高中英语读后续写片段描写限时练09
一、心理描写类
1：A wave of + 情感名词 + welled up in sb.’s heart and surged through sb.
2：情感名词 + 动词（gripped/gnawed/washed over）+ sb. like + 喻体，+ 伴随状语
练习原句1：______________________________, making his knees knock together as the
dark figure approached.
中文翻译1：当那个黑影走近时，恐惧像一只冰冷的手紧紧攫住了汤姆，让他的膝盖不停
地打颤。
练习原句2：_______________________________, drowning her in remorse as she recalled
her harsh words.
中文翻译2：回想起自己说的那些刻薄话，愧疚如洪水般将她淹没，让她沉浸在悔恨之中。
练习原句3：__________________________________________________________as she
spotted the trophy on the podium.
中文翻译3：当莉莉看到领奖台上的奖杯时，一股兴奋之情涌上她的心头，席卷全身。
答案：
1. Fear gripped Tom like a cold hand
2. Guilt washed over her like a flood
3. A wave of excitement welled up in Lily’s heart and surged through her
段落一：竞赛获胜后的激动
Lily had practiced the piano for eight hours every day for half a year, just for the
city’s youth music competition. When the host announced her name as the first prize
winner, she froze for a second, (1)__________________________________(不敢相信自己的
耳朵). She slowly stood up, and as she walked toward the stage and spotted the trophy
on the podium,(2)
__________________________________(一股兴奋之情涌上莉莉的心头，席卷全身). Her
hands trembled slightly, and a big smile spread across her face,(3)
__________________________________(喜悦的泪水顺着脸颊滑落) . The audience’s
applause seemed to fade away for a moment—all she could feel was the warmth of
success wrapping around her.
答案：
(1) not daring to believe her ears
(2) a wave of excitement welled up in Lily’s heart and surged through her
(3) with tears of joy rolling down her cheeks
段落二：失约后的悔恨
Last weekend, Lisa promised her little sister Emma that she would take her to the
amusement park. But when her friends invited her to a movie marathon,(1)
__________________________________________(莉萨完全忘了自己的承诺，跟着朋友们走
了) . That night, when she got home, she saw Emma sitting on the sofa with a faded
amusement park flyer in her hand, her eyes red from holding back tears. Lisa walked
over silently, and as Emma looked up at her with a disappointed expression,
(2)__________________________________(愧疚如洪水般将莉萨淹没), drowning her in
remorse as she recalled her harsh words of “I’m too busy for kid stuff” earlier. She
knelt down, (3)__________________________________(紧紧抱住艾玛), and whispered,
“I’m so sorry, honey. Tomorrow, I’ll take you to the amusement park, and we’ll
stay there all day.”
答案：
(1) Lisa forgot all about her promise and went with her friends instead
(2) guilt washed over her like a flood
(3) hugged Emma tightly
二、动作链描写类
1：sb. did A, did B and then did C, + 伴随状语/结果状语
2：Upon doing sth., sb. did A and then did B, + 目的状语
练习原句1：The firefighter
________________________________________________________, his boots thudding
against the pavement.
中文翻译1：消防员穿上装备，抓起水管，冲向着火的房子，靴子在人行道上发出咚咚的
声响。
练习原句2：She _______________________________________________________, tears of
joy glistening in her eyes.
中文翻译2：她跪下身，拂去小狗身上的灰尘，轻轻把它抱起来，喜悦的泪水在眼眶里闪
闪发光。
练习原句3：__________________________________, Alice dashed into the alley and
searched for the source, her heart pounding wildly.
中文翻译3：听到尖叫声，爱丽丝冲进小巷寻找声源，心脏狂跳不止。
答案：
1. pulled on his gear, grabbed the hose and sprinted toward the burning house
2. knelt down, brushed the dust off the puppy and held it gently
3. Upon hearing the scream
段落一：消防员救火
The alarm blared through the fire station at 2 a.m., jolting every firefighter awake.
Without a moment’s hesitation,(1)__________________________________(消防员穿上装备，
抓起水管，冲向着火的房子) , his boots thudding against the pavement. Smoke billowed
from the second-floor windows, and he could hear faint cries for help above the crackle
of flames. (2)__________________________________(抵达前门时), he signaled to his
teammate to connect the water supply, his gloved hands already pushing against the
scorching wood to force it open.
答案：
(1) the firefighter pulled on his gear, grabbed the hose and sprinted toward the burning
house
(2) As he reached the front door
段落二：救受惊的小动物
Alice was walking home from her part-time job, her headphones playing soft music
to drown out the night’s silence. (1)__________________________________(听到尖叫声),
Alice dashed into the alley and searched for the source, her heart pounding wildly. The
dim streetlight barely reached the narrow passage, so she fumbled for her phone to turn
on the flashlight. Just as the light cut through the darkness,
(2)__________________________________(她看到一只小猫被困在倒下的垃圾桶下面) , its
tiny paws scratching at the ground.(3)_______________________(她松了口气) , kneeling
down to carefully lift the can and free the frightened animal.
