专题10 议论文和说明文核心技法
议论文
议论文又叫说理文，是一种剖析事物、论述事理、发表意见、提出主张的文体。议论文应该观点明确、论
据充分、语言精炼、论证合理、有严密的逻辑性。议论文有三个要素：论点、论据和论证。
议论文要求学生要通过摆事实、讲道理、辨是非来确定某一观点正确与否，肯定或否定某种观点或主张。
正反观点对比类议论文是从正反两个方面说明某个观点，进而表达自己的看法。
2025 年高考上海卷作文
Directions: Write an English composition in 120–150 words according to the instructions given below in
Chinese.
人们常说“Don't be afraid of wetting your feet if you want to learn how to swim.”请你结合自己的经历
写出你对这句话的理解。
【试题解析】
本次写作任务要求围绕“Don't be afraid of wetting your feet if you want to learn how to swim（想学会
游泳，就别怕湿脚）”这一英文谚语展开写作，结合自身经历谈谈对这句话的理解。一种合理的方式是，
采用议论加记叙结合的写法，既要解释这句话的含义（寓意为“要学会某项技能或取得进步，就必须勇敢
尝试、迈出第一步”），又要通过具体的个人经历来支持这种理解，增强说服力。
【答案】
Don’t Be Afraid to Try
“Don’t be afraid of wetting your feet if you want to learn how to swim” means we must face
challenges bravely if we want to grow.
In Grade 10, I had to give a full English presentation about my hometown. I was excited at first, but
when I practiced at home, I kept forgetting my lines and mispronouncing words. After several failed
attempts, I felt frustrated and nearly gave up. I started to think maybe I just wasn’t good enough. But
my English teacher, Miss Li, noticed my struggle and encouraged me. She reminded me that mistakes are
a natural part of learning and that I should focus on progress rather than perfection. With her support, I
practiced harder and eventually gave the presentation in class. It wasn’t perfect, but I did it and I was
proud of myself.
That experience taught me that, much like learning to swim, it’s hard to improve without struggling or
making a few mistakes along the way.
【思路点拨】
议论文(1)——正反观点型
1．开头：提出问题；
2．主体：陈述不同的观点及其理由；
3．结尾：说明自己的观点。
议论文(2)——利弊对比型
这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发，最后
往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)。
1．说明事物现状；
2．事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)；
3．你对现状(或前景)的看法。
议论文(3)——解决问题型
第一段：引出现象，并指出这种现象的后果
第二段：提出解决的办法
第三段：总结这样做的好处
【写作模板】
模板一 不同观点列举型（选择型）
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion
concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一________. In their
views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore,
in the second place, ___原因二_____. So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____. People, however, differ in
their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______. In their point of view, on the one
hand， ___原因一_______. On the other hand, ____原因二_____. Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二
______.
As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __ 观点一或二______. It is not only because
________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more ________.
模板二 利弊型议论文
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)___ 作文题目______. In fact, there are both
advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several
positive aspects as follows. Firstly, ___优点一______. And secondly ___优点二_____.
Just As a popular saying goes, "every coin has two sides", __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another
word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, ___缺点一______. In addition, ____缺点二______.
To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __ 讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the
disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论
议题___.
模板三 答辩型议论文
Currently, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)__ 作文题目_______ .It is really an important
concern to every one of us.
As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem. As we know that there are
many steps which can be taken to undo this problem. First of all, __ 途径一______. In addition, another way
contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途径二_____.
Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文题目______, we should find a number of various ways. But as far
as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.
模板四 谚语警句型议论文
It is well know to us that the proverb: " ___谚语_______" has a profound significance and value not only in
our job but also in our study. It means ____谚语的含义_______. The saying can be illustrated through a series of
examples as follows. ( also theoretically ) A case in point is ___例子一______. Therefore, it is goes without saying
that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____谚语_____.
With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to
realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____ 谚语_____. The more we are aware of the
significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job.
【万能句式】
1）开头句：
It goes without saying that...不言而喻
It can be said with certainty that...可以肯定地说
As the proverb says,...正如谚语所说
It has to be noticed that...
It's generally recognised that...人们普遍认为
It's likely that...很可能
It's hardly ... that ... ...并不...
It's hardly too much to say that... 毫不夸张地说
2）衔接句：
A case in point is ...一个典型的例子是...
As is often the case,...情况经常是...
As stated in the previous paragraph,... 如前段所述，...
But the problem is not so simple. Therefore, we should take more details into consideration.
But it's pity that...
In spite of the fact that...
Further, we hold the opinion that...此外，我们认为...
However, the difficulty lies in...
What calls for special attention is that...
Similarly, we should pay attention to this from the very beginning.
3）引出观点句：
There are several reasons for ..., but in general, they come down to three major ones.
There are many factors that may account for ..., but the following are the most typical ones.
Many ways can contribute to solving this problem, but the following ones may be most effective.
Generally, the advantages can be listed as follows.
The reasons are as follows.
4）结尾句：
I will conclude by saying that...最后我要说
I can reach a conclusion that...
Therefore, we have the reason to believe that...我们有理由相信
All things considered, it may be safely said that...可以有把握地说
Therefore, in my opinion, it's more advisible for us to do ...更可取的是
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that...
The figures/statistics lead us to the conclusion that...
It can be concluded from the discussion that...
From my point of view, it would be better if...
To a certain/some extent, ...
5）灵活句式：
sb. cannot emphasize the importance if ... too much
There is no need for sb. to do sth.
On no account can we do sth.
What will happen to sb. if ...?
For the past+一段时间，sb. have (done sth./been doing sth.)
It pays to do sth. 做...是值得的
sth. is closely related to ... ...与...息息相关
do one's utmost to do= spare no effort to do
sth. have a great influence on sb.
Nothing can prevent us from doing
Upon doing sth, ... 一...就...
Hardly had sb. done sth. when sb. did
No sooner had sb. done sth. than sb. did
Only then could...直到那时
Nothing is more ... than to do sth.
There is no denying that...
There is no doubt that...
It is universally acknowledged that...
As is known to us,...
It is no wonder that ...
No wonder that...
So +adj. be sb./sth. that ... 如此...以至于...
adj. as sb./sth. be,... 虽然...但是...
The+比较级, the +比较级
It's time +主语+动词过去式
It's time for sth.
It's time for sb. to do sth.
