专题 08 书面表达
1．（2024届·甘肃白银一模）
假定你是李华，你的外国好友Steven沉迷于网络，导致成绩下降。请你用英语给他写一封邮件，帮助他戒
除网瘾，内容包括：
1. 表示安慰；
2. 说明网瘾的危害；
3. 介绍戒除网瘾的方法。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Steven,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Steven,
I feel more than worried to know that you have wasted lots of valuable time playing the Internet games and
that you have been influenced severely by it.
As we know, the Internet is a convenient tool to improve our knowledge and skills. However, our life will be
greatly affected if we are addicted to it. For example your grades have gone down and your health will be going
from bad to worse. To make things worse, it can also damage the relationship with your family. So I think it is high
time that you got rid of the bad habit. It is a good idea for you to read some meaningful books and do some physical
exercise.
I am looking forward to hearing your good news soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国好友Steven写一封邮件，帮助他戒除网瘾。
【详解】1.词汇积累
非常：more than→very
众所周知：as we know→as is known to all
改善：improve→upgrade
影响：affect→influence
2.句式拓展简单句变复合句
原句：To make things worse, it can also damage the relationship with your family.
拓展句：What makes things worse is that it can also damage the relationship with your family.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I feel more than worried to know that you have wasted lots of valuable time playing the
Internet games and that you have been influenced severely by it.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】As we know, the Internet is a convenient tool to improve our knowledge and skills.（运用了As引
导的非限制性定语从句）
2．（2024届·四川泸州一模）
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Alex暑假想到新疆旅游，请你给Alex写一份邮件，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 介绍新疆（地处中国西部，面积166万平方千米，2000多万人口，首府乌鲁木齐，自然景观神奇多样，
著名的水果之乡等等）；
3. 旅游建议及美好祝愿。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：乌鲁木齐Urumqi , 国际大巴扎Bazzar，天山天池 Tianshan Heavenly Lake,
喀纳斯Kanas Lake
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【答案】
Dear Alex,
Knowing that you want to travel around Xinjiang in your last letter, I’m writing to be of some help.
Xinjiang lies in the west of China. As the largest provincial region in China, Xijiang covers a great area of
1,600,000 square kilometers, with 20 millions people living here. Urumqi is the capital of Xinjiang. Standing on the
ancient Silk Road, Xinjiang is famous for a variety of desert, mountains, lakes, green grasslands, and its ethnic
religion and colorful customs. Some of the most well-known sites in Xinjiang are Bazzar, Tianshan Heavenly Lake,
Kanas Lake. It is the hometown of many sweet fruit and melons, such as grapes, melons, peaches and so on.
By the way, do remember to wear comfortable clothes and shoes. Besides, there is no doubt that we should
wear sunscreen. Hope you have a pleasant trip!
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Alex写信，给他介绍一下新疆以及给予他一些旅
游建议并表达对他美好的祝愿。【详解】1.词汇积累
位于：lies in→is located in
此外：besides → what’s more
各种各样：a variety of→a range of
愉快的：pleasant→ nice
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Knowing that you want to travel around Xinjiang in your last letter, I’m writing to be of some help.
拓展句：Because I know you want to travel around Xinjiang in your last letter, I’m writing to be of some help.
【点睛】[高分句型1]Standing on the ancient Silk Road, Xinjiang is famous for a variety of desert, mountains,
lakes, green grasslands, and its ethnic religion and colorful customs.（运用了现在分词短语作状语）
[高分句型2]Besides, there is no doubt that we should wear sunscreen.（运用了there be 句式， that引导同位
语从句）
3．（2024届·四川泸州一模）
假如你是李华，请给外教Jack 写一封英语邮件，邀请他参加你们学校60周年(anniversary) 校庆晚会。内
容包括:
1. 写信事由;
2. 时间与地点;
3. 晚会主要内容。
注意：
1. 词数100 左右;
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Dear Jack,
On behalf of my class, I am honored to invite you to attend the evening party in celebration of our school’s
60th anniversary, which falls on Sunday, Dec.25.
As scheduled, the party is due to start at 8pm, and end at 10pm, lasting about 2 hours. All guests are supposed
to come into the new school hall and take their seats 10 minutes earlier. Your seat is No.8, Row 5. At the evening
party, a great school achievement video will go first, and then some songs, dances, poem recitation created by
teachers and students will go on, showing our great talents.
