专题 01
生活态度 兴趣爱好 精神品格（人与自我）
2023 年高考读后续写话题分类写作技巧与高级词句
【读后续写】
1．（2023春·广东江门·高三校联考开学考试）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使
之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was a child, my mother told my sister, who had a 10-inch very obvious scar (伤疤) on her arm,
“Nancy, if you ignore the scar, other people will ignore it. It does not mean they will not notice it, but it means it
will not matter to them if it doesn’t matter to you.”
It never occurred to me that something like this would happen to my son years later. Sending a child off to
college can certainly be stressful for concerned parents. It was 2018 that my son went off to college. He rarely
contacted us. I couldn’t help asking about other aspects, which sometimes made him complain that I didn’t treat
him as an adult.
To be honest, my son is excellent. Some of my friends always tell me that they admire my son’s characters and
they hope their sons could have some of them.
Unexpectedly, it was 4 o’clock in the morning in 2020, when I received the phone call. “This is the emergency
room calling and your son was just brought in with severe burns on his face, neck and arms. We have called for an
aircraft and are going to fly him to the burn unit in Seattle.” Seattle was 350 miles from his college, so we knew
immediately this was serious.
The doctor described the reason, which caused the burns. At 6 am, my son and his friends decided to barbecue
hamburgers in the courtyard of their apartment. When they lit the charcoal, it burst into flames because they had
sprayed too much gasoline. The flames caught my son’s shirt tail and shot from his waist to well over his head.
Fortunately, one of the boys who was quick-minded grasped my son and rolled him on the grass. While it
saved his life, it was not in shape to save him from severe burns and the terrible scars.
After he recovered from the treatments, the doctors told him they would not do plastic surgery for 6 months
because it takes that long for the skin to stop shrinking and wrinkling.
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The doctors suggested he return to college with scars of severe burns temporarily.
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So I told him about Nancy’s childhood.
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The doctors suggested he return to college with scars of severe burns temporarily. Although I knew that there
were going to be storms in life, it was hard for me to imagine that a handsome and sunny boy would return to his
classmates with scars. I really didn’t know how to comfort him. After all, the scars were on him. Not all of us could
be able to turn that particular page successfully. It was at this time that I remembered what my mother said to my
sister. It was those words that enabled her to overcome her psychological barriers and lead a smooth life.
So I told him about Nancy’s childhood. I passed the wisdom on to my son. Realizing my complex feelings, he
smiled and comforted me instead. He took my advice to heart and returned to school with his head held high. By
the end of the six-month waiting period, he decided that the scars did not matter. So he made the decision to give up
any plastic surgery. We all have “scars” that we believe will keep people away from us. Put your imperfections out
of your mind and concentrate on what you value within yourself, and your beauty will shine through.
【导语】本文是以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者小时候听到母亲告诉妹妹南希要以乐观的态度去面对自己
的伤疤，而作者儿子也经历烧伤事故而留下伤疤，作者把妹妹的经历告诉自己的儿子鼓励他勇敢面对。从
故事中感悟我们学会把不完美抛诸脑后，专注于自己看重的东西，自己的美丽就会散发光芒。
【详解】①由第一段首句内容“医生建议他暂时带着严重烧伤的伤疤回到大学。”可知，第一段可描写作
者想到自己的儿子要承受别人异样眼光的难过的心理活动以及对儿子的鼓励的做法。②由第二段首句内容“于是我告诉他南希的童年。”可知，第二段可描写作者为了帮助儿子告诉他妹妹南
希的经历之后，他儿子的转变。
2.续写线索：难过——考验——安慰——鼓励——改变——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.想象：imagine/picture/think of
②.安慰：comfort/quiet/soothe
③.克服：overcome/rise above/get over sth
情绪类
①.微笑：smile/beam on
②.珍惜：value/cherish
【点睛】[高分句型1].Although I knew that there were going to be storms in life, it was hard for me to imagine
that a handsome and sunny boy would return to his classmates with scars.（由连接词although引导让步状语从
句）
[高分句型2].Put your imperfections out of your mind and concentrate on what you value within yourself, and your
beauty will shine through.（由祈使句以及what引导的宾语从句）
2．（2023·全国·高三专题练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完
整的短文。
Surviving Mount Rainier
Bad luck and poor timing left Kart and three climbers stuck on Mount Rainier for several long days. They
faced mountain climbing’s toughest tests. One man suffered altitude sickness; ice and rockfall rained down at night;
cold nights in a tent that got torn left them hypothermic(体温过低的). Calm confidence, skill and the courage to
continue up the route, despite illness and injury, likely saved their lives.
The climbers set out on a Friday, camping low on the route the first night because they were concerned about
rockfall after a climber had recently died in an accident at the route’s typical high camp. On Saturday, at about
10,500 feet, one of the climbers became sick from the altitude, which began to slow them down. They needed to
keep moving, so they put him in the lead so he could move at a pace he was comfortable with.
By Sunday evening, the ill climber was exhausted, and they had to make an unplanned camp on steep snow.
