浙江省温州市新力量2024-2025 学年高二下学期6 月期末英语试题
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
Jim and his mother were visiting the supermarket for their weekly shopping
when
he found
a leather wallet
. He picked it up curiously and found there was a
coffee bean pattern on the surface, which reminded him of his own experience
working part-time at a coffee shop during college.
Besides that, he found a significant amount of` cash and a business card with a
phone number on it. Jim had tolerated a poor life along with his mother. Each meal
was the result of his mother's hard work. Jim had been struggling with unemployment
while actively searching for a job(状语从句压缩)(交代人物的矛盾点，增加戏剧性).Should I keep the wallet?"
he wondered, the thought of financial relief
crossing his mind
(独立主格刻画人物). “I could
surely use the money." Yet, a wave of guilt washed over him. “But Mother would be
annoyed if she knew,” he thought, holding
the wallet tightly
(现在分词做伴随动作). Noticing
his hesitation(现在分词做伴随动作), Jim's mother asked what was wrong. He told her about
the wallet and his internal struggle. With a gentle but firm voice, she reminded him
of the values.“We don't keep what isn't ours, Jim.”
Jim's face turned red with a mix of emotions. "We have bills without steady
income, and this could be a turning point, " he responded. His mother acknowledged
their difficulties but encouraged him to think about the right thing to do, saying(现在分词做
伴随动作), “Returning it(动名词短语做主语) could bring you unexpected good luck(伏笔所在).”
Finally, with resolve, Jim decided to call the number on the business card. The
owner was an elderly man who was very grateful when he met them to take the
wallet back. He explained that the money inside was prepared for his son
Andrew, which was crucial for his new business- a coffee shop he was planning
to open. As Jim walked away, he felt a sense of fulfillment from doing the right
thing, but he continued to worry about his own job search and financial situation.
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: A few days later, Jim received an unexpected call.
Paragraph 2: Jim was promoted (被提升)to manager of Andrew's coffee shop soon.
浙江省温州市新力量2024-2025 学年高二下学期6 月期末英语试题
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
Jim and his mother were visiting the supermarket for their weekly shopping when
he found a leather wallet. Hle picked it up curiously and found there was a coffee
bean pattern on the surface, which reminded him of his own experience working part-
time at a coffee shop during college.
Besides that, he found a significant amount of` cash and a business card with a
phone number on it. Jim had tolerated a poor life along with his mother. Each meal
was the result of his mother's hard work. Jim had been struggling with unemployment
while actively searching for a job.Should I keep the wallet?" he wondered, the thought
of financial relief crossing his mind. “I could surely use the money." Yet, a wave of
guilt washed over him. “But Mother would be annoyed if she knew,’he thought,
holding the wallet tightly. Noticing his hesitation, Jim's mother asked what was
wrong. He told her about the wallet and his internal struggle. With a gentle but firm
voice, she reminded him of the values.“We don't keep what isn't ours, Jim.”
Jim's face turned red with a mix of emotions. “"We have bills without steady
income, and this could be a turning point, " he responded. His mother
acknowledged(v.承认) their difficulties but encouraged him to think about the right
thing to do, saying, “Returning it could bring you unexpected good luck.”
Finally, with resolve, Jim decided to call the number on the business card. The
owner was an elderly man who was very grateful when he met them to take the wallet
back, He explained that the money inside was prepared for his son Andrew, which
was crucial(adj 至关重要的)for his new business- a coffee shop he was planning to
open. As Jim walked away, he felt a sense of fulfillment (n.成就感) from doing the
right thing, but he continued to worry about his own job search and financial situation.
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: A few days later, Jim received an unexpected call.
Paragraph 2: Jim was promoted (被提升)to manager of Andrew's coffee shop soon.
