第 03 讲 读后满分公式：情绪描写
读后续写·情绪描写
知识点1 无灵主语句 ·····································································································································1
知识点2 sb felt +情绪...助力情绪描写 ································································································4
知识点3 非谓语动词情感或用助力情绪描写························································································4
知识点4 形容词作状语助力情绪描写 ····································································································5
知识点5 独立主格结构助力情绪描写 ····································································································6
知识点6 with+情绪名词助力情绪描写···································································································7
知识点1
一 无灵主语句
把没有生命的东西，赋予生命力。用无生命的事物做主语，用人或行为名词做主语，
这种句子常常自带拟人化的修辞色彩和生动形象的效果，从而增加了主语的多样性，使语
言更加言简意赅，精准传神，这种句子便被称为无灵主语句。
普通句：He was anxious. 他很着急。
无灵主语句： A wave of anxiety enveloped/took hold of him.
一阵焦虑笼罩了他。
同样是表达“他很焦虑”，比起普通句式中的常见句子，无灵主语句中这种“焦虑笼罩了
他”的拟人化表达，瞬间提升了高级感！
无灵主语句高频名词：
开心、快乐、兴奋：happiness/joy/delight; excitement
感激：gratitude, appreciation, 形容词：grateful
满意：satisfaction; adj. satisfied
困惑：puzzlement; confusion
渴望：eagerness
钦佩：admiration
悲伤：sadness, sorrow,
遗憾悔恨：guilt, regret,
羞愧：shame
害怕：fear, terror, fright, panic
惊恐:horror
吃惊震惊：surprise；astonishment, shock,紧张焦虑：nervousness, anxiety
愤怒：anger, rage, fury
尴尬：embarrassed--embarrassment;
失望沮丧：disappointment; depression； despair
宽慰安慰：relief
鼓舞：motivation; inspiration; encouragement
无灵主语句高频动词：
s eize （抓住 ; 侵袭）；
grasp 紧紧抓住；
surround （围绕着）；
defeat （击垮）；
sweep （吞噬）；
wash over ；
flood over( 吞噬 ) ；
envelope( 包围；笼罩 )
overwhelm （使难以承受） ：
creep （爬，慢慢袭上）
swallow 吞噬，
well up 涌出，
surge n./v . 涌动，
sweep over 冲；席卷；
句式一：A sense/wave of +情感名词+动词+主语
1. A great sense of fear /tension slowly crept upon me. My face turned pale and I
stood there with my heart beating violently/wildly.
一种恐惧感/紧张感慢慢地袭上我的心头。我的脸色变得苍白，我站在那里，心跳得剧烈
地跳动着。
2.Gratitude surrounded him like a beam of sunlight, throwing him into a sea of
kindness and warmth.
感激之情像一束阳光包围着他，把他扔进了善意和温暖的海洋。
3. A wave of happiness and excitement seized/took hold of/swept over her.
她内心涌起一阵兴奋。
4. A strong sense of delight took hold of me the moment I heard the news/opened the
gift box.
在我听到这个消息的那刻，一种强烈/强烈的喜悦抓住了我。5. Laughter lingered around the room, and everyone felt warm and happy in the
depths of heart.
笑声在房间里萦绕，每个人的内心深处都感到温暖和快乐。
6. As I entered, he looked up from his desk, and a warm smile spread across his face.
我进去的时候，他从桌子上抬起头来，脸上露出了一个温暖的微笑。
【即时练】
1.当她得知测试的结果时，她感到一阵兴奋。
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【答案】A wave of excitement seized her as she was informed of the result of the test.
2.一种突然的悲伤感淹没了她，她忍不住哭了起来。
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【答案】A burst/sense of sadness overwhelmed her and she couldn’t help crying bitterly.
3.一想到考试失败，他就万念俱灰。
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【答案】Despair overwhelmed him at the thought of his failure in the exam.
4. 当我的名字被宣布时，一种兴奋之情涌上心头。
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【答案】When my name was announced, a sense of excitement surged through my heart.