（25-26 高三上·浙江·阶段练习）随着智能手机、在线学习平台等科技产品的普及，许多学生习惯用
“碎片化刷题”“短视频学知识点”等方式学习，而传统的“系统阅读课本”“整理纸质笔记”等学习方
式逐渐被忽视。请你根据以上现象，写一篇短文，谈谈你对这种现象的看法，内容包括：
1. 表明观点；
2. 说明理由；
3. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80 左右；
2. 请在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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【答案】
With the popularity of tech products, fragmented learning has become common among students. While it has
some merits, I think it can’t replace traditional systematic learning.
Fragmented learning helps save time and grasp small knowledge points quickly. However, it often makes
students focus on isolated information instead of building a complete knowledge system. What’s more, short videos
or quick exercises may reduce students’ patience for deep thinking, which is bad for long-term learning.
In my opinion, students should combine both ways. Use fragmented time to review key points, but spend
enough time on systematic reading and note-taking to understand knowledge thoroughly. This balanced approach
will boost learning efficiency better.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就许多学生习惯用“碎片化刷题”“短视频学知识点”等方
式学习的现象发表自己的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
优点：merit→advantage
代替：replace→take the place of
掌握：grasp→acquire
结合：combine→integrate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With the popularity of tech products, fragmented learning has become common among students.
拓展句：As tech products gain popularity, fragmented learning has become common among students.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 While it has some merits, I think it can’t replace traditional systematic learning.（运用
了省略that 的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】 What’s more, short videos or quick exercises may reduce students’ patience for deep thinking,
which is bad for long-term learning.（运用了which 引导的非限制性定语从句）
说明文
说明文是以说明为主要表达方式的一种文体，主要用于介绍事物、说明事理等。高考中，说明文常见的话
题有：产品介绍、地点描述、方位描写、变化分析、购物指南和操作说明等。
真题一 【2025 全国一卷】假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教 Jenny 提出“Fun at my
school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny 写一封邮件，内容包括：
(1)你的选择；
(2)说明理由。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80 个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper.
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____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
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____________________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper. I’m writing to express that my
predilection goes to “Guess who I am”, which capitalizes on an object clause to signal its potential contents.
The column will serve as a catalyst for closer bonds between students. Redoubling efforts to boost academic
performance, we pay little heed to other classmates’ personalities, hobbies, strengths, and even aspirations. Such an
inviting column, adopting a “description and guess” approach, must expose everyone to others’ characteristics, thus
strengthening mutual understanding. More importantly, more friendships will be forged, since the column enables
us to befriend someone on the same wavelength.
This eye-catching column, I’m firmly convinced, won’t fail to grant the whole class a harmonious
atmosphere.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就外教Jenny 提出的校英文报增设一个栏目，在“Fun at my
school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项中给出自己的推荐，并说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：express → convey
利用：capitalize on → use
担当：serve as → act as
注意：pay heed to → take notice of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Such an inviting column, adopting a “description and guess” approach, must expose everyone to others’
characteristics, thus strengthening mutual understanding.
拓展句：Such an inviting column, which adopts a “description and guess” approach, must expose everyone to
others’ characteristics, thus strengthening mutual understanding.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to express that my predilection goes to “Guess who I am”, which capitalizes
on an object clause to signal its potential contents.（运用了that 引导的宾语从句，which 引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】More importantly, more friendships will be forged, since the column enables us to befriend
someone on the same wavelength.（运用了since 引导的状语从句）
真题二【2018·全国I】
假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry 将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮
件，内容包括：
1．到达时间；2．合适的礼物；3．餐桌礼仪。
注意：
1．词数100 左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Terry,
How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the
Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some advice.
Firstly, I would like to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional
culture. Secondly, if I were you, I would bring some appropriate gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own
country. Besides, table manners are also what you should pay attention to. For example, you are not supposed to
stick your chopsticks into your food. Instead, laying them on your dish is a smart choice.
If you have any other problems, please don’t hesitate to contact me.
Yours
Li Hua
【思路点拨】
本文是一篇说明文写作。餐桌礼仪也是考生比较熟悉的话题。成文时注意以下几点：一、内容要点要
齐全1．到达时间；2．合适的礼物；3．餐桌礼仪。二、时态：主要用一般现在时和将来时；三、人称：
第二、三人称。四、注意使用恰当的高级词汇、短语或句型，以提高作文的水平；五、适当使用一些连
接词和插入语，使文章表达自然、流畅。
1. 浏览信息要点
2.三个任务点，第一段内容：问候对方，马上呈现对方所涉及的话题，拜访中国家庭，做客时间的要求和
忌讳! 第二段内容：做客拜访的合适礼物，可以适当延展，初次拜访，亲密朋友之间拜访，二次拜访，家
庭情况适合的礼物，通用的礼物等。第三段：table manners,可以描述两三个通常的中国人的餐桌礼节和忌
讳的地方，有鲜明特色之处，最后一句表达祝愿。
3.时态，给对方的建议和说明，用一般现在时，描述风俗礼仪这是客观规律性的东西，用一般现在时。
真题三 【2018 年新课标全国卷III】
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter 来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信，内容包括：
1. 学校的体育场馆；
2. 主要的运动项目；
3. 你喜欢的项目。
注意：1. 词数100 左右：
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【满分范文】
Dear Peter,
I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in
our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.
To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school.
Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football
as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I’m intoxicated with basketball since it has been
giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.
All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.
Yours,
Li Hua
【思路点拨】
本题作文为提纲式作文，形式依然是书信，体裁是说明文，即给英国朋友Peter 介绍学校体育运动情
况，属于学校生活话题。这一话题贴合学生生活的实际，学生并不陌生，有话可说。
首先可以介绍学校的体育场馆，场馆的位置，大小，开放时间等等。然后简要介绍学校主要开设的体
育项目有哪些，可挑选一到两个做详细介绍，如学生的活动时间，活动形式，以及此类活动的好处等。再
次简要分析自己喜欢的体育项目是什么，并简单分析喜欢的原因，自己从中得到的益处等。文章可主要采
用一般现在时态，第一人称的方式来写。
写说明文宜采用三段式：第一段主要介绍要说明的对象及说明的目的；第二段说明事物的主要特征或做事
情的方法步骤；第三段进行总结概括。时态通常用一般现在时。
模板01
介绍事物型说明文模板
Topic
①________ is a most effective _______to _______. ②For most people, it’s almost impossible to
______. ③________is really _________.④With the functions of _______,it enables us to _______.⑤It can even
______. ⑥Just imagine, all this can be done with _______. ⑦A convenient tool can certainly make _______,
but it doesn’t always help _______.⑧Too much _________.⑨Too many ________.⑩Relying too much on
