专题 01 写人记叙文
一、题型解读与写作攻略
1.题型解读
记叙文是以记人叙事为主要内容的文章，通常包括六个要索:时间、地点、人物、事件、原因及结果，
写作时各要素要交代清楚，但并不要求全部具备。
人物描写类的作文， 大多围绕亲情、友情、师生情、榜样力量、人物奋斗等话题展开，或叙事抒
怀，或表明个人对人物所持的情感。此类文章以记叙文居多，也可夹叙夹议。
人物描写的文章，对人物各方面的描写是必不可少的外貌描写、语言描写、神态描写、动作描写、心理描
写等等，写人离不开写事，因为人物的特点总是在具体的事例中表现出来的。
2.写作攻略
在写人的时候，我们可以通过以下三部分来写作：
简单介绍人物的概况，般包括姓名 、性别、年龄、职业、家庭背景等。写作时使用的语青必须符合
英语表达习惯如：姓名的书写、年龄的表达、人称或称呼的法取等。
从多方面对人物进行刻面。为了使人物的形象丰满起来，给读者留下深刻印象，我们可以对人物的外
貌、神态、动作等进行描写，并选取简短的事例来说明其品质和个性。在具体写作时，要正确把握现在
时、过去时和将来时的用法。
对人物进行评价。在文章结尾处要介绍你对人物的评价或谈论你的个人感受，无论是喜欢还是讨厌，
是称赞还是批评，都要明确地表达出来。
二 、高分模板素材
1.常用词语
外表 Appearance
lovely, handsome, sweet, good-looking, odd-looking, handsome, beautiful, pretty, ugly, neat (小巧的), plain
(相貌平平的)
身高 Height
tall, short, of medium / average height (中等身高), 1.72 meters tall / in height
Figure 身材
fat, stout (粗壮的或肥胖的), thin, slim / slender (苗条的), skinny (骨瘦如柴), overweight (超重的), of
medium / average build (中等身材), well-built (体格健美的), strong, athletic (强壮的)
脸型 Face
long , square (方的), round, oval-shaped / heart-shaped face (瓜子脸), with wrinkles / wrinkled (有皱纹的)
头发 Hair
dark, black, blond, grey, brown, yellow, red, long, short, straight, curly (卷发的), in curls,
pigtail (马尾辫), bald (秃顶的)
Facial expression 面部表情
innocent, serious, sad, angry, bitter, disturbed (烦恼的), embarrassed, confused, frightened, pitiful, reluctant
(勉强的), excited, indifferent (不在乎的), delighted, surprised, content, disappointed, amused, amazed,
flushed (脸红的), pale, blank, doubtful
Character & Personality 个性
able / capable / talented, active, aggressive (有进取心的), ambitious (有雄心壮志的), brave, brilliant /
clever / smart / intelligent, broad-minded / narrow-minded (心胸开阔的 / 心胸狭窄的), careful, cautious
(谨慎的), cheerful (开朗的), considerate (体贴的), confident, cooperative (有合作精神的), creative, cultured
(有教养的), determined / strong-willed, dishonest, easy-going, energetic (精力充沛的), enthusiastic (充满热
情的), faithful / loyal, forgetful, frank, friendly, funny / humorous, greedy (贪婪的), hard-working,
generous (慷慨的), gentle (温柔的), helpful, honest, independent (独立的), kind / nice / kind-hearted /
warm-hearted, knowledgeable / learned (有见识的 / 有学识的), lazy, modest (谦虚的), mean (吝啬的),
objective (客观的), optimistic / pessimistic (乐观的 / 悲观的), outgoing (外向的), patient, passionate (激情
的), polite, popular, proud, punctual (准时的), purposeful (有明确目标的), realistic (实际的), responsible
(有责任心的), sensible (明事理的), selfish, selfless, self-centered (以自我为中心的), sensitive (敏感的),
sentimental (多愁善感的), shy, sincere, social (好交际的), strict, stubborn (固执的), stupid / foolish,
sympathetic (富有同情心的), thoughtful (考虑周到的), timid (胆小的), upright (正直的), well-educated (受
过良好教育的)
家庭背景
live in ... 居住在......
