湖北省武汉市江汉区2025-2026 学年高三上学期新起点摸底考英语试题
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
The afternoon sun was setting below the pine trees(环境描写) when 13-year-old
Emily encountered the trembling creature. Beneath a fallen branch lay a young
kestrel
(红隼), (全部倒装句)its brown feathers covered with mud(独立主格刻画形象), one wing
bent at an unnatural angle(描写状态). Her heart ached. She remembered Grandpa’s
words from last summer: “Wild things need courage more than pity, but sometimes
they need both.” Kneeling(现在分词做伴随动作), she extended a gentle hand. The bird’s
amber eyes met hers, showing
fear and resistance
(现在分词短语做伴随动作).
Carefully wrapping
the kestrel in her sweatshirt
(现在分词短语做伴随动作), Emily hurried
home. Mom, a clinic doctor, examined the bird with practiced hands. “Its wing is
broken,” she said, “but with care, it might fly again.” Emily’s resolve hardened. For
weeks, she transformed the garage into a shelter. She lined a cardboard box with
hay, hung it from the ceiling, and studied bird caring handbooks late into the night(动作
串描写，下一次就是救援类续写语料). The kestrel, now
named
Rosy
(过去分词短语做后置定语), resisted at first,
hitting
at the board on its wing
(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Yet each time Emily sang
Grandpa’s favorite tune — You Are My Sunshine — the bird stilled, holding
its
head(现在分词短语做伴随动作) as if decoding the melody(状从压缩).
Progress was painfully slow. Rosy’s wing trembled during daily exercises, and
Emily’s hands bore scratches from feeding it raw meat. “Patience, Em,” Mom
reminded, handing
her clean wipes
(现在分词短语做伴随动作). By the third week(注意时间变化), Rosy
began jumping between its resting places, its feathers regaining a coppery color(独立主
格刻画变化). One twilight, as Emily sat cross-legged beside the cage, the kestrel flapped
once, twice — lifting
a full inch before landing clumsily
(现在分词短语做伴随动作). “You did
it!” she cried, heart pounding(独立主格).
Then came the stormy night(全部倒装句). Lightning knocked out the power, turning
the garage into darkness(现在分词短语做结果状语). Emily rushed downstairs, flashlight
trembling in her hand.(独立主格) The cage door swung open — empty(重点事件)! Rain hit
the windows as she eagerly searched. “Rosy can’t survive this!” she choked. Just as
despair set in, a familiar chirp
ed
(ed 为修正的，我个人认为有错误) above
. High in the ceiling(adj 做主语补
语), Rosy flapped its healed wing rhythmically(高潮), raindrops glistening on its
feathers like stars.(独立主格刻画形象) Emily laughed through tears. Against all odds, hope
had taken flight.
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: The morning of Rosy’s release arrived, fresh and golden.
Paragraph 2:Years later, Emily recognized a familiar figure at a wildlife shelter.
湖北省武汉市江汉区2025-2026 学年高三上学期新起点摸底考英语试题
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
The afternoon sun was setting below the pine trees when 13-year-old Emily
encountered the trembling creature. Beneath a fallen branch lay a young kestrel (红
隼), its brown feathers covered with mud, one wing bent at an unnatural angle. Her
heart ached. She remembered Grandpa’s words from last summer: “Wild things need
courage more than pity, but sometimes they need both.” Kneeling, she extended a
gentle hand. The bird’s amber eyes met hers, showing fear and resistance.
Carefully wrapping the kestrel in her sweatshirt, Emily hurried home. Mom, a
clinic doctor, examined the bird with practiced hands. “Its wing is broken,” she said,
“but with care, it might fly again.” Emily’s resolve hardened. For weeks, she
transformed the garage into a shelter. She lined a cardboard box with hay, hung it
from the ceiling, and studied bird caring handbooks late into the night. The kestrel,
now named Rosy, resisted at first, hitting at the board on its wing. Yet each time
Emily sang Grandpa’s favorite tune — You Are My Sunshine — the bird stilled,
holding its head as if decoding the melody.
Progress was painfully slow. Rosy’s wing trembled during daily exercises, and
Emily’s hands bore scratches from feeding it raw meat. “Patience, Em,” Mom
reminded, handing her clean wipes. By the third week, Rosy began jumping between
its resting places, its feathers regaining a coppery color. One twilight, as Emily sat
cross-legged beside the cage, the kestrel flapped (拍打) once, twice — lifting a full
inch before landing clumsily. “You did it!” she cried, heart pounding.
