高中英语读后续写片段描写限时练07
一、离别不舍类（动作+心理）
• 离别动作：Sb. + 反复动作（hugged/waved）+ sb. else + 程度（tightly/again and
again），eyes glued to + 对方身影
• 心理不舍：A lump + 动作（formed/rose）+ in sb.’s throat，and sb. + 克制动作
（held back/swallowed）+ tears as + 离别场景
1. 原句：She hugged her best friend tightly at the train station,
____________________________
________________________________________
翻译：在火车站，她紧紧抱着最好的朋友，当广播通知检票时，目光紧紧锁在朋友的脸上。
2. 原句：___________________________________________________________________as
the train pulled away, waving until her friend’s figure disappeared.
翻译：她的喉咙里像堵了一块东西，火车开动时，她强忍着泪水挥手，直到朋友的身影消
失不见。
段落一（离别动作+心理不舍）
The morning fog hadn’t fully lifted when Mia and Lina stood on the platform of
the small train station. Mia’s suitcase, packed with clothes and a jar of Lina’s favorite
honey, sat quietly at her feet. She hugged her best friend tightly, fingers digging slightly
into Lina’s coat as if holding onto a piece of her heart,
(1)__________________________________(目光紧紧锁在朋友的脸上)Lina patted her back
softly, whispering, “I’ll visit you next holiday, I promise.”
(2)__________________________________(米娅的喉咙里像堵了一块东西，她强忍着泪水)
as the train’s whistle blew sharply—she nodded, too afraid to speak, knowing her voice
would crack. She stepped onto the train, leaning against the window and waving until
Lina’s figure shrank into a small dot in the distance, the fog wrapping around the
station like a sad hug.
段落二（离别动作+心理不舍）
Dad knelt down to adjust Tom’s backpack strap, his rough hands brushing away a
strand of hair from Tom’s forehead. They were at the bus stop for Tom’s first
boarding school trip, and the early autumn wind carried a faint chill. Dad hugged Tom
again and again, his arms warm and strong around Tom’s shoulders,
(1)__________________________________(当黄色的校车隆隆地拐过街角时，目光紧紧锁在
汤姆的脸上)“Take care of yourself, okay? Call me if you need anything,” Dad said, his
voice a little lower than usual. (2)_______________
_____________________________(汤姆的喉咙里像堵了一块东西，踏上公交车时，他强忍
着泪水)—he turned to wave, watching Dad stand alone at the stop, his coat fluttering in
the wind. The bus pulled away, and Tom pressed his cheek to the window, not daring to
look away until Dad’s figure was no longer visible,
(3)__________________________________(心里既为这次行程感到兴奋，又因离开家而满是
难过)
二、意外帮助类（环境+动作）
• 困境环境：With + 不利环境（rain pouring/wind howling）+ ，sb. + 困境动作
（struggled/tried）+ to do sth.，growing + 负面状态（anxious/desperate）
• 帮助出现：Just as + 困境加剧（sb. was about to give up/sb. felt hopeless）+ ，sb.
else + 帮助动作（held out/offered）+ 帮助物品/行为
1. 原句：With rain pouring down, _____________________________, growing anxious as
the sky turned darker.
翻译：大雨倾盆而下，她努力修理坏掉的雨伞，天色越来越暗，她也越发焦急。
2. 原句：_____________________________________, an old lady held out a spare
umbrella, smiling and saying “Take this, dear.”
翻译：就在她准备冲进雨里时，一位老奶奶递过一把备用伞，笑着说“孩子，拿着吧”。
段落一（困境环境+帮助出现）
With wind howling and snowflakes hitting her face like tiny needles,
(1)_________________
_________________________(米娅费力地推着自行车穿过厚厚的积雪) , growing desperate
as the sun dipped lower—she still had a mile to go home, and her hands were already
numb from the cold. The bike chain had fallen off twice, and each time she bent down
to fix it, more snow stuck to her gloves, making her fingers stiffer.
(2)__________________________________(就在她准备放弃、给父母打电话) (even though
her phone was dying), a man in a brown coat pulled over his car, rolled down the
window, and offered, “Need a lift? I can fit your bike in the trunk.” Mia stared at him
for a second, then nodded eagerly, (3)__________________________________(还没上车，
一股暖意就涌上了心头)
段落二（困境环境+帮助出现）
With the supermarket closing in ten minutes and her baby crying nonstop in the
stroller, (1)__________________________________(努力去够货架顶层最后一盒牛奶),
growing anxious as she tiptoed and stretched—her bag was slipping off her shoulder, and
the stroller kept rolling a little every time she moved. She’d been up since 5 a.m. with
the baby, and her legs felt weak from exhaustion.
