福建省莆田市 高二期末英语测试
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
Teamwork Lights the Way(有标题的文章， 如果跑题，我真的给你生气！！！)
For weeks, the class buzzed with excitement for the handmade craft show(交代事件
背景). Each group needed a unique, good-looking and useful craft for the school art
fair. Lily( 女1
) teamed up with decisive Sophia and Jake who had an eye for
details(人物特点都已交代清楚，应该怎么用？). Thrilled yet a bit nervous about perfection(adj 短语做主语补语),
they started working.
Their first get-together was in the sun-filled art room. Sophia's eyes sparkled as
she
proposed
,“What if we make a lamp from
plastic bottles
?" Jake was attracted by
the idea but voiced a concern,“Sounds amazing, yet dealing with lights and
ensuring a steady structure? We're complete beginners at that(冲突项)" Lily picked up
one of the empty bottles and examined it. She said that those could work,adding(现在
分词做伴随动作) that they would need a solid base and safe battery-powered LED
lights.
Over the next days, they worked day in and day out. They referred to books,
searched for online advice, and gathered supplies( 动词短语并列): bottles, a glue gun,
wires, and LED lights. However, building the lamp(非谓语动词短语做主语)was tougher than
they expected(冲突上升). There were moments when they thought they wouldn't finish
in time for the presentation. As the fair
neared
( 无灵主语句), late nights heightened
their deadline anxiety(无灵主语句).
The night before the fair, exhausted yet hopeful(adj 短语做补语), they readied for the
final test. Sophia held her breath as Lily
inserted the batteries
. The LED lights lit up,
painting
the walls with gentle, liquid light
(现在分词短语做结果状语).Then a loud BANG!(高潮)
The lamp crashed onto the table. “No! What's wrong?" Lily cried, rushing over(现在分
词短语丛伴随动作).Jake knelt, discovering
a thin crack in the base
(现在分词短语做伴随动作). “This base
wasn't thick enough to bear the weight." Their painstaking creation lay in ruins. With
dawn approaching(with 复合结构), disappointment washed over them(无灵主语句).
Sophia stared at the broken pieces for a moment. Then she grabbed the glue
gun, her voice firm( 独立主格)."We've put in far too much effort to give up now." she
declared. Her words pulled Lily and Jake out of their hopelessness.
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: The team decided to fix it together.
Paragraph 2: The next day, the students were excited as each team presented their
crafts.
福建省莆田市 高二期末英语测试
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
Teamwork Lights the Way
For weeks, the class buzzed with excitement for the handmade craft show, Each
group needed a unique, good-looking and useful craft for the school art fair. Lily
teamed up with decisive Sophia and Jake who had an eye for details. Thrilled yet a bit
nervous about perfection, they started working.
Their first get-together was in the sun-filled art room. Sophia's eyes sparkled as
she proposed,“.What if we make a lamp from plastic bottles?" Jake was attracted by
the idea but voiced a concern,“Sounds amazing, yet dealing with lights and ensuring a
steady structure? We're complete beginner sat that," Lily picked up one of the empty
bottles and examined it. She said that those could work,adding that they would need a
solid base and safe battery-powered LED lights.
Over the next days, they worked day in and day out, They referred to books,
searched for online advice, and gathered supplies: bottles, a glue gun, wires, and LED
lights. However, building the lamp was tougher than they expected. There were
moments when they thought they wouldn't finish in time for the presentation. As the
fair neared, late nights heightened their deadline anxiety.
The night before the fair, exhausted yet hopeful, they readied for the final test.
Sophia held her breath as Lily inserted the batteries. The LED lights lit up, painting
the walls with gentle, liquid light.Then a loud BANG! The lamp crashed onto the
table. “No! What's wrong?" Lily cried, rushing over.Jake knelt, discovering a thin
crack (裂线) in the base, “This base wasn't thick enough to bear the weight." Their
painstaking creation lay in ruins, With dawn approaching, disappointment washed
over them.
Sophia stared at the broken pieces for a moment, Then she grabbed the glue gun,
her voice firm."We've put in far too much effort to give up now." she declared. Her
words pulled Lily and Jake out of their hopelessness.