Then came the stormy night. Lightning knocked out the power, turning the garage
into darkness. Emily rushed downstairs, flashlight trembling in her hand. The cage
door swung open — empty! Rain hit the windows as she eagerly searched. “Rosy
can’t survive this!” she choked. Just as despair set in, a familiar chirp (鸟叫声) above.
High in the ceiling, Rosy flapped its healed wing rhythmically, raindrops glistening
on its feathers like stars. Emily laughed through tears. Against all odds, hope had
taken flight.
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: The morning of Rosy’s release arrived, fresh and golden.
Paragraph 2:Years later, Emily recognized a familiar figure at a wildlife shelter.
1. 读后续写类型及构思分析
类型：动物救援与个人成长类（人与动物互动，情感与勇气主题）
构思思路：
主题延续：围绕“勇气、希望与成长”展开，体现Emily 和Rosy 的双向救赎。
情感升华：通过释放Rosy 和多年后的重逢，强化“爱与自由”的隐含主题。
冲突解决：Rosy 康复后能否适应野外？Emily 能否放手？
框架布局：
段落
核心内容
衔接原文要点
第一段
Rosy 的释放场景（动作+环境
+心理）
承接“hope had taken flight”
第二段
多年后重逢（情感呼应+主题
升华）
呼应Grandpa 的话和Rosy 的康复
细节
实施要点：
承接原文：
保留关键词：kestrel, wing, Grandpa’s tune, coppery feathers 等。
延续情感线：Emily 的不舍与Rosy 的独立。
设计技巧：
使用象征手法（如阳光、飞翔动作）。
通过动作描写（如Rosy 盘旋回头）传递情感。
2. 故事山模式与原文分析
故事山模式：
阶
段
原文内容
续写衔接点
开
端
Emily 发现受伤红隼
Rosy 释放前的准备
发
展
救治与康复训练
飞翔能力测试
高
潮
暴风雨夜Rosy 短暂飞翔
正式放飞场景
结
局
希望升起（开放式）
多年后重逢（闭环结局）
伏笔与冲突：
伏笔：Grandpa 的话（关爱自然）、Rosy 对歌声的反应。
冲突：Rosy 的野性本能（抗拒救助）vs Emily 的拯救决心；暴风雨夜的逃脱危
机。
隐含线索：歌声象征联系，羽毛颜色变化象征康复。
解决方案：通过耐心与信任实现共同成长。
3. 原文多维分析表
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
人物刻画
Emily 善良、坚韧；
Rosy 从恐惧到信任
“Her heart ached... extended a gentle
hand.”
情感层次
怜悯→决心→喜悦→绝
望→希望
“Emily laughed through tears. Against
all odds, hope had taken flight.”
关键情节点
发现红隼、暴风雨夜飞
“Lightning knocked out the power...
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
翔
Rosy flapped its healed wing
rhythmically.”
语言特色
拟人化（鸟“解码”歌
声）、比喻（雨滴如星
星）
“raindrops glistening on its feathers like
stars.”
关键词分析
“courage”“hope”“flight”
重复出现，强化主题
“Wild things need courage more than
pity.”
心理描写
Emily 的心痛、决心、
激动
“heart pounding”“choked”
动作描写
红隼拍打翅膀、Emily
颤抖的手
“flapped once, twice”“flashlight
trembling”
环境描写
黄昏、暴风雨夜渲染氛
围
“The afternoon sun was setting... Rain
hit the windows.”
隐含主题
自由与爱的平衡，成长
需要勇气
Grandpa 的箴言贯穿全文
情感转折
Rosy 从抗拒→静止→主
动飞翔
“hit the board... stilled... flapped
rhythmically.”
空间转换
松树林→车库→野外
“beneath a fallen branch... garage...
ceiling”
时间过渡
下午→夜晚→数周后→
多年后
“afternoon sun... third week... years
later”
续写设计建议
第一段：
环境：用“golden”阳光呼应前文“twilight”，象征希望。
动作：Rosy 试探性飞翔、盘旋回头，Emily 哼歌告别。
心理：Emily 的泪与笑交织，回忆暴风雨夜。
第二段：
呼应：野生动物救助站场景，Rosy 的“coppery feathers”被认出。主题升华：
Emily 成为兽医，践行Grandpa 的话（勇气与怜悯）。
细节：Rosy 对《You Are My Sunshine》的反应。
3. 英文例句及高级替换词
动作描写（Action Descriptions）
The kestrel flapped its wings tentatively, testing the air.
（红隼试探性地拍打着翅膀，感受着空气。）
Emily’s hands trembled as she reached out to open the cage door.
（Emily 的手颤抖着伸向笼门。）
Rosy hopped onto a low branch, her talons gripping the bark firmly.
