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Years later, I might still remember that small library. It was a winter day when I
came to the library. The sunlight was bright but not warm, was a typical southern
winter day, windless out cold.
The winter vacation was crucial for me, and studying in the library could
efficiently improve my studies, I stood in front of the door with my backpack. On the
board on the door read: “Community Library". I pushed the door open, Behind the
service desk sat an old man with gray hair and dark skin, wearing reading glasses.
when he saw me, he pushed his glasses up.
“Hello, I live nearby, ly home is small and noisy. Can I study here?" I asked. The
old man looked me over and nodded. l then moved to a table in the corner. After
lunch every day, I would come to the library. Most of the time, it was just the old man
and me, and the only sound was the hum (嗡嗡声) of the old air conditioner.
When I felt too cold or tired of reading, I would get up and move around,
Gradually, the old man would ask me if I needed hot water. Sometimes he brought me
subject-related books, We had brief conversations sometimes.The old man grew up in
the countryside and didn't have much education. He worked in a factory when he was
young, and after retiring,he came to the community library to work.
Every day, l studied until sunset, When it was about time for the old man to get
off work, I would pack up and get ready to leave. Hie would also stand up and tidy
up. After I left, he would close the door, ending his day's work.
One afternoon, I went to the library to return some books. The old man was very
happy that day and handed me a book, saying, “ found a book on the far right of the
shelf in the corner. I'm sure you'll like it" I nodded, took the book, and thanked him.
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: A week later, I went to return the book, only to find an old lady
locking the door.
Paragraph 2: “Then why did the library close around 4 pm during the last few
weeks?” I asked.
某定制
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
Years later, I might still remember that small library. It was a winter day when I
came to the library. The sunlight was bright but not warm. It was a typical
southern winter day, windless out cold(环境描写，平淡中透露着预示).
The winter vacation was crucial for me, and studying in the library(动名词短语做主语)
could efficiently improve my studies.(给出在图书馆学习的原因) I stood in front of the door with
my backpack. On the board on the door read(主动表被动): “Community Library". I pushed
the door open. Behind the service desk sat an old man(全部倒装句) with gray hair and
dark skin, wearing
reading glasses
(现在分词做阿伯尿素动作). W
hen he saw me
, he pushed his
glasses up.
“Hello, I live nearby. My home is small and noisy. Can I study here?" I asked.
The old man looked me over and nodded. I then moved to a table in the corner.
After lunch every day, I would come to the library(变成习惯). Most of the time, it was just
the old man and me, and the only sound was the hum ( 嗡嗡声) of the old air
conditioner(环境描写).
When I felt too cold or tired of reading, I would get up and move around.
Gradually, the old man would ask me if I needed hot water. Sometimes he brought
me subject-related books. We had brief conversations sometimes.The old man grew
up in the countryside and didn't have much education(人物背景信息). He worked in a factory
when he was young, and after retiring, he came to the community library to work.
Every day, I studied until sunset. When it was about time for the old man to get
off work, I would pack up and get ready to leave. Hie would also stand up and tidy
up. After I left, he would close the door, ending
his day's work
(现在分词做伴随动作).
One afternoon, I went to the library to return some books. The old man was very
happy that day and handed me a book, saying(现在分词做伴随动作), “ I found a book on the far
right of the shelf in the corner. I'm sure you'll like it" I nodded, took the book, and
thanked him(动作串描写).
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: A week later, I went to return the book, only to find an old lady
locking the door.
Paragraph 2: “Then why did the library close around 4 pm during the last few
weeks?” I asked.
