第 06 讲 读后续写动作描写动作链
读后续写·负面情绪必背
一 利用and形成动作链 ······························································································································1
二 利用非谓语形成动作链····························································································································2
三 利用精彩纷呈不同动词“说”形成动作链 ····················································································4
知识点1
一 利用and形成动作链
1.She folded her arms and stared at him.
她抱起双臂，盯着他看。
2. I tapped the man on the shoulder and asked him to move.
我拍了拍那名男子的肩膀，让他挪动一下。
3. She buried her face in her handkerchief and sniffed loudly.
她把脸埋在手帕里，大声地擤着鼻子。
4.I rushed home, searched through my collection of hats, and grabbed the cotton one.
我冲回家，翻遍了我收集的帽子，抓起了那顶棉质的。
5.Jane turned to me with tears in her eyes,and begged me to help her.
简眼里含着泪水转向我，恳求我帮帮她。
6. Laura burst into tears and ran out of the room.
劳拉突然哭了起来，然后从房子里跑了出去。
7.Jane 站起来用尽全力挥动着她的衬衫并大声喊叫。
Jane stood up, screamed at the top of her lungs and waved her yellow blouse with every bit of her strength.
【即时练】
1.歌手瞥了一眼观众，深吸了一口气，开始唱歌。
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【答案】The singer glanced at the audience, took a deep breath and began to sing.
2.他停下出租车，提着箱子跳上车，对司机说:“请到警察局去。”
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【答案】He stopped the taxi, jumped in with the suitcase and told the driver, “Go to the police station, please.”
3.男孩们兴奋地冲到湖边，脱下衣服跳进水里。
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【答案】The boys rushed excitedly to the lake, took off their clothes and jumped into the water.4.她冲上前，跪下，把儿子抱在怀里。
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【答案】She dashed forward, knelt down and gathered her son into her arms.
5.双胞胎起得很早，踮着脚尖走到厨房，从袋子里舀了一些面粉
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【答案】The twins got up early, tiptoed to the kitchen and scooped some flour out of the bag.
6.他们的父亲悄悄走进厨房，拍着双胞胎的肩膀，用温柔的声音安慰他们。
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【答案】Their father slid into the kitchen, patting the twins’ shoulders and comforting them in a soft voice.
7.他们端着早餐，走上楼，叫醒了他们的母亲。
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【答案】They carried the breakfast, advanced upstairs and woke up their mother.
8. 他穿上外套，冲了出去，砰地关上了门。
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【答案】He put on his coat, stormed out and slammed the door shut.
9.洛娜走到窗前，打开窗户，抬头看着外面的夜空。
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【答案】Lorna came to the window, opened it and looked out up at the night sky.
10.然后玛丽站了起来，穿过人群向我走来。
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【答案】Then Mary stood up and made her way through the crowd toward me.
知识点2
二 利用非谓语形成动作链
1. Standing beside the empty road, they looked up into the sky, feeling the precious peace from within.
他们站在空荡的路边，仰望天空，从内心感受到珍贵的宁静。
2. Throwing the overcoat across her arm, she crossed the hall quietly.
她把大衣扔在胳膊上，悄悄地穿过大厅。
3. She laughed, her eyes shining / sparkling/ glistering / glowing /twinkling with excitement.
她笑了，眼里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。
4. Tears blurring her eyes, she took a bite of the bread, enjoying the precious moment.
泪水模糊了她的眼睛，她咬了一口面包，享受着这珍贵的时刻。
5. He dove into the water, kicking his legs and stretching his arms as far as he could.
他跳进水里，踢着腿，尽可能地伸直胳膊。6. Seeing the coat in the bag, he looked very astonished and then called his mother to go out.
看到包里的外套，他看起来很惊讶，然后叫他妈妈出去。
7. Gasping with pain, David forced himself to his feet and with slow , shaky steps, began to run.
疼得直吸气,大卫还是强迫自己站起来,然后(迈着)缓慢、摇摇晃晃的步子开始跑起来.