Looking forward to your arrival and having a good time.Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外教Jack 写一封英语邮件，邀请他参加你们学校60周年
(anniversary) 校庆晚会。
【详解】1.词汇积累
荣幸的：honored→ privileged
计划：scheduled → planned
参加：attend→ participate in
玩得开心：having a good time→ enjoy yourself
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As scheduled, the party is due to start at 8pm, and end at 10pm, lasting about 2 hours.
拓展句：As scheduled, the party is due to start at 8pm, and end at 10pm, which will last about 2 hours.
【点睛】【高分句型1】On behalf of my class, I am honored to invite you to attend the evening party in
celebration of our school’s 60th anniversary, which falls on Sunday, Dec.25.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语
从句）
【高分句型2】At the evening party, a great school achievement video will go first, and then some songs, dances,
poem recitation created by teachers and students will go on, showing our great talents.（运用了非谓语动词中的
过去分词作后置定语以及现在分词作状语。）
4．（2024届·四川绵阳一模）假如你是李华，结束了在美国高中的交换生活。回国后，你选购了一幅中国
画寄给你在美国的老师 Claire 表示感谢。请你用英语给她写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示感谢；
2. 挑选此画作的理由；
3. 邀请她来中国。
注意：1. 词数： 100词左右；
2. 适当增加细节，使文章流畅连贯；
3. 开头结尾已写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Claire,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Claire,How’s everything going? I have a safe journey back. I’m writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for your
help, support and everything you did for me. Besides, I carefully chose a Chinese painting as a gift for you. Hope
you will like it.
The reason why I choose this painting, named shrimps, is that you’re a nature lover, just like the painter Qi
Baishi. Qi is a household name in China, known for his unique style and mastery of traditional Chinese painting
techniques. His works primarily focus on nature, especially lovely creatures like shrimps. They are full of life and
stand vividly on the paper.
Of course, China has more than Qi and his works to offer. You’re warmly welcome to visit China and have a
wonderful personal exploration. Looking forward to seeing you here!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给在美国的老师Claire写一封邮件，表示要寄一幅中国画给
他表示感谢。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感激：gratitude→appreciation
此外：besides→what’s more
独特的：unique→particular
充满：be full of→be filled with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Qi is a household name in China, known for his unique style and mastery of traditional Chinese painting
techniques.
拓展句：Qi is a household name in China, who is known for his unique style and mastery of traditional Chinese
painting techniques.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to express my heartfelt gratitude for your help, support and everything you
did for me.(运用了省略that引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】The reason why I choose this painting, named shrimps, is that you’re a nature lover, just like the
painter Qi Baishi.(运用了why引导的定语从句和that引导的表语从句)
5．（2024届·四川绵阳一模）
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter对中医文化很感兴趣, 发来邮件向你咨询。请回复邮件。
要点：1. 简要介绍中医文化；
2. 推荐央视《中华医药》 (Traditional Chinese Medicine) 栏目。
注意: 1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 结束语已为你写好，不计入词中。
参考词汇：中医/中医文化：TCM = Traditional Chinese Medicine央视网址：www. cctv.com.
Dear Peter,
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Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I'm so glad to know that you are interested in traditional Chinese medicine.
Traditional Chinese medicine, which is an essential part of the health care system in most Asian countries,
relies on natural products and has been playing a significant role in health protection and disease control for
thousands of years. If you would like to learn more about it, I strongly recommend you to watch TCM broadcast on
CCTV-4 weekly，which introduces traditional Chinese medicine culture and advocates a healthy and scientific
lifestyle. You can find it on www. cctv.com. Hopefully my introduction is helpful to your understanding of
traditional Chinese medicine.
Please don't hesitate to let me know if you have any question.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给对中医文化很感兴趣的英国朋友Peter写一封邮件，简要
向他介绍中医文化并推荐中医相关栏目。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时,少量现在完成进行时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 简要介绍中医文化；
2. 推荐央视《中华医药》 (Traditional Chinese Medicine) 栏目。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be interested in…; rely on…; play a significant role in…; recommend sb. to do sth.; be helpful to…; hesitate to do
sth.
第三步：连词成句
1. I'm so glad to know that you are interested in traditional Chinese medicine.
2. Traditional Chinese medicine, which is an essential part of the health care system in most Asian countries, relies
on natural products and has been playing a significant role in health protection and disease control for thousands ofyears.