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: The team decided to fix it together.
Paragraph 2: The next day, the students were excited as each team presented their
crafts.
1. 读后续写类型分析及构思布局
类型：情感 + 团队合作解决问题类读后续写（成长/问题解决型）
核心主题：通过合作与坚持克服困难，完成目标。
构思步骤
具体内容
情节框架
修复灯座→优化设计→成功展示→情感升华
段落布局
第一段：团队协作修复灯座（细节描写+心理转变）；第二段：
展览成功+感悟成长
关键衔接点
承接“胶枪修复”动作→解释技术改进（如加固底座）→时间过
渡到展览→观众反应
伏笔利用
原文“底座太薄”→续写加固底座；原文“电池LED”→续写灯
光效果惊艳
情感设计
绝望→重燃信心→自豪；通过动作（如对视微笑）和环境（如灯
光效果）烘托
注意事项：
承接原文：必须提及“胶枪修复”“底座裂痕”“LED 灯光”；保持三人分工
（Sophia 决策、Lily 行动、Jake 细节）。
巧妙设计：加入团队讨论修复方案的对话；展览时用观众赞叹呼应开头“独特
有用”的目标。
2. 故事山模式及原文分析
故事山模式：
开端：团队兴奋筹备手工艺品展。
发展：制作灯过程中遇到技术困难。
高潮：灯座断裂，团队绝望但决定修复。
结局（续写部分）：成功修复并展览，领悟合作价值。
关键分析表：
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
人物刻画
Sophia 果断，Jake 细
致，Lily 协调
“decisive Sophia”, “Jake who had an eye for
details”
情感层次
兴奋→焦虑→绝望→
重燃希望
“thrilled yet nervous”, “disappointment
washed over them”, “voice firm”
关键情节
点
灯座破裂为转折点
“Then a loud BANG! The lamp crashed onto
the table.”
隐含线索
底座薄弱（暗示需加
固）
“a thin crack in the base… wasn’t thick
enough”
冲突点
技术能力不足 vs. 时
间紧迫
“building the lamp was tougher than they
expected”
解决方案
团队协作修复+结构优
化
“Sophia grabbed the glue gun… ‘We’ve put
in far too much effort to give up’”
心理描写
通过动作和语言间接
体现
“Lily cried, rushing over”, “Jake knelt”
环境描写
灯光效果营造氛围
“painting the walls with gentle, liquid light”
3. 读后续写例句及高级替换词
(1) 动作描写
Sophia swiftly traced the crack with glue.
（索菲亚迅速用胶水涂抹裂缝。）
Jake reinforced the base with extra plastic layers.
（杰克用额外的塑料层加固底座。）
Lily carefully rewired the LEDs, her fingers steady.
（莉莉小心翼翼地重新连接LED 灯，手指稳稳的。）
They huddled around the lamp, their faces tense with focus.
（他们围在灯旁，神情专注而紧张。）
Sophia grabbed the glue gun, her movements decisive.
（索菲亚抓起热熔胶枪，动作果断。）
Jake knelt down, examining the broken pieces.
（杰克跪下来，检查碎片。）
Lily rushed over, her breath quick with panic.
（莉莉冲过去，呼吸因慌乱而急促。）
They exchanged glances, silently agreeing to keep trying.
（他们交换眼神，默默决定继续尝试。）
Sophia pressed the pieces together, holding them firmly.
（索菲亚用力按压碎片，紧紧固定。）
The lamp wobbled slightly but stood firm after their adjustments.
（灯微微晃动，但经过调整后稳稳立住。）
(2) 心理描写
A wave of despair washed over them as the lamp collapsed.
（灯倒下时，一阵绝望感席卷了他们。）
Sophia’s determination burned brighter than ever.
（索菲亚的决心比以往任何时候都更强烈。）
Lily’s heart pounded with a mix of fear and hope.
（莉莉的心跳加速，恐惧与希望交织。）
Jake clenched his fists, refusing to accept defeat.