They were in a bad place—on a platform about the size of a table under an ice cliff. The wind got stronger duringthe night, ripping the tent and snapping the poles. They tried to secure it by placing their packs and rocks around the
edges. Finally, they just stuck their feet between the rocks and held the tent with their bodies. It was a cold night.
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2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好;
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On Monday, they managed to call 911 but forgot to ask how to communicate with the rangers (护林员) before
losing signal.
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On Wednesday, they gathered everything and decided to carry on with their climb.
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On Monday, they managed to call 911 but forgot to ask how to communicate with the rangers ( 护林员 ) before
losing signal. They set up what was left of the tent as best they could and stayed where they were, praying for the
early arrival of their salvation. But for several days, they watched beyond all hope as high winds prevented the
rangers’ attempts at a helicopter rescue. Their food was running out and they shared a single bottle of snow melt
each day. Then an icefall buried their tent platform and squeezed them together. It was impossible to climb down.
On Wednesday, they gathered everything and decided to carry on with their climb. They climbed up slowly
and carefully, resting when they were weak. It didn’t take long until the wind froze them in place. That was the
scariest moment. Their spirits began to sink and they started to doubt if they could continue. Kart thought of all the
people who loved him, and it really hit him they must be worried. As he tried to climb again and again, he just keptyelling out to his friends, “We have to get there.”However, as they got onto the final slope to the summit, the
weather cleared. Suddenly, a helicopter appeared out of nowhere. They were rescued.
【导语】本篇书面表达是读后续写，文章讲述了Kart和三位被困雷尼尔山登山者的遭遇。故事按照时间顺
序展开。他们在周五出发，周六，一位队员的高原反应减缓他们的速度，让他们在周日不得不更换临时扎
营地点——在冰崖下一个桌子那么大的平台上。糟糕的帐篷的选址以及恶劣的天气使他们帐篷严重受损，
让他们度过寒冷的一晚上。周一他们联系上911，但是恶劣天气让救援无法到达，食物要耗尽，此时也无
法下山。因此，周三他们聚集所有物品决定继续向上攀登上山，历经艰辛与危险，终于爬到山顶，天气放
晴，他们得救了。
【详解】1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“周一，他们设法拨打了911，但在失去信号之前忘记询问如何与护林员沟通。”可
知，第一段可描写他们只能在原地等待救援，但是恶劣的天气让救援人员和直升飞机过不来，食品也要耗
尽，冰崩让他们本来就很小的地方无法立足，也无法下山。
②由第二段首句内容“星期三，他们收集了所有东西，并决定继续攀登。”可知，第二段可描写他们向上
攀登，虽然中途遇到困难，仍然坚持到最后，爬上山顶，得救了。
2. 续写线索：等待救援——希望落空——决定继续攀登——困难重重——克服困难——爬到山顶——得救
3. 词汇激活：
行为类：
①期盼：pray for/expect/hope for
②尽最大努力做某事：try to do/spare no effort to do
③大声喊：yell out /shout out/speak in a loud voice
情绪类：
①失去信心：lose heart/ their spirits begin to sink
②积极：positive attitude/act positively
③害怕：scared/frightened
【点睛】【高分句型1】They set up what was left of the tent as best they could and stayed where they were,
praying for the early arrival of their salvation. (由what引导宾语从句、where引导的地点状语从句和非谓语动
词作做伴随状语)
【高分句型2】It didn’t take long until the wind froze them in place.(until引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型3】It was his brave heart and strong faith that could make something unusual happen finally. (由It
was...that结构引导的强调句型)3．（2022秋·江苏南通·高三统考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之
构成一篇完整的短文。
Thin, average, and undisciplined, I was the underdog of the boys’ basketball tryouts (选拔赛) in seventh
grade. Making the team was very important to me. Although I was extremely nervous, I truly thought I would make
the team. But I went in overly optimistic, and quickly faced a cruel reality check.
When on the court, I huffed and puffed like an old man on his last legs; clearly, I was out of shape and having
trouble keeping up. When it hit me that this was only the first day, and that there was a second to follow, I realized I
would have to step it up in order to gain a spot on the team.
Unfortunately, day two went exactly like day one: I missed shots, passed badly like an out-of-breath fool.
Hoping the coach was not watching all my bad moves, I had trouble keeping a positive attitude. Finally, Coach-who
at five-foot-four usually seemed small, posted the lists of the Boys A and B Teams. Everybody quickly ran to catch
a glimpse of the chosen few.
After scanning the list once, twice, three times, my name was nowhere. Although I had predicted the disaster
that had now settled on me, with my head hanging. I slowly walked to the car. This experience definitely had not
gone as I planned.
On the way home, I complained “How could that foolish boy is a better choice than me? And…”
“Adam!” my mom cut me off. “Why don’t you realize maybe you need a little more practice? You’d better go
to basketball camps next summer.”
Although I did not want to believe her, I knew it was true. Failing to make the team was nobody’s fault but
mine. Right then and there, in the middle of my anger, I realized I had to get my act together.
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Then I threw myself into as many basketball opportunities as I could find.
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When I took part in the eighth-grade basketball tryouts,I was moderate,swift and strong.