1. 文章分类与续写思路分析
文章类型：道德选择型读后续写（主角面临金钱诱惑与道德抉择，最终选
择归还钱包，后续可能因善行获得回报）。
续写构思：
布局：
第一段（接电话）：延续“善有善报”主题，电话内容应与钱包归还的善行直
接相关（如老人或Andrew 提供工作机会）。
第二段（晋升经理）：体现Jim 因诚信和咖啡店兼职经验获得认可，解决失业
困境，呼应母亲“意外好运”的预言。
框架提炼：
段落
核心事件
情感转折
衔接原文要素
第一段
接到电话，获得工作机会
从担忧到希望
老人提及儿子开咖啡店
第二段
晋升经理，生活改善
成就感与感恩
Jim 的咖啡店兼职经历
实施要点：
衔接原文：需提到“咖啡店”“老人儿子Andrew”“母亲的话”等关键信息。
设计巧妙点：将Jim 的咖啡店经验与Andrew 的新店需求结合，体现因果逻辑。
续写注意事项：
事项类型
具体内容
承接原文
1. 需提到“business card”“coffee shop”“elderly man”等关键
词；
2. 延续Jim 的心理描写（如对失业的担忧）。
整体注意事项
1. 保持语言风格一致（口语化、心理描写）；
2. 结局需积极，符合高考价值观导向。
巧妙设计
1. 让Andrew 的咖啡店与Jim 的技能匹配；
事项类型
具体内容
2. 用母亲的话“unexpected good luck”作为伏笔回收。
2. 故事山模式与原文分析
阶段
原文内容
续写方向
开端
Jim 捡到钱包，内心挣扎。
/
发展
母亲劝导，Jim 归还钱包。
/
高潮
老人透露钱用于儿子咖啡店。
电话提供工作（新高潮）
回落
Jim 感到成就但仍担忧经济。
晋升经理解决困境（结局）
衔接点与关键分析：
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
人物刻画
Jim：贫困但善良；母亲：价
值观坚定。
“We don't keep what isn't ours,
Jim.”
情感层次
从贪婪→愧疚→坚定→成就
感。
“a wave of guilt washed over
him” / “felt a sense of
fulfillment”
关键情节点
归还钱包是转折点。
“Finally, with resolve, Jim
decided to call the number...”
语言特色
心理描写为主，动作描写辅
助。
“he wondered, the thought...
crossing his mind” / “holding the
wallet tightly”
关键词分析
“coffee shop”“business
card”“unexpected good luck”为
伏笔。
“a coffee bean pattern...
reminded him of... part-time at a
coffee shop”
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
心理描写
直接展示内心矛盾。
“Should I keep the wallet?”
动作描写
体现紧张情绪。
“Jim's face turned red”
环境描写
无显著环境描写。
/
隐含主题
善行终有回报，诚信胜过短
期利益。
母亲的话“unexpected good
luck”
情感转折
犹豫→羞愧→坚定→担忧→
希望。
“a mix of emotions” → “felt a
sense of fulfillment”
伏笔与冲突
伏笔：咖啡店经历、老人儿
子开店；冲突：经济困难vs
道德选择。
“money... was crucial for his new
business—a coffee shop”
隐含线索
Jim 的咖啡店经验与Andrew
需求匹配。
“reminded him of his own
experience... at a coffee shop”
解决方案
通过归还钱包获得工作机
会，解决失业。
需在续写中体现（电话邀
约）。
续写段落示范（符合分析框架）
Paragraph 1:
A few days later, Jim received an unexpected call. The voice on the phone was warm
yet familiar—it was Andrew, the elderly man’s son. “Jim, your honesty moved my
father deeply,” Andrew said, explaining that his coffee shop needed someone with
both integrity and experience. Jim’s heart raced as memories of his college part-time
job flashed through his mind. “Could you come for an interview tomorrow?” Andrew
asked. Hanging up, Jim glanced at his mother, her earlier words echoing: “Returning
it could bring you unexpected good luck.”
Paragraph 2:
Jim was promoted to manager of Andrew's coffee shop soon. His dedication and prior
skills impressed Andrew, who often joked, “That wallet brought me more than money
—it brought the right person.” The financial stability allowed Jim and his mother to
breathe easier. One evening, as Jim arranged coffee beans in the shop, the familiar
bean pattern on a customer’s wallet caught his eye. Smiling, he handed it back
without hesitation, knowing now that good deeds truly circle back.