（Rosy 跳上一根低矮的树枝，爪子牢牢抓住树皮。）
The bird tilted its head, studying Emily with curious amber eyes.
（鸟儿歪着头，用琥珀色的眼睛好奇地打量着Emily。）
She cupped the kestrel gently in her palms, feeling its rapid heartbeat.
（她轻轻地把红隼捧在手心，感受它快速的心跳。）
With a sudden burst of energy, Rosy launched herself into the sky.
（Rosy 突然发力，冲向天空。）
Emily’s breath caught in her throat as she watched the bird soar higher.
（Emily 屏住呼吸，看着鸟儿越飞越高。）
The kestrel circled once, then twice, as if reluctant to leave.
（红隼盘旋了一圈，又盘旋了一圈，似乎不愿离去。）
A gust of wind ruffled Rosy’s feathers, making her look almost golden.
（一阵风吹乱了Rosy 的羽毛，让她看起来几乎泛着金光。）
The bird let out a sharp chirp before disappearing into the trees.
（鸟儿发出一声清脆的鸣叫，随后消失在树林中。）
心理描写（Psychological Descriptions）
A mix of joy and sorrow swelled in Emily’s chest.
（喜悦与悲伤交织在Emily 的胸口。）
She bit her lip, fighting back the urge to call Rosy back.
（她咬着嘴唇，强忍着叫回Rosy 的冲动。）
Her heart ached at the thought of saying goodbye.
（一想到要告别，她的心就隐隐作痛。）
A wave of pride washed over her as she watched Rosy fly freely.
（看着Rosy 自由飞翔，一股自豪感涌上心头。）
For a fleeting moment, she wondered if Rosy would remember her.
（一瞬间，她想知道Rosy 是否会记得她。）
Her fingers clenched the empty cage, the metal cold against her skin.
（她的手指紧握着空笼子，金属的冰冷触感透过皮肤传来。）
Tears blurred her vision, but she refused to wipe them away.
（泪水模糊了她的视线，但她拒绝擦去。）
The silence in the garage felt heavier now that Rosy was gone.
（Rosy 离开后，车库里的寂静显得更加沉重。）
She took a deep breath, trying to steady her racing heart.
（她深吸一口气，试图让自己狂跳的心平静下来。）
A bittersweet smile tugged at the corners of her mouth.
（她的嘴角浮现出一抹苦涩的微笑。）
环境描写（Environmental Descriptions）
The morning sun painted the sky in hues of pink and gold.
（朝阳将天空染成粉红与金黄。）
A gentle breeze rustled the leaves, carrying the scent of pine.
（微风吹动树叶，带来松树的清香。）
The forest hummed with the chirping of unseen birds.
（森林里回荡着看不见的鸟儿的鸣叫声。）
Shadows stretched long across the grass as the sun climbed higher.
（随着太阳升高，影子在草地上拉长。）
The air was crisp, filled with the promise of a new day.
（空气清新，充满新一天的希望。）
Dewdrops sparkled like tiny diamonds on the grass.
（露珠像小钻石一样在草地上闪烁。）
The distant call of a hawk echoed through the valley.
（远处一只鹰的叫声在山谷中回荡。）
The trees swayed slightly, their branches whispering secrets.
（树木轻轻摇曳，树枝仿佛在低语。）
The golden light filtered through the canopy, dappling the ground.
（金色的阳光透过树冠，斑驳地洒在地面上。）
The world seemed to hold its breath as Rosy took flight.
（当Rosy 起飞时，世界仿佛屏住了呼吸。）
高级替换词（场景分类）
普通词
汇
高级替换词
适用场景
happy
elated, overjoyed
情感描写
sad
melancholic, heartbroken
情感描写
run
dash, sprint
动作描写
fly
soar, glide
动作描写
look
gaze, scrutinize
心理/动作描写
常见搭配（Collocations）
take flight（起飞）
The bird took flight, disappearing into the horizon.
hold one's breath（屏住呼吸）
Emily held her breath as Rosy soared higher.
fight back tears（强忍泪水）
She fought back tears as she watched Rosy leave.
a wave of emotion（一阵情绪）
A wave of pride washed over her.
against all odds（尽管困难重重）
Against all odds, the kestrel survived the storm.
生词短语（Vocabulary & Phrases）
tentatively (adv.) 试探性地
近义词: hesitantly, cautiously
反义词: confidently
例句:
The bird flapped its wings tentatively.
She reached out tentatively, afraid of scaring it.
glisten (v.) 闪烁
近义词: sparkle, shimmer
反义词: dull
例句:
Raindrops glistened on Rosy’s feathers.