3. I strongly recommend you to watch TCM broadcast on CCTV-4 weekly，which introduces traditional Chinese
medicine culture and advocates healthy and scientific life style.
4. Hopefully my introduction is helpful to your understanding of traditional Chinese medicine.
5. Please don't hesitate to let me know if you have any question.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
以下连接词仅供参考。
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also),
including
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although +clause(从句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one
hand…, On the other hand… Some…, while others…, as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] Traditional Chinese medicine, which is an essential part of the health care system in most
Asian countries, relies on natural products and has been playing a significant role in health protection and disease
control for thousands of years.用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
[高分句型2] If you would like to learn more about it, I strongly recommend you to watch TCM broadcast on
CCTV-4 weekly，which introduces traditional Chinese medicine culture and advocates healthy and scientific life
style.用了If引导的条件状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句。
6．（2024届·甘肃张掖一模）
近期你校将举办一场“用英文讲好中国故事”(Tell Good Chinese Stories in English)的英文演讲比赛，请你
代表学生会在学校公众号上用英语写一则通知，内容包括：
1. 比赛目的；
2. 比赛信息；
3. 欢迎报名。
注意：写作词数应为 80 左右；可适当增加细节。
NOTICE
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【答案】 NOTICE
In order to help students improve their English and raise their interest in Chinese culture, our school will holdan English speech contest “Tell Good Chinese Stories in English” in the school auditorium at 3 p.m. next Friday.
We will set first, second and third prizes. All grades are welcome to participate, and each class leader is expected to
turn in the list of participants this week. Anyone who is interested in it is welcome to sign up for the event.
Student Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一则通知，通知学校将举办的一场“用英文讲好中国故
事”的英文演讲比赛的有关事宜。
【详解】1.词汇积累
竞赛：contest→competition
参加：participate→take part
班长：class leader→monitor
任何……的人：anyone who→whoever
2.句式拓展
单句变复合句
原句：We will set first, second and third prizes.
拓展句：We will set first, second and third prizes, which will encourage the enthusiasm of all participants.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In order to help students improve their English and raise their interest in Chinese culture,
our school will hold an English speech contest “Tell Good Chinese Stories in English” in the school auditorium at 3
p.m. next Friday. (运用了不定式作目的状语)
[高分句型2] Anyone who is interested in it is welcome to sign up for the event. (运用了关系代词who引导的限
制性定语从句)
7．（2024届·河南信阳一模）
假如你是杭州光明国际学校学生会主席李华，随着亚运会的成功举办和圆满结束，借着亚运会的余辉，本
着“传承亚运精神、发扬亚运精神”，你所在城市开展了“全民健身运动 (National Fitness Program)”。请
你代表学生会，给全校学生写一份倡议书，呼吁大家积极参与活动，内容包括：1.发起建议：2.具体做
法：3.活动意义。
注意：1，写作词数应为80左右：2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连
贯，3.请按如下格式在答思卡的相应位置作容，
Dear fellow students,
With the successful holding and complete conclusion of the Asian Games,the National Fitness Program is
proceeding with full vigor in our city.
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【答案】
Dear fellow students,
With the successful holding and complete conclusion of the Asian Games,the National Fitness Program is
proceeding with full vigor in our city. Here, on behalf of the Student Union, I strongly advocate that every student
should take an active part in it.
Initially, working out for one hour every day tops the list of my recommendation, during which time you can
jog, walk or swim. Besides, it is also advisable to develop a sport skill, such as playing table tennis and basketball.
You are also supposed to join a sport club in our school, where not only can you make more friends but also
sharpen your excellent skills. Let’s work out and keep moving. You can build up your body, strengthen your
willpower and fully appreciate the unique charm of sports.
After all, the greatest wealth is health.
The Student Union
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生代表学生会，给全校学生写一份倡议书，呼吁大家参与城市
开展的“全民健身运动”。其内容包括：发起建议、具体做法和活动意义。
【详解】1.词汇积累
代表：on behalf of→represent
积极参加：take an active part in→participate in actively
锻炼：work out→exercise
此外：besides→what’s more
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Besides, it is also advisable to develop a sport skill, such as playing table tennis and basketball.
