浙江省杭州第二中学2025 年10 月高三年级适应性检测英语试题
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
My brother and I are only a year apart in age. When we were little, people
would ask if we were twins. We lived in the mountains and only had each other for
a long time, so we weren’t just brother and sister, we were best friends(交代背景信息).
Everything changed after our parents divorced(冲突伏笔). He went to live with my
father, I with my mother. Sometimes he visited us and sometimes I visited them, but
we grew more distant each time. By the time I was thirteen, we’d stopped hanging
out altogether. I think the only time we ever spoke was at Christmas, and it was all
polite but painfully awkward, like he was a complete stranger instead of my little
brother(刻画人物关系的变化，本篇文章的主旨基本清楚).
Several years later, after
being accepted to a major university
three thousand
miles away, I made a bold plan: to drive across the country on my own. The idea of
traveling alone thrilled me(无灵主语句), filling
me with excitement and a hint of
nervousness(现在分词短语做伴随动作), though I knew that the road could be lonely and
unpredictable—endless stretches
without seeing a single person
, and sometimes
even wild animals crossing out of nowhere(独立主格刻画路况)(这就是伏笔啊). My parents, however,
thought it would be safer if my brother came along as my travel companion on the
long drive to college(契机). Needless to say, we were both furious about the idea. The
last thing either of us wanted was to spend a week in a car together—he, with a
sister he barely knew, and I, with a “babysitter” I never asked for(我们2 个人的心理状态). But
it was settled.
Two weeks later, we set off. For the first six hundred miles, neither of us spoke
much unless absolutely necessary. The silence was thick with tension(情景描写), and it
didn’t take long before we argued over what music to play, how fast to drive, and
when to take breaks, each of us stubbornly sticking to our own way(独立主格刻画人物),
rolling
our eyes and
sighing
in frustration
(现在分词短语做伴随动作，人物刻画，像极了我们？).
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Just when I thought the trip would be unbearable, something unexpected
happened.
Paragraph 2: Still trembling from the accident, I realized he was holding my hand.
浙江省杭州第二中学2025 年10 月高三年级适应性检测英语试题
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
My brother and I are only a year apart in age. When we were little, people would
ask if we were twins. We lived in the mountains and only had each other for a long
time, so we weren’t just brother and sister, we were best friends.
Everything changed after our parents divorced. He went to live with my father, I
with my mother. Sometimes he visited us and sometimes I visited them, but we grew
more distant each time. By the time I was thirteen, we’d stopped hanging out
altogether. I think the only time we ever spoke was at Christmas, and it was all polite
but painfully awkward, like he was acomplete stranger instead of my little brother.
Several years later, after being accepted to a major university three thousand
miles away, I made a bold plan: to drive across the country on my own. The idea of
traveling alone thrilled me, filling me with excitement and a hint of nervousness,
though I knew that the road could be lonely and unpredictable—endless stretches
without seeing a single person, and sometimes even wild animals crossing out of
nowhere. My parents, however, thought it would be safer if my brother came along as
my travel companion on the long drive to college. Needless to say, we were both
furious (愤怒的) about the idea. The last thing either of us wanted was to spend a
week in a car together—he, with a sister he barely knew, and I, with a “babysitter” I
never asked for. But it was settled.
Two weeks later, we set off. For the first six hundred miles, neither of us spoke
much unless absolutely necessary. The silence was thick with tension, and it didn’t
take long before we argued over what music to play, how fast to drive, and when to
take breaks, each of us stubbornly sticking to our own way, rolling our eyes and
sighing in frustration.
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Just when I thought the trip would be unbearable, something unexpected
happened.
Paragraph 2: Still trembling from the accident, I realized he was holding my hand.