（注：续写紧扣“咖啡店”“钱包”“母亲预言”等伏笔，情感从担忧→希望
→成就，符合故事山结构和价值观要求。）
3. 动作、心理、环境描写例句及翻译
动作描写（Action Descriptions）
He picked it up curiously.（他好奇地捡起它。）
Holding the wallet tightly, he hesitated.（他紧紧攥着钱包，犹豫不决。）
His fingers trembled as he dialed the number.（拨号码时，他的手指微微发
抖。）
She patted his shoulder reassuringly.（她安慰地拍了拍他的肩膀。）
He handed the wallet back with a smile.（他微笑着归还了钱包。）
Jim’s face turned red with embarrassment.（吉姆的脸因尴尬而涨红。）
The elderly man reached out to shake his hand.（老人伸出手和他握手。）
He sighed deeply before making the call.（他深深叹了口气，然后拨通了电
话。）
She nodded in approval.（她赞许地点了点头。）
Jim clenched his fists, struggling with the decision.（吉姆攥紧拳头，内心挣
扎。）
心理描写（Psychological Descriptions）
A wave of guilt washed over him.（一阵愧疚感涌上心头。）
He wondered if keeping the money was worth it.（他在想，留下这笔钱是否值
得。）
The thought of financial relief crossed his mind.（经济压力缓解的念头闪过他的
脑海。）
He felt a sense of fulfillment after doing the right thing.（做了正确的事后，他感
到一种满足感。）
Doubt gnawed at him as he considered his options.（他在权衡选择时，疑虑啃噬
着他的心。）
His conscience pricked him.（他的良心在刺痛他。）
A mix of emotions swirled inside him.（复杂的情绪在他内心翻涌。）
He couldn’t shake off the feeling of unease.（他无法摆脱不安的感觉。）
Relief flooded through him when the owner thanked him.（当失主感谢他时，他
感到一阵释然。）
Hope flickered in his chest.（希望在他心中闪烁。）
环境描写（Environmental Descriptions）
The supermarket buzzed with shoppers.（超市里挤满了购物者，嘈杂喧闹。）
The dim lighting in the store cast long shadows.（店里昏暗的灯光投下长长的影
子。）
The aroma of fresh coffee beans filled the air.（新鲜的咖啡豆香气弥漫在空气
中。）
Rain tapped gently against the window.（雨轻轻敲打着窗户。）
The streetlights flickered in the evening gloom.（街灯在暮色中闪烁。）
A chilly wind swept through the empty street.（一阵冷风扫过空荡荡的街道。）
The hum of conversation filled the coffee shop.（咖啡店里充满了交谈的嗡嗡
声。）
Golden sunlight streamed through the blinds.（金色的阳光透过百叶窗照射进
来。）
The clatter of dishes echoed from the kitchen.（厨房里传来餐具碰撞的声响。）
The scent of leather lingered in the air.（空气中残留着皮革的气味。）
4. 高级替换词 & 分类语料
1. 金钱/财富相关
Basic: money → Advanced: funds, savings, finances, wealth, cash
例句:
He struggled with his finances after losing his job.
The funds in the wallet could solve his problems.
2. 犹豫/纠结相关
Basic: hesitate → Advanced: waver, deliberate, vacillate, falter, ponder
例句:
He wavered between keeping the money and returning it.
After deliberating, he decided to call the owner.
3. 道德/正直相关
Basic: honesty → Advanced: integrity, righteousness, virtue, morality, uprightness
例句:
His integrity prevented him from keeping the wallet.
She valued morality over short-term gain.
4. 情绪/感受相关
Basic: happy → Advanced: elated, overjoyed, content, gratified, euphoric
例句:
He felt gratified after doing the right thing.
She was overjoyed when she got the job offer.
5. 工作/职业相关
Basic: job → Advanced: occupation, profession, career, employment, vocation
例句:
He had been searching for employment for months.
His new vocation at the coffee shop suited him well.
