, I can communicate with foreign visitors with great ease. 
(交流) 
我精通英语,能与外国游客轻松地交流。
③ I get along with others easily, which is especially necessary for a volunteer. (相处)
段落要
点
首段
简要介绍自己,说明信息来源,并提
出申请
正文
突出自己特点,具体说明胜任理由
结尾
请求给予机会,期望尽快回复
我容易与他人相处,这对志愿者来说尤其是必不可少的。
④ I have taken part in several such great activities from which I have gained relevant experience. 
(经验)
我参加过几次这样的大型活动,积累了相关经验。
⑤ Equally importantly, I previously served as a volunteer several times, which is also an 
advantage over other applicants. (经验) 
同样重要的是,我之前做过几次志愿者,这也是我相对于其他申请者的一个优势。
【结尾】
① I really hope to join you. I would appreciate it if you could reply to me at your earliest 
convenience.  我真的希望能加入你们。如果您能尽快给我答复,我将不胜感激。
② I am looking forward to joining you and I would be grateful if you could offer me the 
opportunity. 我期待着加入贵公司,如果您能给我这个机会,我将不胜感激。
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
Delightedly learning from ______ that ______(职位) is required, I am writing this letter 
to apply to be ______(职位或机会),which is specially tailored to me.
I am qualified for the following reasons. To start with, my advantage first lies in the fact that 
______(优势一) . Furthermore, ______(优势二) . Finally, not only can I help ______, but also 
I can assist_________(优势三) .
I do hope my ______( 资质或能力) will win me a favorable consideration  from your 
side. Should you need any details related to my application, feel free to contact me 
at______(联系方式).
Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
5. 邀请信
【首段】
段落要
点
首段
邀请目的
正文
介绍活动具体内容,并说明受邀人参
加理由
结尾
期待对方接受邀请,并尽快回复
 
①I’m Li Hua, Chairman of the Student Union of Yucai Middle School. I’m writing to invite you to 
be a judge for our English speech this coming June. 
我是李华,育才中学学生会主席。我写信是想邀请你担任我们今年6 月英语演讲的评委。
② Knowing you are interested in Chinese history and culture, I’m more than pleased to invite 
you to visit Suzhou Gardens with me. 
得知你对中国历史和文化很感兴趣,我很高兴地邀请你和我一起到苏州园林游玩。
【正文】
The activity 
①
is scheduled to last approximately three hours, from 8:30 am to 11:30 am.  活动预
计持续三个小时,从上午8:30 到11:30。
② There will be various activities, including short drama performances, playing musical 
instruments, as well as some other wonderful shows. 将会有各种活动,包括短剧表演、乐器演奏
和一些其他精彩的表演。
③ This is such a golden chance to experience traditional Chinese culture that it can’t be missed.  
这是体验中国传统文化的绝佳机会,不容错过。
【结尾】
① I’d appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your early convenience. 如果你能尽
早确认参加,我将不胜感激。
②We’d be delighted if you could come and share the unforgettable moment with us.如果你能来和
我们共度这个难忘的时刻,我们将十分高兴。
③ I do hope you will accept my invitation if it is convenient to you. 我真心希望你方便的话能接
受我的邀请。
【写作模板】
Dear ______ (称谓),
Learning that ______(活动) will be held in ________(地点), I am writing this letter to 
invite you to participate. 
First, as scheduled, the ______(活动) falls on ______(具体日期), lasting from_____ to_____(具
体时间点), during which time a wide variety of _____ (活动内容) will be put on. Furthermore, in 
this festival, not only can you ________, but also you can __________. Finally, I highly 
recommend that you participate in this meaningful and entertaining activity, in which case, 
you can______(重要意义). (make more friends and relieve mental pressure.
Hopefully, you will accept this sincere invitation, and I am looking forward to your 
arrival.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
6. 感谢信
【首段】
① I’d like to express/convey my great appreciation for your timely help and support. 我想对你给
予我们的及时帮助和支持表示感谢。
【正文】
① Undoubtedly, it was your encouragement and support that lit me up when I was faced with 
difficulties in English learning. 毫无疑问,当我在英语学习中遇到困难时,是您的鼓励和支持让
我开心起来。
② Had it not been for your assistance and kindness, I couldn’t have made such great progress.  
如果没有你的帮助和善意,我不可能取得如此大的进步。
During the week, the comfortable accommodation, delicious meals and your friendly family
③
 