（杰克攥紧拳头，拒绝认输。）
Their earlier excitement had faded into exhaustion.
（他们先前的兴奋已变成疲惫。）
A flicker of doubt crossed Lily’s mind, but she pushed it away.
（一丝疑虑闪过莉莉的脑海，但她很快驱散了它。）
Sophia’s voice was steady, masking her own anxiety.
（索菲亚的声音很平稳，掩盖了她自己的焦虑。）
Jake’s analytical mind raced for a solution.
（杰克的分析思维飞速运转，寻找解决方案。）
They all felt the weight of the approaching deadline.
（他们都感受到了截止日期的压力。）
A surge of pride replaced their earlier frustration.
（一股自豪感取代了他们先前的沮丧。）
(3) 环境描写
The art room was bathed in the soft glow of dawn.
（艺术教室沐浴在黎明的柔和光芒中。）
The LED lights cast dancing shadows on the walls.
（LED 灯在墙上投下摇曳的影子。）
The classroom buzzed with the chatter of excited students.
（教室里充满了兴奋学生的交谈声。）
The morning sun streamed through the windows, illuminating their work.
（晨光透过窗户，照亮了他们的作品。）
A hush fell over the crowd as their lamp lit up.
（当他们的灯亮起时，人群安静下来。）
The faint hum of the school’s heating system filled the background.
（学校供暖系统的微弱嗡嗡声在背景中回荡。）
The smell of hot glue lingered in the air.
（热熔胶的气味在空气中萦绕。）
The fair was a riot of colors, with crafts displayed everywhere.
（展览会上色彩缤纷，手工艺品随处可见。）
The gentle flicker of their lamp stood out among the exhibits.
（他们的灯柔和闪烁，在展品中格外显眼。）
The applause from the audience echoed through the hall.
（观众的掌声在大厅里回荡。）
高级替换词（按场景分类）
普通词
高级替换词
适用场景
happy
thrilled / elated
成功后的喜悦
sad
crestfallen / disheartened
失败时的情绪
fix
reinforce / mend
修理物品
look
examine / scrutinize
仔细观察
say
declare / murmur
不同语气的说话
固定搭配 & 词法解析
Day in and day out（日复一日）→ 强调持续努力
Hold one’s breath（屏住呼吸）→ 紧张时刻
Wash over sb.（席卷某人）→ 情绪描写
A riot of colors（五彩缤纷）→ 环境描写
Stand out（脱颖而出）→ 成功时刻
可积累的语料（生词短语）
Reinforce (v.) 加固
近义词：strengthen
反义词：weaken
例句：
They reinforced the base to prevent another collapse.
The team reinforced their plan with extra research.
Crestfallen (adj.) 沮丧的
近义词：dejected
反义词：elated
例句：
Jake looked crestfallen when the lamp broke.
After the loss, the players were crestfallen.
Scrutinize (v.) 仔细检查
近义词：inspect
反义词：glance
例句：
Lily scrutinized the wiring for errors.
The judge scrutinized every detail of the project.
Elated (adj.) 欣喜若狂的
近义词：overjoyed
反义词：devastated
例句：
They were elated when their lamp worked perfectly.
Winning the competition left her elated.
Linger (v.) 萦绕
近义词：remain
反义词：fade
例句：The smell of paint lingered in the room.
His words lingered in her mind long after.
动作描写：多用具体动词（trace, reinforce, rewire）增强画面感。
心理描写：用比喻（wave of despair）和身体反应（heart pounded）体现情绪。
环境描写：通过光影（soft glow）、声音（hush fell）、气味（hot glue）渲染氛
围。
高级替换：避免重复，如“happy”→“thrilled”，“look”→“scrutinize”。
固定搭配：如“day in and day out”可替换“work hard”。
语料积累：重点记忆动词（reinforce）和形容词（crestfallen），并练习造句。
5. Possible Version(4)
Version Special
Paragraph 1:The team decided to fix it together. Sophia immediately took
charge, her decisive nature shining through(独立主格，衔接原文) as she began reinforcing
the cracked base with layers of plastic. Jake, meticulous as always(adj 做主语补语),
carefully realigned the wiring while suggesting(状从压缩) they add extra support
beams. Lily, though
exhausted
(adj 做主语补语), worked steadily to reassemble the
delicate LED components. The art room, once filled with despair, now buzzed
with quiet determination(递进描写) as they worked against the clock. Occasionally, they
exchanged encouraging glances, their initial panic replaced by focused resolve(独立主
格). The faint smell of hot glue mixed with the metallic tang of wires created an
atmosphere of industrious creativity, also witnessing
their
teamwork
(现在分词做伴随动作).