_______ makes ________.
①点明要介绍的事物的必要性 ②介绍该事物对多数人的重要意义 ③该事物优势或显著特点 ④该事物
的作用 ⑤进一步说明该事物的作用 ⑥说明该事物的重要性 ⑦承上启下，介绍事物的另一方面 ⑧该
事物的负面影响一 ⑨该事物的负面影响二 ⑩总结说明过分使用该物品给我们带来的负面影响。
模板02
说明原因型说明文模板
Nowadays, there are more and more in some big cities. It is estimated that ____________________.（用具体
数据说明某现象）
Why have there been so many ? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first reason is
that __________________. （原因一）Besides, __________________. （原因二）The third reason
is __________________.（原因三）To sum up, the main cause of is due to__________________ .（指出主要原
因）
It is high time that something should be done. For one thing, __________________.（解决建议一）
For another thing, . All these measures will certainly __________________.（解决建议二）
模板03
描述事物型说明文模板
What I have known about is that _________________.（具体描述某事物）
Firstly, __________________.（描述要点一）__________________.（具体阐述要点一）Secondly, _____
_____________. （描述要点二）（具体阐述要点二）__________________. As a college
student, __________________.（结合自身描述要点三）
All in all, __________________.（做出总结）Therefore, we should __________________.（提出建议）
模板04
问题解决型说明文模板
In recent days, there has been a problem , which is becoming more and more serious.（说明问题及其现状）
First, __________________. Second, __________________.（进一步阐释现状）
We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ________. For another
thing, ________. Finally, ________.（列举解决该问题的方法）
Personally, I believe that ________/Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because
________.（结尾段，指出＂我＂的信心及理由）
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地点介绍型说明文模板
地理位置:___，the largest___ in our country, lies ___,with ___ on the north and ___ surrounding its southwest. To
the west of the ___.
面积人口资源:___ has an area of about ___ square kilo-meters and a population of over ___. It's rich in natural
resources, for example, bananas, rice,tea and so on, are famous both at home and abroad.The scenery is so beautiful
and the climate is so pleasant that travelers all over the world go in a continuous stream for a visit .
必备句型今昔变化对比
1. My hometown used to be a beautiful place, with thig trees and green grass everywhere.
2. It is the best place that I have ever visited.
3. In the past, children couldn't go to school because of poverty(贫穷).
4.Great changes have taken place in the past ten(few )years.
5.Our hometown has taken on a new look.
6.Our village is not what it used to be.
7.Thick trees and green grass can be seen everywhere.
8.Now the Chinese family has changed a great deal.
9.It is known to us all that the living standard of the Chinese people has greatly improved.
10.Nowadays, tall buildings have taken the place of old sheds.
11.Now our school is covered with green grass and fresh flowers, which makes the whole school a good place to
study in.
地域地貌
1. China is a large country with a long history and much population.
2.Zhengzhou, the capital of Henan Province, lies in the middle of China.
3.It has an area of 160,000 square kilometers with a population of over 90 million.
4.It is rich in natural resources such as coal and gold.
5.The weather is neither too cold in winter nor too hot in summer.
方位指路、图表说明
1.Our school is located at the foot of a green hill.
2.In the front of the school is a beautiful garden with a library on its left and a laboratory on its right.
3.Behind the garden is the classroom building.
4.At the back of the school are the students' dormitory and the dining-hall, in front of which lies the large sports
field.
5.The teacher's dormitory stands between A and B.
6.It is not very difficult to find your way from the Friendship Hotel to the station.
7.When you get out of the hotel, turn left and walk down the street until you see the traffic lights.
8.Turn right at the third crossing/turning, and you will see a post office at the corner. The museum is next/opposite
to it.
9.Go straight ahead until you get to the end of the street,
10.Please get across the bridge and go eastward.
11.No.25 Bus will take you right there.
12.It will take you about 10 minutes to get there.
13.It's about 10 minutes' walk /ride from here.
14.As can be seen from the chart,...
15. From the chart/picture/table we can see ...that the world population is increasing rapidly.
介绍节日精彩句型:
1. Last Sunday we celebrated... with.... in the school hall, during which we had a wonderful time.
2. Yesterday we organized a welcome party for the new exchange students.
3. We invited... to attend the party with us, which was held in...
4. We spent a happy afternoon/night with...and...
5. We had a great time together and we didn't go back home until...
6. We felt happy to have done something for the old and we made it a rule to...
7. This is the first time that I have enjoyed a Mid-Autumn Festival with my classmates.
8. How interesting the.. Festival is!
介绍运动音乐精彩句型：
1. At your request, I'd like to tell you something about my favourite...
2. I'm writing to reply to the questions you mentioned in your last letter.
3. What impressed me most is...
4. He/She is regarded/considered as one of the most...
5. One of the reasons I like...is that...
6. To achieve my dream of becoming..., I practise...as much as possible and sometimes I..
7. Please write and tell me about your favorite...and I hope...
8. I believe my dream of becoming...will come true as long as I...
9. Of all the sports, I like basketball/football .... best because I want to be ... when I grow up.
10. I'm glad to hear from you and I'm writing to tell you my favorite sport.
11. I like ... best and I have a dream of becoming a professional .... in the near future.
12. Becoming the champion of ... at the Olympics has long been my dream.
13. What's your favorite sport? Please write to share it with me.
14. I believe I can make my dream come true as long as I continue practicing hard.
15. I think I can achieve my dream of becoming ... in the future.
16. I want to become a to win honor for our country at the Olympic Games.
17. To make my dream come true, I will practice hard and never give up.
介绍书籍杂志精彩句型：
1. There
are thousands of kinds of newspapers/magazines in the world, among which I
like...most.
2. It is a daily/weekly/monthly...newspaper /magazine, whose purpose/aim is to...
3. As the saying goes, To open a book is always beneficial."
4. I'd like to recommend it to those who have difficulty/ trouble in...
5. It is a(n) international newspaper, which has an average daily circulation of..
6. It is one of the best-selling magazines, covering fitness, nutrition travel, technology, fash
ion and finance.
7. With the rapid development of the Internet, an increasing number of publishers begin t
o launch online magazines, also called e-zines, to fit the times.
8. 1 have been reading this newspaper/ magazine ever sine... I think it is of great help to
me.
旅游指导精彩句型：
1. Welcome to our scenic spot and we'd like you to pay attention to some safety regulations.
2. To make our tourist spot more popular, we've decided to...
3.Children are not allowed to enter/use.... unless they are accompanied by adults.