5. 常见搭配 & 词法解析
固定搭配（Collocations）
Struggle with unemployment（与失业作斗争）
A wave of guilt（一阵愧疚感）
Financial relief（经济压力缓解）
Make a decision（做决定）
Sense of fulfillment（满足感）
Turn a new leaf（翻开新篇章）
Face difficulties（面对困难）
Unexpected good luck（意外的好运）
词法解析（Lexical Analysis）
Significant (adj.) = important, considerable
反义词: insignificant
例句:
The wallet contained a significant amount of cash.
His contribution was insignificant in the grand scheme.
Crucial (adj.) = critical, vital
反义词: trivial
例句:The money was crucial for Andrew’s business.
The mistake was trivial and easily fixed.
Acknowledge (v.) = admit, recognize
反义词: deny
例句:
She acknowledged their financial struggles.
He denied taking the money.
5. Possible Versions(4)
Version 1
Paragraph 1:
A few days later, Jim received an unexpected call. To his surprise, it was
Andrew—the elderly man's son. With a friendly tone, Andrew said he had heard
about Jim’s honesty from his father and was deeply touched. “People like you are
rare these days,” he added. He mentioned he was short of staff for his new coffee
shop and asked whether Jim would be interested in giving it a try. The offer
seemed almost too good to be true, but Jim, both excited and grateful(adj 短语做主语补语),
accepted without hesitation. Determined
not to let Andrew down
(过去分词做adj 主语补语), Jim
poured his heart into the work from day one. He rearranged the layout of the shop
for better customer flow, recommended a few new drinks, and treated every
customer with genuine care(动作串并列). Slowly, the shop began to see more regular
customers, and Jim regained a sense of confidence he hadn’t felt in a long time.
Paragraph 2:
Jim was promoted to manager of Andrew's coffee shop soon. Andrew had been
observing Jim’s performance silently and was impressed by his dedication and
ability to bring warmth to the workplace. Under Jim’s management, the shop not
only saw a steady rise in income but also earned glowing reviews from customers.
Jim made sure every employee felt valued and created a positive working
environment. One evening, as he locked up the shop and looked at the glowing
signboard, Jim recalled his hesitation back when he first picked up the wallet. His
mother’s words echoed again in his mind, reminding
him that doing the right
thing(现在分词做伴随动作), even when it’s hard, always brings light. Now, not only did he
have a stable job, but also a renewed belief in himself, built
on
honesty
, effort,
and hope(过去分词做后置定语).
Version 2
Paragraph 1:
A few days later, Jim received an unexpected call. The call came from Andrew,
who introduced himself as the owner of the coffee shop Jim had indirectly
helped. He said he admired Jim’s sense of responsibility and wondered if Jim
would be willing to join the team. “We need someone trustworthy like you,” he said
sincerely. Jim was overwhelmed—he had been struggling to find a job for weeks.
Without much hesitation, he agreed. On his first day, Jim arrived early, carefully
cleaned the counters, and greeted each customer with a smile(动词并列). He even
helped design a simple loyalty card system, drawing
from
(现在分词短语做伴随动作) what he’d
learned during college. Andrew noticed his quiet initiative and work ethic. Though
the days were long and tiring, Jim felt hopeful again—he was finally part of
something meaningful.
Paragraph 2:
Jim was promoted to manager of Andrew's coffee shop soon. One rainy
afternoon, Andrew handed Jim a name tag with the word “Manager” on it and said,
“You’ve more than earned this.” Jim held it for a second, feeling
the weight of
responsibility—but also of pride(现在分词短语做伴随动作)His consistent effort, patience, and
problem-solving skills(名词并列) gradually earned Andrew’s full trust. With Jim in
charge, the shop began to run more smoothly, and customers often returned just to
chat with him. He trained new staff, handled complaints with calm
professionalism, and kept thinking of ways to improve(动词短语并列). . Looking
back
(现在分
词做伴随动作), he realized that a single act of honesty had not only helped someone
else, but had also rewritten his own story, just as his mother had believed
it
would.