1. 文章分类及续写思路分析
文章类型：
该读后续写属于个人情感成长类，主题围绕“陌生人之间的温情”展开，核心
冲突是“图书馆老人突然消失”，隐含线索是老人可能因健康或其他原因离
开。
续写构思方向：
情感基调：温暖中带遗憾，最终通过回忆或新发现升华主题。
关键衔接点：
老人反常的赠书行为（伏笔：他可能预知自己无法继续工作）。
图书馆关门时间提前（冲突：老人健康状况恶化）。
续写框架设计：
段落
内容布局
技巧
第一段
发现图书馆关门，老妇人告知老
人病重/离世；通过环境描写（如
冷清的图书馆）强化情感冲击。
动作描写（“手颤抖着接过钥
匙”）、心理描写（“心沉了
下去”）。
第二段
老妇人解释老人提前关门的原因
（如带病工作），并转交老人留
下的书或笔记，点明主题（无私
的帮助）。
语言特色（老人方言化的留
言）、关键词重复（“阳光”
“嗡嗡声”呼应开头）。
o 续写注意事项：
承接原文：必须提到“老人赠书”的伏笔（如书中夹纸条）。保留“寒冷冬
日”“空调嗡嗡声”等环境意象。
设计技巧：用老人的方言短语（如原文“didn’t have much education”）增强真实
感。
通过动作链（如“锁门-转身-递书”）控制节奏。
2. 故事山模式与原文分析
故事山结构：
阶段
原文内容
续写方向
开端
主角因家庭环境选择图书馆学
习。
保持平静的日常。
发展
老人与主角建立默契互动。
老人行为反常（赠书）。
高潮
老人消失，图书馆关门。
揭露老人健康危机。
回落
老妇人出现。
传递老人心意。
结局
主角感悟温情。
通过书或笔记收尾。
伏笔与冲突点：
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
伏笔
老人赠书时
异常开心。
“The old man was very happy... ‘I’m sure you’ll
like it.’”
冲突点
图书馆提前
关门。
续写开头“old lady locking the door”。
隐含线索
老人带病工
作。
“the only sound was the hum of the old air
conditioner”（暗示孤独坚持）。
解决方案
老妇人解释
需通过对话和物品（书/笔记）解决。
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
真相，传递
温情。
3. 原文细节分析表格
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
人物刻画
老人朴实、不善言
辞但善良。
“He pushed his glasses up... nodded.”
情感层次
从陌生到默契的温
情。
“Sometimes he brought me subject-related
books.”
关键情节点
老人赠书。
“handed me a book... ‘you’ll like it.’”
语言特色
简洁白描，少修
饰。
“windless but cold” “the hum of the air
conditioner”
心理描写
主角对环境的依
赖。
“my home is small and noisy.”
动作描写
老人习惯性整理。
“stand up and tidy up.”
环境描写
寒冷与孤独感。
“sunlight was bright but not warm.”
隐含主题
平凡人的善意永
恒。
老人退休后选择图书馆工作。
情感转折
老人开心赠书→突
然消失。
需在续写中对比强化。
3. 动作、心理、环境
动作描写
1. He pushed his glasses up with a faint smile.
（他微微笑着推了推眼镜。）
2. She fumbled with the keys, her hands shaking slightly.
（她摸索着钥匙，手微微颤抖。）
3. I tucked the book under my arm and hurried toward the door.
（我把书夹在腋下，匆匆走向门口。）
4. The old man leaned forward, his voice barely above a whisper.
（老人向前倾身，声音轻得几乎听不见。）
5. She hesitated before turning the knob, her breath uneven.
（她在转动门把手前犹豫了一下，呼吸不稳。）
6. He shuffled through the shelves, his fingers brushing the spines of books.
（他在书架间缓慢走动，手指轻轻掠过书脊。）
7. I clutched the notebook tightly, afraid it might disappear.
（我紧紧攥着笔记本，生怕它会消失。）
8. The librarian sighed deeply before answering my question.
（图书管理员在回答我的问题前深深叹了口气。）
9. She wiped her eyes with the back of her hand, trying to compose herself.
（她用手背擦了擦眼睛，努力让自己镇定下来。）
10. He stood up slowly, his joints creaking with age.
（他慢慢站起来，关节因年老而发出轻微的声响。）
心理描写
1. A wave of unease washed over me as I noticed the empty chair.
（当我注意到空椅子时，一阵不安涌上心头。）
2. My heart sank at the sight of the locked door.
（看到锁着的门，我的心沉了下去。）
3. I couldn’t shake off the feeling that something was wrong.
（我无法摆脱那种不对劲的感觉。）
4. A flicker of hope ignited in my chest when she mentioned his name.
（当她提到他的名字时，我心中燃起一丝希望。）
5. Doubt gnawed at me—had I missed something important?
（疑虑啃噬着我——我是不是错过了什么重要的东西？）
6. Relief flooded through me when I found the note tucked inside the book.
（当我在书里发现那张纸条时，一阵宽慰涌上心头。）
7. A strange mix of sadness and gratitude settled in my heart.
（一种悲伤与感激交织的奇怪感觉在我心中沉淀。）
8. I bit my lip, unsure whether to ask the next question.
（我咬着嘴唇，不确定是否该问下一个问题。）
9. Memories of our brief conversations flashed through my mind.
（我们短暂交谈的记忆在我脑海中闪现。）
10. A lump formed in my throat as I read his handwritten words.
（当我读到他手写的字句时，喉咙一阵哽咽。）
环境描写
The winter sunlight streamed in weakly, casting long shadows.