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【答案】 Then I threw myself into as many basketball opportunities as I could find. Every day, I insisted
on running 10 kilometers and jumping ropes 1000 times after school to increase my energy level and physical
strength. Additionally, I practiced passing, dribbling and shooting with my friends every day to improve my
basketball skills. When the summer holidays came, I signed up for a basketball camp, where I got a lot of
professional basketball knowledge and training from the coaches. Gradually, I found myself making great progress.
When I took part in the eighth-grade basketball tryouts, I was moderate, swift and strong. When on the court, I
kept running without any trouble, dribbling freely and passing the basketball accurately. As long as I got the
chance, I would try to shoot. One, two, three… I scored ten goals at last. There was no doubt that I succeeded in
becoming a member of the basketball team. It was my determination and efforts that helped me achieve my dream.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者七年级时参加男子篮球队选拔赛，从最初的盲目自信，到认
清现实的过程。作者从选拔赛中发现了自己的不足和差距，从而开始努力训练、学习技术，最终取得了巨
大的进步，一年后顺利地通过了八年级的选拔赛。
【详解】1. 段落续写：
① 由第一段首句内容“然后我把自己投入到我能够找到的尽可能多的练习篮球的机会。”可知，第一段
可描写作者是如何来练习篮球，提高自身技术和体能水平的。
② 由第二段首句内容“当我参加八年级篮球选拔赛时，我表现得温和、敏捷、强壮。”可知，第二段可
描写作者在八年级选拔赛上的表现，以及最终成功入选。
2. 续写线索：开始自我训练--参加篮球夏令营--体能提升、技术进步--参加八年级选拔赛--表现突出--成功
入选--感悟点题
3.词汇激活行为类
①坚持：insist on/stick to
②增加、增长：increase/boost
③提高、改善：improve/enhance
④参加：take part in/join in
情绪类
①温和的、适中的：moderate/temperate
②没有疑问：no doubt/ no question
【点睛】[高分句型1]When the summer holidays came, I signed up for a basketball camp, where I got a lot of
professional basketball knowledge and training from the coaches.（运用了以连词when引导的时间状语从句和
关系副词where引导的非限制性定语从句。）
[高分句型2] It was my determination and efforts that helped me achieve my dream.（运用了强调句。）
4．（2023秋·广东·高三校联考期末）阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一
篇完整的短文。
Morty was checking out his library books when it caught his eye-a poster for Adventure Rocks Kids Camp.
“Check this out!” Morty called to Ben and Fred as he grabbed three brochures and dashed to catch up with his best
buddies. They all stopped, books in hands, to stare at the pictures of kids flying above canyons suspended from zip
lines. They instantly believed the brochure’s headline: Summer won’t be complete until you Take it to the Limit at
Adventure Rocks Kids Camp.
Ben broke the silence, “We have less than two weeks until registration opens, and it says the camp fills up
fast.” Then an idea popped into Morty’s head. “Why don’t we sell lemonade and snacks by the side of the road? We
can pool our allowance savings for the camp.” “That’s a great Idea,” Ben said.
The sun had barely come up on Saturday morning when the kids set up their business. They chose a spot,
asked permission from the homeowner, and then asked to use her garden hose for water to make lemonade.
Their business went smoothly until Ben announced that they had a comparatively small stock of lemons
shortly after noon. Morty decided to make their stock go further. “Fred, when the jug gets down to one-fourth full,
just fill it to the top with the water hose.” Morty was thinking out loud, “I’ll change the sign and charge 30 more
cents for each cup of lemonade.” Their business went on and the three were secretly proud of the little tricks they
had done.Just as Morty finished refilling the jug with water for the third time, a vehicle rounded the comer. Morty saw
the minivan with his father at the wheel and his family inside. They pulled up to the sidewalk, and his brothers and
sisters jumped out, each clutching a coin or two. They were eager to support their brother’s bustling business.
Morty’s family bought the last of the brownies and drank the last drop of watered-down lemonade.
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Morty’s father frowned at the sip of the lemonade.
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【答案】Morty’s father frowned at the sip of the lemonade. As to him, it tasted more like water. Overwhelmed
with confusion, he asked directly, “What’s wrong? It tastes just like cold water.” The moment Morty heard his
father’s doubt, he stood awkwardly, not sure what to say. Fred and Ben were also speechless. A moment later, they
admitted what they had done. Although Morty’s father was disappointed, he said, “You still have time to correct
your wrongdoings.” Hearing this, they nodded immediately.
They decided to fix their wrongdoings the next week. Ben suggested to use the money earned to prepare enough
lemons first and then reduce the price. They all agreed. When they restarted their business, they even stood a sign,
saying, “We send a cup of lemonade to customers who bought it last Saturday afternoon for free.” They made over
50 cups of lemonade for a constant stream of customers with a low price and over 20 cups were for free. As you can
imagine, they didn’t get enough money for the camp. But they learned a valuable lesson that one should always be
honest.
