江苏省宿迁市马陵中学2025-2026 学年高二上学期期初学情调研考试英语试题
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文。
In high school, I was a straight-A student, a member of many school clubs, and
a receiver of many rewards(伏笔). However, I had been subjected to peer pressure(伏笔).
Wanting
to be “Cool”
(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I started going to parties and drinking, drunk
beyond recognition(过去分词做后置定语). My life took a turn for the worse. However, the
experience in one summer program taught me a lesson: never do something you
believe is wrong just to
gain the approval of others
(文章的中心已经很明朗了).
In June, I worked part-time at a restaurant. The day before I left for the
program, one co-worker offered me his driver’s license, telling
me to have fun in
Quebec(现在分词短语做伴随动作) since we two almost looked the same. I’d seen friends walk
into liquor stores with fake licenses and come out carrying a twelve-pack of beer,
smiling proudly(现在分词短语做伴随动作). So I took the license, but I promised myself that I
wouldn’t use it. However, I easily got carried away.
On the first night of the program, while walking around, my new friends and I
came across a liquor store. Kai asked if anyone had a fake license. After everyone
shook his head, I cleared my throat and declared, “I do.” With everyone’s admiration
and
Kai’s
twenty dollars and instruction
, I boldly agreed to take on the task without
thinking. I managed to buy a case of beer. The boys cheered and gave me pats on
the back. “You’re the man,” someone said to me. The praise boosted my self-
confidence.
The last night there was a party. A few of my friends insisted that we drink
before the dance. They asked me, the “ID man,” to buy alcohol. To earn their
admiration, I took the cash and bought what they wanted. Later that night, I was
enjoying myself when Kai said
nervously
, “Cristian isn’t okay.” Worried for my
friend(adj 做主语补语), I went to assess the situation. Clearly, Cristian was overly drunk and
almost unconscious.
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Suddenly, something went wrong: Cristian fell to the ground.
Paragraph 2: The next day, I was called to the program director’s office.
江苏省宿迁市马陵中学2025-2026 学年高二上学期期初学情调研考试英语试题
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
In high school, I was a straight-A student, a member of many school clubs, and a
receiver of many rewards. However, I had been subjected to peer pressure. Wanting to
be “Cool”, I started going to parties and drinking, drunk beyond recognition. My life
took a turn for the worse. However, the experience in one summer program taught me
a lesson: never do something you believe is wrong just to gain the approval of others.
In June, I worked part-time at a restaurant. The day before I left for the program,
one co-worker offered me his driver’s license, telling me to have fun in Quebec since
we two almost looked the same. I’d seen friends walk into liquor (酒) stores with fake
licenses and come out carrying a twelve-pack of beer, smiling proudly. So I took the
license, but I promised myself that I wouldn’t use it. However, I easily got carried
away.
On the first night of the program, while walking around, my new friends and I
came across a liquor store. Kai asked if anyone had a fake license. After everyone
shook his head, I cleared my throat and declared, “I do.” With everyone’s admiration
and Kai’s twenty dollars and instruction, I boldly agreed to take on the task without
thinking. I managed to buy a case of beer. The boys cheered and gave me pats on the
back. “You’re the man,” someone said to me. The praise boosted my self-confidence.
The last night there was a party. A few of my friends insisted that we drink before
the dance. They asked me, the “ID man,” to buy alcohol. To earn their admiration, I
took the cash and bought what they wanted. Later that night, I was enjoying myself
when Kai said nervously, “Cristian isn’t okay.” Worried for my friend, I went to
assess the situation. Clearly, Cristian was overly drunk and almost unconscious.
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Suddenly, something went wrong: Cristian fell to the ground.
Paragraph 2: The next day, I was called to the program director’s office.