（冬日的阳光微弱地照进来，投下长长的影子。）
The air inside was thick with the scent of old paper and dust.
（室内的空气里弥漫着旧纸张和灰尘的气味。）
The hum of the air conditioner was the only sound in the quiet room.
（空调的嗡嗡声是寂静房间里唯一的声音。）
A cold draft seeped through the cracks of the old wooden door.
（一阵冷风从旧木门的缝隙渗入。）
The shelves stood like silent sentinels, guarding their treasures.
（书架像沉默的哨兵一样矗立，守护着它们的宝藏。）
Outside, the wind howled, making the windows rattle slightly.
（外面，风在呼啸，使窗户轻微震动。）
The dim lighting gave the room a melancholic atmosphere.
（昏暗的灯光给房间增添了一种忧郁的氛围。）
The floorboards creaked under my footsteps, echoing in the empty space.
（地板在我的脚步下吱呀作响，在空荡的空间里回荡。）
The last rays of the setting sun painted the walls in golden hues.
（落日的余晖将墙壁染成金色。）
The silence was so deep I could hear my own heartbeat.
（寂静如此深沉，我甚至能听见自己的心跳声。）
4. 高级词汇替换 & 常见搭配分析
高级词汇替换（场景分类）
普通词汇
高级替换
适用场景
Cold
Chilly, Bitter, Frosty
环境描写（天气寒冷）
Quiet
Hushed, Serene, Still
环境描写（安静氛围）
Sad
Melancholic, Wistful, Somber
心理描写（忧郁情绪）
Old
Aged, Timeworn, Weathered
人物/物品描写（陈旧感）
Look
Gaze, Peer, Glance
动作描写（不同方式的
“看”）
常见固定搭配 & 词法解析
Push one’s glasses up（推眼镜）
近义词：Adjust one’s glasses
例句：
He pushed his glasses up and squinted at the small print.
She adjusted her glasses before continuing to read.
A wave of [emotion] washed over sb.（一阵情绪袭来）
近义词：A surge of [emotion]
例句：
A wave of nostalgia washed over her as she entered the old library.
A surge of anger made his hands tremble.
Heart sank（心沉下去，感到失望/悲伤）
近义词：Spirits dropped
反义词：Heart lifted
例句：
My heart sank when I saw the “Closed” sign on the door.
Her spirits dropped at the bad news.
Tuck sth. under one’s arm（把某物夹在腋下）
近义词：Clutch, Hold tightly
例句：
She tucked the book under her arm and hurried out.
He clutched the letter tightly, afraid to lose it.
Sigh deeply（深深叹气）
近义词：Let out a heavy sigh
例句：
He sighed deeply before answering the difficult question.
She let out a heavy sigh and leaned back in her chair.
可积累的语料（生词短语）
Fumble with sth.（笨拙地摸索）
词性：Verb
词义：To handle something clumsily
近义词：Struggle with, Grope for
例句：
She fumbled with the keys in the dark.
He fumbled for words, unsure how to respond.
Gnaw at sb.（折磨，使焦虑）
词性：Verb
词义：To cause persistent worry
近义词：Torment, Plague
例句：
Doubt gnawed at him as he waited for the results.
Guilt gnawed at her conscience.
Cast shadows（投下阴影）
词性：Verb phrase
词义：To create shadows
近义词：Project shadows
例句：
The trees cast long shadows in the evening light.
The lamp cast eerie shadows on the wall.
Compose oneself（镇定下来）
词性：Verb phrase
词义：To calm oneself
近义词：Collect oneself, Regain composure
例句：
She took a deep breath to compose herself.
He struggled to compose himself after the shocking news.
Settle in one’s heart（沉淀在心中）
词性：Verb phrase
词义：To become deeply felt
近义词：Take root, Embed itself
例句：
A sense of peace settled in her heart.
The memory settled in his mind, never to fade.
5. Possible Answers(3)
Version 1:
Paragraph 1:
A week later, I went to return the book, only to find an old lady locking the
door. My heart pounded as I approached her, clutching
the book tightly
(现在分词做伴随动
作). "Excuse me," I said, my voice trembling slightly(独立主格). "Where is the librarian?"