members all made me warm, leaving me ever lasting memories.  在这一周中,舒适的房间、
美味的饭菜、友好的家人都让我感到温暖,给我留下抹不去的回忆。
【结尾】
① Words fail to express my thankfulness to you. 我无法用言语来表达我对你的谢意。
②Thanks again for your generous help and wish you all the best. 再次感谢你的慷慨帮助,祝你一
切顺利。
【
  写作
 
 模板
 
 】
Dear ______ (称谓)
Learning that you will return to ________, I am eagerly writing to extend my heartfelt 
gratitude to you for ______(感谢的原因).
At the beginning, undoubtedly,had it not been your assistance in ______(对方给予的具体帮
助), I fear that I would have been______/ have made progress in _______ (没有对方帮助时的后
果). Whenever I encounter difficulties, you ______(具体事由和感想) .
Again, no words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am./ Words fail to convey my 
段落要
点
首段
表达感激之情,简单陈述的原因
正文
说明要感谢的事由或介绍一些的
情况
结尾
再次表感谢及真诚祝福
appreciation for your help. Many thanks to you. I wish ______(表达祝愿或者回报意愿).
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
7. 道歉信
【首段】
① I’m writing to convey my sincere apologies to you for not accompanying you to the gallery at 
our appointed time. 我写信向你表达我诚挚的歉意,因为我没有在我们约定的时间陪你去画廊。
② Now, I’m writing you this letter to show my deep regret. 现在,我写信向你表达我深深的遗
憾。
【正文】
① The reason why I won’t be available at that time as planned is that my grandfather fell ill 
suddenly yesterday and I have to care for him. 我不能按计划届时到场,因为我祖父昨天突然生
病了,我必须照顾他。
② I would appreciate it if you could allow me to fix another time. If not, please keep me informed 
in advance of when it’s convenient to you. 如果能允许我另安排时间,我将不胜感激。如果不
能,请提前告诉我您何时方便。
【结尾】
① I sincerely apologize to you for any inconvenience caused by the unexpected change. 对于这
个意外的变化给您带来的不便,我深表歉意。
Please allow me to say sorry again, and 
②
I’ll try to make up for my fault. 请允许我再次致歉,
我将尽力弥补我的过错。
【
  写作
 