【导语】本文以故事情节发展为线索，讲述了Morty，Ben和Fred三个孩子因为想去参加夏令营，在路边摆摊卖柠檬水赚报名费。随着柠檬越来越少，他们打起了歪主意：往柠檬汁里兑水并提价。后来，Morty
的家人开心地来照顾生意。他的爸爸喝出了柠檬水的问题，不禁发出疑问。几个孩子沉默片刻，还是承认
了错误。在Morty爸爸的鼓励下，他们决定第二周弥补错误。随后，他们用赚到的钱购买了足量的柠檬，
降价，并主动声明给上周周六下午购买柠檬水的顾客免费送一杯柠檬水。可想而知，他们最终没有钱参加
夏令营，但是他们懂得了珍贵的一课：做人要保持诚信。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Morty的父亲喝了一口柠檬水，皱起了眉头”可知，第一段可描写Morty的爸爸发
现了柠檬水的问题后，几个孩子很尴尬地承认错误的场景，以及Morty爸爸建议他们怎么做。
②由第二段首句内容“他们决定下周改正他们的错误”可知，第二段可描写他们如何改正自己的错误。
2.续写线索：发现夏令营传单——想参加——摆柠檬水摊赚报名费——柠檬水兑水被发现——承认错误
——纠正错误——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①纠正：correct/rectify
②建议：suggest/recommend
情绪类
①疑惑：Overwhelmed with confusion/filled with confusion
②尴尬地：awkwardly/embarrassedly
【点睛】[高分句型1]The moment Morty heard his father’s doubt, he stood awkwardly, not sure what to say.（由
连词the moment引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型2]We send a cup of lemonade to customers who bought it last Saturday afternoon for free.（由关系代
词who引导限制性定语从句）
5．（2022·吉林长春·统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完
整的短文。
Magen double-checked the words on her spelling test. If she got 100 percent today, she’d win her class’ First-
Quarter Spelling Challenge and a brand-new dictionary that came with videos and other cool stuff. Plus, Ms.
McCormack had promised to do a handstand (手倒立) if anyone got a perfect score.
Three more words to go. N-i-c-e-l-y. Q-u-i-c-k-l-y. H-o-n-e-s-t-y. Wait! She’d spelled honesty, not honestly!
She erased ‘-ty’ and wrote ‘-ly’ before handing in her paper. Ms. McCormack graded the papers while the studentswere at rest.
After a break, Magen hurried into the classroom, sitting in her seat nervously—Ms. McCormack walked to the
front of the room and cleared her throat. “Congratulations, Magen! You did it!” Then, as if she were an Olympic
gymnast, Ms. McCormack’s feet flipped into the air. The whole class erupted!
Ms. McCormack presented Magen with her prize. A big smile spread across Magen’s face as she read the label
on the box: To Magen Carter, for her perfect first-quarter score in spelling.
“Everything OK?” Mom asked as Magen burst through the front door after school.
“Everything’s perfect!” Magen shouted, showing Mom her spelling test and prize.
Mom hugged her. “Well done, Magen”
Magen scooped up (抱起) her cat. “Can you spell nicely, Casper? And quickly and honestly, and…” It
suddenly occurred to her that she had misspelled the word. Rooted to the spot, Magen reflected on how she could
tell the whole class she shouldn’t have earned the prize at all. She dashed into her room and pulled out the test
paper. “If I put the missing ‘t’ back in, no one would ever know,” she thought. Recalling the joyful moment, a
mixture of guilt and unwillingness overwhelmed her.
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Aware that there was something wrong with Magen, Mom knocked on the door and entered her room.
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The next day, arriving early at school, Magen pushed open the door of Ms. McCormack’s office.
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【答案】 Aware that there was something wrong with Magen, Mom knocked on the door and entered her room.“Where’s your spelling test paper, sweetheart?” Mom asked, gazing at her eagerly. Magen took out the paper and
handed it unwillingly to her mom. When Mom spotted “honesly”, Mom frowned, “Probably you don’t deserve the
prize.”After thinking for a while, she soon understood what she should do.
The next day, arriving early at school, Magen pushed open the door of Ms. McCormack’s office. Hands slightly
trembling, Magen gave Ms. McCormack her test paper and the dictionary. Magen confessed her spelling mistake in
the test, a pink flush spreading over her cheeks. “I see.” Even though Ms. McCormack tried to contain her
emotions, surprise registered on her face. Then she picked up a pen, crossed out the word “perfect” and wrote
“honest” instead before handing the prize back to Magen. Magen’s jaw dropped. Ms. McCormack grinned. “For
honesty.”