4. Besides, those who suffer from heart disease are also forbidden to...
5. Do remember the opening time is from 8am to 6pm.
6. If you have any further questions, please call us at..
7. We believe our scenic spot will leave a deep impression on you.
8. We hope that you will have a good time/ enjoy yourself/get great pleasure here!
【2021 年天津卷】假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了 《最
美中华》栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括：
(1)该地方的基本情况(如名称、地理位置等)；
(2)该地方的特色(如文化、景点等)；
(3)你对该地方的印象和感受。
注意：(1)词数不少于100；
(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
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【答案】
A Beautiful Place in China
March 19, 2021
By Li Jin
Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China. It enjoys many world-famous places of interest,
such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project.
Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province. What is the most impressive is
its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes. What’s more , walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance
to see rare animals like giant pandas, golden monkeys. There are also many species of rare plants protected here.
Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It dates from over 2,000 years ago. However, it is still
playing an important part in irrigation today.
I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiazhaigou as well as the construction
Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.
【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求给英文网站《最美中华》栏目投稿，介绍介绍一个国内你喜
欢或去过的地方。
【解析】第一步：审题
体裁：说明文
时态： 一般现在时
结构：总分法
第一段是文章的总起段，说明四川省有很多著名的景点；第二段介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程，
第三部分说明你对该地方的印象和感受。
要求：
1. 说明四川省有很多著名的景点
①四川的地理位置：中国西南部
②著名景点：九寨沟、都江堰灌溉工程
2. 介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程
① 九寨沟是自然保护区
②给人印象最深的层层叠叠的瀑布和五颜六色的湖泊，有很多珍稀动植物
③都江堰灌溉工程始于2000 多年前，现在仍然起着灌溉的作用
3. 你对该地方的印象和感受：九寨沟的美景和都江堰灌溉工程的建造会让你惊叹
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be located in；world-famous；places of interest；a nature reserve ；impressive；multi-level waterfalls；
have a chance to do…；rare animals；scenic spot；date from；play an important part in；be amazed by
第三步：连词成句
(1) Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China.
(2) It enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project.
(3)Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province.
(4) What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes.
(5) Walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals such as giant pandas, golden
monkeys.
(6) There are many species of rare plants protected here.
(7) Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.
(8) It dates from over 2,000 years ago.
(9) It is still playing an important part in irrigation today.
(10) I’m sure the visitors will be amazed by its construction.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇
1.表递进关系：what is more
2.表转折关系：however
3.表示列举：such as, like
【点睛】
[高分句型1]
What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes.（what 引导的主语从句）
[高分句型2]
Walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals such as giant pandas, golden monkeys.
（现在分词作状语）
Writing 1
（25-26 高三上·浙江·阶段练习）随着智能手机、在线学习平台等科技产品的普及，许多学生习惯用
“碎片化刷题”“短视频学知识点”等方式学习，而传统的“系统阅读课本”“整理纸质笔记”等学习方
式逐渐被忽视。请你根据以上现象，写一篇短文，谈谈你对这种现象的看法，内容包括：
1. 表明观点；
2. 说明理由；
3. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80 左右；
2. 请在答题纸的相应位置作答。
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【答案】
With the popularity of tech products, fragmented learning has become common among students. While it has
some merits, I think it can’t replace traditional systematic learning.
Fragmented learning helps save time and grasp small knowledge points quickly. However, it often makes
students focus on isolated information instead of building a complete knowledge system. What’s more, short videos
or quick exercises may reduce students’ patience for deep thinking, which is bad for long-term learning.
In my opinion, students should combine both ways. Use fragmented time to review key points, but spend
enough time on systematic reading and note-taking to understand knowledge thoroughly. This balanced approach
will boost learning efficiency better.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生就许多学生习惯用“碎片化刷题”“短视频学知识点”等方
式学习的现象发表自己的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
优点：merit→advantage
代替：replace→take the place of
掌握：grasp→acquire
结合：combine→integrate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：With the popularity of tech products, fragmented learning has become common among students.
拓展句：As tech products gain popularity, fragmented learning has become common among students.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 While it has some merits, I think it can’t replace traditional systematic learning.（运用
了省略that 的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】 What’s more, short videos or quick exercises may reduce students’ patience for deep thinking,
which is bad for long-term learning.（运用了which 引导的非限制性定语从句）
Writing 2
（25-26 高三上·福建厦门·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris 发来邮件，提及越来越多的同学
借助AI 完成作业，并询问你对此现象的看法。请你写一封回信，内容包括：
1. 你的观点；
2. 陈述理由。
注意：1. 词数80 左右；2. 可以适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
I’m very glad to hear from you. Regarding the phenomenon that more and more students are using AI to
finish their homework, I think it’s not a good practice.
Firstly, it won’t help students improve their own abilities. Secondly, it’s a form of cheating, which goes
against the principles of learning. Moreover, it may lead to a lack of independent thinking and creativity among
students. Additionally, students may become overly reliant on AI, which is not beneficial for their long-term
development.
We should rely on our own efforts to gain knowledge and skills.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就越来越多同学借助AI 完成作业这一现象，向英国笔友
Chris 表达自己的观点并陈述理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
高兴的：glad → pleased/delighted
完成：finish → complete
导致：lead to → result in
依赖：rely on → depend on
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We should rely on our own efforts to gain knowledge and skills.
拓展句：It is essential that we rely on our own efforts to acquire knowledge and skills.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Regarding the phenomenon that more and more students are using AI to finish their
homework, I think it’s not a good practice. (运用了that 引导的同位语从句，省略that 引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Secondly, it’s a form of cheating, which goes against the principles of learning.(运用了which 引导的
非限制性定语从句)
Writing 3
（2025·浙江·一模）假定你是李华，你校英文报将增加一个新的栏目“Fashion and Trends”。请你以编辑部
的名义写一篇创刊词，内容包括：
（1）创刊目的；
（2）栏目介绍。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80 个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear readers,
We are excited to announce the launch of our new column, “Fashion and Trends”.
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The editorial department
【答案】One possible version:
Dear readers,
We are excited to announce the launch of our new column, “Fashion and Trends”. It aims to share the latest
information about what is popular among young people today.
Here, you will find articles introducing popular clothing styles, useful gadgets, and hot online discussions.
We also feature opinions and tips shared by fellow students. We hope this column can inspire your creativity and
help you develop a unique personal style. We invite you to join us on this journey and look forward to your active
participation.
Let’s explore the fun world of fashion together!
The editorial department
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于校英文报将增加一个新的栏目“Fashion and Trends”这一
情况，以编辑部的名义写一篇创刊词。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激动的：excited → thrilled
观点：opinion → view
激励：inspire → motivate
激励：participation → involvement
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We are excited to announce the launch of our new column, “Fashion and Trends”.
拓展句：We are excited to announce the launch of our new column which is called “Fashion and Trends”.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It aims to share the latest information about what is popular among young people today.