 模板】
 
 
Dear ______ (称谓)
I 'm terribly sorry to inform you that ______(写信事由). Thus, I am writing to apologize for not 
keeping my word. Something unexpected happened and so important is this______ that I can’t 
afford to miss it. (失约理由) . 
Shall we fix another time? I’ll be available any time after______( 补救办法). Will 
段落要
点
首段
表示歉意,道歉的原由
正文
解释原因,提出弥补措
施;
结尾
再次请求原谅。
______(另约时间) suits your convenience? If it’s OK, let’s meet at ______(见面地点). If not, let 
me know what time suits you best. I hope the adjustment won’t put you into much trouble.
Hopefully, you will accept my apology, and keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
8. 询问信
【首段】
① I’m writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding/concerning 
the English summer camp. 我写信是想看看你是否能给我提供有关英语夏令营的信息。
② I’m writing to you in the hope of getting some details of the two⁃week journey. 我写信给你是
想了解这两周旅行的一些细节。
【正文】
① If there is anything else that needs to be paid special attention to, please inform me at your 
convenience. 如果还有什么需要特别注意的地方,请在方便的时候告诉我。
② Nothing can be better if you can take the trouble to offer me some relevant materials about the 
course. 如果您能给我提供一些这门课的相关资料,那就再好不过了
【结尾】
① Thank you for your kindness, and your early reply to this letter will be highly appreciated. 感
谢您的好意,如能及时回复此信,将不胜感激。
② I would appreciate it if you could give me more detailed information about your schedule. 如果
您能给我更详细的日程安排,我将不胜感激。
【基本模板】
Dear ______ (称谓)
I am ______(自我介绍). I am writing to inquire about ______(要询问的内容).
The following is my confusion. First of all, I’m tempted to know ______. Secondly, when 
will ______ ? Thirdly, is ______?(要咨询的问题罗列)
 I would be much appreciated if you can furnish me with the above information and you 
段落要
点
首段
写信目的
正文
咨询详情
结尾
表达谢意,期盼
回复
can contact me via ______ ( 表达感谢). Thank you and your prompt reply will be highly 
appreciated.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
9. 告知信
【首段】
① Learning that you are enthusiastic about the art festival, I’m delighted to share with you 
some details.  得知你对艺术节很感兴趣,我很高兴告诉你一些细节。
② I can hardly wait to share with you the exciting news that a folk music festival is to be held in 
our city. 我迫不及待地告诉你一个令人激动的消息,我们市即将举办民间音乐节。
【正文】
① I hope the change of the course arrangement will not cause you too much trouble/inconvenience.  
我希望课程安排的变化不会给你带来太多麻烦/不便。
② Not only was the activity a feast for the eyes, but it also inspired us to study harder. 这次活动
不仅是一场视觉盛宴,也激励我们更加努力地学习。
【结尾】
① I’d appreciate it if you could give me a reply at your earliest convenience. 如果你能尽早回
复,我将不胜感激。
② If you want to know anything else, please don’t hesitate to contact me. 如果你想知道其他事
情,请及时联系我。
【写作
 
 模板
 
 】
Dear ______ (称谓)
Aware of your enthusiasm for /Delighted to learn that ______(活动主题、你对主题的兴趣), 
I’m writing to extend my ______( 看法、关心、欢迎等) and inform you of some relevant 
information.
(活动信息).To begin with, ______(活动) will take place at _________, which is convenient 
for both of us. Furthermore, as you have expected,______(活动)will ____________. Not only 
can you expand your Chinese vocabulary, but also you can you can expose yourself to 
__________ in the process (要点二). To sum up, to better understand the  ______, you are 
段落要点
首段
告知内容(原因、背景等)
正文
告知具体事宜(时间、地点
等)
结尾
表达期待愿望
advised to learn about the _________of ________ in advance(要点三).
I highly expect the experience to be rewarding, perfectly mixing learning and fun.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
二、倡议演讲类
1、新闻报道
【首段】
① To raise our awareness of labor, the social practice was held at the Gardening Base near our 
school last Friday.为提高我们的劳动意识,社会实践活动于上周五在我们学校附近的园艺基
地举行。
② Last week witnessed our “Loving Parcels” donation activity at our school. 上周我校举行了 
“Loving Parcels” 的捐赠活动。
【正文】
① The activity began with a video showing the history of painting facial masks in Peking Opera. 
活动从一段展示京剧脸谱画历史的视频开始。
While picking watermelons,
②
 I realized how hard it was to work in the fields.  在摘西瓜时,我
意识到在地里劳作太辛苦了。
【结尾】
① It is through the fruit⁃picking activity that we are aware of the value of working hard. 正是通
过采摘活动,我们才意识到劳动的价值。
② All students think highly of the voluntary activity, from which they benefited a lot. 所有学生
高度评价这个志愿者活动,他们从中受益匪浅。
【
  基本模板
 