Paragraph 2: The next day, the students were excited as each team presented
their crafts. When their turn came, a hush fell over the crowd as
Lily
switched on
the lamp. A warm, golden radiance flooded the display table, the
specially-
designed
bottle patterns casting
amazing
shadows
(独立主格). The judges leaned
forward, clearly
impressed by
the innovative design
(过去分词做原因状语). Sophia squeezed
Jake's arm in silent triumph while
Lily
blinked back happy tears
. Their
perseverance had paid off - not only had they salvaged their project, but created
something truly special(倒装句). The applause that followed was more than just
recognition of their craft; it was validation of their teamwork(递进句式).
Version 1
Paragraph 1: The team decided to fix it together. Determined
not to let their
hard work go to waste(过去分词短语做adj 主语补语), Sophia swiftly outlined a new plan. While
Lily
cleaned the shattered parts
, Jake reinforced the base using
layers of
cardboard and extra glue(现在分词短语做伴随动作). With each careful move, the tension in the
room melted into focused silence(无灵主语句). Though
their hands trembled with
exhaustion, their hearts burned with determination. The lamp
began to take
shape again, steadier and more elegant than before(adj 短语做补语). They ran several
tests, adjusting the weight balance and tightening the wires(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Had
they given up(had 型虚拟语气), their efforts would have been meaningless. As dawn painted
the sky(无灵主语句), the light glowed again — gentle, warm, and alive, just like their
teamwork.
Paragraph 2: The next day, the students were excited as each team presented
their crafts. Nervously holding
their lamp
(现在分词短语做伴随动作), Lily glanced at Sophia
and Jake, who both gave reassuring smiles. When their turn came, Sophia
explained the concept and setbacks they had overcome. As Lily
switched it on
,
the room bathed in soft, liquid light(环境描写). A hush fell over the crowd, then came
thunderous applause(赛场环境描写). Their classmates weren't just impressed by the
beauty, but moved by their resilience. The teacher nodded approvingly, praising
their creativity and persistence(现在分词短语做伴随动作). In that moment, they realized success
wasn't about perfection — it was about pushing forward despite the cracks(递进描
写，双关). Their broken lamp had become a beacon of courage.
语言表达提升整理
类别
词汇/短语
同义词/替换
示例句
地道搭配
give reassuring
smiles
offer comforting
looks
She gave him a reassuring smile
before stepping on stage.
情绪描写
hands trembled
with exhaustion
hands shook from
fatigue
Their hands trembled with
exhaustion, but they didn’t stop.
动作描写
tightened the
wires
fastened the cords
He carefully tightened the wires to
ensure safety.
亮点短语
a beacon of
courage
a symbol of
strength
Their creation became a beacon of
courage.
语法点
Had they given
up,...
虚拟语气倒装
Had they tried earlier, they would’ve
succeeded.
Version 2
Paragraph 1: The team decided to fix it together. Without wasting a moment,
they gathered every tool and leftover supply. Jake measured a sturdier base,
drawing
inspiration from the mistakes
(现在分词短语做伴随动作) they had made. Sophia, her
eyes no longer shining from excitement but from resolve(独立主格), worked silently
but efficiently. Lily, though tired(adj 做主语补语), suggested adding decorative tape to
cover the damaged parts, turning flaws into features(现在分词短语做结果状语). As the clock
ticked on, their frustration slowly turned into rhythm, and their disappointment
transformed into purpose(同构句，排比). By sunrise, their lamp wasn’t just repaired —
it was reinvented. The light danced more steadily(无灵主语句), casting patterns(现在分词短语做结
果状语) that were even more beautiful than before. They stared at it, then
switching
smiles
with
each
other,
(现在分词短语做伴随动作) breathless(adj 做补语).