一、类型归类与总体构思思路
项目
内容
续写类型
个人成长顿悟+道德抉择类+青春反思主题
主题主线
主人公在同伴压力下违背原则——经历危机（Cristian 醉酒出
事）——反思并觉醒——获得成长与教训。
核心冲突
“寻求认同” vs “坚持原则”
情感走向
自信膨胀 → 惊慌恐惧 → 内疚反思 → 成长觉悟
故事山模式
起（诱因）→ 承（行动）→ 转（危机）→ 合（觉醒与解决）
续写目标
① 承接危机场面（Cristian 倒地）；② 通过人物行动与心理描
写展现冲突与转变；③ 收束时回到主题“never do something
wrong just to gain approval”。
语言风格
情感真切、心理细腻、动作紧张、结尾升华。
关键词主题句
peer pressure / wrong choice / approval / realization / responsibility /
lesson learned
二、续写构思与布局思路
段落
内容布局
续写重点
语言策略
Paragraph 1:
Suddenly, something
went wrong: Cristian
fell to the ground.
危机爆发段（高
潮）
1. Cristian 倒地
——紧急混乱场
景（动作+感官描
写）
2. 叙述者的恐
惧、愧疚、慌乱
（心理描写）
3. 急救与反思初
现——意识到自
己的责任。
- 动作细节：crowd
gathered / I rushed /
trembling hands / called
for help
- 心理：panic, guilt,
regret
- 伏笔：意识到后果和
自我失控
紧凑叙述+短
句+动词群+心
理刻画（用感
官+对比）
Paragraph 2: The next 结局与反思段
- 心理转折：from shame 用反思句、比
段落
内容布局
续写重点
语言策略
day, I was called to the
program director’s
office.
（觉醒）
1. 被调查或谈话
（道德后果）
2. 内心自责与反
思（情感层次转
变）
3. 最终觉悟，升
华主题——“真
正的cool 是做对
的事”。
to realization
- 语言提升：It struck me
that… / I realized that… /
I learned that courage
means saying no.
喻句、主题句
收尾
三、续写注意事项
项目
要点
承接原文
- 人物与事件连续（同一时空：summer program）
- 用原文关键词衔接（peer pressure, admiration, alcohol, program
director）
- 保持人称与时态一致（第一人称过去时）
情节发展
- 围绕“Cristian 出事”展开，不添加无关人物
- 事件自然推进：倒地 → 救助 → 后果 → 反思
心理描写
要体现“由轻率到成熟”的成长弧线
结尾收束
与原文首段主题呼应，回到“never do something wrong for approval”
语篇衔接词
suddenly, meanwhile, in panic, later that night, the next morning, as I sat
alone, looking back, from that day on
四、原文分析表格（承上启下功能）
分析角度
内容
原文反映句
人物刻画
“我”是个聪明但渴望认同的
少年，受同伴影响做错事。
“Wanting to be cool, I started going to
parties and drinking.”
情感层次
自信 → 骄傲 → 惊恐 → 内“The praise boosted my self-
分析角度
内容
原文反映句
疚 → 觉悟
confidence.” / “Cristian isn’t okay.”
关键情节点
假证买酒 → 成为“ID man”
→ Cristian 醉倒 → 被叫到办
公室 → 反思成长
“Suddenly, something went wrong:
Cristian fell to the ground.”
语言特色
动作紧凑，心理暗示明显，用
第一人称增加代入感。
“I cleared my throat and declared, ‘I
do.’”
关键词分析
peer pressure, approval, fake
license, admiration, mistake,
lesson
多处出现“approval / admire / praise”
暗示主题冲突
心理描写
心理波动体现“自我认同”与
“群体压力”的斗争
“The praise boosted my self-
confidence.” / “Worried for my
friend…”
动作描写
买酒、递钱、倒地、救助等形
成故事动态
“I boldly agreed to take on the task.”
环境描写
夏令营环境、夜晚的party、
liquor store 等交代氛围
“On the first night of the program…”
隐含主题
真正的“cool”是自我克制与担
当，而非盲从。
首段结语：“never do something you
believe is wrong just to gain approval”
情感转折
骄傲自满 → 惊恐 → 悔悟
“Cristian isn’t okay.” / “I was called to
the program director’s office.”