拓展句：Besides, it is also advisable that you should develop a sport skill, such as playing table tennis and
basketball.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Here, on behalf of the Student Union, I strongly advocate that every student should take
an active part in it.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Initially, working out for one hour every day tops the list of my recommendation, during which
time you can jog, walk or swim.（运用了“介词+关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型3】You are also supposed to join a sport club in our school, where not only can you make more
friends but also sharpen your excellent skills.（运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句）
8．（2024届·陕西渭南·统考一模）
你校英语报正在进行主题为“The Most Impressive Invention”的征文，请以此写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.令你印象最深刻的发明；
2.对于你的启示。注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.题目不计入总词数。
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【答案】 The Most Impressive Invention
When it comes to the most impressive invention, the first that jumps into my mind is mobile payment, which
means you can pay for your purchases using your smart phone instead of cash.
Mobile payment is rather easy to use, thus making it widely accepted. After shopping, you just have to scan a
code, type in the price you need to pay and your password, and the money will automatically be transferred to the
seller’s account.
There is no doubt that mobile payment has made our daily life much more convenient. Moreover, it can be
said that mobile payment in China is highly advanced in the whole world. As a student, we should be open-minded
and shoulder the responsibility to make our country a better place.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就主题为“印象最深刻的发明”的征文活动，按提示要求写
一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
相当地：rather→ fairly
因此：thus→ therefore
广泛地：widely→ popularly
转移：transfer→ shift
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Mobile payment is rather easy to use, thus making it widely accepted.
拓展句：Mobile payment is rather easy to use, which makes it widely accepted.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When it comes to the most impressive invention, the first that jumps into my mind is
mobile payment, which means you can pay for your purchases using your smart phone instead of cash.（运用了
when引导的时间状语从句及which引导的非限制性定语从句和现在分词using作方式状语）
【高分句型2】Mobile payment is rather easy to use, thus making it widely accepted.（运用了现在分词making
做结果状语）
【高分句型3】There is no doubt that mobile payment has made our daily life much more convenient.（运用了
that引导的同位语从句）9．（2024届·四川攀枝花一模）
假定你是攀枝花中学高三学生李华。上周你参加了学校举办的主题为“Stories of China Told in English”的英
语演讲比赛。请你在兴奋之余，根据以下要点写封邮件给你的英国笔友John，介绍本次活动的情况：
1.演讲比赛基本情况（主题，时间，地点等）；
2.你的参赛情况；
3.你的收获。
注意：1.词数100词左右；
2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
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【答案】
Dear John,
I’m writing to tell you about the English speech contest I participated in last Friday afternoon in the school
lecture hall.
The theme of the contest is about Stories of China Told in English. I told stories about Beijing Olympics,
including the applying process and the final victory. In my speech, I covered the great efforts made by the officials
and the exciting moment when they made it. My fluent spoken English and my passion eventually earned me the
first prize. What a bonus! Personally, this kind of activity can kill two birds with one stone. lt can not only allow
students to improve their English skills, but also learn many Chinese stories that they may not know.
What’s your opinion on Stories of China Told in English? Looking forward to your sharing.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校即将举办主题为“Stories of China Told in English”的英文演讲比
赛，要求考生给英国笔友John写信告知他整个活动的相关情况。内容包括：演讲比赛基本情况（主题，时
间，地点等）、你的参赛情况和你的收获。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：participate in→ take part in
比赛：contest→ competition
提及：cover → refer to
最终地：eventually→ finally
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： I told stories about Beijing Olympics, including the applying process and the final victory.
拓展句： I told stories about Beijing Olympics, which included the applying process and the final victory.【点睛】【高分句型1】 I’m writing to tell you about the English speech contest I participated in last Friday
afternoon in the school lecture hall.（运用了省略引导词which或that的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】 In my speech, I covered the great efforts made by the officials and the exciting moment when
they made it.（运用了过去分词作后置定语和when引导的限制性定语从句）
10．（2024届·四川宜宾一模）
假定你是李华, 正在学习中国武术（martial arts）, 请给你的英国朋友Eric写一封Email, 分享有关情况。内
容包括:
1. 学习目的;
2. 时间安排;
3. 收获与感受。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Eric,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Eric,
How are you doing? Recently I have taken up the Chinese martial arts, which is great fun. Knowing that you
are keen on traditional Chinese culture, I think you may be interested in it.