be born in ... 出生于......
spent one's childhood in ... 在......度过童年
live a happy/busy life 过着幸福/忙碌的生活
教育背景
be graduated from ... 毕业于 ......
be majored in ... 以......为专业further education 深造
got a ... degree 得到......学位
studied hard at ... 努力学习 ......
study abroad 出国留学
兴趣爱好
be good at 擅长 do well in 擅长
be fond of 喜欢 enjoy doing sth 喜欢做某事
be crazy about ... 对......着迷 have a gift for ... 有 ......天赋
be interested in ... 对......感兴趣 be in the lead 处于领先的地位
评价
knowledgeable 知识渊博的 famous 著名的
well-known 知名的 think highly of ... 对......评价很高
be remembered as 被后人誉为...... be regarded as ... 被当作......
be respected by ... 受......尊敬
devote one's lifetime to ... 倾注毕生精力在......
逻辑连接词
表示原因的连接词: because; for; as; since; because of; owing to; due to;thanks to; as a result of; result
from
表示结果的连接词: thus; hence; so; so that; therefore; as such; as a result;as a consequence;
consequently; accordingly; correspondingly; for this reason; in/under such circumstances; in.. .case
表示相似点的连接词: like; likewise; too; also; similarly; as well; equally important; not only.but also;
by comparison; compared to; in the same way/manner
表示不同点的连接词: unlike; despite; instead; yet; but; though; although;rather; however; despite; in spite
of; instead of; in contrast; in contrast to;whereas; while; whilst; nevertheless; on the contrary; on the other
hand
表示转折的连接词: but; yet; however; nevertheless; nonetheless
表示例子的连接词: for example; for instance; such as; including; like; as; a case in point; take. as an
example; say; go as follows; go like this
表示顺序的连接词: first (second.); firstly (secondly.); initially; at the very beginning; to begin with;
then; next; at first; previously; before; by then;after; afterwards; meanwhile; in the meantime; at the same
time; at last;last but not least; lastly; finally; in the end; at length; in a few weeks; a few weeks later;before long; soon; at that time
表示空间位置的连接词: in front of; behind; on the right; on the left; on the right-hand side; on the
left-hand side; in the middle; at the upper right-hand side; next to; adjacent to; near to; nearby; in the
distance; opposite to; at/on the top; at the bottom; at the lower left-hand side; in between;among;
between; under/below/beneath; from behind the.
表示递进的连接词: and; besides; moreover; what is more; furthermore; in addition; in addition to;
additionally
2.常用句型
(1)开头：介绍基本情况(外貌、年龄...)
1. Once there was a 从前，有一个……
2. was/were born in/into a poor/rich family.
……出生在一个贫穷的/富裕的家庭。
3. As a child of.…years old.. 还是个……岁的孩子时……
4. There will be(a party/speech/contest/concert..)to be held byin.(place)at..(time).
一场派对/比赛/音乐会将在某时某地由……举办
5. In the past ……years ……has impressed me deeply.
在过去的……年里……给我留下了深刻的印象。
6. In my life the person I will never forget is my father.
在我的生命中，我永远也不会忘记的人是我的父亲。
7.There are many respectable people around us. Among them, ... is regarded as my favorite
one.
8.When it comes to the person who I think highly of, I would say ... without hesitation.
9.Among the outstanding figures in Chinese history, ... is my favorite.
10...., aged 18, was born in..., graduating from...
11.In the depths of my memory, ...
(2)主体：具体事迹，性格
1. gives us the impression that ……给我们……印象。
2. spend his childhood in……在……度过了他的童年。
3. I was about to when 我正要……，突然，……
4. Hardly had I done when sooner had I done than
我刚……，就……/我一……，就……5. He worked hard every day to make money to keep our family.