一、读后续写类型与构思框架
1. 故事类型
本篇属于，家庭兄妹亲情关系修复类叙事
2. 构思布局
段落
核心任务
情感走向
第一段
转折事件展
开
紧张→共同面对
第二段
情感升华解
决
恐惧→亲密重建
3. 续写实施要点
承接原文事项：
保持兄妹间的疏离感向亲密感自然过渡
延续“争吵-沉默-对峙”的行为模式在事件中转变
呼应开车旅行的具体情境（音乐、速度、休息等元素）
巧妙设计技巧：
利用“意外事件”创造被迫合作的情境
通过危机时刻的本能反应展现深层情感
用细节动作（如握手）替代直白抒情
二、故事山模式与文本分析
故事山结构：
开端：兄妹亲密 → 发展：父母离异关系疏远 → 高潮：被迫同行旅途争吵 →
转折：意外事件发生 → 结局：情感修复
伏笔与冲突分析
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
人物刻画
从亲密到疏远的兄妹
关系
“we weren’t just brother and sister, we
were best friends.” → “like he was a
complete stranger”
情感层次
表面愤怒掩盖内心孤
独
“both furious about the idea” → “the road
could be lonely and unpredictable”
关键情节点
父母强制安排同行
“My parents, however, thought it would
be safer if my brother came along”
语言特色
真实细腻的心理描写
“painfully awkward”, “the last thing
either of us wanted”
关键词分析
距离感词汇贯穿全文
“distant”, “stranger”, “three thousand
miles away”, “silence was thick with
tension”
心理描写
对独行的渴望与不安
“thrilled me, filling me with excitement
and a hint of nervousness”
动作描写
冲突中的身体语言
“rolling our eyes and sighing in
frustration”, “neither of us spoke much”
环境描写
旅途环境的孤独预示
“endless stretches without seeing a single
person”, “wild animals crossing out of
nowhere”
隐含主题
血缘亲情超越时空隔
阂
通过对比手法展现关系变化，暗示修
复可能
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
情感转折
从期待独行到被迫共
享空间
“I made a bold plan” → “But it was
settled.”
空间转换
山区家园→三千英里
旅途
“lived in the mountains” → “drive across
the country”
时间过渡
童年→青少年→大学
前的重要节点
时间跨度展现关系变化过程
三、关键信息提取
1. 心情反映句
“painfully awkward” (痛苦尴尬)
“both furious” (双方愤怒)
“thrilled me, filling me with excitement” (兴奋激动)
2. 动作描写句
“neither of us spoke much” (沉默不语)
“rolling our eyes and sighing” (翻白眼、叹气)
“stubbornly sticking to our own way” (固执己见)
3. 关键转折点
父母离婚分居
停止来往的决定
大学录取后的自驾计划
父母强制要求同行
4. 伏笔与冲突
伏笔处：旅途的孤独和不可预测性
野生动物突然出现的提示
兄妹曾经深厚的感情基础
冲突点：
个人独立愿望与家庭关怀的冲突
兄妹间的陌生感与血缘关系的矛盾
控制权争夺（音乐、车速、休息时间）
隐含线索： 深层的情感连接从未真正消失
解决方案： 通过共同面对危机，重新建立信任和依赖关系
四、续写设计建议
第一段应设计一个自然的危机事件（如野生动物，原文有伏笔），迫使兄妹合
作
第二段聚焦危机后的情感时刻，通过细微动作展现关系突破
保持语言风格一致，避免过度戏剧化，注重真实情感流露
确保结尾给人以希望但不过分完美，符合现实人际关系修复的渐进性
3. 动作、环境、心理描写
动作描写
He gripped the steering wheel tightly, his knuckles turning white.
（他紧紧抓住方向盘，指关节都发白了。）
I instinctively shrank back into my seat, bracing for impact.
（我本能地缩回座位，准备迎接撞击。）
Without a word, he reached over and turned down the blaring radio.
（他一句话也没说，伸手关掉了喧闹的收音机。）
She let out a shaky breath she didn't realize she'd been holding.
（她颤颤地呼出一口她都没意识到自己一直屏着的气。）
His hand flew to the dashboard to steady himself as the car swerved.
（汽车急转时，他一把撑在仪表板上以稳住自己。）
Tears welled up in her eyes, but she quickly brushed them away.