Her eyes glistened with unshed tears.
bittersweet (adj.) 苦乐参半的
近义词: poignant, mixed
反义词: purely joyful
例句:
The moment was bittersweet—happy yet sad.
She smiled a bittersweet smile.
reluctant (adj.) 不情愿的
近义词: unwilling, hesitant
反义词: eager
例句:
Rosy seemed reluctant to leave.
He gave a reluctant nod.
whisper (v.) 低语
近义词: murmur, mutter
反义词: shout
例句:
The wind whispered through the trees.
She whispered a silent prayer.
总结
动作描写：多用动态动词（flap, launch, circle）增强画面感。
心理描写：结合身体反应（clenched fists, trembling hands）增强代入感。
环境描写：利用感官细节（scent of pine, golden light）渲染氛围。
高级词汇：替换常见词，提高语言丰富度（如“soar”代替“fly”）。
固定搭配：使用自然搭配（take flight, hold one’s breath）使表达更地道。
5. Possible Version(4)
Version 1
Paragraph 1: The morning of Rosy’s release arrived, fresh and golden. The
gentle sunlight streamed through the clouds, painting
the fields in soft gold
(现在分词短语做
结果状语), and Emily felt her heart throb with both excitement and dread. Standing
beside
the open cage
(现在分词短语做伴随动作), she hesitated, torn
between the desire to
keep Rosy safe and the duty to set it free(过去分词短语做主语补语). The kestrel tilted its head,
eyes sharp yet calm(独立主格描写神态), as if sensing Emily’s conflict(状语从句压缩). With
trembling hands, Emily whispered Grandpa’s words, “Wild things need courage
more than pity,” and slowly lifted the cage door wider. Rosy hopped forward, wings
quivering in the breeze(独立主格刻画红隼). For a moment, time seemed frozen. Then, with a
sudden surge of strength, Rosy leapt into the air, rising
higher and higher
(现在分词短语做伴
随动作) until it became a speck against the golden horizon. Emily’s eyes blurred with
tears, but she smiled through them, murmuring(现在分词短语做伴随动作), “Fly, my sunshine.”
Paragraph 2: Years later, Emily recognized a familiar figure at a wildlife
shelter.
The sharp cry of a kestrel echoed above the trees, pulling
her gaze
upward(现在分词短语做伴随动作). There, on a wooden perch, stood a bird(完全倒装句) with amber
eyes that mirrored the one she had once nursed back to life. A rush of warmth
filled her chest, and the melody of You Are My Sunshine rose unbidden to her
lips. Volunteers nearby glanced at her curiously, but Emily simply smiled, her eyes
locked on the kestrel(独立主格刻画人物). Though she could not be certain it was Rosy, the
feeling of connection was undeniable. It seemed to nod, wings twitching in
recognition(独立主格), and in that instant Emily understood: the courage she had once
given Rosy had quietly shaped her own path. She now stood here, not only as a
visitor, but as someone devoted
to protecting every fragile life
(adj 短语做后置定语) that
longed for the sky.
Version 2
Paragraph 1: The morning of Rosy’s release arrived, fresh and golden.A cool
breeze rustled through the pine trees, carrying
with it the scent of wet grass after
the storm(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Emily opened the garage door, her pulse quickening(独立主格
刻画人物). Rosy stood tall inside the cage, feathers gleaming coppery in the sun(独立主格),
wings spreading with a quiet power(独立主格). Emily swallowed hard, her voice
trembling(独立主格) as she sang softly, You Are My Sunshine. The kestrel stilled, just
as it had so many times before, and then let out a sharp chirp as though responding(状
从压缩). With a final deep breath, Emily stepped back. Rosy beat its wings vigorously,
lifted off, and soared into the golden morning sky(动作串描写). Emily’s heart ached at
the emptiness left behind(过去分词或adj 做补语), yet pride surged stronger, for she knew this
was not an ending, but the beginning of freedom.
Paragraph 2: Years later, Emily recognized a familiar figure at a wildlife
shelter. Her footsteps froze as her eyes fell upon the kestrel perch
ing
on a
handler’s glove(现在分词短语做伴随动作), feathers glowing under the sunlight(独立主格). That same
steady gaze, half fierce and half gentle(adj 做主语补语), pierced straight into her memory.
Emotion washed over her, mingling disbelief with a quiet certainty(现在分词短语做伴随动作).
She whispered, almost inaudibly(adj 做主语补语), “Rosy?” The bird shifted, wings
stretching with the same rhythm(独立主格) she had once guided. A tear traced her
cheek, yet she smiled, realizing(现在分词短语做伴随动作)that what mattered was not proof
but the bond they once shared. The shelter volunteers continued their tasks,
unaware
of the silent reunion
(adj 短语做主语补语). Emily’s heart settled into peace,
convinced(adj 做主语补语) that the lessons of patience, love, and letting go had led her to
where she now stood — ready to protect more wings yearning for the sky.