（运用了连接代词what 引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】We also feature opinions and tips shared by fellow students.（运用了非谓语动词中的过去分词
短语作后置定语）
Writing 4
（2025·浙江·一模）假定你是李华，外教老师Jenny 准备在班里举办一次辩论赛，她给出了“Mobile phones
in class?”和“Group or individual study?”两个题目供大家选择。请给Jenny 写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.你的选择；
2.说明理由。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jenny,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Possible version l:
Dear Jenny,
I’d like to recommend “Mobile phones in class?” as our debate topic. It’s a practical and engaging issue that
affects all of us directly.
This topic sparks strong opinions. Some argue phones aid learning through online search and apps, while
others believe they distract students. A debate would help us weigh these views fairly. Plus, it encourages critical
thinking about technology’s role in education.
I hope this suggestion is helpful. It’s a topic everyone can relate to, ensuring lively discussions. Looking
forward to your feedback!
Yours,
Li Hua
Possible version 2:
Dear Jenny,
I’d like to suggest “Group or individual study?” as our debate topic. This is a meaningful choice that every
student encounters in their learning process.
Group study encourages collaboration and diverse perspectives, while individual study allows for
personalized focus. Some students thrive in team discussions, whereas others prefer quiet and independence.
Exploring both approaches would help us understand their respective strengths in different learning situations.
I believe this topic will lead to a practical and insightful discussion. It could even help classmates improve
their study habits. Hope you find this suggestion useful!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。外教老师Jenny 准备在班里举办一次辩论赛，她给出了“Mobile phones in
class?”和“Group or individual study?”两个题目供大家选择。请考生写一封信说明自己的选择和理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累：
①推荐：recommend→suggest
②引发：spark→trigger
③使分心：distract→divert
④帮助：help→assist
2.句式拓展：
同义句转换
原句：Some argue phones aid learning through online search and apps, while others believe they distract students.
拓展句：Some people hold the view that phones could aid learning through online search and apps, while others
think that they distract students.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】It’s a practical and engaging issue that affects all of us directly.（运用关系代词that 引
导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型 2】I hope this suggestion is helpful.（使用了省略连词that 的宾语从句）
Writing 5
（25-26 高三上·湖北武汉·阶段练习）假设你是明启中学高三学生李华，你校学生会即将进行最美校园毕业
照征集活动，拍摄地点不限，个人照或集体照不限。你对此非常感兴趣。请写一封邮件给学生会，除附件
照片外，邮件内容需包括：
1.照片的简单描述；
2.选择这张照片的理由。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80 个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答
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【答案】One possible version:
Dear Student Union,
Thrilled about the “Most Beautiful Graduation Photo” collection activity, I am attaching my photo for your
consideration.
The photo is a group shot of my classmates and me in the school library. We are sitting around a table, books
in hand, with bright smiles on our faces. The warm sunlight filters through the windows, casting a soft glow,
creating a cozy and harmonious atmosphere. I chose this photo because the library has been our second home
throughout high school. It witnessed our countless hours of hard work, heated discussions, and shared dreams. This
picture shows not only our academic journey but also the strong bonds we have forged.
I hope my photo can convey the beauty and significance of our school days.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学生会写邮件，参与最美校园毕业照征集活动，除附件照
片外，邮件内容需包括照片的简单描述以及选择这张照片的理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
温暖的：cozy →warm
选择：choose→select
兴奋的：thrilled→excited
表达：convey→express
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The photo is a group shot of my classmates and me in the school library.
拓展句：The photo, which is a group shot of my classmates and me in the school library, is my favorite one.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I chose this photo because the library has been our second home throughout high school.
(运用了because 引导的原因状语从句)
【高分句型2】This picture shows not only our academic journey but also the strong bonds we have forged. (运用
了“not only…but also…”连接的并列结构以及省略关系词that 或者which 的定语从句)
Writing 6
（25-26 高三上·吉林·阶段练习）假定你是李华，计划今年寒假独自前往新西兰旅游，想体验冰川徒
步和观星活动，但对当地天气、交通及安全注意事项不太了解。请你给新西兰旅游局写一封邮件，内容包
括：
1.介绍自己的旅行计划；
2.咨询具体问题；
3.请求提供当地官方旅游指南或推荐可靠的旅行机构。
注意：
1. 词数80 左右；
2.可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m a high school student from China and planning a solo trip to New Zealand this winter.
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Thank you for your help!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m a high school student from China and planning a solo trip to New Zealand this winter. My key goals are
glacier hiking and stargazing, as I’ve long heard of your stunning glaciers and clear night skies.
Could you advise on the winter weather for these activities and the best ways to get around, especially to
glacier areas? Also, what safety tips should a solo traveler note?
Additionally, could you provide official travel guides or recommend reliable local tour agencies? They
would be incredibly helpful for my trip.
Thank you for your help!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给新西兰旅游局写一封邮件，介绍自己的旅行计划，咨询
具体问题并请求提供当地官方旅游指南或推荐可靠的旅行机构。
【详解】1.词汇积累
活动：activity→event
方法：way→approach
应该：should→be supposed to
难以置信地：incredibly→unbelievably
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Could you advise on the winter weather for these activities and the best ways to get around, especially to
glacier areas?
拓展句：Could you advise on the winter weather for these activities and the best ways that I can get around,
especially to glacier areas?
【点睛】[高分句型1]My key goals are glacier hiking and stargazing, as I’ve long heard of your stunning glaciers
and clear night skies.（运用了as 引导原因状语从句）
[高分句型2]Could you advise on the winter weather for these activities and the best ways to get around, especially
to glacier areas?（运用了动词不定式to get around 作后置定语）
Writing 7
（25-26 高三上·湖北宜昌·阶段练习）假定你是李华，上周你参加了学校英语社团举办的以“镜头下的故事
(Story in a Minute)”为主题的短视频比赛，请给你的留学生朋友Chris 写一封邮件分享这次经历。内容包括：
(1)作品简介;
(2)你的体会。
注意：
(1)词数80 左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
(3)开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
How’s everything going?
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Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 8
（25-26 高三上·辽宁大连·阶段练习）随着经济的发展，越来越多的文化遗产（cultural relics）遭到破坏。
假设你是红星中学高中生李华，请给当地报社写一封信，就以下两个方面谈谈你的看法，内容包括：
1.文化遗迹的重要性；
2.呼吁人们保护文化遗产。
注意：1.要涵盖所给要点，词数80 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Editor,
I am Li Hua, a senior student from Hong Xing High School.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Editor,
I am Li Hua, a senior student from Hong Xing High School. I am writing to express my concern about the
increasing damage to culture relics due to economic development.