 】
______ (标题)
______( 时间或地点) saw/witnessed ______( 活动). Aimed at ______( 活动目的), this 
activity was well received in the whole school.
______(参与者) took an active part in the activity. The ______(活动) provided a platform 
段落要点
首段
活动基本情况(时间、地点、
内容、参与人员等)
正文
结尾
活动结果(成功)+活动重要意
义
for all the students to ______(活动内容一). Most impressively, ______(活动内容二). 
With the students' active participation and teachers' enthusiastic support, the ______(活
动) was undoubtedly a success.(This activity was highly spoken of by students, for it motivated 
them to______(影响).)
2、倡议
【首段】
① I’m appealing to you to pay attention to proper and frequent hand washing. 我呼吁大家注意正
确且经常洗手。
【正文】
① Never does it produce pollution, contributing to a low⁃carbon lifestyle. 它从不产生污染,有助
于低碳的生活方式。
② Everyone ought to have a positive attitude towards the campaign against the disease. 人人都
应对抗击疫情持积极的态度。
【结尾】
① Let’s join hands and take action immediately. 让我们携起手来,立即采取行动。
② Let’s make joint efforts to create a green and harmonious environment. I’m convinced our 
efforts will eventually pay off. 让我们共同努力创建一个绿色和谐的环境,我相信我们的努力
最终会有回报的。
【基本模板】
标题
Dear ______ (称谓)
It is common to see that ______(陈述现象). Not only ______, but also______ (现象的影响). 
I’m writing to call on us students to ______(呼吁) . 
Firstly, we are supposed to ______(建议一). What’s more, it is suggested that ______(建议
二). Eventually, whatever possible it’s good to______(建议三) .
Such measures can definitely make a marked improvement in______( 在什么方面提高), we 
would like all of you to attach importance to______(主题)!
段落要点
首段
问题与呼吁
正文
提出建议
结尾
再次呼吁,提出期待
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
3、演讲与致辞
【首段】
① It’s my great honor to have the opportunity to share with you my opinion on how to take 
online courses more effectively.  我很荣幸有机会与大家分享我对如何更有效地上网课的看法。
② It’s my turn to make a speech here. I’d like to stress the importance of having a positive attitude to 
study. 
轮到我在此发言了。我想强调有积极的学习态度的重要性。
③ It’s my great honor to stand here on behalf of all the students, and I’d like to offer you my 
warmest welcome. 
我很荣幸能代表所有的学生站在这里,在此向你们表示最热烈的欢迎。
【正文】
① In my view, important though it is for students to have better performance in exams, health is of 
equal significance. 依我看,虽然考好成绩对学生们而言很重要,但健康也同样重要。
② No one can deny the fact that the environmental pollution is getting increasingly serious. 毋庸
置疑,环境污染日益严重。
③ I’m convinced that honesty is the best policy in most situations. 我相信在大多数情况下诚实
是上策。
【结尾】
① By way of conclusion, I’d like to quote what Newton once said. 我想借用牛顿曾经说过的话结
束我今天的发言。
② I hope everyone finds your stay here an enjoyable experience and your visit will surely promote 
our friendship. 我希望大家都在这里过得愉快,你们的来访一定会增进我们的友谊。
4、通知
段落要点
首段
寒暄、发言稿主题
正文
发言稿的具体内容
结尾
提出愿望和祝福
【首段】
① To encourage us students to take physical exercise, our school will hold a marathon race. 为鼓励
我们学生锻炼身体,我们学校将举行一场马拉松比赛。
② Attention, please! I have something important to tell you. 请注意,我有重要的事要告诉你们。
【正文】
① The lecture is scheduled to last 3 hours, from 2:00 pm to 5:00 pm on Friday in the school hall. 
讲座于周五下午2 点到5 点在学校大厅举行,预计持续3 个小时。
② As scheduled, the contest is supposed to be launched next Sunday in the school lecture hall.  
按计划,比赛将于下周日在学校演讲厅举行。
③ Those interested in the activity can sign up by the deadline. 对活动感兴趣的人可在截止日期
前报名。
【结尾】
All are required to come on time.
①
 Your participation will surely make a difference. 要求所有人
按时到达。你的参与一定会起作用。
② All the staff and students on campus are required to wear masks. 所有在校员工和学生都必须戴
口罩。
【
  作文
 