(2)__________________________________(就在她感觉包快要掉下来时), a young girl next
to her reached up, grabbed the milk carton easily, and handed it to her, saying, “Here
you go! Let me help you hold your bag too.” Lila thanked her, tears pricking her eyes
—she’d thought she’d have to rush through everything alone,
but(3)__________________
________________(这份小小的善意，却让这个混乱的傍晚变得轻松了些)
三、回忆涌现类（感官+心理）
• 感官触发：The 感官事物（taste/sound）of + 具体事物 + 动作（brought/took）+ sb.
back to + 回忆场景，as clear as + 比喻（yesterday/a photo）
• 心理触动：A soft smile + 动作（spread/played）+ across sb.’s face，and sb. + 回
忆动作（muttered/thought）+ about + 回忆细节
1. 原句：______________________________________________________________________,
as clear as yesterday.
翻译：自制月饼的甜味让她回想起和奶奶一起过中秋节的日子，清晰得仿佛就发生在昨天。
2. 原句：_________________________________________, and she thought about how
grandma used to tell stories while they ate mooncakes under the moon.
翻译：她的脸上绽开温柔的笑容，想起以前奶奶总是在月下一边吃月饼，一边给她讲故事。
段落一（感官触发+心理触动）
Lily bit into the warm sweet potato pie her mom had just baked, the rich, cinnamon-
scented filling melting on her tongue.
(1)__________________________________________________(这甜中带辣的味道让她回想起
在奶奶家过的每一个感恩节) , as clear as a well-kept photo—she could almost see
grandma standing by the oven, wiping flour off her apron while laughing.
(2)__________________________________(她的脸上绽开温柔的笑容) , and she thought
about how grandma would let her lick the pie crust off the spoon, even though mom said
it was “too messy.” She closed her eyes for a second, savoring the taste and the
memories, (3)__________________________________(感觉奶奶仿佛就和她一起待在厨房里)
段落二（感官触发+心理触动）
Tom sat on the porch, plucking a few notes on his old guitar—strings a little out of
tune, just like it had been when he was a kid.
(1)____________________________________________(这熟悉的旋律声让他回想起学吉他的
那个夏天), as clear as yesterday—his grandpa had sat right here, patienty guiding his
fingers to the right frets, even when Tom kept hitting the wrong notes.
(2)__________________________________(他的脸上露出温柔的笑容) , and he muttered
about how grandpa had said “music’s not about being perfect—it’s about feeling it,”
a phrase he’d forgotten until the guitar’s sound hit his ears. He strummed a little
louder, letting the melody drift into the yard, (3)__________________________________(仿
佛又一次把这音乐分享给爷爷听)
四、危机化解类（动作+心理）
• 危机动作：Sb. + 紧急动作（dashed/grabbed）+ 事物，heart + 状态
（racing/pounding）+ as + 危机发展（the fire spread/the car approached）
• 化解心理：After + 化解动作（putting out the fire/stopping the danger）+ ，sb. +
放松动作（collapsed/breathed）+ a sigh of relief，hands still + 残留状态
（trembling/shaking）
1. 原句：He dashed to grab the fire extinguisher,
______________________________________
翻译：他冲过去拿灭火器，窗帘上的小火苗越烧越大，他的心脏怦怦直跳。
2. 原句：After putting out the fire, ______________________________________________,
hands still trembling from the panic.
翻译：把火扑灭后，他靠在墙上松了口气，双手还因刚才的慌乱而微微颤抖。
段落一（危机动作+化解心理）
Lily was arranging books on the classroom shelf when she smelled something
burning. She turned around and saw a wadded paper under the desk catching fire, the
flame licking at the edge of a textbook. Without thinking,
(1)__________________________________(冲过去拿起桌上的水瓶), heart racing as the fire
grew and tiny black smoke curls rose toward the ceiling. She unscrewed the cap in a
hurry and poured all the water onto the fire, watching until the last spark fizzled out.
After putting out the fire,(2)__________________________________(她靠在书架上松了口
气) , hands still trembling from the panic—she’d never been so scared of a small fire
before. When her classmates rushed in at the sound of her movements, she pointed to the
wet paper, her voice still a little shaky.
段落二（危机动作+化解心理）
Tom was walking his little sister to the park when a stray dog suddenly ran toward
her, barking loudly. His sister froze in fear, tears welling up in her eyes. Tom quickly
pulled her behind him, then dashed to grab a nearby stick from the ground,
(1)___________________
_______________(狗越靠越近,他的心脏怦怦直跳) , its teeth bared. He held the stick in
front of him, shouting softly to keep the dog back—he didn’t want to hurt it, just scare
it away. (2)__________________________________(紧张的几秒钟过后，狗犹豫了一下),
then turned and ran off into the bushes. After stopping the danger, (3)______________
____________________(汤姆跪下来抱住妹妹，松了口气), hands still shaking as he wiped
her tears. “It’s okay now,” he said, his own voice calmer than he felt—he’d been
just as scared as she was, but he knew he had to be brave.