Version 3
Paragraph 1: The morning of Rosy’s release arrived, fresh and golden. Emily
woke early, her chest heavy with both anticipation and loss(独立主格). She carried
Rosy’s cage into the open field where sunlight streamed through the trees, the same
place where she had first found the trembling bird weeks ago. Kneeling down(现在分
词短语做伴随动作), she whispered, “It’s time.” Her fingers lingered on the door latch,
reluctant
to let go
(adj 短语做主语补语). Rosy’s wings trembled, feathers shining with
renewed strength(独立主格). As Emily slowly pushed the door open, Rosy stepped out,
scanning
the vast sky
(现在分词短语做伴随动作). With a powerful thrust, the bird rose steadily,
climbing higher with each beat of its healed wing(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Emily’s tears
spilled freely, yet her heart felt lighter than ever before. Watching
Rosy disappear
into the heavens(现在分词短语做伴随动作), she realized that true love meant not possession, but
release.
Paragraph 2: Years later, Emily recognized a familiar figure at a wildlife
shelter. Time had carved new lines of maturity into her face(无灵主语句), but the sight
before her pulled her back to childhood(无灵主语句). A kestrel, proud and unbroken(adj 做主
语补语), turned its amber gaze toward her. For a fleeting moment, Emily felt the
same pulse of connection she had known years ago. She stood silently,
overwhelmed
by gratitude
(过去分词短语做主语补语), as if the universe had sent her a reminder:
the courage she gave once had taken root within her. The bird gave a short, piercing
cry, wings fluttering(现在分词短语做伴随动作) as if acknowledging her presence(状从压缩). Emily
smiled through misty eyes, humming
the tune
: You
are
my
sunshine
(现在分词短语做伴随
动作) that had once soothed both of them. No words were spoken, but in that shelter,
surrounded
by the echoes of wings
(过去分词短语做状语), Emily’s purpose was clear — to
carry forward the hope she had once set free.
高中加分语法点
非谓语/独立主格：Standing beside the open cage…；Tears spilling freely,
she smiled…
倒装：Only then did Rosy spread its wings fully.
递进强调句：It was not proof but the bond that mattered most.
虚拟语气：As if sensing Emily’s conflict…；as though responding.
心情描写
heart throb with → be filled with / pulse quicken with
tears blurred her eyes → vision misted / eyes welled with tears
动作描写
beat its wings vigorously → flap energetically / thrust into the air
linger on the door latch → hesitate at the cage / fingers clung to the
handle
情绪递进
torn between A and B → caught between / in conflict between
a rush of warmth filled her chest → heart swelled with warmth
亮点词汇短语
whisper Grandpa’s words → recall her grandfather’s wisdom
time seemed frozen → time stood still
wings twitching in recognition → flutter slightly as if responding
hope had taken flight → freedom came alive
积累语料（升级替换+例句）
hesitate → falter / waver
She faltered before giving her final answer.
tears spilled → tears streamed / tears coursed
Tears coursed down her face as relief washed over her.
connection → bond / tie / link
The bond between humans and animals can last a lifetime.
release → set free / let go
True love means letting go at the right time.
官方：One possible version:
The morning of Rosy’s release arrived, fresh and golden. Emily cradled the
kestrel gently, feeling
its heartbeat sync with hers
(现在分词短语做伴随动作). At the forest
edge, she knelt and opened her hands. Rosy hesitated, tilti
ng
its head
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)
as if memorizing her face(状从省略，熟悉吗？). Then, with a fierce flap, it soared into the sky,
tracing
circles above
the pine
s(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Tears welled in Emily’s vision, but
her smile widened — this was freedom. When Rosy’s figure melted into the
horizon, she whispered, “Fly strong, little warrior.” A distant chirp echoed back,
weaving
her sorrow into pride
(现在分词短语做结果状语).
Years later, Emily recognized a familiar figure at a wildlife shelter. A kestrel
with brown feathers landed near her, one leg bearing a tiny tag(独立主格) she’d crafted
long ago(有点突兀). “Rosy?” she breathed. The bird chirped, jumping
closer
(现在分词短语做伴随
动作). As sunlight ran through the trees(环境描写), Emily was thrilled — this was no longer
rescue, but reunion. She snapped a photo, captioning
it later
(现在分词短语做伴随动作): “Wild
hearts find their way home.” Children at the shelter would hear this tale, learning(现在
分词短语做伴随动作)that courage and care could mend both wings and worlds.