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Magen在拼写测试中得了100分，赢得班级第一季度的拼写挑
战，以及一本附有视频和其他很酷东西的全新词典。她的老师麦科马克还为她表演了倒立，她开心的回到
家，却发现自己试卷上的诚实的单词拼写错误，思考该怎么办。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“妈妈意识到Magen有点不对劲，便敲了敲门，走进了她的房间。”可知，第一段可
描写妈妈发现了Magen的拼写错误，并告诉Magen不应该得到这个奖品。
②由第二段首句内容“第二天，Magen早早来到学校，推开麦科马克办公室的门。”可知，第二段Magen
向她的老师承认拼写错误，归还词典，麦科马克因为Magen的诚实又把词典给了Magen。
2.续写线索：妈妈发现拼写错误——觉得Magen不应该得到奖品——回应妈妈诚实的表现——向老师承认
错误——老师因为Magen诚实奖励词典
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.凝视：gaze at/peer at/stare at
②.拿出：take out/fetch out
③.承认：confess/admit
情绪类
①.感到羞愧的：a pink flush spreading over her cheeks/feel shamefaced
②.惊讶：surprise/amazement
【点睛】[高分句型1]. She soon understood what she should do. (由连接词what引导的宾语从句作understood
的宾语)[高分句型2]. Even though Ms. McCormack tried to contain her emotions, surprise registered on her face. (由even
though引导让步状语从句)
6．（2021秋·山东德州·高三校考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之
构成一篇完整的短文。
Mary waited anxiously for her turn in the empty dressing room. Never had she been so nervous before. This
competition was of vital importance to her comeback. “If I can win today,” she said to herself, “I can dance on the
national stage next month.” Three months ago, her left arm was seriously injured in a car accident. After the
medical treatment, she began to recover slowly. She practiced over and over again in order to regain her dancing
skills.
“Hi, Mary,” in rushed her friend Jessica. “How is your arm? Is it going to influence your performance?”
“I guess it can be tolerated for I am to win the match.” said Mary with a determined look.
“Admirable! But I hear that a girl called Linda is really gifted and strong. She can be your real well-matched
competitor. Come on!”
After Jessica left, Mary decided to practice her most difficult spin (旋转). “If I don’t try harder, I won’t grasp
this chance.” She thought. But her arm began to hurt, making her worried. “Mary, what makes you think you have a
chance tonight?” she said to herself. After the pain was gone, she continued to warm up.
A slim girl hurried in and put down an equipment bag on the chair. Then, she took out her dance dress quickly
and put it on skillfully. Seeing Mary, she smiled politely and said “Hi, I’m Linda. I am the next one to you!” Mary
nodded in reply but felt uncomfortable. “This is just my competitor. Because of her, I may lose tonight.” Her mind
was wandering when Linda let out a scream, “Oh, God, I can’t find my music tape!” Linda searched her bag but in
vain. “It may be missing on the way.” With these words, she then rushed out.
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【答案】Suddenly, Mary caught sight of a black box under the chair where Linda put her bag. She went over and
then opened the box to find Linda’s tape was just inside. At that time, she was in a dilemma, a voice inside her
saying “If I hide it, I will win the competition.” But on a second thought, she changed her mind. She placed it on
the chair carefully, leaving a note reading “Take it easy. We are the best!”
Hearing her name called, Mary walked on the stage with her heart beating faster and faster. She kept
reminding herself, “I have been practicing for so long, and I will certainly make it.” But the serious pain in her arm
came again when she was performing the most difficult spin. She fell down on the stage. At that moment, Linda
came back in low spirits. To her surprise and relief, she saw the tape and Mary’s note. With Mary’s kindness and
encouragement, Linda finished her performance calmly and skillfully. Though Mary lost the match, she won the
dignity and walked away a true hero.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了舞蹈表演参赛者Mary在赛前发生的故事，Mary赛前左臂受伤，
刚刚康复，很想赢得比赛，正在她紧张准备参赛的时候，竞争对手却找不到音乐磁带。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“突然，Mary看到Linda放包的椅子下面有一个黑盒子。”可知，第一段可描写
Mary陷入告不告诉Linda的两难境地，经过内心抉择，最后她选择告诉Linda。
②由第二段首句内容“听到她的名字，Mary走上舞台，心跳得越来越快。”可知，第二段可描写Mary虽
然之前努力练习，但手臂上的伤让她比赛失利，Linda看到了Mary的便条，赢得比赛，Mary虽败犹荣。
2.续写线索：Mary内心抉择——告知Linda音乐磁带被找到——Mary紧张参加比赛——Mary因伤痛败北
——Linda胜出——Mary虽败犹荣
3.词汇激活行为类
①打开：open/unfold
②看见：see/spot
③完成：finish/complete
情绪类
①心情低落：in low spirits/feel down
②惊讶：surprise/amazement
【点睛】[高分句型1]. She went over and then opened the box to find Linda’s tape was just inside. (运用了省略
that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]. Though Mary lost the match, she won the dignity and walked away a true hero. (运用了Though引
导的让步状语从句)
7．（2020春·全国·高三假期作业）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
“Daily Star, sir”, called a thin boy with a bundle of papers under his arm. He was ragged, tired and hungry.
Passing a well-dressed officer, he called again holding a paper up with his right hand, “Daily Star, sir. Only eight
taka, sir… sir … sir” but the officer went on without saying a word. Little Rafiq had been up and down the street
crying, “Daily Star” until his voice was almost gone. There were still twenty papers under his arm. “An unlucky
day!” sighed Rafiq. The shops would soon close, and all the people would go home. He would have to go home
too, carrying the papers instead of money. It was a hard job. He had hoped to sell more papers tonight than usual.
He had longed to have more money tonight to buy a cake for his mother and some seed for his favourite bird
Bulbul which his father had given him shortly before he died. He knew his mother had worked hard all day
cooking, washing and cleaning for Mrs. Zaman. He broke down as he thought of his failure to sell his papers. He
had spent all the money that both he and his mother had to buy them. It was much more than he could bear.