Paragraph 2: The next day, the students were excited as each team presented
their crafts. Holding
the lamp like a trophy
(现在分词短语做伴随动作), they approached the
front. “This piece,” Jake began, “taught us that cracks don’t ruin something —
they reveal where the light gets in(递进句式).” Laughter and claps followed, echoing
the message(现在分词短语做伴随动作). When
the lamp lit up
(无必要不被动), gasps filled the air. The
judges admired their creativity and problem-solving, awarding
them a special
recognition for innovation(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Sophia squeezed Jake's arm in silent
triumph while
Lily
blinked back happy tears
. As they returned to their seats, the
team exchanged glances of pride. The cracks were still there — but so was the
story they told. It wasn’t just a lamp anymore. It was a memory built with glue,
teamwork, and faith(名词并列点题).
类别
词汇/短语
替换词/联想词
示例句
情绪描
写
breathless with pride
stunned with joy
They stood breathless with pride as
the crowd cheered.
动作描
写
drew inspiration from
was inspired by
Jake drew inspiration from past
mistakes.
亮点表
达
cracks reveal where the
light gets in
flaws turn into
strength
The cracks told a deeper story than
perfection ever could.
语法结
构
It wasn’t just… anymore 倒装/强调结构
It wasn’t just a tool anymore. It was
a lesson.
Version 3
Paragraph 1: The team decided to fix it together. Instead of panicking, Sophia
calmly assessed the damage and brainstormed ideas. “What if we create a double
base?” Lily suggested, sketching
on scrap paper
(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Sophia nodded
and began layering cardboard, while
Jake
used extra wiring to reinforce the joints
.
The night wore on, but so did their spirits. At one point, the glue gun stopped
working — but instead of giving up, they heated the glue with a candle(增加冲突感).
Nothing could stop them now, not even a failing tool. When they finally tested it,
the lamp lit up brighter than ever. Tired but thrilled(adj 短语做主语补语), they collapsed in
relief, surrounded by warmth(过去分词做后置定语) — not from the lamp, but from their
bond, creativity, and teamwork.
Paragraph 2: The next day, the students were excited as each team presented
their crafts. Their project was placed last, as the teacher knew their story deserved a
final spotlight. As
Sophia
spoke
, Lily turned on the lamp — it glowed golden,
steady and pure(adj 做主语补语). “This lamp,” she said softly, “is more than plastic and
wires. It's our journey through failure and friendship(递进描写).” The crowd fell silent,
then erupted into cheers(赛场描写). Their piece didn’t just shine — it spoke. That
afternoon, a photo of their lamp was posted on the school’s homepage, captioned(过去
分词后置): “Light made from setbacks.” The team smiled. What had once cracked, now
connected them stronger than ever.
语言表达提升整理
类别
词汇/短语
同义/替换词
示例句
情绪描写
thrilled but
exhausted
delighted yet
drained
They were thrilled but exhausted by
dawn.
动作描写
sketched on
scrap paper
jotted ideas quickly
She sketched the base idea on a
napkin.
高级表达
light made from
setbacks
strength born from
struggle
Their journey proved light can be
born from setbacks.
加分语法
not even…
could stop them
强调结构
Not even the broken tool could stop
them.
读后续写语料积累卡片
功能表达
原词
升级/替换选项
努力不放弃
keep going press on / persevere / refuse to quit
成功表现
succeed
achieve / accomplish / triumph
合作类形容词good
collaborative / united / harmonious
感情表达
happy
overjoyed / thrilled / elated
描述失望
sad
devastated / heartbroken / disheartened
实用例句积累：
What once seemed like a failure became their greatest strength.
The cracks in the lamp mirrored their journey — imperfect but beautiful.
Success wasn’t the prize; it was the perseverance that led there.
When things fell apart, they built something better — together.