Cultural relics are invaluable treasures that connect us to our history and traditions. They reflect the wisdom of
our ancestors and help us understand our cultural identity. Without them, we would lose a vital part of our
heritage.
Therefore, I urge everyone to take action to protect these relics. We should raise public awareness, support
preservation efforts, and avoid destructive behaviors. Only in this way can we safeguard our cultural for future
generations.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生当地报社写一封信，就越来越多的文化遗产遭到破坏谈谈自
己的看法。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达：express → convey
帮助：help→assist
宝贵的：invaluable → precious
意识：awareness → consciousness
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：I am writing to express my concern about the increasing damage to cultural relics due to economic
development.
拓展句：I am writing to express my concern that our cultural relics are increasingly damaged due to economic
development.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Cultural relics are invaluable treasures that connect us to our history and traditions.(运用
了that 引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Only in this way can we safeguard our cultural for future generations.(运用了only+状语位于句
首，句子用部分倒装)
Writing 9
（25-26 高三上·福建厦门·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris 发来邮件，提及越来越多的同学
借助AI 完成作业，并询问你对此现象的看法。请你写一封回信，内容包括：
1. 你的观点；
2. 陈述理由。
注意：1. 词数80 左右；2. 可以适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
I’m very glad to hear from you. Regarding the phenomenon that more and more students are using AI to
finish their homework, I think it’s not a good practice.
Firstly, it won’t help students improve their own abilities. Secondly, it’s a form of cheating, which goes
against the principles of learning. Moreover, it may lead to a lack of independent thinking and creativity among
students. Additionally, students may become overly reliant on AI, which is not beneficial for their long-term
development.
We should rely on our own efforts to gain knowledge and skills.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就越来越多同学借助AI 完成作业这一现象，向英国笔友
Chris 表达自己的观点并陈述理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
高兴的：glad → pleased/delighted
完成：finish → complete
导致：lead to → result in
依赖：rely on → depend on
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We should rely on our own efforts to gain knowledge and skills.
拓展句：It is essential that we rely on our own efforts to acquire knowledge and skills.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Regarding the phenomenon that more and more students are using AI to finish their
homework, I think it’s not a good practice. (运用了that 引导的同位语从句，省略that 引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Secondly, it’s a form of cheating, which goes against the principles of learning.(运用了which 引导的
非限制性定语从句)
Writing 10
（2025·浙江·一模）假定你是李华，你校英文报将增加一个新的栏目“Fashion and Trends”。请你以编辑部
的名义写一篇创刊词，内容包括：
（1）创刊目的；
（2）栏目介绍。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80 个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear readers,
We are excited to announce the launch of our new column, “Fashion and Trends”.
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The editorial department
【答案】One possible version:
Dear readers,
We are excited to announce the launch of our new column, “Fashion and Trends”. It aims to share the latest
information about what is popular among young people today.
Here, you will find articles introducing popular clothing styles, useful gadgets, and hot online discussions.
We also feature opinions and tips shared by fellow students. We hope this column can inspire your creativity and
help you develop a unique personal style. We invite you to join us on this journey and look forward to your active
participation.
Let’s explore the fun world of fashion together!
The editorial department
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于校英文报将增加一个新的栏目“Fashion and Trends”这一
情况，以编辑部的名义写一篇创刊词。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激动的：excited → thrilled
观点：opinion → view
激励：inspire → motivate
激励：participation → involvement
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We are excited to announce the launch of our new column, “Fashion and Trends”.
拓展句：We are excited to announce the launch of our new column which is called “Fashion and Trends”.
【点睛】【高分句型1】It aims to share the latest information about what is popular among young people today.
（运用了连接代词what 引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】We also feature opinions and tips shared by fellow students.（运用了非谓语动词中的过去分词
短语作后置定语）
Writing 11
（2025·浙江·一模）假定你是李华，外教老师Jenny 准备在班里举办一次辩论赛，她给出了“Mobile phones
in class?”和“Group or individual study?”两个题目供大家选择。请给Jenny 写一封邮件，内容包括：
1.你的选择；
2.说明理由。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80 左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Jenny,
____________________________________________________________________________________________
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____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Possible version l:
Dear Jenny,
I’d like to recommend “Mobile phones in class?” as our debate topic. It’s a practical and engaging issue that
affects all of us directly.
This topic sparks strong opinions. Some argue phones aid learning through online search and apps, while
others believe they distract students. A debate would help us weigh these views fairly. Plus, it encourages critical
thinking about technology’s role in education.
I hope this suggestion is helpful. It’s a topic everyone can relate to, ensuring lively discussions. Looking
forward to your feedback!
Yours,
Li Hua
Possible version 2:
Dear Jenny,
I’d like to suggest “Group or individual study?” as our debate topic. This is a meaningful choice that every
student encounters in their learning process.
Group study encourages collaboration and diverse perspectives, while individual study allows for
personalized focus. Some students thrive in team discussions, whereas others prefer quiet and independence.
Exploring both approaches would help us understand their respective strengths in different learning situations.
I believe this topic will lead to a practical and insightful discussion. It could even help classmates improve
their study habits. Hope you find this suggestion useful!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。外教老师Jenny 准备在班里举办一次辩论赛，她给出了“Mobile phones in
class?”和“Group or individual study?”两个题目供大家选择。请考生写一封信说明自己的选择和理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累：
①推荐：recommend→suggest
②引发：spark→trigger
③使分心：distract→divert
④帮助：help→assist
2.句式拓展：
同义句转换
原句：Some argue phones aid learning through online search and apps, while others believe they distract students.
拓展句：Some people hold the view that phones could aid learning through online search and apps, while others
think that they distract students.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】It’s a practical and engaging issue that affects all of us directly.（运用关系代词that 引
导的限制性定语从句）
【高分句型 2】I hope this suggestion is helpful.（使用了省略连词that 的宾语从句）
Writing 12
（25-26 高三上·江西抚州·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你校即将迎来70 周年校庆，你班计划向母校赠送一
份礼物。请你给英国朋友David 写一封邮件，分享你们的设想，并咨询他的建议。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80 个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇：周年anniversary
Dear David,
I’m writing to share a plan with you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear David,
I’m writing to share a plan with you. As the 70th anniversary of our school approaches, our class intends to
give a meaningful gift to our school, and I’d like to get your opinions.
After heated discussions, we’ve come up with two ideas. One option is to donate a collection of classic
literature, aiming to enrich the school library and inspire the younger students’ love for reading. Another proposal is
to plant a memorial tree on campus, symbolizing our eternal bond with the school. This tree would grow alongside
future generations of students, bearing witness to their growth.