“Hello, Rafiq. Haven’t you sold your papers yet? I sold mine two hours ago.”
Rafiq looked up. It was Sardul, another newsboy.
“How many do you have left, Rafiq?”
“Twenty.”
“Why? That’s more than a hundred sixty!”
“Yes”, said Rafiq, “And I can’t sell them. Nobody wants papers tonight.” Tears began to flow from his deep
black eyes.
“Rafiq,” said Sardul as he drew nearer to him so that no one would hear what he was going to say.“I’ll tell you how I did it.”
“How? Do tell me.”
“You must run quickly up the street and shout, ‘Hot news, hot news. Bomb bursting in Rangpur. Many died.’
— a trick of the trade.”
Rafiq was astonished, “But Sardul, that it’s not in the paper at all! That’s a lie!”
“No, you softy, nobody will catch you. Just run away quickly before they have time to see, and you will sell
out and get your money.”
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1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词。
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【答案】Rafiq looked down; it was a new idea to him. There was a severe struggle to feed his mother, his bird and
something nice to eat in one side; and on the other side a lie. He looked up and thought: “Tell a lie for this? Never!”
With tired legs, but true heart, he carried his papers home. His mother was waiting for him, who said nothing
about the money she so much needed. Rafiq told her all about Sardul’s tricks. She told him how his father had
always tried, even when it was hard to do the right.
That afternoon as usual Rafiq went to the office for his papers. The boys were crowding round Sardul, whowas boasting that he sold six dozen the day before. Sardul added that Rafiq lost money because he would not tell a
lie. While they were pushing Rafiq and laughing at him, a gentleman heard it, and that was enough for him. Mr.
Iskandar, a businessman who valued honesty most, said to Rafiq: “Yes, you’re just the boy I am looking for.” Rafiq
took his new job! He lost the sale of twenty papers but he got a well-paid job instead.
【分析】这是一篇读后续写作文。
【详解】1. 核心内容
文本主要内容为：一个衣衫褴褛的小男孩Rafiq用家里有限的钱买了报纸沿街叫卖，想帮妈妈贴补家用。
尽管他卖力地吆喝却生意惨谈。与之相反，同行Sardul每次都能很快把报纸销售一空。Sardul告诉他卖光
报纸的窍门是编造一些骇人的新闻吸引路人。
2. 写作思路
故事总体的发展应该是Rafiq得知Sardul的销售秘诀后，内心的激烈斗争，并最终作出了正确的选择。他
坚守诚信为他带来了积极的影响，很可能因此得到好的回报，比如他人的赏识。续写第一段：Rafiq得知通
过编造惊人的谎言来快速卖光报纸的诀窍之后内心进行了激烈的斗争，最后他决定坚守自己的诚信。回家
后，妈妈支持他的选择。续写第二段。第二天，Rafiq又去报馆买报纸上街售卖。Sardul正和其他报童吹嘘
自己的业绩，并嘲笑Rafiq不懂变通，连说谎都不会。这番话让一个看重诚信的商人听到了，因此为诚实
的Rafiq提供了工作等。
续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当
的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用
的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。
【范文解析】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：severe struggle, wait for, laugh at等高
级词汇；Sardul added that Rafiq lost money because he would not tell a lie原因状语从句；Mr. Iskandar, a
businessman who valued honesty most, said to Rafiq: “Yes, you’re just the boy I am looking for.”定语从句等高级
句式。
8．（2022秋·重庆长寿·高三重庆市长寿中学校校考阶段练习）阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头
语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
As I began to wade through thirteen pages of the credit-card company’s new policy, I wasn’t sure how it was
going to affect me personally. As I waited to be connected to a customer service rep, I considered whether I should
even write the fifth novel in my Old Cape House series. Did my readers really enjoy the mysterious historical
stories I told? Should I take on more debt to buy my paperback books? I thought about all the author events, booksignings, and book fairs that might be canceled because of the virus. When would normal life return?
“Hello, Ms. Struna, this is Thomas. May I have your account information?”
After repeating the information he needed, I explained my dilemma in trying to understand the new policy and
asked how it would affect my future purchases.
“Please, do not worry. You will have no change.”
“Are you sure? I am an author and travel frequently. I need to have access to my card at all times for big or
small purchases.” I laughed to myself, thinking I wasn’t going anywhere for a while, at least until there was a
vaccine.
“Let me reassure you. There will be no change to your card, but Ms. Struna, may I ask you one more question?
Are you the author of The Old Cape House?”
My jaw dropped. He was talking about my first novel of suspenseful historical fiction, The Old Cape House,
published in 2013. I was stunned and I stammered, “Why, yes I am.” I was still skeptical about what he wanted
from me.
Thomas kept talking. “I thought it was you. I recognized your name, and when you told me you were an
author, I knew it was you.”
“Oh, my goodness.” My heart started to beat faster with delight at the connection I was making with an
unknown foreign reader.
“Ms. Struna, your book changed me. It changed how I look at the world. It showed me ways to be more
adventuresome and to be open to new things. Thank you so very much.”
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I was stunned at the idea that I had made a difference in someone’s life.