知识点2
句式二：sb fel t a great sense of 情感名词... welling up in my heart
1. A wave of nervousness enveloped Jim as he delivered a speech.
当jim发表演讲时，一阵焦虑笼罩着他。
2. Jane felt a mixture of excitement and grievance welling up in her heart and surging
through her.
当她看到远处的直升机，混杂者激动和委屈的情绪在Jane内心升腾、奔涌。
3. Seeing his daughter safe and sound, he felt a great sense of relief welling up in his heart.看到他的女儿平安无事，他感到一种极大的解脱感涌上心头。
【即时练】
1. 看到他的丈夫和一个漂亮的女孩聊天，简感到一种强烈的嫉妒感在她的心中涌出，涌过
她，把茶杯扔向女孩。
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chatting with a beautiful girl, Jane felt a great sense of jealousy welling up in her heart and surging
through her，throwing the tea cup at the girl.
2. 那天我感到很平静，以至于我一个星期都没有使用它。
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【答案】I felt a sense of calm that day, which led to my not using it for one week.
3.Jimmy心里有一种巨大的悲伤涌进来，在门口痛苦地哭了起来。
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【答案】Feeling a great sense of sorrow welling up in her heart and surging through,
Jimmy cried bitterly by the door.
知识点3
句式三：非谓语..., 主语+谓语...
1. Seeing that Jim was unwilling to get up, her mother felt a great sense of anger
welling up in her heart and surging through her, shouting at Jim angrily..
看到吉姆不愿意起床，他的母亲感到一股强烈的愤怒在内心奔涌，生气地对他喊了起来。
2. Seized by a sense/wave of fear/tension/shock..., I was unable to utter a word.
被恐惧/紧张感所抓住，我一个字也说不出来。
3. Enveloped by a wave of nervousness as he delivered a speech, Jim sweated all over.
吉姆发表演讲时被一阵紧张所包围，汗流浃背
【即时练】
1. 他被小男孩的话深深打动了，于是同意了男孩的要求。
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【答案】Deeply moved by the little boy’s words, he agreed to the boy’s request.2. 像冰一样站着，从未想过我会陷入如此的两难境地，我感到无比尴尬和恐慌。
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【答案】Standing frozen as ice, never had I thought about being trapped in such a dilemma that I
was flooded with overwhelming awkwardness and panic.
3.听到这个消息时，他被一股震惊所抓住，待在原地一动不动。
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【答案】Seized by a wave of shock as he heard the news, he stood there rooted to the
spot.
4.听到这个好消息，他高兴地跳了起来，眼睛像闪闪发光的星星一样闪闪发光。
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【答案】Hearing this good news, he jumped up in happiness, with his eyes sparkling like shining
stars.
5.回想起那一幕，简非常后悔，忍不住哭了起来，泪水夺眶而出。
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【答案】Recalling the scene, so regretful was Jane that she couldn’t stop crying, tears
sparking out her eyes.
知识点4
句式四：形容词短语作状语
1. Greatly surprised d, I read diary after diary.
感到极度惊讶，我一篇接一篇地看着日记。
2. Thrilled , Jane quickened pace and sprinted to the helicopter, knowing that she would
be rescued eventually.
简欣喜若狂，加快了步伐，向直升机冲去，她知道自己终于获救了。
3. Scared, he stood still for a moment, not believing what had just happened.
感到非常害怕，他一动不动站在那好一会，不敢相信刚才发生的一切。
4. Old or young, the peasants are busy with autumn harvest.
不论老少，农民们都在忙着秋收。【即时练】
1.又意外又开心，他站起身来去领奖。
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【答案】Surprised and delighted, he stood up to accept the prize.
2.绝望地，Jane 跪了下来，眼泪顺着她的脸颊流了下来。
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【答案】Desperate, Jane knelt down, with tears rolling down her cheeks.
3. 我们兴奋地, 迫不及待地想要和外国学生交换礼物，以表达我们彼此真挚的友谊。
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【答案】Excited, we couldn’t wait to exchange gifts with the foreign students，conveying
our sincere friendship to each other.