Martial arts, also known as Wushu, is a traditional sport in China. I started practicing it last month in order to
build up my body and relieve the stress from study as well. As scheduled, we gather in the school gym to do the
sport twice a week. Our coach tells us that Wushu makes people feel a sense of calm, confidence and peace.
The one-month training has benefited me a lot. My health has improved significantly, and I have come to
understand the concept of good sportsmanship. Would you like to join me in practicing Wushu? Looking forward to
your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Eric写信，分享学习中国武术的目的，时间安排，
以及感受收获。
【详解】1.词汇积累
热爱：be keen on→be fond of
为了：in order to→so as to
减轻压力：relieve stress→release stress
集合：gather→get together显著地：significantly→greatly
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The one-month training has benefited me a lot. My health has improved significantly, and I have come to
understand the concept of good sportsmanship.
拓展句：I have benefited a lot from the one-month training, which not only helped me improve my health
significantly, but also deepened my understanding about the concept of good sportsmanship.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Recently I have taken up the Chinese martial arts, which is great fun.（运用了which引
导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】 I started practicing it last month in order to build up my body and relieve the stress from study as
well.（运用了动词不定式做目的状语）
11．（2024届·四川成都一模）
近来，人工智能聊天机器人程序ChatGPT成为热门话题，请你为学校英语社写一篇你对人工智能看法的文
章。要点如下：
1.人工智能的迅猛发展；
2.人工智能带来的影响；
3.中学生应该如何对待人工智能。
注意：1.词数：100左右(题目已给出，不计入总词数)；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Personal opinion about artificial intelligence
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【答案】
Personal opinion about artificial intelligence
Nowadays, ChatGPT, a kind of chatting software that can carry on natural conversation with human beings, has
become a hot topic. This implies that artificial intelligence, or AI, has entered a fast-developing period.
Personally, I think the development of AI will be on its own way and cannot be stopped by anyone or any country.
It will certainly bring us benefits like higher working efficiency, saving a lot of costs and resources. Of course, the
disadvantages are also obvious, the first of which is that large numbers of people have to face the problem of
unemployment.
As senior high students, we must first of all master what is necessary for our development. More importantly, we
should be aware what is going to be replaced by AI in the future, focusing on what is irreplaceable. We’ll not fear
AI, and instead we will make good use of it.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求你为学校英语社写一篇你对人工智能看法的文章，因为近来，人工智能聊天机器人程序ChatGPT成为热门话题。
【详解】1.词汇积累
阻止：stop→prevent/restrain
不利条件：disadvantage→defect/drawback/handicap
明显的：obvious→evident/apparent/distinct
意识到：be aware→realize
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It will certainly bring us benefits like higher working efficiency, saving a lot of costs and resources.
拓展句：It will certainly bring us benefits like higher working efficiency, which saves a lot of costs and resources.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Of course, the disadvantages are also obvious, the first of which is that large numbers of
people have to face the problem of unemployment.(运用了where引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】More importantly, we should be aware what is going to be replaced by AI in the future, focusing
on what is irreplaceable.(运用了what引导的宾语从句以及现在分词作状语)
12．（2024届·四川宜宾一模）
今年，你所在的城市开展垃圾分类活动，学校广泛宣传，你和同学都积极参与到此项活动中。请你为班级
英语角写一篇短文，介绍此项活动，内容包括:
1.基本情况；
2.具体做法；
3.个人感受。
注意:
1.词数100左右；
2.题目以为你写好。
题目:Waste Classification
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【答案】
This year, our city is carrying out a program, which called on everyone to throw rubbish into the right dustbin
according to the four categories. Teachers and students in our school takes part in the activity actively.
In order to protect our environment, the waste classification activity was launched last month in our city.
People are required to sort garbage into different categories such as harmful waste, recyclables and kitchen waste,
each of which is supposed to be thrown into a different bin. At first, people are confused about which category the
rubbish belonged to, but with the help of the posters, we're doing a much better job now.Waste Classification is environmentally friendly. In the long run，the result is well worth our efforts. Let's
work together to make our city more beautiful!
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍垃圾分类活动，内容包括：
基本情况；具体做法；个人感受。
【详解】1.词汇积累
参加：take part in→ participate in
从长远角度看：in the long run→ in the long term
在……帮助下：with the help of→ with the aid/assistance of
共同努力：work together→ make joint effort
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：In the long run, the result is well worth our efforts. Let's work together to make our city more beautiful!