 模板
 
 】
NOTICE
To enrich our school life and arouse students’ enthusiasm for ______(活动主旨) , ______(活动)
is going to be held at ______(活动地点) on ______(活动时间). 
Contestants are required to ______(活动要求). All entries must be submitted to ______(报名地
点) by ______(截止时间) . All the ______( 参赛内容) will be graded carefully by our foreign 
teachers. Winners of the contest will be awarded with ______(颁发奖品).
Those who show their keen interests in the activity will be highly appreciated. Keenly 
anticipate your participation. 
Student Union
段落要
点
首段
引起注意,表明目的
正文
主要内容(时间、地点以及内容
等)
结尾
邀请参加+注意事项
读后续写 
一、如何进行情绪描写
(一)无灵主语:情绪名词+固定动词+sb(一股...情绪涌上心头)
A    wave/sense/flood/ripple/tide
 
  + of +情绪名词 + 固定动词(seize 侵袭,catch 抓住,overwhelm 充溢,
压倒,surround 围绕,well up in 涌入, take hold of 掌控,sweep over 席卷,come over 支配)+ sb
A sense of relief came over me. 我如释重负。
A flood of excitement overwhelmed me. 我激动不已。
A tide of puzzlement took hold of me. 我疑惑不解。
A ripple of delight swept over me. 我开心不已。
(二)形容词做状语:adj.1+adj, sb.did, doing...(感到...和...,某人做某事1,并做某事2)
Confident and determined , David kept on running, struggling to reach the finish line. 
自信且坚定,David 坚持跑着,努力到达终点线。
Anxious and nervous, I stood rooted to the spot, not knowing what to do. 
焦急紧张,我矗立在原地,不知道做什么。
Happy and relaxed, she let out a sigh of relief. 高兴且放松,她如释重负。
情
绪
名词
动词
积极情绪
开
happiness , delight, joy, pleasure
happy, delighted, joyful, pleased
心
激
动
thrill, excitement
thrilled, excited
放
松
relief, relaxation
relieved, relaxed
热
情
passion, enthusiasm
passionate, enthusiastic
满
意
satisfaction  contentment
satisfied, content
惊
讶
surprise, shock,amazement,astonishment
surprised,shocked,amazed,astonished
自
豪
pride
proud
同
情
sympathy
sympathetic
感
动
touched, moved
感
激
gratitude, appreciation,thanks
grateful,appreciative, thankful
消极情绪
伤
心
sadness  sorrow
sad, sorrowful,
绝
望
desperation  hopelessness
desperate, hopeless
失
望
depression  disappointment   frustration
depressed, disappointed,frustrated
生
气
anger  irritation
angry, irritated
焦
急
worry  anxiety
worried, anxious
疲
惫
exhaustion, tiredness
exhausted, tired
害
怕
scare, fright, horror, terror
scared, frightened
困
惑
confusion , puzzlement
confused, puzzled
嫉
妒
envy, jealousy
envious, jealous
后
悔
regret
regretful
羞
愧
shame
ashamed
尴
尬
embarrassment
embarrassed
孤
独
loneliness
lonely
  
二、如何进行动作描写
(一)动作链  sb did sth, did sth and did sth.
     David rushed hurriedly to the lake, took off his clothes and jumped into the water. David 匆忙地冲到湖边,
脱掉衣服,跳入水中。
(二)动作面:
把动作和面部表情,心理,语言等结合,形成动作面。从整体→局部,从肢体→面部→语言/心理描
写,从多个角度描绘一个场景。
Thinking he would let his sister down, Tom couldn’t help sobbing, with his head buried in his hands. 
想到他会让他妹妹失望,Tom 将头埋在手里,忍不住地哭泣。
续写常用动词积累
 
   
 