（泪水涌上她的眼眶，但她迅速把它们擦掉了。）
He offered me a bottle of water, his eyes still fixed on the road ahead.
（他递给我一瓶水，目光仍锁定在前方的道路上。）
We worked in sync, him checking the engine while I fetched the tools.
（我们配合默契，他检查引擎，我去拿工具。）
A faint smile tugged at the corners of his mouth for the first time.
（他的嘴角第一次泛起一丝淡淡的笑意。）
He pulled over to the side of the deserted road, the engine coughing to a stop.
（他把车停在荒芜的路边，发动机咳嗽着熄火了。）
心理描写
A wave of panic washed over me, freezing my thoughts.
（一阵恐慌席卷了我，冻结了我的思绪。）
My earlier fury melted away, replaced by a gnawing sense of guilt.
（我先前的愤怒消散了，被一种噬咬般的愧疚感所取代。）
I braced myself for another sarcastic remark, but it never came.
（我准备迎接另一句挖苦的话，但它始终没有来。）
A strange sense of calm descended upon me amidst the chaos.
（在一片混乱中，一种奇怪的平静感笼罩了我。）
My mind raced, searching for a solution, for any way out of this mess.
（我的大脑飞速运转，寻找解决方案，寻找任何摆脱困境的方法。）
All the resentment I had bottled up for years seemed trivial now.
（我积压多年的所有怨恨，此刻似乎都无足轻重了。）
I couldn't shake the feeling that I had been utterly selfish.
（我无法摆脱那种感觉自己无比自私的情绪。）
A glimmer of hope sparked in the depths of my despair.
（在我绝望的深处，闪烁着一丝希望的火花。）
The silence between us was no longer hostile, but contemplative.
（我们之间的沉默不再充满敌意，而是陷入了沉思。）
In that moment, the wall we had built between us finally crumbled.
（在那一刻，我们之间筑起的那堵墙终于坍塌了。）
环境描写
The sun dipped below the horizon, painting the sky in hues of orange and purple.
（太阳沉入地平线，将天空染成橙色和紫色。）
The relentless rain hammered against the windshield, obscuring our view.
（无情的雨点敲打着挡风玻璃，模糊了我们的视线。）
An eerie silence enveloped the car, broken only by the hum of the engine.
（一种怪异的寂静笼罩着车厢，只有发动机的嗡嗡声将其打破。）
Tall, dark pine trees loomed on either side of the lonely road.
（高大幽暗的松树矗立在孤寂道路的两侧。）
The vast, empty stretch of highway seemed to stretch into infinity.
（空旷绵长的高速公路似乎延伸至无穷无尽。）
A deer suddenly emerged from the thick fog, its eyes wide with alarm.
（一只鹿突然从浓雾中现身，它的眼睛因惊恐而睁得很大。）
The first rays of dawn peeked over the mountains, bringing a new hope.
（第一缕晨曦掠过山巅，带来了新的希望。）
The car was engulfed in a thick, impenetrable blanket of fog.
（汽车被 engulfed 在一层厚实而难以穿透的雾毯之中。）
Stars dotted the night sky like a million tiny diamonds.
（星星点缀着夜空，如同无数微小的钻石。）
The wind howled outside, making the car feel like a fragile shelter.