空间转换
从liquor store → party 现场 →
director’s office
“Later that night…” / “The next day…”
时间过渡
首夜→最后一夜→第二天清晨
（时间推进连贯）
“The last night there was a party.” /
“The next day…”
五、伏笔与冲突分析
元素
内容
伏笔
① 拿到假证但“承诺自己不会用”；② 同伴Kai 的出现（诱因）；
③ “The praise boosted my self-confidence.”暗示失控即将来临。
元素
内容
冲突点
道德选择冲突——“是否使用假证”“是否为了认同继续买酒”
隐含线索赞美→虚荣→失误→后果→反思的因果链
解决方案经历危机→承担责任→反思教训→成长觉悟
六、续写设计
方面
建议
开头衔接
从“Cristian 倒地”入手，快速进入紧张氛围；用感官描写强化冲
突。
情节推进
加入“打电话求助”“被调查”“心中愧疚”等逻辑顺序。
心理转折
用“as I watched him lying there…”或“I felt my throat tighten…”等
句式过渡。
主题升华
结尾呼应首段主题：I finally understood what being “cool” really
meant.
语言表达
用多样句式：短句增强紧张感，复合句体现反思深度。
七、动作环境心理描写
动作描写
My hands trembled as I dialed the number for help.
我颤抖着手拨打求助的电话。
He collapsed onto the floor, his body limp and unresponsive.
他倒在地上，身体瘫软，一动不动。
I rushed through the crowd, my heart pounding wildly.
我冲过人群，心脏狂跳不止。
I knelt beside him, shaking his shoulders desperately.
我跪在他身旁，拼命摇晃着他的肩膀。
Tears welled up in my eyes as I tried to speak.
我试图开口，眼泪却在眼眶里打转。
He staggered backward, struggling to keep his balance.
他踉跄后退，努力保持平衡。
I froze in horror, unable to move or think.
我惊恐地僵住了，动也动不了。
I reached for his wrist, searching for a pulse.
我伸手去摸他的手腕，寻找脉搏。
The beer bottle slipped from my hand and crashed onto the floor.
啤酒瓶从我手中滑落，摔得粉碎。
I covered my face with both hands, ashamed of what I had done.
我用双手捂住脸，为自己所做的一切感到羞愧。
心理描写
Panic flooded my mind, drowning out every rational thought.
恐惧淹没了我的理智，让我无法思考。
A wave of guilt crashed over me as I realized my mistake.
当我意识到自己的错误时，一阵强烈的愧疚感席卷而来。
My stomach twisted in knots, filled with regret.
我胃里一阵绞痛，满是悔恨。
I wished I could turn back time and undo my foolish decision.
我真希望能倒转时间，收回那愚蠢的决定。
Shame burned through me, hotter than any flame.
羞愧在我心中燃烧，比火焰更炽热。
The laughter that once thrilled me now sounded distant and cruel.
曾让我兴奋的笑声此刻显得陌生而残酷。
I felt a lump in my throat as I faced the director.
当我面对主任时，喉咙哽咽，几乎说不出话。
For the first time, I saw how my need for approval had blinded me.
我第一次意识到，对他人认可的渴望让我失去了判断。
My heart sank as I thought of Cristian lying in the hospital.
一想到Cristian 还在医院，我心里沉了下去。
Relief washed over me when I learned he was out of danger.
得知他脱离危险后，我如释重负。
环境描写（Environmental Descriptions）10 句
The night air was thick with laughter and the smell of beer.
夜色中弥漫着笑声和啤酒的味道。
Dim lights flickered in the crowded hall, mixing excitement with chaos.
拥挤的大厅里，昏暗的灯光闪烁，兴奋夹杂着混乱。
A faint breeze drifted through the open window, cooling my burning face.
微风从窗外吹来，拂过我灼热的脸颊。
The street outside the liquor store glowed under the yellow light.
