高中英语读后续写片段描写限时练10
1. 环境描写（烘托氛围）
• 高分句式1：With + 自然现象 + doing, 地点 + 呈现的状态
• 高分句式2：名词 + doing, 细节 + 感官体验
• 描写练习1：（雨天场景）雨水顺着屋檐急促流下，教室被一片沉闷笼罩。
• 英文翻译1：_______________________________, the classroom was shrounded in
dullness.
• 描写练习2：晨雾缠绕着路灯，橘色光晕在潮湿的路面上散开。
• 英文翻译2：_________________________________________, the orange glow spread on
the wet road.
答案：
1. With rain pouring down the eaves
2. Morning mist curling around the street lamps
段落一（雨天教室场景）
(1)__________________________________(雨水顺着屋檐急促流下) , the classroom
was shrounded in dullness. (2)__________________________________(雨水撞击地面的声
音) mixed with the teacher’s low voice, making every student’s eyelids heavy. Some
leaned their heads against the cold window panes, watching raindrops streak down like
messy tears, while others stared at the math problems on the blackboard,
(3)_______________________________
____________________(思绪早已飘出了教室) . No one spoke, and even the usual rustle
of turning textbook pages disappeared, as if the rain outside had drowned all the energy
in the room.
答案：
(1) With rain pouring down the eaves
(2) The sound of water hitting the ground
(3) their minds wandering far away from the classroom
段落二（晨雾街道场景）
(1)__________________________________(晨雾缠绕着路灯) , the orange glow
spread on the wet road. An old man walked slowly with a cane,
(2)_______________________
___________(身影在薄雾中变得模糊) , as if he was stepping out of a soft watercolor
painting. The smell of fresh bread drifted from the bakery at the street corner, mixing
with the cool, moist air of the morning,
(3)______________________________________(让这条安静的街道多了几分暖意) . A stray
cat jumped onto a low wall, shook the dew off its fur, and then disappeared into the
mist, leaving only the faint orange light of the street lamps (4)______________________
_____________________(在空荡荡的路面上温柔地闪烁) .
答案：
(1) Morning mist curling around the street lamps
(2) his figure blurred by the thin fog
(3) making the quiet street feel warm
(4) glowing gently on the empty road
2. 动作与表情（刻画细节）
• 高分句式1：非谓语动词（Doing）+ 场景, 主语 + 连续动作
• 高分句式2：主语 + 动作, 伴随状语（saying/leaving...）
• 描写练习：攥着皱巴巴的成绩单，她低着头走进了家门。
• 英文翻译：____________________________________, she walked into the house with
her head down.
• 描写练习：他猛地推开房门，指甲在掌心留下深深的痕迹。
• 英文翻译：_____________________________, leaving deep crescent marks on his
palms.
答案：
1. Clutching the crumpled report card
2. He slammed the door open
段落一（围绕“攥着皱巴巴的成绩单，她低着头走进了家门”展开）
(1)__________________________________(攥着皱巴巴的成绩单) , she walked into
the house with her head down. The living room light was on, and her mother, who
usually sat on the sofa knitting, stood up immediately at the sound of the door.
(2)________________________
__________(她咬着下唇) , fingers tightening around the paper until the edges turned
even more frayed, (3)______________________________________________(根本不敢抬头
迎上妈妈的目光) . The silence in the room felt heavy, as if even the ticking of the
clock had slowed down to wait for her explanation.
答案：
(1) Clutching the crumpled report card
(2) She bit her lower lip
(3) too afraid to lift her eyes to meet her mother’s gaze
段落二（围绕“他猛地推开房门，指甲在掌心留下深深的痕迹”展开）
(1)__________________________________(他猛地推开房门) , leaving deep crescent
marks on his palms. He had just argued with his best friend over a misunderstanding
about their group project, and (2)__________________________________(怒火还在胸口燃
烧) . (3)__________________________________(他把书包甩到床上) , he kicked a chair
by the desk, making it scrape loudly against the floor. Leaning against the wall, he took
a deep breath, only then noticing the stinging pain in his palms—those marks were a
sharp reminder of how out of control he had just been.