他每天都努力工作赚钱来供养我们的家庭。
6. He always wears casual clothes like jeans and T-shirt.
他总是穿着像牛仔和T恤之类的便装。
7. Her eyes are very big/bright/warm/attractive.
她的眼睛很大/很亮/很温暖/很有魅力。
8. One day, I 有一天，我……
9.have a good sense of humor and positive attitude to life
10.be awarded sth./ be honored as
11.get a master's degree in/ be admitted to
12.His charming personality lies in a simple fact that he never hesitates to help others.
13.make remarkable progress in
14.became famous in one's thirties
15.set a good example to
16.work heart and soul
17.Although he has won countless honours, he never shows any sign of pride.
(3)结尾：人物评价
1. It turns out to be 结果是……
2. I was very tired, but I was happy that I did a good deed.
我很疲惫，但我很高兴自己做了一件好事。
3. Now I understand my father’s love to me. I will never forget my father.
现在我明白了父亲对我的爱。我永远不会忘记我的父亲。
4. From it, I understand we should not cheat anyone, especially my parents.
从这件事中，我明白了我们不应该欺骗任何人，尤其是我们的父母。
5.That is...,my most respectable person. She is the star glowing with high school experience. She is
the fragrant rose that beautifies my life.
三、模板作文
典型模板
On the path of pursuing knowledge, numerous people we have encountered may have a lifelong
impact on us, and even contribute to shaping who we are. Among all the people in my life, the one that
impresses me most is …….…… was born in ……, ……. At the age of ……，she graduated from …… University. She is a
good-looking ……- year-old girl,who has a pretty face and always wears a bright smile. As our
……,…… sets a good example. She is an enthusiastic fan of science and has made some creative
inventions. What impresses me most is that she is always ready to help others when they meet with
difficulties. …… is so good a person that she is highly thought of by all the people around her.
Her dedication to work and to people is admirable, which truly inspires me to become a person like
her in the future.
模板范文
假定你是李华，你校英语报正在举办主题为“The most admirable person around me”的征文活动。
请你用英语写一篇短文并投稿。内容包括:
1.你崇拜的人是谁;
2.简述他/她的外貌;
3.你为什么崇拜他/她。
注意:1.词数80左右;
3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
The most admirable person
Of all the people I know around me, Sophia is the one I admire most.She is a good-looking 16-
year-old girl,who has a pretty face and always wears a bright smile.
As our monitor. Sophia sets a good example. She does well in her studies and assists teachers. She
is also an enthusiastic fan of science and has made some creative inventions. What impresses me most is
that she is always ready to help others when they meet with difficulties. Sophia is so good a student that
she is highly thought of by all the teachers and students in our class.
四、高分必背范文10篇
1.【2023年全国甲卷】
你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投
稿，内容包括：
1.人物简介及事迹；
2. 意义或启示。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；2. 题目已为你写好。
Confucius is a well-known figure in Chinese history. His teachings emphasized the importance of
moral values, respect for elders, and social harmony. Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting
his wisdom to countless disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society.
The significance of Confucius cannot be overstated. His teachings shaped the moral and ethical
foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of
knowledge. Even today, his ideas continue to guide individuals and communities in China and beyond.
Confucius’s life offers valuable lessons. He stressed the self-cultivation, respect for elders, and the
pursuit of knowledge, which serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. His
teachings remind us of the importance of integrity, compassion, and social responsibility.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为学校正举办的主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动写
一篇短文投稿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
著名的：well-known → famous
人物：figure → person
强调：emphasize → stress
基础：foundation → basis
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, fostering respect for
authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge.
拓展句：His teachings shaped the moral and ethical foundation of Chinese culture, which fostered respect
for authority, harmonious relationships, and the pursuit of knowledge.
【点睛】【高分句型 1】Confucius traveled throughout the country, imparting his wisdom to countless
disciples and leaving a profound impact on Chinese society. (运用了现在分词作伴随状语)
【高分句型2】 He stressed the self-cultivation, respect for elders, and the pursuit of knowledge, which
serves as a guiding light in our fast-paced and interconnected world. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语
从句)
2. 【2020年全国一卷】你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1. 人物简介；
2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。
The person I respect
There are many respectable people around us. From them, not only could we learn how to do
things, but also, we could learn how to get along with people. My mother is such a model that I respect
most.