一、“看”的表达
1. glance 扫视  He glanced at his watch. 他看了一下手表。
2. watch 观看、注视  She watched the kids playing in the yard. 她看着孩子们在院子里玩。
3. stare 盯着看  I stared blankly at the paper in front of me. 我茫然地看着面前这张纸。
4. look into one's eyes 直视某人    I looked into his eyes and said 我看着他的眼睛,说到.
5. glare 怒视 The old woman glared at him.那个老妇人怒视着他
6. 发现,注意到 find/ notice/ spot/discover   I spotted my friend in the crowd.我在人群中看见了我的朋友。
7. At the sight of..., sb did sth. 一看到...某人就... 
At the sight of her mom standing in front of the door, he burst out crying. 一看到站在门口的妈妈,
他就哭了起来。
二、“哭”的表达
1. sob 抽噎;啜泣  She began to sob again, burying her face in the pillow. 她又开始抽噎,把脸埋在枕头里。
2. weep 哭泣,流泪  She started to weep uncontrollably. 她不由自主地哭了起来
3. 抑制泪水 sb. hold back one's tears 
4.视线模糊  tears blur one's vision (blur-blurred-blurred)
5. 快要哭了 sb. be close to tears 
6.  眼泪流下  tears run/stream/roll down one's cheeks 
三、“笑”的表达
1. grin 露齿笑;咧嘴笑   He was grinning from ear to ear. 他笑得合不拢嘴。
They grinned with delight when they heard our news. 他们得知我们的消息时高兴得直咧着嘴笑。 
2. 挤出笑容  force a smile 
She forced a smile and told me not to worry about her. 她挤出一个微笑,并告诉我不要担心她。
3. 面带笑容  wear a big smile on one's face   She wore a shining smile on her face.她脸上挂着灿烂的笑容。
4. 突然大笑 burst out laughing/burst into laughter.
四、“吃”的表达
1. 尝 taste   He tasted the liquid medicine first before she drank it.在她喝药之前,他先尝了一下。
2. 咬 bite/take a bite   He took another bite of the apple.他又咬了一口苹果。
3. 嚼chew    Rosa chewed on her lip and stared at the floor.罗莎咬着嘴唇,眼睛盯着地板。
4. 吞swallow   She took a bite of the apple, chewed, and swallowed. 她咬了一口那个苹果,嚼了嚼吞了下去。
五、“头”相关的表达
1. 抬头raise   He didn’t even raise his head when I drove by. 我开车过去,他连头都没有抬。
2. 点头 nod    “Are you okay?”I asked. She nodded and smiled. “你还好吧?”我问道。她点点头笑了。
3. 摇头 shake    She shook her head in disbelief. 她不相信地摇摇头。
4. 挠头scratch    He scratched his head and looked thoughtful.他提着头显出一副深思的样子。
5. 低头 lower/drop/duck/hung    He was so nervous that he lowered his head 他很紧张,以至于他低下头。
六、“手”相关的表达
1. 举手raise/hold up one’s hand    He raised his hand to wave.他举起手来挥动。
2. 挥手wave one’s hand   Gil waved his hand and the car moved off. 吉尔挥了挥手,汽车开走了。
3. 伸手 reach out/ hold out/ extend one’s hand
He walked up, held out his hand and said: “Congratulations.”他走过去,和他握手,说:“恭喜。
5. give sb. a thumbs up      She checked the hall, and then gave the others a thumbs-up. 她查看了一下大厅,
然后冲其他人竖了一下大拇指。
七、“手,胳膊”相关的表达
1. tap 轻拍     Ralph tapped me on the shoulder.拉尔夫轻轻地拍了拍我的肩膀。