答案：
(1) He slammed the door open
(2) anger was still burning in his chest
(3) Throwing his schoolbag onto the bed
3. 心理活动（传递情绪）
• 高分句式1：A wave of + 情绪名词 + 动词 + 主语
• 高分句式2：形容词作状语, 主语 + 动作 + 心理反应
• 描写练习1：看到获奖证书时，一阵狂喜涌上他的心头。
• 英文翻译1：_________________________________ when he saw the award certificate.
• 描写练习2：焦虑又紧张，她在考场外不停踱步。
• 英文翻译2：________________________, she paced back and forth outside the exam
room.
答案：
1. A wave of ecstasy surged through him
2. Anxious and nervous
段落一（包含句式“A wave of + 情绪名词 + 动词 + 主语”）
Tom had been practicing the piano for six months just for the school talent show.
When the host announced his name as the first prize winner, he froze for a second.
(1)__________________________________(一阵狂喜涌上他的心头) when he saw the
award certificate held out by the principal. (2)__________________________________(他
面带灿烂的笑容走上舞台) , his hands slightly shaking as he took the certificate and
thanked everyone.
答案：
(1) A wave of ecstasy surged through him
(2) He walked onto the stage with a big smile
段落二（包含句式“形容词作状语, 主语 + 动作 + 心理反应”）
The final exam was the most important one for Lisa this semester, as it would affect
her chance to get into her dream club. (1)__________________________________(焦虑又
紧张) , she paced back and forth outside the exam room. She kept checking her pencil
case to make sure she had all the necessary tools, and
(2)__________________________________(每有一位同学走进考场) , her heart beat a little
faster. When the teacher called them in,
(3)___________________________________________(她深吸一口气，努力让自己平静下来)
.
答案：
(1) Anxious and nervous
(2) every time a classmate walked into the room
(3) she took a deep breath and tried to calm herself down
4. 情节转折（推动故事）
• 高分句式1：主语 + was about to do when + 突发情况
• 高分句式2：It occurred to 主语 that + 解决办法
• 描写练习1：我正要放弃寻找时，突然听到了熟悉的呼唤声。
• 英文翻译1：______________________________________ I suddenly heard a familiar
call.
• 描写练习2：被困在电梯里时，他突然想到可以按紧急呼叫按钮。
• 英文翻译2：______________________ he could press the emergency call button when
trapped in the elevator.
答案：
1. I was about to give up searching when
2. It occurred to him that
段落一（包含句式“主语 + was about to do when + 突发情况”）
I had been searching for my lost wallet in the crowded supermarket for nearly an
hour, (1)__________________________________(双手因担心而颤抖) . I checked every
shelf I’d passed and even asked the cashier for help, but there was no sign of it.
(2)__________________________________(我正要放弃寻找时) I suddenly heard a
familiar call from the entrance. It was my mom, holding my wallet in her hand—she’d
found it on the bench outside the store. (3)__________________________________(我的脸
上立刻绽放出灿烂的笑容) .
答案：
(1) my hands trembling with worry
(2) I was about to give up searching when
(3) A huge smile broke out on my face instantly
段落二（包含句式“It occurred to 主语 that + 解决办法”）
Last night, I sat at my desk staring at the math homework,
(1)__________________________________(感觉完全无从下手) . I’d tried every formula I
knew, but I still couldn’t solve the last problem. The clock ticked past 10 PM, and I
started to feel frustrated. Just as I was about to close my textbook,
(2)_____________________________
_____(我突然想到) I could look back at the example in our textbook—Mr. Li had
explained a similar problem in class last week. I flipped to that page, and
(3)______________________
___(很快就算出了答案) .
答案：
(1) feeling completely stuck
(2) it occurred to me that
(3) soon I worked out the answer