Born as the eldest sister in a family of five siblings, my mother shouldered her household
responsibility at a very early age. Doing a variety of chores at home, and at the meantime, having an
excellent performance at school, she tried her best to fulfill all the tasks in and out. It was her efforts
that helped my grandparents ease the burden and survive the bitter days. What’s more, my mother is
always willing to help those in need no matter how difficult her own condition is. Because of this, she is
quite popular in our neighborhood.
Hadn’t been my mother, I wouldn’t be raised up as an independent and industrious person.
【写作思路】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛。
第一步：审题体裁：应用文。时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。结构：总分法。要求：1.人物简
介：2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。
第二步：列提纲
第三步：连词成句
第四步：连句成篇
1.表示文章结构顺序：介绍人物；阐述原因
2.表示并列补充关系：As for; and; but; So
第五步：润色修改
高级词汇：
sibling n. 兄弟姐妹；household adj. 家庭的；chore n. 家庭杂务；fulfill v. 履行、实现；industrious adj.
勤奋的；
短语表达：such + n. + that… 如此以致于；shoulder the responsibility 承担责任；in and out 里里外外；ease the
burden 减轻负担；survive the bitter days 熬过苦日子；
句型：
It was + 被强调部分 + that… Hadn’t been my mother, I wouldn’t be raised up as an independent
and industrious person.
3.【2006年全国卷II】
假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按
要求用英文给组委会写一封信。
内容应包括：
1.个人情况：年龄，性别，学历
2.个人条件：英语好，爱好体育，善于交际，乐于助人，熟悉本地情况
3.承诺：提供最佳服务
Dear Sir / Madam:
My name is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games. I was quite
excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live. My name is Li Hua. I am
an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school. And I want to be a volunteer for the games. I like
English and sports very much. I like making friends and I am ready to help others. I can be a good
interpreter in every sports during the time. Hope the games will be a great success. Hope I will be
chosen to be one.
Yours
faithfully,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生根据所给内容申请当亚洲冬季运动会志愿者为题，写一篇申请信。
高级词汇：
interpreter 口译者
高级短语：
work as a volunteer 充当志愿者
the Winter Asian Games 亚洲冬季运动会
be ready to 乐意做高级句式：
I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live.
状语从句和定语从句
4.【2007年全国卷I】
假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师Peter找一位笔友。请写一封短信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并
说明为什么选择这样的笔友。
具体条件包括：1.年龄；2.性别；3.爱好（旅游、运动、宠的等）
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
I’m writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.
I want to have a pen friend, hopefully a girl in her early twenties, and with interests similar to
mine. In my mind, she is someone who is interested in travelling, swimming, and playing table tennis.
Besides, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time. With
such a pen friend, I hope I can share with her our experiences in travelling, taking care of pets, or
whatever we have in common. And I believe I will improve my English by doing so and learn more
about her country.
【写作思路】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生描述一下你理想中笔友，写一篇求助信。
高级词汇：
similar类似的
share 分享
高级短语：
do me a favor帮我一个忙
in her early twenties在某人20多岁时
In my mind在我看来
take care of 照顾
高级句式：
I’m writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.宾语从句
it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time.状语从句，it
would be better for sb to do sth 句型5. 【2019年湖北省武汉市】
学校英语社团正在组织题为“My Family”的征文活动。假如你是李明，请根据以下内容提示用英语完成
征文。内容要点如下:
1.三口之家，家庭幸福，邻里和睦:
2.父母为教师，在校深受欢迎:
3.分担家务，周末户外活动:
4.相互陪伴，经常交流，良好家规助我成长:
5.请补充说明一至两点与家庭相关的情况。注意:
1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称:
2.词数:60-80:
3.内容连贯，不要逐条翻译:
4，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇:popular adj.受欢迎的 activity n.活动 rule n.规矩
My Family
I'm Li Ming. I have a happy family. There are three people in it. They are my father, my mother
and me. My parents are teachers, they are popular among students. We get along well with our neighbors.