拓展句：In the long run, the result is well worth our efforts, so Let's work together to make our city more
beautiful!
【点睛】[高分句型1] This year, our city is carrying out a program ,which called on everyone to throw rubbish
into the right dustbin according to the four categories. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] At first, people are confused about which category the rubbish belonged to, but with the help of the
posters, we're doing a much better job now.(运用了which引导的宾语从句)
13．（2024届·四川眉山一模）
假如你是李华，上个月你在国外某品牌官网上购买了一条围巾，打算送给妈妈作为生日礼物， 却在收货
时发现一些问题。请你就此给该网站写一封投诉邮件，要求如下：
1. 表明写信目的；
2. 反映问题；
3. 表达诉求。
注意：1. 词数 100 字左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：退款refund
To whom it may concern,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua【答案】
To whom it may concern,
I, as a devoted customer of your brand, feel bad to trouble you but I’m writing to make/file a dramatic
complaint about the scarf I bought at your official website last month.
In the first place, the woolen scarf intended for my mother’s birthday is of the wrong color, which is supposed
to be pink instead of blue. What’s worse, when checking it, I found a dirty mark on one end. What bothers me most
is the bad smell it gives off. It is astonishing that such a designer scarf should neglect its quality control, which
makes me extremely disappointed.
In view of the flaws listed above, I insist you give me a full refund or change a new one for me.
Thanks for your consideration and I’d appreciate it a lot if my demand could be met soon.
Looking forward to your timely reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给国外某品牌官网写一封信，投诉在此网站上购买的一条围
巾的质量问题。
【详解】1.词汇积累
①忠诚的：devoted →loyal
②令人惊讶的：astonishing→ surprising
③失望的：disappointed→ down
④要求：demand → requirement
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：What bothers me most is the bad smell it gives off.
拓展句：It gives off the bad smell, which bothers me most.
【点睛】[高分句型1] In the first place, the woolen scarf intended for my mother's birthday is of the wrong color,
which is supposed to be pink instead of blue. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] In view of the flaws listed above, I insist you give me a full refund or change a new one for me.(insist
后是省略that的宾语从句)
14．（2024届·四川宜宾一模）
上周末你校举办了“用英语讲中国故事”的演讲活动，请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1. 活动目
的；2. 活动内容；3. 活动反响。
注意：1. 词数100词左右；
2. 文中不得透露个人及学校真实信息。
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【答案】
Last weekend, our school held an English speech contest themed “Telling Chinese Stories in English” to
enhance our abilities of speaking English and deepen our understanding of Chinese culture.
The activity consisted of three parts. First, every contestant delivered his or her speech and then the judges
asked some relevant questions. The last part was evaluating and presenting awards to winners.
The activity turned out to be such a great success that it was highly praised by most of the participants. Thanks
to this activity, we get to realize it is our responsibility to spread Chinese culture to the world.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于新闻报道。要求考生报道上周末学校举办的“用英语讲中国故事”的演讲活
动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
比赛：contest→competition
提高：enhance→improve
包括：consist of→be made up of
意识到：realize→be aware
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Last weekend, our school held an English speech contest themed “Telling Chinese Stories in English” to
enhance our abilities of speaking English and deepen our understanding of Chinese culture.
拓展句：Last weekend, our school held an English speech contest themed “Telling Chinese Stories in English”,
which was aimed at enhancing our abilities of speaking English and deepening our understanding of Chinese
culture.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The activity turned out to be such a great success that it was highly praised by most of
the participants.（运用了such…that引导的结果状语从句）
【高分句型2】Thanks to this activity, we get to realize it is our responsibility to spread Chinese culture to the
world.（运用了省略that的宾语从句）
15．（2024届·四川泸州一模）
近年来，地球上的自然灾害越来越频发。假设你校英文报正在征集环保主题征文，请你写一封倡议书进行
投稿，呼吁大家关注自然灾害并保护环境。
内容要点应包括:
1.列举自然灾害实例;
2.提出一些必要的防范措施;
3.号召大家采取行动保护地球。
注意: 词数100左右;开头已给出，不计入总词数
As we all know, over the past years, floods, earthquakes and sandstorms have happened frequently.____________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
As we all know, over the past years, floods, earthquakes and sandstorms have happened frequently, such as the
earthquake that shook Tangshan on 28 July 1976 and the tsunami that crashed into coastlines across Asia on 27
December 2004. Therefore, as an individual, what should we do when a natural disaster happens? Take the
earthquake for example. Relevant measures are as follows.