酒铺外的街道在昏黄的灯光下闪着光。
Music thumped from the speakers, shaking the floor beneath us.
音响里的节奏震动着脚下的地板。
Empty bottles lay scattered across the table, reflecting the neon glow.
空瓶散落在桌上，反射着霓虹灯光。
The hospital corridor was silent except for the steady beeping of a
monitor.
医院走廊寂静无声，只听见监护仪有节奏的滴滴声。
Morning sunlight streamed through the blinds, harsh and unforgiving.
晨光透过百叶窗，明亮而刺眼。
Rain tapped gently against the window as I sat in reflection.
我坐着反思时，雨点轻轻拍打着窗玻璃。
The once noisy dorm now felt painfully quiet.
曾经喧闹的宿舍此刻安静得令人窒息。
高级词汇替换
场景
基础词
高级替换词
例句
害怕/恐惧afraid
terrified / horrified / panic-
stricken
I was terrified when I saw him
collapse.
后悔
regret
remorse / guilt / repentance
A deep sense of remorse filled
my heart.
开心/高兴happy
delighted / thrilled / overjoyed
They were thrilled to see me
succeed.
生气/沮丧
angry /
sad
frustrated / furious / devastated
I was devastated by my poor
choice.
场景
基础词
高级替换词
例句
冷静/镇定calm
composed / collected / serene
She remained composed under
pressure.
典型搭配与地道表达
be subjected to peer pressure：受到同伴压力
seek approval from others：寻求他人认可
take a turn for the worse：情况变得更糟
get carried away：情绪失控，被冲动左右
walk into… with fake license：用假证进…
boost one’s self-confidence：增强自信
be overly drunk / be unconscious：醉得不省人事
be called to the director’s office：被叫去办公室
learn a lesson / learn it the hard way：吸取教训
do something against your conscience：违背良心做事
重点词汇语法与语义积累
peer pressure
✅
词性：n. 同伴压力
近义词：social pressure / influence from peers
反义词：independent thinking / self-control
例句：
Many teenagers give in to peer pressure to fit in.
She resisted peer pressure and stayed true to herself.
approval
词性：n. 认可，赞同
近义词：acceptance / praise / admiration
反义词：disapproval / rejection / criticism
例句：
He acted foolishly just to win others’ approval.
True friends offer advice, not blind approval.
remorse
词性：n. 懊悔，内疚
近义词：regret / guilt / repentance
反义词：indifference / satisfaction
例句：
He was filled with remorse after realizing his mistake.
Her eyes reflected remorse and shame.
collapse
词性：v./n. 倒下；崩溃
近义词：fall / faint / crumble
反义词：stand / recover / rise
例句：
Cristian collapsed onto the floor.
The bridge collapsed after years of neglect.
conscience
词性：n. 良心，道德意识
近义词：morality / integrity / sense of right and wrong
反义词：immorality / corruption
例句：
He couldn’t silence his conscience after the incident.
A clear conscience brings peace of mind.
可积累短语语料
against my better judgment （违背理智）
take responsibility for （承担责任）
in the heat of the moment （一时冲动）
come to one’s senses （恢复理智）
face the consequences （面对后果）
from that day on （从那天起）
with trembling hands / in panic / in shame （固定心理状态描写）
learn a valuable lesson （得到宝贵的教训）
be haunted by guilt （被内疚困扰）
make amends for one’s mistake （弥补错误）
十、 Possible Versions(4)
Version 1
Paragraph 1: Suddenly, something went wrong: Cristian fell to the ground.
For a second, everyone froze, staring at
him in horror
(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Then chaos
broke out. I rushed to his side, shaking
his shoulders desperately
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)
while someone dialed 911 with trembling hands. His face was pale, his breathing
shallow(独立主格). Fear gripped me(无灵主语句) as I realized the beer I bought might have
caused this. Minutes felt like hours before the ambulance arrived, its siren
piercing the night air(独立主格). I followed as they carried Cristian away, guilt
spreading through my body like poison(独立主格). That night, I couldn’t sleep, haunted
by the image of him(过去分词短语做原因状语) lying
unconscious
(现在分词短语做后置定语) and by the echo
of my own laughter earlier.