At home, I try my best to do some housework. On weekends, we often go out for outdoor activities. We
accompany with each other, communicate with each other. Good family rules help me grow up. I study
hard, and all the teachers and classmates like me. My home is a warm place.
【写作思路】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生根据所给内容以My Family为题，写一篇短文参赛。
高级词汇：
popular受欢迎的
neighbors邻居
高级短语：
At home在家里
get along well with与……相处好
try one’s best to do尽某人最大努力
accompany with陪伴
communicate with沟通help sb do帮某人做
grow up成长
高级句式：
We accompany with each other, communicate with each other. 并列动词
6. 【浙江省杭州市四校联考2023-2024学年高一上学期10月月考英语试题】
假如你是李华，你校的英语阅读社团（English Reading Club）正在招募新成员，你非常渴望加入，请你用
英语写一封申请信，内容包括：1.自我介绍；2.喜欢阅读的书籍类型；3、加入英语阅读社团的原因。
注意：1.写作词数应为100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Hua, a freshman in our school. Learning that the English Reading Club is recruiting new
members, I am writing to apply to be one of them.
As an outgoing and sociable boy, I am a reading enthusiast. I read a wealth of books, among which
western literary works are my favorite. (The spellbinding classics give me a deep insight into foreign
history and culture, broaden my horizons, and bring me extraordinary enjoyment and endless thinking as
well.) The English Reading Club, therefore, becomes what I’m eager to join. For one thing, challenging
to read books in the original will definitely improve my English level. For another, I can make more
like-minded friends.
I would appreciate it if you could consider my application. Looking forward to your early reply.
Li Hua
【写作思路】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生根据所给内容，写一篇申请信。
1.基本时态为一般现在时。
2.写作思路：三段论。第一段开门见山介绍写信目的：申请成为社团一员；第二段介绍自我介绍（要点
1）+喜欢的书籍类型（要点2）+加入社团的原因（要点3）；第三段希望获准。
高级词汇：
enthusiast热衷爱好者
spellbinding引人入胜的
like-minded志同道合的
therefore意为“因此”，用作插入语
高级短语：Learning that听说
a wealth of一大堆
give me a deep insight into sth让我深入了解了某事
broaden one's horizons开阔视野
as well也
For one thing, ... For another, ...一方面，另一方面
高级句式：
I would appreciate it if you could ...如果...我将不胜感激。
7. 【湖南省长郡中学2024届高三上学期月考二】
假定你是李华，正在新西兰某中学学习。你校将举办跨文化演出活动，请你给活动负责人 Mr. Brown写
封信，申请当主持人。内容包括：1.写信目的；2.你的优势；3.期待答复。
注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am an exchange student from China. I am writing to apply to be the host of the cross-cultural
performance organized by our school.
First and foremost, my proficiency in English makes it easy for me to communicate with the
audience. Plus, I am very familiar with traditional Chinese culture, and therefore it will be
my responsibility to share Chinese stories with the teachers and students in our school to make China
voice better heard. Even more important is my rich experience since I have participated in many host
competitions in China.
I would appreciate it if you could give my application your full consideration. Looking forward to
your favorable reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生根据所给内容，写一篇申请信。
（1）审题判定文体为申请信；
（2）李华身份根据文本要求需要交代；
（3）因文本主体部分为介绍自己担任跨文化演出活动主持人的优势，故本文总体时态定调为一般现在
时。高级词汇：
plus此外=besides, in addition, what's more等
高级短语：
first and foremost首先
proficiency in精通...
makes it easy for sb to do sth使得做某事对某人而言很容易
share Chinese stories with sb to make China voice better heard讲好中国文化
give my application you full consideration充分考虑我的申请
favorable reply肯定答复
高级句式：
Even more important is ...表语形容词置于句首产生完全倒装结构
I would appreciate it if you could ...如果...我将不胜感激
8. 【2019年全国Ⅰ卷】
假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包
括：
1．写信目的；
2．个人优势；
3．能做的事情。
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．结束语已为你写好。
Dear Sir or Madam，
I'm writing to ask if I could work for the exhibition of Chinese paintings. I'm a visiting student at a
school in London for a two-month stay. I read your advertisement on the school website, and
I'm pleased to know that you are recruiting volunteers for the Chinese painting exhibition. I'm very
interested in it.