First of all, we should know the emergency exit of the building in case we can escape to the open air when we
could. Furthermore, it is advised that we should stay under the solid objects with hands on heads if we cannot run
out. Last but not least, it is necessary for us to learn related knowledge about all kinds of natural disasters.
Because some natural disasters are caused by human activities, it is high time that we human did some things to
change. Let’s change words into action!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封倡议书呼吁大家关注自然灾害并保护环境。
【详解】1.词汇积累
导致：cause→lead to
因此：therefore→hence
此外：furthermore→what’s more
各种各样的：all kinds of→varieties of
2.句式拓展
状语从句变强调句
原句：First of all, we should know the emergency exit of the building in case we can escape when we could.
强调句：First of all, it is the emergency exit of the building that we should know in case we can escape when we
could.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Furthermore, it is advised that we should stay under the solid objects with hands on
heads if we cannot run out. (运用了虚拟语气，主语从句和条件状语从句)
【高分句型2】Because some of the natural disasters are caused by human activity and the earth is in bad
condition, it is high time that we human did some things to change. (运用了原因状语从句和虚拟语气)
16．（2024届·河南信阳一模）
《中国日报》正在开展以“Should We Read Chinese Classics?”为题的讨论，你受托对你校中学生读书类型
进行了一次调查。请根据以下调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.名著阅读现状；
2.你的观点。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】 Should We Read Chinese Classics
Recently, I conducted a survey on what books the students in our school like to read. The details are as
follows.
35 percent of the students prefer to read cartoons while 30 percent of the students like to read newspapers and
magazines. Some students spend much time in reading online novels. Surprisingly, only ten percent of them are
enthusiastic about Chinese classics.
In fact, reading classics is rewarding. It is beneficial to character development and personal growth.
Additionally, as the combination of great writing and wisdom, classics shouldn’t be left to gather dust on shelves.
From my perspective, we should read more classics and spread our traditional culture to the world.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。《中国日报》正在开展以“Should We Read Chinese Classics?”为题的
讨论，要求考生根据受委托对考生所在中学的中学生的读书类型进行调查的结果，写一篇短文给《中国日
报》投稿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
进行：conduct →carry out
喜欢：be enthusiastic about →be fond of
实际上：in fact →actually
此外：additionally →besides
2.句式拓展
用定语从句合并句子原句：Recently, I conducted a survey on what books the students in our school like to read. The details are as
follows.
拓展句：Recently, I conducted a survey on what books the students in our school like to read, whose details are as
follows.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Recently, I conducted a survey on what books the students in our school like to read.
（运用了what引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】35 percent of the students prefer to read cartoons while 30 percent of the students like to read
newspapers and magazines.（运用了while连接两个并列句）
17．（2024届·四川南充一模）
你校英文报正在进行征文比赛。请你以“Tough Times Never Last but Tough People Do (艰难的时光终将过
去，坚强的人必将苦尽甘来)”为题，写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1．对困难的认识；
2．你的个人经历；
3．表达你的期望。
注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Tough Times Never Last but Tough People Do
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【答案】
Tough Times Never Last but Tough People Do
Life is full of uncertainties, but one thing is for sure—we all run into times when we find it so hard to carry on.
In my opinion, those times are not meant to stop us, but to shape who we are.
Personally, without the great efforts it took me to get admitted to my dream high school, I wouldn't be able to
meet so many great teachers and classmates.
All tough times will eventually come to an end. Until then, all you need to do is keep calm and carry on.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于夹叙夹议文，要求考生以“Tough Times Never Last but Tough People Do (艰难的
时光终将过去，坚强的人必将苦尽甘来)”为题，给学校的英文报写一篇投稿，分享自己面对困难的经历及
认识。
【详解】1.词汇积累
艰难的：tough → hard
充满：be full of → be filled with
继续：carry on →keep on
塑造：shape → form
2.句式拓展简单句变复合句
原句：All tough times will eventually come to an end.
拓展句：All tough times that seemed to be rather tough at first will eventually come to an end.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Life is full of uncertainties, but one thing is for sure—we all run into times when we find
it so hard to carry on.（运用了when引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】In my opinion, those times are not meant to stop us, but to shape who we are.（运用了who引导
的宾语从句）