（风在外面呼啸，让汽车感觉像一个脆弱的庇护所。）
常见单词高级替换词 (Advanced Vocabulary)
分类
基础词汇
高级替换词1
高级替换词
2
适用场景
情感类
Angry
Furious / Indignant
Exasperated
形容极度愤
怒、愤慨或不
耐烦
Sad
Melancholy / Despond
ent
Grief-
stricken
形容深沉的悲
伤、忧郁或绝
望
Happy
Elated / Ecstatic
Jubilant
形容欣喜若
狂、兴高采烈
的状态
交流类
Talk
Mutter (咕
哝) / Exclaim (呼喊)
Utter (说出)
更精确地描述
说话的方式
Quiet
Tranquil (宁静
的) / Reticent (沉默
的)
Noiseless
描述环境安静
或人沉默寡言
变化类
Change
Transform (转
变) / Subside (平息)
Alter (改变)
描述关系、情
绪或状况的根
本性变化
Break
Collapse (崩
溃) / Fragment (碎裂)
Fracture (破
裂)
形容关系破裂
或希望破灭
状态类
Big
Vast (广阔
的) / Tremendous (巨
大的)
Immense (
无限的)
形容空间、规
模或程度的巨
大
分类
基础词汇
高级替换词1
高级替换词
2
适用场景
Small
Faint (微弱
的) / Subtle (细微的)
Slight (轻微
的)
形容希望、表
情或变化的微
小
4. 词法、搭配与语料积累
地道搭配
A year apart in age：表示年龄相差一岁的经典地道表达。
Grew more distant：grow + 形容词，表示“变得…”，比 become 更显动态和
渐进性。distant 既可指空间距离，也可指心理疏远。
The last thing either of us wanted：固定句式，“我们最不想要的事”，强调极
度不情愿。
It was settled：被动语态，表示“事情就这么定了”，蕴含一种不容置疑、被迫
接受的含义。
The silence was thick with tension：非常形象的搭配。“silence”被形容为
“thick”（浓厚的），充满了“tension”（紧张感）。
Rolling our eyes and sighing in frustration：roll one's eyes（翻白眼）和 sigh in
frustration（沮丧地叹气）是描绘不耐烦和恼怒的典型动作组合。
Sticking to our own way：stick to 坚持。形象地表现了双方的固执己见。
A bold plan：bold 形容计划“大胆的，冒险的”，比 brave 更侧重决策的果敢
和冒险性。
Thrilled me, filling me with...：thrill 使激动。fill A with B（用B 充满A）是表
达情感充斥的常用结构。
可积累的生词短语 (Vocabulary & Phrases)
unpredictable
词意/词性：adj. 不可预测的
近义词：uncertain, capricious, erratic
反义词：predictable, foreseeable, certain
例句：The weather in the mountains is highly unpredictable. / His mood is
as unpredictable as the weather.
furious
词意/词性：adj. 狂怒的，暴怒的
近义词：angry, enraged, infuriated, indignant
反义词：calm, pleased, delighted
例句：She was furious at being treated so unfairly. / My father will be furious with
me if I damage the car.
awkward
词意/词性：adj. 尴尬的；笨拙的
近义词：embarrassing, uncomfortable, clumsy
反义词：comfortable, smooth, graceful
例句：There was an awkward silence after his stupid remark. / I felt awkward about
having to ask for money.
tension
词意/词性：n. 紧张，紧张状态
近义词：stress, anxiety, strain, pressure
反义词：relaxation, ease, calm
例句：The tension between the two brothers was palpable. / Exercise is the ideal way
to relieve tension.
frustration
词意/词性：n. 挫折，沮丧，失望
近义词：disappointment, annoyance, exasperation
反义词：satisfaction, contentment
例句 : He shouted in frustration when he failed again. / Every job has its difficulties
and frustrations
bearable
词意/词性：adj. 可忍受的，忍得住的
近义词：tolerable, endurable, acceptable
反义词：unbearable, intolerable, insufferable
例句：The heat was barely bearable. / With painkillers, the pain becomes bearable.
tremble
词意/词性：v. 颤抖，战栗
近义词：shake, shiver, quiver
反义词：steady, stabilize
例句：Her voice trembled with emotion as she spoke. / I was trembling with fear
after hearing the strange noise.
stretch
词意/词性：n. 一片（地域/水域）；一段时间 v. 伸展
近义词：expanse, area, period
反义词：(作为名词) compression, contraction
例句：They drove fast along a lonely stretch of road. / For a long stretch of time, we
didn't see anyone.