答案：
(1) Upon hearing the scream
(2) she spotted a small cat trapped under a fallen trash can
(3) She let out a relieved breath
三、环境与氛围类
1：环境主体 + 拟人化动词 + 细节描写, + 对人物的影响
2：自然景物 + 动作描写, + 象征意义/情感暗示
练习原句1：____________________________________________, their branches scratching
the window panes, and I pulled my coat tighter around myself.
中文翻译1：呼啸的风撕扯着松树，树枝刮擦着窗玻璃，我把外套裹得更紧了。
练习原句2：_________________________________, reducing visibility to a few meters,
and we had to stop to check the map repeatedly.
中文翻译2：浓雾吞噬了山路，能见度降至几米，我们不得不反复停下来查看地图。
练习原句3：Moonlight filtered through the clouds, casting eerie shadows on the empty
street, and ____________________________________.
中文翻译3：月光穿透云层，在空荡的街道上投下诡异的影子，一阵不安悄然袭来。
答案：
1. The howling wind tore through the pine trees
2. Thick fog swallowed the mountain path
3. a sense of unease crept over me
段落一：突如其来的暴风雨
Last night, (1)__________________________________(一场突如其来的暴风雨袭击了我
居住的小镇) . (2)__________________________________(呼啸的风撕扯着松树) , their
branches scratching the window panes, and I pulled my coat tighter around myself. I
hurried to close the wooden shutters, but the wind kept slamming them against the wall,
making a terrifying creak. Outside,(3)__________________________________(大雨如瀑布般
倾泻而下) , washing away the flower beds in front of the house. My little sister clung
to my arm, her eyes wide with fear, as we huddled together by the fireplace,
(4)____________________________(等待暴风雨过去) .
答案：
(1) a sudden storm hit the small town where I lived
(2) The howling wind tore through the pine trees
(3) the rain poured down like a waterfall
(4) waiting for the storm to pass
段落二：午夜惊吓
It was midnight when I walked home from the library. The street lamps flickered
occasionally, their light dim and weak. Moonlight filtered through the clouds, casting eerie
shadows on the empty street, and (1)__________________________________(一阵不安悄然
袭来) . I quickened my pace, my shoes tapping on the wet pavement—earlier rain had
left small puddles that reflected the faint moonlight. Suddenly, a cat jumped from a trash
can, (2)________________________(吓得我身子一震) . I let out a small sigh of relief
when (3)______________________________(意识到只是一只流浪猫时) , but I still kept
walking faster, eager to get back to the warmth and safety of my home.
答案：
(1) a sense of unease crept over me
(2) making me jump in surprise
(3) I recognized it was just a stray cat
四、情感与动作结合类
1：With + 情感状态, sb. did A, + 对话/心理补充
2：Seized by + 情感名词, sb. did A, unable to do B
练习原句1：______________________________________, she bowed deeply and
whispered, “Thank you for saving my grandma.”
中文翻译1：感激的泪水顺着她的脸颊流下，她深深鞠了一躬，轻声说：“谢谢您救了我
奶奶。”
练习原句2：________________________________________, he adjusted the microphone
and began his speech.
中文翻译2：他的手因紧张而颤抖，调整好麦克风后，开始了演讲。
练习原句3：________________________, he ran blindly through the woods, unable to
recall which way he had come.
中文翻译3：恐慌攫住了他，他在树林里盲目奔跑，想不起自己是从哪条路来的。
答案：
1. With tears of gratitude streaming down her face
2. With his hands trembling from nervousness
3. Seized by panic
段落一：救晕倒老人
The old lady collapsed suddenly at the community gate, and 10-year-old Mia didn’t
hesitate to rush over. She remembered the first-aid knowledge her mom taught her:(1)
_____________________________________________________(轻轻抬起老人的头、保持呼
吸道通畅，同时大声呼救) . Soon, a doctor who lived nearby arrived and stabilized the
lady’s condition. When the lady’s family rushed over and held Mia’s hands to thank
her, (2)__________________________________(感激的泪水顺着她的脸颊流下) , she bowed
deeply and whispered, “Thank you for saving my grandma.” Mia smiled and waved,
(3)__________________________________(心里想着，学会急救技能真是她今年做过最有意
义的事) .
答案：
(1) she gently lifted the lady’s head, kept her airway open, and shouted for help
(2) With tears of gratitude streaming down her face
(3) thinking that learning first-aid skills was really the most meaningful thing she’d done
this year
段落二：森林中走散
Last weekend, Tom went hiking in the mountain with his friends, but he got
separated from the group while chasing a colorful butterfly. The sky gradually darkened,
and the rustling of leaves in the wind (1)__________________________________(像奇怪的
低语). He took out his phone, only to find there was no signal. He walked around in a
hurry, stepping on dry branches that made creaking sounds. Suddenly, a fox darted out
from behind a tree, (2)________________________ (吓得他踉跄着后退).
(3)_________________________________(恐慌攫住了他) , he ran blindly through the
woods, unable to recall which way he had come. Just when he was about to cry, he
heard his friends’ calling voices in the distance—
(4)________________________________(他终于松了口气，拼命挥起了手).
答案：
(1) sounded like strange whispers
(2) scaring him so much that he stumbled backward
(3) Seized by panic
(4) he finally breathed a sigh of relief and waved desperately
