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高考英语写作专题(五)
高考真题风格读后续写 前文+结尾模板衔接范例
前文设置冲突/伏笔/情感缺口,结尾自然承接并升华,无超纲词汇,语言地道流畅。
一、 成长与勇气主题
前文片段
I stood backstage, my hands trembling as I held the crumpled speech draft. It was my first time
participating in the school English speech contest, and the thought of standing in front of hundreds of
people made my heart race. Just now, I heard the host call my name. Taking a deep breath, I walked
toward the stage, my mind going blank halfway. I forgot my lines, standing there awkwardly, the
silence of the audience weighing heavily on me.
衔接结尾(匹配模板2)
I forced a smile and bowed to the audience, then ran off the stage in embarrassment. As I folded
the crumpled speech draft and put it into my pocket, I smiled at the sunset. I didn’t just deliver a
speech today—I finally learned to embrace the imperfect part of myself that had been hiding for so
long.
衔接亮点
前文的crumpled speech draft 与结尾完全呼应,尴尬退场的情节为“接纳不完美”的成长立
意做足铺垫,逻辑闭环。
二、 亲情与和解主题
前文片段
Grandma had knitted me a thick woolen scarf for winter. But I thought it was old-fashioned and
refused to wear it, even when she held it out to me with a hopeful smile. We argued, and I ran out of
the house angrily without looking back. That afternoon, it snowed suddenly. I walked home from
school, shivering in the cold wind, my neck exposed to the biting air. When I got to the door, I saw
Grandma standing there, holding a cup of hot ginger tea, with the woolen scarf in her other hand.
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I felt a lump in my throat, tears welling up in my eyes. The old woolen scarf, knitted by my
grandma with countless late nights, wrapped around my neck tightly. The familiar warmth seeped
into my heart, erasing all the quarrels and misunderstandings that had lingered between us for weeks.
衔接亮点
前文的woolen scarf 作为核心线索贯穿始终,吵架、挨冻的情节为结尾的和解提供情感基
础,温暖治愈。
三、 助人与善意主题
前文片段
It was pouring rain after school. I held my umbrella and walked quickly toward the bus stop.
Suddenly, I heard a soft cry. Looking around, I saw a little girl sitting on the sidewalk, her clothes
soaked through, her eyes red from crying. She told me she was lost and couldn’t find her mom. I
knelt down, shared my umbrella with her, and waited with her at the bus stop until a woman in a
hurry ran over, calling her name.
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The little girl hugged her mom tightly, then turned to me and waved. The little girl waved at me
from the gate, her hand holding the drawing of a sunflower she’d made for me. I walked away with a
light heart, knowing that a small act of kindness could plant a seed of hope in someone’s world.
衔接亮点
前文的雨中帮助情节自然引出结尾的善意反馈,向日葵画作的细节让善意具象化,符合
高考“立德树人”的导向。