Paragraph 2: The next day, I was called to the program director’s office.
Sitting
in front of her
(现在分词做伴随动作), I felt my throat tighten. Before she could say
anything, I confessed everything — the fake license, the alcohol, the party. She
listened in silence and finally said calmly, “You’ll need to leave the program.”
Shame burned through me, but I knew she was right. On my way out, I passed
the empty hall where we had danced the night before; the silence reminded me
of the price of other’s approval. From that moment, I swore never to betray my
conscience again — not for admiration, not for belonging.
Version 2
Paragraph 1
Suddenly, something went wrong: Cristian fell to the ground. A bottle rolled
away, spilling
the last drops of
beer
(现在分词短语做结果状语) as everyone screamed.
I rushed
toward Cristian, who lay still, his breathing shallow(独立主格刻画人物). “Wake up!” I cried,
patting
his cheek
(现在分词短语做伴随动作). No reaction. My pulse raced, and fear gripped
my whole body.(无灵主语句刻画人物心理) Someone called an ambulance while I
kept
whispering apologies
. I could feel my throat tighten, tears welling up in my eyes.
The flashing lights of the ambulance painted the night red and blue, making
the
chaos even more unreal.(现在分词做结果状语) As they lifted Cristian onto the stretcher, my
legs gave way. I sat on the ground, overwhelmed by guilt(过去分词做主语补语). I knew it
was my fault. For the first time, I wished I had never wanted to gain the approval
of others.
Paragraph 2
The next day, I was called to the program director’s office.
My hands were cold
and clammy as I entered. I couldn’t meet her eyes. “Cristian is fine now,” she said,
“but this incident could have ended differently.” Relief mixed with shame. She
asked me quietly, “What have you learned?” Her question echoed in my head(无灵主语
句). “That being admired means nothing if it costs someone’s health,” I replied.
She nodded and smiled faintly, “Then you’ve grown.” When I left, the air outside
felt lighter, fresher, as if forgiving me. I took a deep breath and decided that
from then on, I would choose what was right, even when no one was watching.
地道搭配：
grip one’s body（恐惧笼罩）
flashing lights painted the night red and blue（环境动感描写）
legs gave way（双腿发软）
couldn’t meet one’s eyes（羞愧）
cost someone’s health（造成后果）
亮点词汇短语
pulse raced（紧张）
whisper apologies（懊悔）
tears well up（情绪爆发）
take a deep breath（释然）
升级替换与例句：
常用词
高级替换
例句
help
assist / rescue / aid
The staff came to aid Cristian.
cry
sob / whisper / gasp
I sobbed in regret.
serious grave / stern
The director’s expression was grave.
learn
grasp / realize / comprehend
I grasped the real meaning of
courage.
wrong improper / reckless / thoughtless
My behavior was reckless and
selfish.
Version 3
Paragraph 1: Suddenly, something went wrong: Cristian fell to the ground.
The laughter stopped instantly. The air grew heavy as I pushed through the crowd.
Cristian’s eyes rolled back, his body shaking slightly(独立主格刻画人物). Panic rose in my
chest like a tide. I fumbled for my phone, shouting
for help
(现在分词短语做伴随动作). The
siren’s wail tore through the night, echoing
my own fear
(现在分词短语做结果伴随动作). When
the ambulance left, I stood there frozen, Kai’s voice distant in the background(独立主
格刻画人物). That night, sleep refused to come(无灵主语句); guilt and fear chased me until
dawn(无灵主语句). I kept replaying the moment — my hand passing the bottle, his
laughter fading, his fall(独立主格).