5. Possible Versions(4)
Version 合作版
Paragraph 1: Just when I thought the trip would be unbearable, something
unexpected happened. We were winding through the mountains when, out of
nowhere, a wild animal leapt across the road. My brother turned the wheel
instinctively, and the car swerved violently. The sharp sound of tires filled the
narrow valley(无灵主语句) as we slammed into the guardrail, sparks flashing in the
darkness(独立主格). My body was thrown forward, my heart pounding so fast(独立主格)that
it drowned out every other sound. For a terrifying second, I thought the endless
stretches of road ahead would never see us again. The silence afterward was
deafening, broken
only by our
uneven
breaths
(过去分词做结果张宇). I remembered how
we had argued over what music to play, how fast to drive, and when to take breaks.
But now, pressed
against the cold metal rail
(过去分词做原因状语), those arguments seemed
so meaningless compared
with the fragility of life
(过去分词做方式状语). I turned to him, and
our eyes locked for the first time in years.
Paragraph 2: Still trembling from the accident, I realized he was holding my
hand. His hand was firm, his knuckles pale(独立主格), yet the warmth of his grip
steadied me(无灵主语句). In that grip, I felt not only his fear but also his care, something I
thought had vanished long ago. My voice quivered as I whispered, “That was
close.” He swallowed hard and nodded, muttering(现在分词短语做伴随动作), “I guess Mom and
Dad were right. Maybe it’s better if we’re together.” For the first time, I understood
the wisdom behind their arrangement: they hadn’t sent a babysitter but given me
back a brother. As we pulled ourselves together, laughter—thin but genuine—
escaped my lips(无灵主语句). The road ahead still stretched endlessly, but it no longer felt
lonely. With every mile, I sensed that what began as a forced journey was quietly
becoming a chance to rebuild
what we had
lost.
Version 1
Paragraph 1: Just when I thought the trip would be unbearable, something
unexpected happened. The car suddenly jolted as a deer darted across the
highway. My brother hit the brakes hard, and the tires screamed against the
road.(无灵主语句) My heart raced wildly, and for a moment, I thought we wouldn’t make
it. The car swerved to the side, skidding to a halt inches away from the guardrail(现在
分词短语做伴随动作). For a few seconds, silence filled the air except for our heavy
breathing(无灵主语句). In that instant of shared fear, I glanced at him and saw the same
shock mirrored
in his eyes
(过去分词做后置定语). The arguments over music and speed
seemed so trivial(无灵主语句) compared
with the danger
(过去分词做方式状语)we had just
escaped. My voice trembled when I whispered, “That was close.” He gave a small
nod, his lips pressed together(独立主格刻画人物), and I sensed the invisible wall between
us beginning to crack.
Paragraph 2: Still trembling from the accident, I realized he was holding my
hand. At first, the gesture stunned me(无灵主语句), but warmth spread through me
quickly, chasing
away the lingering fear
(现在分词短语做结果状语). His grip was firm, almost
protective, and it reminded me of the days when we followed my brother in the
mountains, inseparable and carefree(adj 做补语). The awkward distance of the past years
seemed to melt away with that single touch. Finally, he spoke, his voice low(独立主格),
“I’m glad you’re okay.” Tears pricked my eyes(无灵主语句), and I managed a shaky
smile, whispering
back,
(现在分词短语做伴随动作) “Me too.” For the rest of the journey, the
silence was no longer suffocating but comforting, filled
with shared memories
and cautious laughter(过去分词短语做后置定语). By the time we reached
my university
, I knew
the trip had given me more than just a new beginning at school—it had given me
back my brother.
亮点搭配与语料积累
动作描写：hit the brakes hard; swerved to the side; lips pressed together
情绪描写：heart raced wildly; invisible wall began to crack; warmth spread
through me
高级替换词：
scared → terrified / shaken / startled
close → narrow escape / by a hair / barely made it
silence → hush / stillness / quiet tension
例句积累：
His voice trembled with emotion, though he tried to hide it.
The memory of childhood adventures flooded back unexpectedly.
Fear tightened my chest, but relief soon followed.
The barrier of pride finally gave way to honesty.