4.他们强行冲进叔叔的卧室，发现那个人躺在地板上，已经死了。
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【答案】They broke into the uncle’s bedroom and found the man lying on the floor,
dead.
5.他安然无恙地从战争中归来。
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【答案】He returned from war, safe and sound.
6.小偷躲在角落里，担心被人抓住。
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【答案】The thief hid himself in the corner, afraid of being caught.
知识点5
句式五：身体部位+非谓语的独立主格结构
1. David kept on running, sweat streaming down his face.
自信而坚定，大卫继续奔跑，汗水顺着他的脸流下来。
2. To our great joy, David crossed the finish line smoothly, his face shining with
satisfied delight.
让我们欣喜若狂的是，大卫顺利越过终点线，脸上闪耀着满足的喜悦。
3. The children, their faces shining with joy, ran towards the park.
孩子们满脸喜悦地跑向公园。
4. She sat alone, tears streaming down her face.
她独自坐着，泪水顺着脸颊留下来。
5 The boss, his voice rising, demanded an explanation.
老板声音提高，要求一个解释。
知识点6
句式六：主语+谓语...，with+情绪名词
动作而伴随的情感，常用下列情感类名词：
伴随着高兴、快乐、激动：delight, joy, happiness, thrill, excitement；
伴随着伤心、悲伤：sadness, sorrow, grief；
伴随着生气、愤怒：anger, rage；
伴随着恐惧、害怕：fear, horror, scare, terror, fright;
伴随着惊讶：surprise, astonishment, shock等。
1. Frozen with fear, he couldn’t utter a word.
害怕地一动不动，他一个字也说不出来。
2. He was tongue-tied with anger.
他因生气而说不出话来。
3. People around smiled with satisfaction.
周围的人满意地笑了。
4. With my eyes full of tears, I rushed out of the flat and ran along the street.
我热泪盈眶，冲出公寓，沿着街道跑。
【即时练】
1. 跟老师讲出真相后，她不安地坐在座位上，手指交叉着，心跳得像打鼓一样。
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【答案】Having told the teacher the truth, she sat restlessly in her seat with her fingers crossed
and her heart pounding like a drum.
2. 用灼热的目光怒视着我，他几乎控制不住自己的怒火，声音因愤怒而颤抖。
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【答案】Glaring at me with burning eyes, he could hardly/scarcely contain his rage, his voice
trembling with anger.
3. 觉得冷得无法忍受，精疲力竭，完全不知道该如何应对这种可怕的情况。
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【答案】Feeling unbearably cold and extremely exhausted, Jane was quite at a loss as to how to
cope with the terrible situation.
4. 一瞬间，泪水涌上眼眶，我感动的说不出话。
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【答案】In a flash, with tears welling up in my eyes, I was touched beyond words.
5. 听到这话，Bob感到很尴尬，扭动并使劲揉搓他的手，似乎是想在这刺骨的冬日里取暖。
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【答案】On hearing this, Bob became embarrassed, twisting and rubbing his hands () over and
over again seemingly to get warm in this freezing winter.
6. 从未想过我会陷入如此的两难境地，我感到无比尴尬和恐慌。
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【答案】Standing frozen as ice, never had I thought about being trapped in such a dilemma that Iwas flooded with overwhelming awkwardness and panic.
7. 看着他自信的微笑，我的心中也涌起了喜悦。
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【答案】At the sight of his confident smile, a sense of joy swept over / flooded over me.
8. 听见他说的话，Alice咧开嘴笑，一股幸福的浪潮涌上她的心头。
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【答案】Hearing what he said, Alice grinned from ear to ear, a wave of happiness
flooding over her.
9. 我们好奇而兴奋, 迫不及待地想要和外国学生交换礼物，以表达我们彼此真挚的友谊。
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【答案】Curious and excited, we couldn’t wait to exchange gifts with the foreign
students，conveying our sincere friendship to each other.
10. 非常兴奋，我们全神贯注地和同学商讨着并写下我们的建议，希望能帮助解决这个问
题。
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【答案】Excited and whole –hearted, we were discussing with our classmates and writing down
our suggestions, hoping to help solve the problem.