I love art, and I've been learning traditional Chinese painting in the last few years. My English is
good enough for communication.I can help visitors better understand Chinese paintings. What's more, I
can even show them how to paint with Chinese brush and ink.If my application could be taken into favorable consideration, I would be grateful. And your early
reply will be highly appreciated.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作思路】
本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生根据所给内容，写一篇申请信。
高级词汇：
website网站
recruit招募
brush刷子
appreciated感激的
高级短语：
the exhibition of Chinese paintings 中国画展览
What's more另外
高级句式：
I love art, and I've been learning traditional Chinese painting in the last few years现在完成进行时
What's more, I can even show them how to paint with Chinese brush and ink.宾语从句show sb sth
If my application could be taken into favorable consideration, I would be grateful. 状语从句
9. 假定你是李华，在澳大利亚悉尼一所高中做交换生，得知当地一家中文培训中心正在招募志愿者。请你
根据以下要点，写一封申请信，内容包括：
1. 写信目的；
2. 自身优势；
3. 希望获准。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I know from the Internet that your center is looking for volunteers. I’m writing to apply to be a
volunteer.I have the following advantages. First of all, I’m an exchange student from China, so Chinese is my
mother tongue. Second, I’m friendly and helpful, which allows me to get along well with others. More
importantly, I have worked as a volunteer before, so I know what is expected of a volunteer.
I would appreciate it if you could give me a chance. Please take my application into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给澳大利亚悉尼当地一家中文培训中心写一封申请信，应聘志愿者职
位。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
寻找：search for/hunt for→look for
优势：benefit→advantage
充当：serve as →work as
感激：grateful/thankful→ appreciate
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I have the following advantages. First of all, I’m an exchange student from China, so Chinese is
my mother tongue.
拓展句：I have the following advantages,first of which is I’m an exchange student from China, so
Chinese is my mother tongue.
【点睛】
[高分句型1]Second, I’m friendly and helpful, which allows me to get along well with others.(运用了
which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] More importantly, I have worked as a volunteer before, so I know what is expected of a
volunteer. (运用了 what引导宾语从句)
10. 假如你是高三学生李华，最近得知2022年北京冬奥会筹备组正在为奥运比赛场馆、游客问询中心、奥
运村接待处招募志愿者，你非常想成为其中的一员。请结合自己的情况，给筹备组负责人王先生写一封申
请信。你的申请信需要包括以下内容：
1. 你想申请的一处志愿服务点；2. 你选择此处提供志愿服务的理由。
Dear Mr. Wang,
I’m Li Hua, a senior three student from China. I’m writing to apply for your recently advertised
position for a volunteer of 2022 Beijing Winter Olympic Games.
Among the three options, serving in tourist information center suits me best. Growing up in Beijing,
I am pretty familiar with this city, including most of its places of interest, which makes me able to
introduce them to foreign tourists. Besides, I have a good command of English, especially my oral
English, which will come in handy when I communicate with people from all over the world. It will be
a perfect opportunity for me to temper myself and participate Beijing Winter Olympic Games.
Please take my application into consideration. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给北京冬奥会筹备组负责人写一封申请信，申请成为志愿者。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
选项/选择：option→alternative
熟悉：be familiar with→know well
机会：opportunity→chance
参加：participate=take part in
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It will be a perfect opportunity for me to temper myself and participate Beijing Winter Olympic
Games.
拓展句：I always try to temper myself and participate Beijing Winter Olympic Games, so it will be a
perfect opportunity for me.
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Growing up in Beijing, I am pretty familiar with this city, including most of its places of
interest, which makes me able to introduce them to foreign tourists. （运用了非谓语动词作状语和which
引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] Besides, I have a good command of English, especially my oral English, which will comein handy when I communicate with people from all over the world.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从
句）