Version 2
Paragraph 1: Just when I thought the trip would be unbearable, something
unexpected happened. Dark clouds gathered overhead(环境描写), and rain poured down
in sheets, blurring
the windshield
(现在分词短语做伴随动作). My brother gripped the wheel
tightly, squinting at
the faint outlines of the road.
(现在分词短语做伴随动作) Suddenly, the car
slid on the wet pavement, and my breath caught in my throat. We spun slightly
before regaining control, but the scare was enough to leave both of us shaken(无灵主语
句). The silence that followed was not one of irritation anymore, but of relief. I
could hear his quickened breaths, and I realized how vulnerable we both were in this
long journey. For the first time, I wanted to say something that mattered,
something more than complaints. But before I could find the right words, I felt his
presence differently—as if the years of distance were dissolving in the storm.
Paragraph 2: Still trembling from the accident, I realized he was holding my
hand. The moment
our hands touched
, I felt the steadiness in his palm despite
his shaking. His warmth anchored me like
the mountains of our childhood,
strong and reassuring(adj 做主语补语). My throat tightened, and I blurted, “I’ve missed
this…missed us.” He turned, his eyes soft(独立主格刻画人物), and whispered, “Me too.” The
storm outside continued, but inside the car, a fragile peace began to grow. We
started talking—about school, about music, about little things we used to share.
Laughter broke through the darkness like sunshine after rain(寓情于景). When the
road finally cleared, I no longer dreaded the miles ahead. Instead, I felt grateful,
because this journey had brought me closer to the brother
I thought I had lost
forever.
亮点搭配与语料积累
动作描写：gripped the wheel tightly; spun slightly; quickened breaths
情绪描写：my throat tightened; fragile peace began to grow; laughter broke
through the darkness
高级替换词：
happy → delighted / thrilled / overjoyed
rain → downpour / shower / pouring rain
afraid → uneasy / on edge / alarmed
例句积累：
A fragile bond can still survive years of silence.
His steady hand gave me courage in the chaos.
Sunshine always breaks through after the storm.
My chest tightened with words I longed to say.
Version 3
Paragraph 1: Just when I thought the trip would be unbearable, something
unexpected happened. A loud bang shattered the silence(无灵主语句)—the tire had
blown out. The car stumbled violently(无灵主语句), forcing
my brother to wrestle
with the steering wheel(现在分词短语做伴随动作). My stomach dropped, and I clung to my seat
as the vehicle slowed to a shaky stop on the roadside. Dust rose around us, and I
could hear both our hearts pounding in the quiet that followed. For the first time in
years, I looked at him not as an enemy but as the boy who once held my hand
when I injured my hand on
the
mountain
. The argument about music or speed
suddenly seemed childish. With shaky breath, I muttered, “That scared me to death.”
He gave me a quick glance, his eyes wide but gentler than before(独立主格刻画人物), and
something shifted between us.
Paragraph 2: Still trembling from the accident, I realized he was holding my
hand. The pressure of his hand was steady, grounding
me in the moment
(现在分词做伴随动
作). Though neither of us spoke at once, the silence was no longer heavy—it was
full of meaning. Finally, he whispered, “We used to be a team, remember?” My
eyes welled with tears, and I nodded, unable
to speak
(adj 做补语). In that quiet
roadside moment, years of distance seemed to vanish(无灵主语句). We patched the tire
together, talking
more than we had in ages
(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Every laugh felt like a
step back toward the bond we had lost. By the time we got back on the road, the
miles ahead didn’t feel like punishment but promise(无灵主语句). The journey to my
university had turned into a journey back to each other.
亮点搭配与语料积累
动作描写：wrestle with the steering wheel; clung to my seat; patched the tire
together
情绪描写：my stomach dropped; eyes stung with tears; silence was full of
meaning
高级替换词：
help → assist / support / lend a hand
look → glance / gaze / peer
silence → hush / stillness / pause
例句积累：
His glance was enough to tell me everything I needed.
The hush after the chaos carried its own weight.
Memories surfaced unbidden, soft but powerful.
Every shared smile felt like a bridge being rebuilt.