2. knock 敲   She knocked on the door before entering the room. 她敲了敲门才进入房间。
3. hit 打,击       He hit the ball with a baseball bat.他用棒球棍击球。
4. strike 打     The boxer struck his opponent with a powerful punch.拳击手用有力的拳头击中了对手。
5. hold 抱,拿      He held the baby in his arms.他抱着婴儿。
6. grab/grasp/seize 抓     She grabbed her coat and rushed out the door. 她抓起外套冲出门去。
                       She seized her by the hair. 她揪住她的头发。
8. 耸肩    Sam shrugged and said nothing. 萨姆耸耸肩膀,什么也没说。
9. 拍肩  pat on one's shoulder 以表鼓励、安慰、喜爱搂肩
     The old man pat the boy on the shoulder.这老人拍了男孩的肩。
10. 投入怀抱     Overwhelmed with joy, she threw herself into his arms as soon as she saw him.她一见到他,
就兴奋地扑进他的怀里。 
八、“脚”相关的表达
1. sb. is/was rooted to the spot 
As the teacher announced the pop quiz, the students were rooted to the spot, their hearts sinking with dread. 当
老师宣布要进行突击测验时,学生们都站在原地一动不动,他们的心因恐惧而下沉。
2. crawl 爬    I began to crawl on my hands and knees toward the door. 我开始手脚并用向门爬去。
3. tiptoe 踮脚走   They tiptoed upstairs so they wouldn’t wake the baby.他们踮着脚上楼,以免吵醒婴孩。
4. slip 悄悄疾行;溜  She slipped out of the house before the others were awake.她趁别人还没醒,溜出了房子。
5. pace 踱步    He paced back and forth.他来回踱步。 
As they waited, she paced the room nervously. 在他们等着时,她在房间里紧张不安地走来走去。
He quickened/sped up his pace to catch up with them.他加快脚步追赶他们。
6. hurry 匆忙
The girls hurried outside, climbed into the car, and drove off. 女孩子们赶紧跑了出去,爬进车里,开走了。
7.rush/dash/race 冲  
When the bell rang I rushed to the dining hall at once. 当铃声响起的时候,我立刻冲到食堂。
8.edge/force one's way     
She edged her way through the crowded subway station, trying to find a space on the train.  她费力地穿过拥
挤的地铁站,试图找到火车上的一个空位。
9. The child stamped his feet in frustration, expressing his anger and annoyance.  那孩子泪丧地跺着脚,表达他
的愤怒和烦恼。
11. 跳起来(迅速、意外惊喜地)   
Upon hearing the exciting news, he jumped to his feet and cheered with joy. 一听到那个激动人心的消息,
他就跳起来,开心的欢呼。  
  Despite the injury, he struggled to his feet and continued running in the race.   尽管受伤,他挣扎着站起来,
继续参加比赛。
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三、如何进行结尾
(一)精彩结尾句式
1. Every time we mentioned the funny incidents of the journey, a pleasant smile would spread over Tom’s face.
(动作类)  每次我们提到这次旅行的趣事的时候,Tom 的脸上总会流露出开心的笑容。
2. Many years have gone by, but when I looked back to that day, I still remember the lesson he taught me.(感悟类)
很多年过去了,但当我回顾那天的时候,我仍然记得他给我上的一课。
3. This episode will be deeply rooted in 
 