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【答案】I was stunned at the idea that I had made a difference in someone’s life. I murmured unbelievably and
excitedly, “I had thought nobody would like this type of novel. I was about to give up when you gave me strength.”
At this time, there were so many people standing in line that he had to be busy with his work. Therefore, he didn’t
say too much, just giving me a determined look and telling me to call him as he handed me a note with a telephone
number. Considering that maybe he was off duty, I called him. He was extremely grateful for my calling and said
emotionally, “It was your Old Cape House series that inspired me and people around me with confidence to life.
Hoping you can continue writing to bring hope and new things to your loyal fans.”
I hung up, ending this coincidental connection to a fan reader in a faraway place. I sank into thought: because of
the outbreak of the epidemic, everyone's life was deeply affected and couldn't go out. Yes, he was right. It may be a
good chance for me to bring a new world and something about adventure to their life. What a kind man! His words
were like the warm sunshine to sweep away dark clouds overhead and bring me hope and confidence. Now I think
it is time to open my computer and continue writing.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开。讲述了作者在办理业务时遇到自己的书迷。作者在书迷的简短几句话中
感觉到了自己的写作的意义，让自己在疫情之下的生活多了几分希望。
【详解】1. 段落续写
由第一段首句内容“我为自己改变了别人的生活而感到震惊。”可知，第一段可描写作者在自己书迷的鼓
励下激动的心情以及他们之间的交流和互留电话号码，然后通话。
由第二段首句内容“我挂了电话，结束了这段与远方一位读者的巧合联系。”可知，第二段可描写作者挂
电话后的思考以及受到鼓励后燃起希望，对自己充满信心。
2. 续写线索：作者难以置信——留下号码——通话——陷入思考——开始相信自己——继续写作
3. 词类激活
行为类
说：murmur/say
鼓励：inspire/encourage
递给：hand/pass情绪类
激动地：excitedly/ emotionally
坚定的：determined/firm
【点睛】[高分句型1] I was about to give up when you gave me strength. (运用了be about to do… when…句型)
[高分句型2] It was your Old Cape House series that inspired me and people around me with confidence to life.
(运用了强调句型)
9．（2022春·全国·高三专题练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇
完整的短文。
Having been teaching anthropology (人类学) at Dartmouth College for 15 years, I still remember the day
when I first encountered the book Margaret Mead’s Coming of Age in Samoa, a very important book on the study
of the social and cultural development of peoples.
When I was fourteen, I earned money in the summer by cutting lawns, and within a few weeks I had built up a
body of customers. I got to know people by the flowers they planted, by the things they lost in the grass or stuck in
the ground on purpose. I learned something about the measure of my neighbors by their preferred method of
payment: by the job, by the month—or not at all.
Mr. Ballou fell into the last category, and he always had a reason why. On one day, he had no change for a
fifty, on another he was simply out when I knocked on his door. Still, except for the money, he was a nice enough
old guy, always waving his hat when he’d seen me from a distance. Sure, I kept track of the total, but I didn’t worry
about the amount too much.
Then, one late afternoon in mid-July, the hottest time of the year, I was walking by his house and he opened
the door, mentioned me to come inside. The hall was cool, shaded, and it took my eyes a minute to adjust to the dim
light.
“I owe you,” Mr. Ballou, “but...”
I thought I’d save him the trouble of thinking of a new excuse. “No problem. Don’t worry about it.”
“The bank made a mistake in my account,” he continued, ignoring my words. “It will be cleared up in a day or
two. But in the meantime I thought perhaps you could choose one or two volumes for a down payment.”
He gestured toward the walls and I saw that books were stacked (堆放) everywhere. It was like a library,except with no order to the arrangement.
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Mr. Ballou encouraged me to read, borrow or keep the books I like.
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Mr. Ballou encouraged me to read, borrow or keep the books I like. Facing so many books for the first time, I
had no idea which one to choose. Nice enough, he searched for me and handed a fairly thick book and asked me to
tell him what the book was about the next week. It was my first encounter with world literature, and I was so
impressed by the power a novel could contain and absorbed in reading all those vivid characters and the elegant,
simple language.Paragraph 2:
To this day, thirty years later, I clearly remember this experience. Now I am a teacher teaching anthropology at
college. For that year, Mr. Ballou never paid me some money for cutting his lawns but led me to the road that is far
more valuable than money. A book, if it arrives before you at the right moment, in the proper season, will change
the course of all your life.