I’m eager to hear your thoughts. Which idea do you think is more appealing? Or do you have any other
creative suggestions? Your advice would be invaluable to us. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友David 写一封邮件，分享班级在毕业之际计划向
母校赠送一份礼物的设想，并咨询他的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
接近：approach→draw near
提出：come up with→put forward
选择：option→choice
有吸引力的：appealing→attractive
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：One option is to donate a collection of classic literature, aiming to enrich the school library and inspire the
younger students’ love for reading.
拓展句：One option is to donate a collection of classic literature, which aims to enrich the school library and
inspire the younger students’ love for reading.
【点睛】【高分句型1】As the 70th anniversary of our school approaches, our class intends to give a meaningful
gift to our school, and I’d like to get your opinions.（运用了as 引导的时间状语从句）
【高分句型2】One option is to donate a collection of classic literature, aiming to enrich the school library and
inspire the younger students’ love for reading.（运用了现在分词作状语）
Writing 13
（25-26 高三上·重庆·阶段练习）假定你是学校英语微信公众号 (English WeChat Official Account) 的
编辑李华, 外教 Mr. Smith 上个月答应写一篇介绍他最喜欢的英文电影的文章。请给 Mr.Smith 写一封邮件，
内容包括：
1. 询问进展
2. 提醒交稿日期。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Smith,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m writing to kindly check on the progress of the article about your favorite English movie, which you’ve
generously agreed to write for our school’s English WeChat Official Account.
We’re genuinely looking forward to your immensely valuable contribution. Not only can it offer authentic
cultural insights, but it can also motivate our students to engage more deeply with English through cinema. We
would be extremely grateful if you could submit your article by June 10th, as we are planning to feature it in our
early summer special edition.
Should you need any assistance to complete the work, we would be more than willing to reach out. I am
hoping to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。Mr. Smith 同意为学校英语微信公众号撰写关于最喜欢的英文电影文章，
要求考生向外教 Mr. Smith 写信询问文章进度并表达期待。
【详解】1.词汇积累
询问：check on→ inquire
宝贵的：valuable→precious
激励：motivate→encourage
非常：more than→extremely
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We’re genuinely looking forward to your immensely valuable contribution.
拓展句：We’re genuinely looking forward to your immensely valuable contribution, which we believe will greatly
enrich our English WeChat Official Account.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to kindly check on the progress of the article about your favorite English
movie, which you’ve generously agreed to write for our school’s English WeChat Official Account.（运用了which
引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Not only can it offer authentic cultural insights, but it can also motivate our students to engage
more deeply with English through cinema.（运用了not only...but also...的倒装结构）
Writing 14
（25-26 高三上·湖北宜昌·阶段练习）假定你是李华，上周你参加了学校英语社团举办的以“镜头下的故事
(Story in a Minute)”为主题的短视频比赛，请给你的留学生朋友Chris 写一封邮件分享这次经历。内容包括：
(1)作品简介;
(2)你的体会。
注意：
(1)词数80 左右;
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;
(3)开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Chris,
How’s everything going?
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文
Dear Chris,
How’s everything going? I’m writing to share my experience in the “Story in a Minute” short video
competition held by our school English club last week.
My video focused on the daily life of an elderly man in my neighborhood. It showed how he spent his days
gardening, reading, and chatting with neighbors, highlighting the simple joys in life.
Through this competition, I improved my English skills and video-making abilities. More importantly, it
made me observe life more carefully. I really enjoyed the process.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给留学生朋友Chris 写邮件，分享参加学校英
语社团举办的短视频比赛的经历，需包含作品简介和个人体会。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
聚焦于：focus on→ center on
强调：highlight→ emphasize
提升：improve→ enhance
举办：hold→throw
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： I’m writing to share my experience in the “Story in a Minute” short video competition held by our school
English club last week.
拓展句： I’m writing to share my experience in the “Story in a Minute” short video competition which was held
by our school English club last week.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】I’m writing to share my experience in the “Story in a Minute” short video competition
held by our school English club last week.(运用过去分词短语作后置定语)
【高分句型 2】It showed how he spent his days gardening, reading, and chatting with neighbors, highlighting the
simple joys in life.(运用 how 引导的宾语从句)
Writing 15
（25-26 高三上·湖南·开学考试）假定你是李华，你校英文辩论社将推出“思辨角”(Critical Thinking
Corner)专栏，负责此专栏的同学Alex 提供两个辩题方向供大家选择：“人工智能写作，助力还是消解创
作力?”(AI Writing: A Boost or A Drain to Creativity?)和“短视频盛行，丰富还是窄化认知?”(Short-video
Popularity: Enrich or Narrow Cognition?)。请你给Alex 写一封邮件，内容包含：
1.你的选择;
2.说明理由。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Alex,
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Alex,
I’m Li Hua, and I wholeheartedly recommend the topic “AI Writing: A Boost or A Drain to Creativity?” for
our Critical Thinking Corner.
This topic couldn’t be timelier, as AI-powered writing tools are now widely used in education and
professional writing. For example, students often use AI to check essays, while marketers rely on it for copywriting.
Discussing this issue enables a balanced exploration. AI can serve as a creative tool, offering fresh ideas and
correcting grammar. However, if we depend too much on it, our unique voices may fade, and writing could become
formulaic.
It will surely spark intense debate and deepen our understanding of technology’s role in creativity.
Best wishes,
Li HuaDear Alex,
I’m Li Hua, and I believe “Short-video Popularity: Enrich or Narrow Cognition?” is the perfect topic for our
column.
Short videos have spread through every aspect of our lives. Platforms like TikTok offer rich knowledge on
history, science, and culture, making learning engaging. Yet, there’s the other side. Algorithms tend to show us only
what we like, trapping us in information circles. As a result, our eyesight may narrow, and we miss out on diverse
viewpoints. Analyzing this phenomenon helps us use short-form media more wisely.
I’m convinced it will generate engaging discussions among our peers.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Alex 写一封邮件，阐述自己所选思辨角的话题和理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
真诚地：wholeheartedly→sincerely
依靠：rely on→count on
充当：serve as→act as
然而：however→nevertheless
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Discussing this issue enables a balanced exploration.
同义句：Having a discussion about this issue makes a balanced exploration possible.
【点睛】【高分句型1】This topic couldn’t be timelier, as AI-powered writing tools are now widely used in
education and professional writing.（运用了as 引导的原因状语从句）
【高分句型2】For example, students often use AI to check essays, while marketers rely on it for copywriting.