【即时练】
1.看着劳拉转身并走远，萨拉忍不住大哭。
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【答案】Watching Laura turning her back and walking away, Sarah burst into tears..
2.他们站在空荡的路边，仰望天空，从内心感受到珍贵的宁静。
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【答案】Standing beside the empty road, they looked up into the sky, feeling the precious peace from within.
3.她把大衣扔在胳膊上，悄悄地穿过大厅。
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【答案】Throwing the overcoat across her arm, she crossed the hall quietly.
4.他因为羞愧而感到脸颊发烧。
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【答案】He felt his cheeks burning with shame.
5. 她呆住了，嘴巴张得大大的。
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【答案】She froze, her mouth hanging open.
6.他向窗外望去，咬着嘴唇，好像在思考。
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【答案】He looked out of the window, biting his lips, as if thinking.
7.手里拿着项链，珍妮抬起嘴唇，泪水模糊了她的视线。
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【答案】Holding the necklace in her hand, Jenny lifted her lip, tears beginning to blur her vision.
8. 妈妈听了笑了，轻轻地拍了拍她的背。
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【答案】Hearing this, her mother smiled, patting her back gently.
9. 走到门口，珍妮深吸了一口气。
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10.詹姆斯朝着着水街跑去，惊恐得发抖。
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【答案】James ran/rushed down Water Street, trembling with great panic.
知识点3
三 利用不同动词“说”形成动作链
announce 宣布；
argue 争论；
chat 闲聊；
complain 抱怨；
debate 辩论；
discuss 讨论；
murmur 低语；
基础“say/talk” whisper 低语，耳语；
persuade 说服；
explain 解释；
add 补充说；
repeat 重复说；
reply/respond 回答；
comment 评论，发表意见；
declare 宣布
1.“I...I.. don’t think I’m right for the part,”I replied with embarrassment.
“我...我..认为我不适合这个角色，”我尴尬地回答。
2.“I didn't get an ideal score in the math exam,”said Tom, disappointed.
“我在数学考试中没有得到理想的分数,”汤姆失望地说。
3.“I will never do that again,” I answered firmly.
“我再也不会那样做了，”我坚定地回答。
4. “It works like this,”she explained.
“它是这样工作的。”她解释道。
5. We chatted about everything and then Ben turned to me.
我们聊了所有的事情，然后本转向了我。
6. “I never thought I’d see this place,”he said at last, in a whisper.
“我从没想过，我还能见到这样的地方。”他最后近乎耳语般地说。
7. “No, I am not,”Mary answered, her own whisper sounding half frightened.
“不，我不是。”玛丽低声回答说，她自己的声音听起来也有点害怕。【即时练】
1. 萨姆大发雷霆，冲出房间，尖叫着说：“我再也不会回来了！”
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【答案】Boiling with rage, Sam stormed out of the room, screaming, “I’m never coming back!”
2. “哦，不！”我们会死在这里的！”八戒说。
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【答案】“Oh, No! We will die here!” said Bajie.
3.“悟空！你怎么能这么残忍呢！”唐的和尚说。
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【答案】“Wukong! How can you be so cruel!” said Tang Monk.
4. 猪说：“为什么总是我！”我只是坐下来！”
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【答案】The pig said, “Why is it always me! I just sat down!”
5. “我太累了，找不下食物，”八戒说，“我先小睡一会儿。
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【答案】“I’m too tired to look for food,” Bajie said, “I’ll take a nap first.
6. “我们等你的时候，你怎么敢睡觉？”吴净说：“现在让我们回到师父那里去吧。”
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【答案】“How dare you sleep while we wait for you?” said Wujing, “Now let’s go back to Master.”
7. 她冲向门口，打开门，说：“来了，爱德蒙，我就在这儿。”
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【答案】Rushing towards the door, she opened it, saying, “Here, Edmond, here I am”.