 my memory
 
  /be
    stamped
 
   on
    my
    mind
 
 , serving as a reminder that 
determination is the key to success. 这段经历将会深深地印在我的记忆里,一直提醒我:决心是成功的关键。
4. It dawned on me/ occurred
 
   to
    me
   that nothing is impossible to a willing heart. 我突然明白了有志者事竟
成。
5. No pains, no gains, which will forever ring true in my life. 不劳不获,这句话将永远在我生活中响起。
6. The chirping birds and blooming flowers did witness my success in overcoming the fear of heights. 鸣
叫的鸟儿和盛开的花朵见证了我成功地克服恐高症。
(二) 主题升华哲理
1、“自救与他救”主题升华(人与自然)
1. Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者事竟成。 
2. Perseverance prevails.坚持就是胜利。
3. Roses given, fragrance in hand. 赠人玫瑰,手有余香。
2、“诚信与友善”主题升华(人与社会)
1. Honesty is the best policy. 诚实为上策。 
2. Kindness makes the world go around. 善良使世界运转。
3. A small act of kindness can make a big difference. 小的善举,影响巨大。
3、“逆境、成长、希望”主题升华(人与自我)
1. When the going gets tough, the tough gets going. 艰难之路,唯勇者行。
2. What doesn’t kill you makes you a fighter. 杀不死你的东西只会让你更强大
3. A fall into a pit, a gain in your wit.吃一堑,长一智。
4. Fear never builds the future, but hope does. 恐惧不会铸造未来,但是希望可以。
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四、读后续写段落7 句法
Para 1:
第一句:心理情绪描写1(衔接第一句)——顶级演员、刻画情绪
第二句:动作情节描写1(做什么)——调配演员、接戏互动
第三句:简单句(衔接)——就地取材、文字接龙
第四句:动作情节描写2(获得什么结果)——情节不够、特效来凑
第五句:简单句(衔接)——就地取材、文字接龙
第六句:心里情绪描写2(面对结果的心理)——顶级演员、刻画情绪
第七句:衔接句(衔接第二段开头)——就地取材、反向推导
    Para 2:
第一句:心理情绪描写1(衔接第一句)——顶级演员、刻画情绪
第二句:动作情节描写1(做什么)——调配演员、接戏互动
第三句:简单句(衔接)——就地取材、文字接龙
第四句:动作情节描写2(获得什么结果)——逆风翻盘 再虐一把
第五句:简单句(衔接)——就地取材、文字接龙
第六句:心里情绪描写2(面对结果的心理)——交代结局(紧贴原文、需求解决)
第七句:正能量结尾——点睛升华
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五、高级句式
(一)各种从句:名词性从句、定语从句、状语从句
(二)非谓语
  1、Having done,sb did... 
Having got everything ready, they immediately took action. 准备好一切,他们立刻开始行动。
2、sb did, only to do 表示出乎意料的结果
I rushed into the room, only to find nobody in. 我冲进房间,结果发现没人。
3、sb did, doing 表示顺理成章的结果
He sat there silently, wondering if his mother would forgive him. 他默默地坐在那,想着妈妈会不会原谅他。
4、With 复合结构
  ①With+sth+doing, sb did sth. 
②With+sth+done , Sb did sth. 
With his heart pounding wildly, she stepped onto the stage . 心怦怦直跳,她迈向舞台。
With nothing left, she felt desperate. 什么也没剩下,她感到绝望极了。
5、独立主格
  ①Sth+doing , sb did sth. 
②Sth+done, sb did sth.
Palms sweating, I attempted to get close to the dark building. 手掌出汗,我试着靠近这栋黑暗的大楼。
Tasks completed, I headed home happily. 任务都完成后,我高兴地朝家赶。
(三)特殊句式倒装句
1、 So +adj.+be +sb +that. Sb did sth  如此...以致于....
So excited was he that he jumped up and down with happiness. 他如此兴奋以至于高兴地跳起来。
2、 never; not until;not... only, but also...; no sooner... than 等否定词位于句首,倒装
  Never in my wildest dream had I imagined I made it. 我做梦都没想到我成功了。
No sooner had Louisa spotted the pretty flowers than tears welled up in her eyes.  Louisa 一看到这些漂亮的
花朵,眼泪就溢满眼眶。
3、Only + 状语位于句首,倒装
  Only then did Louisa realize that her small act of kindness made a great difference to the boy. 直到这时,Louisa
才意识到她小小的善举给他带来了大大的不同。
4、虚拟语气
  ①If Sb did sth, Sb would do sth. 现在 
②If Sb had done sth, Sb would have done sth. 过去 
Without/But for sth, sb would have done sth
③
  要不是因为...,sb 就....
If I were you, I would support him. 如果我是你,我会支持他。
更高级:Were I you, I would support him. 如果我是你,我会支持他。
If it had not been for Louisa’s guidance and help, I would not have made progress. 要不是因为Louisa 的指导和
帮助,我不可能取得进步。
更高级:Had it not been for her encouragement, I would not have succeeded.要不是她的鼓励,我不会成功。
Without/But for his patience and efforts, he would not have achieved what he had wanted. 要不是他的耐
心和努力,他不会的得到他想要的。
5、强调句
①强调谓语 I do hope my suggestions will be helpful.我确实希望我的建议有用。
②强调其他成分  It is / was ... that / who ...
  It was at that moment that I realized that efforts would pay off. 
      正是在那一刻,我才意识到努力就会有回报。
·   It was his dogged determination and ceaseless efforts that carried him through the thick and thin path 
in his life. 是顽强的决心和不懈的努力让他越过生活的荆棘。
It was not until then that he recognized getting rid of the bad habits really counted.(强调句) / 
Not until then did he recognize getting rid of the bad habits really counted.(倒装句) 
那时,他才明白改掉这个坏习惯真的很重要。