【分析】本文是记叙文。文章主要讲述了作者对于第一次读到玛格丽特·米德的《萨摩亚人的成长》这本书
的回忆。十四岁那年，作者在夏天靠修剪草坪赚钱，Mr. Ballou是作者的顾客之一，由于资金问题，一直
欠着作者修剪草坪的钱。一天，Mr. Ballou邀请作者进入自己家中，对于欠钱有所尴尬的他希望作者能够
在自己很多书籍中选一两本书作为首付。Mr. Ballou帮助作者选了一本书，这是作者第一次接触世界文
学，同时也被深深的吸引。在那一年里，Mr. Ballou从来没有给过修剪草坪的钱，而是带领作者走上了一
条远比钱值钱的路。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Mr. Ballou encouraged me to read, borrow or keep the books I like.(Mr. Ballou鼓励我
读、借或保存我喜欢的书。)”可知，第一段可描写作者面对如此多的书无从选择，在Mr. Ballou的帮助之
下，读到了第一本关于世界文学的书，而被深深吸引。
②由第二段首句内容“To this day, thirty years later, I clearly remember this experience.(三十年后的今天，我仍
然清楚地记得这段经历。)”可知，第二段可描写这段经历对于作者的影响和感受。
2.续写线索：自己选书的为难——Mr. Ballou帮助选书——第一次读书的感受——经历对作者的影响——感
悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①挑选：choose/search for/select
②要求：ask/require/want
③带领：lead/guide
情绪类
①好意地：nice enough/kindly
②印象好的：be impressed by/have a good impression
③生动活泼的：vivid/bright
④有价值的/珍贵的：valuable/ precious
【点睛】[高分句型1]. It was my first encounter with world literature, and I was so impressed by the power anovel could contain and absorbed in reading all those vivid characters and the elegant, simple language.（由并列
连词and连接两个分句；“a novel could contain”为之前名词“the power”的定语从句，先行词在从句中作动
词“contain”的宾语，因此关系词that/which被省略）
[高分句型2]. A book, if it arrives before you at the right moment, in the proper season, will change the course of
all your life.（由if引导条件状语从句）
10．（2021·河北唐山·唐山一中校考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之
构成一篇完整的短文。
There are a number of volunteer organizations out there that deal in things like clothing donation and the sale
of remaining books. Retired schoolteacher Cathy McAllister has been a member of such an organization, VNSA,
since 2012.Her duties in this regard involve working throughout the year to help prepare the books for their
February sale and acting as personnel chair for the sale itself. This means that she helps coordinate(协调)all the
other volunteers that help out before, during, and after the event.
It was before the 2019 book sale and Cathy once again found herself sitting among a towering pile of books
and sorting through them to ensure that they would be in go0d enough condition to resell. As she was sorting, she
came upon a book. The slightly broken book was in fair condition but it was one of four copies she had already
found, and she a saved three of those already. The others had been much more gently used as well. Though she
didn't like doing it, she had done this long enough to know that the only remaining choice was to throw it into the
pile for repurposing.
A greedy book lover herself, Cathy felt guilty about throwing away a perfectly good book. Before she threw it
away, she decided to check for more serious damage inside that might justify her giving it up. She opened the cover
and moved to fan through the pages when she noticed something unusual.
When she opened the cover, Cathy was surprised to see that a part had been hollowed out inside the book. It
looked as though someone had taken an X-Acto knife and rather expertly hollowed out a significant space. What's
more, the book's previous owner had chosen to hide something in that space. She looked down and saw that
someone had hidden four packages in the space, each containing ten$100 bills. Cathy's first thought was that the
bills were toy money that perhaps a kid had hidden inside as part of some childish game or something.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。But Cathy soon realized that these were real $100 bills.
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Luckily for Cathy, the book also contained the name of the book owner.
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【答案】But Cathy soon realized that these were real $ 100 bills. Whoever had owned the book had chosen to hide
$ 4,000 inside the book. Cathy's second thought upon seeing the money was that this was sufficient to do charity.
She didn’t bother considering keeping the money herself. It just didn't feel right to keep it for any reason.
Regardless of how much good she thought she might be able to do with the money, Catchy decided that the only
realistic choice left to her was to return it to its owner.
Luckily for Cathy, the book also contained the name of the book owner. Using this name, Cathy might be able
to find its rightful owner. Still, it would take a little digging. Thankfully, the book's previous owner happened to
have a pretty unusual last name. This made Cathy's Internet search much easier. After only about ten minutes
online, Cathy found them. The money belonged to a man and his daughter. So thankful were they for Cathy's
honesty that they actually ended up donating a generous amount to VNSA to show their gratitude.
【分析】这是一篇读后续写作文。
【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，上文讲述了退休教师Cathy McAlliste自2012年以来一直是这样一个组织
VNSA的成员，她有一次在整理图书时，发现有一本书中间被掏空了，里面藏了四个包裹，每个包裹里装
着10张100美元的钞票。Cathy的第一个念头是，这些钞票是玩具钱，也许是一个孩子在玩小孩子的游戏
时藏在里面的。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：但Cathy很快就意识到这是真的百元美钞。所以后文应该是讲述Cathy
知道这些是真钱后的心理活动，她没有考虑自己保管这笔钱，认为应该把钱还给它的主人。第二段开头是：对Cathy来说幸运的是，这本书还包含了书的主人的名字。本段应该写Cathy如何通过书中的名字找
到这些钱的主人的，她在网上搜索了名字，找到了这笔钱的主人，它属于一个男人和他的女儿。他们非常
感谢Cathy的诚实，最后他们慷慨地向VNSA捐赠了一大笔钱来表达他们的感激之情。
最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：sufficient，do charity，happen to等高级词
汇；So thankful were they for Cathy's honesty that they actually ended up donating a generous amount to VNSA to
show their gratitude.倒装句等高级句式。