语言表达与写作亮点参考
类别
范文亮点表达
同义/替换建议
地道搭配
poured his heart into the work；
earned glowing reviews；handle
complaints with calm
professionalism
devoted himself to；won
consistent praise；resolve issues
patiently
高中语法点非谓语结构：Determined not to
强调句、倒装、it 作形式主语等
类别
范文亮点表达
同义/替换建议
let...
虚拟条件句：If he hadn’t returned
that wallet, none of this would’ve
happened.
情绪描写
overwhelmed, hesitant, grateful,
hopeful, pride, renewed belief
thrilled → elated；grateful →
appreciative；pride → sense of
achievement
动作描写
arrived early, cleaned the counters,
trained staff, handled complaints
opened early, restocked shelves,
offered help
佳句积累
“You’ve more than earned this.”
“A single act of honesty had
rewritten his own story.”
“This is more than a job—it’s who
you are.”
“Integrity lit the path when
everything else was dark.”
Version 3
Paragraph 1:
A few days later, Jim received an unexpected call. It was Andrew, who
explained his father had told him everything about the wallet. “I respect your
honesty,” he said. “We’re hiring. Would you like to come in for an interview?” Jim
hesitated for a moment, but then agreed. The interview went smoothly, thanks to his
previous part-time experience. However, starting from the lowest position(现在分词短语做主
语) was tough—Jim had to clean spills, memorize dozens of drinks, and deal with
impatient customers(动作串并列). Still, he stayed committed. His perseverance didn’t go
unnoticed. Andrew often saw him staying late to help others. After closing one
evening, Andrew approached him, smiling(现在分词做伴随动作). “I’ve been watching you.
Let’s talk about your future.”
Paragraph 2:
Jim was promoted to manager of Andrew's coffee shop soon. His promotion
wasn’t just a reward, but a recognition of his integrity and hard work. Jim
introduced weekly training sessions and redesigned the customer loyalty system.
Under his guidance, the shop’s revenue steadily increased. More than that, he
became a role model for the younger staff. Sometimes, suggested
by
his
mother
(过去
分词短语做原因状语), Jim still thought of that moment when the wallet was in his hand
and the words from his mother. Choosing honesty(现在分词短语做主语) had seemed
foolish then, but now, he knew it was the best decision he had ever made. Life
hadn’t suddenly become easy, but it had become meaningful. The smile on his
mother’s face said it all.
语言亮点分析
类别
示例表达
同义/升级词汇/短语
地道搭配
stay committed, go unnoticed, deal with
impatient customers
stay determined, handle
complaints
高中加分语
法
强调句：It wasn’t just a reward, but a
recognition; 让步状语从句
although things were
hard, he never gave up
动作描写
staying late to help others, redesigned loyalty
system
worked overtime,
adjusted the pricing
情绪描写
hesitated, felt foolish then, felt meaningful now
conflicted → fulfilled,
puzzled → proud
积累语料
life didn’t become easier, but more meaningful
test of character, win
respect, long-term gain
over short-term relief
替换例句
deal with → cope with / manage: He managed
the morning rush with calmness.
stay committed → remain focused: He remained
focused despite setbacks.
官方：
A few days later, Jim received an unexpected call.It was from Andrew---the
elderly man's son, who expressed his gratitude and explained he needed someone
with willingness and personal integrity for his coffee shop. Impressed
by Jim's
honesty(过去分词做原因状语), Andrew asked Jim if he would to work as his assistant.
Feeling
thrilled at the news
(现在分词短语做伴随动作), Jim eagerly accepted the offer. Jim
looked forward to starting a new life, so he put in much effort in the shop. Drawing
on
his
part-time job experience
(现在分词短语做伴随动作), he introduced new ideas to attracted
customers, and his effort eventually paid off.
Jim was promoted(
被提升
) to manager of Andrew's coffee shop soon.
His hard
work, reliability, and passion for the job(名词并列做主语) did not go unnoticed. The shop
quickly became popular for its welcoming atmosphere and excellent service, largely
due to Jim's dedication and leadership. As he
settled into his role
, Jim realized that
the decision to return the wallet had indeed brought unexpected good luck, just as his
mother had suggested. Not only did he find a job, but he also met Andrew, who
valued him as both an employee and a friend.