（运用了while 连接的并列句）
Writing 16
（25-26 高三上·山东·开学考试）假定你是李华，你校为庆祝建校50 周年，计划在英文网站增设纪念专栏
现面向全校征集栏目创意，请你给负责该专栏策划的外教Dr. Brown 写一封邮件，内容包括：
(1)栏目名称、设计理念；
(2)栏目内容、形式；
(3)栏目意义。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80 个左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Dr. Brown,
I’m excited to hear about the new column for our school’s 50th anniversary.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Dr. Brown,
I’m excited to hear about the new column for our school’s 50th anniversary. I propose “Memory Lane”,
featuring scanned letters and photos from alumni worldwide. Each entry will include a short story about their
cherished school memories. This column will bridge generations, allowing current students to appreciate our
school’s history while fostering alumni connections. Most importantly, it preserves precious traditions in a digital
era.
I believe this emotional approach will make the anniversary truly special.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给负责专栏策划的外教Dr. Brown 写一封邮件，提出自己关
于校庆纪念专栏的创意。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
提议，建议：propose → suggest
校友：alumni → schoolfellow
珍贵的：cherished → precious
培养，促进：foster → promote
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Most importantly, it preserves precious traditions in a digital era.
拓展句：What is the most importsnt is that it preserves precious traditions in a digital era.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I propose “Memory Lane”, featuring scanned letters and photos from alumni worldwide.
(运用了现在分词作后置定语)
[高分句型2] I believe this emotional approach will make the anniversary truly special. (运用了省略连词that 的宾
语从句)
Writing 17
（2025·浙江宁波·一模）假定你是李华，学校计划举办“时间胶囊创作大赛”（Time Capsule Creation
Competition），要求参赛者设计一个能反映当下校园生活的时间胶囊，10 年后开启。外教Ms. Green 负责
评审，现向大家征集设计思路。请给她写一封邮件，内容包括：
1．你设计的时间胶囊主题；
2．选择的物品及理由。
注意：
1．写作词数应为80 左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ms. Green,
I’m excited to share my ideas for the Time Capsule Creation Competition.
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【答案】One possible version:
Dear Ms. Green,
I’m excited to share my ideas for the Time Capsule Creation Competition. The theme of my time capsule is
“The Colorful Campus Life”.
In it, I’ll put a school uniform, representing the daily campus routine. A hand - drawn map of the school will
be included to show the layout. Also, a photo album filled with pictures of school events like sports meets and art
shows will be added. These items can vividly recall our wonderful campus life ten years later.
Looking forward to your comments.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给负责“时间胶囊创作大赛”评审的外教 Ms.
Green 写邮件，分享自己的设计思路，包括时间胶囊的主题、选择的物品及理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累：
激动：excited →thrilled
包含；包括：include →contain
布局：layout →arrangement
生动地：vividly →lively
句式拓展：
简单句变复合句
原句：Also, a photo album filled with pictures of school events like sports meets and art shows will be added.
拓展句：Also, a photo album that is filled with pictures of school events like sports meets and art shows will be
added.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】In it, I’ll put a school uniform, representing the daily campus routine.（运用了现在分
词作状语）
【高分句型 2】Also, a photo album filled with pictures of school events like sports meets and art shows will be
added.（运用了过去分词作定语）
Writing 18
（2025·广东惠州·一模）你的外教Mary 在口语课上组织同学们以“Music or sports: which do you prefer for
break time?”为主题，讨论大家喜欢的课间活动形式，请你代表小组发言，内容包括：
1.小组观点；
2.陈述理由。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hello, everyone.
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Thank you for listening.
【答案】Version 1:
Hello, everyone. I’m glad to share our group’s view on the topic. We recommend doing sports during
breaktime, especially group activities like running or playing basketball.
First of all, physical movement outdoors helps us refresh our minds. Additionally, while playing with others,
we build stronger teamwork and enjoy freedom from academic pressure. Better yet, compared to music, sports
symbolize vigour and connection, which allow us to keep a positive attitude throughout the day.
All in all, not only do sports improve our physical health, but they also bring us closer as a group.
Thank you for listening.
Version 2:
Hello, everyone. I’d like to share our group’s opinion on the topic. Our group prefers music, especially
gentle and calming tunes.
Initially, soft music relaxes us and refreshes our minds, temporarily freeing us from academic stress.
Meanwhile, focusing on beautiful melodies offers an escape from textbooks. Also of primary note, enjoying music
together encourages emotional expression, which not only strengthens connections among classmates but also
reduces feelings of pressure and isolation.
Briefly, not only does music ease our stress, but it also brings creativity and calm into our school day.
Thank you for listening.
【导语】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生代表小组就“Music or sports: which do you prefer for break time?”为
主题发表自己的观点。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→delighted
此外：additionally→in addition
压力：pressure→stress
总之：all in all→in summary
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：We recommend doing sports during breaktime, especially group activities like running or playing
basketball.
拓展句：We recommend that students should do sports during breaktime, especially group activities like running
or playing basketball.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Additionally, while playing with others, we build stronger teamwork and enjoy freedom
from academic pressure. (运用了while 引导的状语从句的省略)
【高分句型2】Better yet, compared to music, sports symbolize vigour and connection, which allow us to keep a
positive attitude throughout the day.(运用了which 引导的非限制性定语从句)
【2019·天津】假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动
期间，英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提
示给Chris 写一封电子邮件:
（1）你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；
（2）选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；
（3）希望从中有何收获。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100：
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
Dear Chris，
I'm Li Jim，a student at Chenguang High School.
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your time.
Yours，
Li Jin
【参考范文】
One possible version
Dear Chris,
I’m Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School. Learning that you will give us a presentation about art in
western countries during the coming summer holidays, we’re more than delighted.
Most of us prefer western painting. Several reasons may account for my preference. For one thing, I’m
interested to learn how western art has developed into what it is today through history, and the most influential
artists in each period of its development. For another, I’m crazy to learn how to appreciate western paintings. Last
but not least, It would be better if you can tell us some tricks about how to paint. I hope your presentation will
contribute to our better understanding of western paintings.
Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li Jin
【思路点拨】
随着时代的发展，电子邮件越来越受广大中学生的欢迎，所以写电子邮件是中学生经常做的事，这种
形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到熟悉。考生成文时应注意：1. 要点要齐全：(1)讲座的话题；(2)选
该话题的原因；(3)该话题你感兴趣的内容；(4) 希望从中有所收获2. 时态：以一般现在时为主；3. 人称：
第一人称为主，辅以第二人称；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅；5. 适当使用一些高级句
型和词汇以提高作文档次。