The old lady turned slowly, her eyes filled with sorrow(独立主格刻画人物形象). "He’s gone,"
she whispered. "His health worsened last week." The words hit me like a physical
blow. I remembered how he had handed me the book with unusual enthusiasm—
had he known it would be our last conversation?(虚拟语气)
Paragraph 2:
"Then why did the library close around 4 pm during the last few weeks?" I
asked, my throat tight. She sighed, her wrinkled hands gripping the keys(独立主格).
"He insisted on coming, even when he could barely stand. By afternoon, he was too
weak to continue." She reached into her bag and pulled out a small, worn notebook.
"He left this for you." Inside, I found notes in shaky handwriting—book
recommendations, thoughts on life, and a final message(名词并列): "Keep reading. The
world is bigger than this library." The winter sun, still bright but cold(adj 做主语补语),
seemed to carry his voice in the wind(寓情于景).
Version 2
Paragraph 1:
A week later, I went to return the book, only to find an old lady locking the
door. My stomach twisted with unease. "Is the librarian not here today?" I asked,
trying
to sound calm
(现在分词做伴随动作). The old lady hesitated before answering, her
sadness
palpable
(独立主格), her voice barely audible(独立主格刻画人物). "He passed away
peacefully three days ago." My breath caught. The book in my hands suddenly
felt heavier(无灵主语句，主动表被动). I recalled his last words—"I’m sure you’ll like it." Had he
chosen that book specifically(虚拟语气), knowing(现在分词做伴随动作) it might be his last gift?
Paragraph 2:
"Then why did the library close around 4 pm during the last few weeks?" I
asked. My voice cracked, my
mind
going
blank
suddenly
(独立主格刻画人物). She wiped
her eyes. "He was in pain but refused to leave earlier. He said students like you
needed this place." She handed me an envelope. Inside was a library card with my
name(全部倒装句), dated
the day
(过去分词做后置定语)he gave me the book. "For the girl who
loves quiet corners," he had written. The hum of the old air conditioner was
gone(环境描写衔接原文), replaced
by a silence
(过去分词做后置定语)that echoed his absence. Yet, in
that moment, I felt his kindness lingering, like sunlight on a winter afternoon.
Version 3
Paragraph 1:
A week later, I went to return the book, only to find an old lady locking the
door. My steps faltered as I
stared at the darkened windows
. "Where’s the usual
librarian?" I blurted out. The old lady’s shoulders slumped. "He was my brother.
He… left us suddenly." My chest tightened. The book he had given me—The Little
Prince—now seemed extremely rewarding for me. Had he meant it as a farewell?(虚
拟语气) I gripped it harder, as if it could
anchor me to the past
.
Paragraph 2:
"Then why did the library close around 4 pm during the last few weeks?" I
asked
. My voice was barely steady. She looked away, her fingers tracing the door
key.(独立主格刻画人物动作) "He was exhausted but wouldn’t admit it. He’d say, ‘Just a few
more hours for the book lovers, especially you.’" She pressed a folded paper into
my hand—a handwritten list titled
"Books for a Curious Mind
(过去分词做后置定语)." At the
bottom, he’d scribbled, "Stories outlive us all." The cold air bit my cheeks, but the
words warmed something deep inside. The library might be closed, but his
legacy wasn’t.
地道搭配 & 高级替换
普通表达
升级表达
例句
Sad
Grief-stricken, Wistful
Her eyes were wistful as she spoke.
Say
Murmur, Whisper, Utter
He murmured a quiet goodbye.
Hold tightly
Clutch, Grip, Grasp
She clutched the letter like a lifeline.
普通表达
升级表达
例句
Look
Peer, Gaze, Glance
He peered at the faded handwriting.
Walk slowly
Shuffle, Trudge, Falter
She shuffled through the empty library.
情绪描写亮点
"My heart pounded" (紧张) → "My heart hammered against my ribs."
"The words hit me like a physical blow" (震惊) → "The news struck me like a slap."
"A lump formed in my throat" (悲伤) → "Tears pricked at my eyes, unshed."
动作描写亮点
"She wiped her eyes" → "She dabbed at her tears with a crumpled tissue."
"He handed me the book" → "He pressed the book into my palms, his fingers
trembling."
"I gripped it harder" → "My knuckles whitened around the edges."
环境描写升级
"The winter sun was cold" → "The pale sun offered no warmth, only light."
"The library was quiet" → "A hushed stillness clung to the air."