Paragraph 2: The next day, I was called to the program director’s office. Her
calm tone made me feel even worse. I told her everything — every detail I wished
I could erase. Tears blurred my vision(无灵主语句) as she sighed, saying(现在分词做伴随动作),
“You’ve learned your lesson the hard way.” I left the office feeling
hollow yet
awakened(现在分词做伴随动作).Watching
the sunlight spill across the courtyard
(现在分词短语做伴随动作),
I understood that real courage wasn’t about being admired; it was about staying
true to what I believed. From that day on, I promised myself to be the kind of person
my conscience would approve of.
情绪描写亮点词汇/短语（Emotion）
panic flooded / guilt spread / shame burned / fear gripped / relief washed over
overwhelmed by remorse / frozen in horror / haunted by guilt / torn between
fear and regret
动作描写亮点词汇/短语（Action）
rush to one’s side / dial 911 / shake one’s shoulders / gasp for breath / cover
one’s face / fumble for one’s phone / sit on the curb / lower one’s head / walk
out in silence
环境描写亮点短语（Setting）
piercing siren / flickering lights / silent hall / the night air heavy with fear /
flashing red lights / morning sunlight streaming through blinds
词汇与表达升级语料
基础词
高级替换词
同义/联想词
例句
scared
terrified / horrified / panic-
stricken
frightened /
shocked
I was terrified when he
collapsed.
sorry
remorseful / guilt-ridden /
regretful
He was remorseful for what
基础词
高级替换词
同义/联想词
例句
ashamed
he had done.
sad
heartbroken / devastated /
downcast
depressed
I was devastated by the news.
think
realize / reflect / come to see perceive / grasp
I finally realized how wrong I
was.
say
admit / confess / whisper /
declare
tell / explain
I confessed everything to the
director.
地道固定搭配 & 短语积累
be haunted by guilt：被愧疚缠绕
take full responsibility for：为……承担责任
face the consequences：面对后果
learn a lesson the hard way：通过痛苦的经历学到教训
be driven by peer pressure：被同伴压力驱使
come to realize：逐渐意识到
make a firm decision to...：坚定决定去……
stay true to one’s values / conscience：坚守自己的价值观 / 良心
the silence spoke louder than words：沉默胜过千言万语
look back in regret：回首懊悔
例句积累
Haunted by guilt, I lay awake all night, replaying every moment in my
head.
被愧疚折磨着，我彻夜难眠，脑中反复回放着那个场景。
It was not the punishment that hurt me, but the realization of how easily
I’d lost myself.
让我痛苦的不是惩罚，而是意识到自己多么容易迷失。
The laughter that once made me feel proud now sounded like mockery.
曾让我自豪的笑声如今听起来像讽刺。
True courage lies not in pleasing others but in saying no when you should.
真正的勇气不在于取悦他人，而在于该拒绝时勇于说“不”。
Suddenly, something went wrong: Cristian fell to the ground. His face
was pale, his body was limp, his eyes rolled back, and his breaths were
frighteningly slow( 短句并列刻画人物). Panic spread through the room ( 无灵主语句) as we
realized the severity of the situation . We gathered around him, desperately
trying to figure out(现在分词短语做伴随动作) what to do next. Quickly, someone called
911 and Cristian was rushed into the hospital. Later I was told Cristian’s
condition was serious, but fortunately he didn’t suffer any permanent
damage as a result of timely rescue. The whole night found me tossing and
turning(无灵主语句), uneasy about
the mess
(adj 做主语补语) I had caused.
The next day, I was called to the program director’s office. I knew that
there was no point in denying the truth. So I admitted everything. Like a
caught criminal, I was overcome with guilt, drooping my head in shame (现在分词
短语做伴随动作). Then came the punishment(全部倒装句) that I lost the chance to join in the
program, which was less severe than what I’d expected. Back home, I
realized that I couldn’t continue down this path of seeking approval at any
cost. It was time to prioritize my values and I vowed not to let peer pressure
cloud my judgment and lead me astray again.
