2025 届湖北省名校（圆创）高三下学期三月联合测评英语试题
1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On Sunday, Mike and his mother Rose went to Grandma Alondra’s house
for lunch(三个人物). Alondra had prepared Mike’s favorite meal. “Mike’s school prom is
approaching, Mum,” Rose told Alondra. “Do you still have that tailor’s contact who
owned that old shop in town? I want to get a suit tailored for Mike(经典语法，get sth done). ”
“Oh! I do! ” Alondra laughed. “So, Mike, who’s going to be your date? ” she asked.
“Nobody. I haven’t found anyone. So, I might not go, ” Mike said, his eyes fixed on
his phone(独立主格，刻画人物状态).
Alondra said, “You kids are so lucky to have the prom and everything. I’ve
never gone to one! ” “Really, Mum? ”(哇塞，故事到这里好像已经很清楚了) Rose asked with a
surprised look. “Well, yes. But that’s an old, old story! Let’s not go there, ” Alondra
said. “The thing is, Mike, you should definitely go and have a good time. ”
It was then that Rose had an idea(强调句). She asked Mike to take Alondra as
his date to the prom. Mike disliked the idea. As a teenager, and as the most popular
boy at school(交代人物的特点), he didn’t want to take his grandmother to the prom. He was
afraid the other students would laugh at him(年轻时的正常想法，很符合人物年龄段). However, he
couldn’t find a reason to turn this down. Not a single one(强调的句式). Most
importantly, he loved Alondra.
So, on the afternoon of prom day, Mike and Rose drove to Alondra’s house.
When the older woman opened her door to Mike in a suit, she smiled. “Oh! Look
how beautiful you look(感叹句), darling!” she said. Rose nudged Mike. “Thank -
thanks, Gran,” he said with a sigh. “Will you, um, be my date tonight? I want to make
your dream come true. . . I want to take you to the prom.”
Alondra was both surprised and excited(情绪描写). While she didn’t want to go,
Rose had persuaded her that it would be a great bonding time for her and Mike.
So, Alondra put on her finest dress and went to the prom with Mike.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As Mike walked into the school hall with his grandmother, the whole place fell
silent.
Seeing Alondra was welcomed, Mike was relieved, and soon the party got
started.
2025 届湖北省名校（圆创）高三下学期三月联合测评英语试题
1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整
的短文。
On Sunday, Mike and his mother Rose went to Grandma Alondra’s house
for lunch. Alondra had prepared Mike’s favorite meal. “Mike’s school prom (舞会) is
approaching, Mum,” Rose told Alondra. “Do you still have that tailor’s contact who
owned that old shop in town? I want to get a suit tailored for Mike. ” “Oh! I do! ”
Alondra laughed. “So, Mike, who’s going to be your date? ” she asked. “Nobody. I
haven’t found anyone. So, I might not go, ” Mike said, his eyes fixed on his phone.
Alondra said, “You kids are so lucky to have the prom and everything. I’ve
never gone to one! ” “Really, Mum? ” Rose asked with a surprised look. “Well, yes.
But that’s an old, old story! Let’s not go there, ” Alondra said. “The thing is, Mike,
you should definitely go and have a good time. ”
It was then that Rose had an idea. She asked Mike to take Alondra as his date to
the prom. Mike disliked the idea. As a teenager, and as the most popular boy at
school, he didn’t want to take his grandmother to the prom. He was afraid the other
students would laugh at him. However, he couldn’t find a reason to turn this down.
Not a single one. Most importantly, he loved Alondra.
So, on the afternoon of prom day, Mike and Rose drove to Alondra’s house.
When the older woman opened her door to Mike in a suit, she smiled. “Oh! Look how
beautiful you look, darling!” she said. Rose nudged (用肘轻推) Mike. “Thank -
thanks, Gran,” he said with a sigh (叹气) . “Will you, um, be my date tonight? I want
to make your dream come true. . . I want to take you to the prom.”
Alondra was both surprised and excited. While she didn’t want to go, Rose had
persuaded her that it would be a great bonding (联络感情的) time for her and Mike.
So, Alondra put on her finest dress and went to the prom with Mike.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: As Mike walked into the school hall with his grandmother, the
whole place fell silent.
Paragraph 2: Seeing Alondra was welcomed, Mike was relieved, and soon the
party got started.
一、读后续写类型与构思分析
分析角度
内容
类型分类
本文属于 个人亲情成长类 续写，核心围绕亲情（祖孙情）、
克服内心障碍、情感升华。
构思思路
1. 主线：Mike 带祖母参加舞会，引发众人反应→情节发展与高
潮→内心转变→圆满结局；
2. 情感：从羞涩排斥→接受→骄傲→感动升华；
3. 人物：Mike 从在意他人眼光到自豪勇敢，Alondra 从犹豫到
感动参与，Rose 是温情推动者。
布局方法
使用两段结构:
①第一段：描写进入舞会后的反应氛围和心理冲突；
②第二段：情绪转折、祖孙共舞、圆梦与成长、舞会结束、升
华主题。
框架提炼
- 开头：场景描写+全场反应（沉默/惊讶）
- 中段：情绪冲突+祖母反应+同学态度转变
- 高潮：共舞/致辞等高光时刻
- 结尾：祖孙感情升华+Mike 内心变化总结
实施策略
- 合理使用环境/动作/心理/情绪描写增强感染力；
- 体现人物转变与情感升华；
- 逻辑衔接上自然承接“邀请祖母”的设定，突出“愿望实
现”。
承接原文注意事
项
1. 不引入新人物；
2. 保持角色性格一致性：Mike 虽在意形象但懂事、有爱心；
Alondra 温柔幽默；
3. 时间线为“舞会当晚”，空间为“学校舞会大厅”；
4. 核心任务是实现“让Alondra 圆梦”。
分析角度
内容
整体注意事项
- 情节需正面温暖感人；
- 避免夸张搞笑处理；
- 注意使用高考语法点和地道表达；
- 每段控制在150 词左右。
巧妙设计建议
- 设计细节推动情感：如祖母跳舞受欢迎、同学主动与其互
动、老师致辞表扬等；
- 添加象征性元素：如Mike 把舞会花环戴在祖母头上；
- 精心设置结尾句：表达成长、理解、勇气等主题升华。
二、故事山（Story Mountain）分析与结构衔接
分析角度
内容
原文反映句
开端（Introduction）
Mike 答应带祖母参加舞
会，奠定冲突基础
“Will you, um, be my date tonight?
I want to make your dream come
true.”
上升动作（Rising
Action）
驱车接祖母，祖母准备好
出发；设定即将进入舞会
场景
“Alondra put on her finest dress
and went to the prom with Mike.”
高潮（Climax）
进入舞会大厅后全场反
应，Mike 心理挣扎，祖
母表现意外
“As Mike walked into the school
hall with his grandmother, the
whole place fell silent.”
转折与情感升华
（Falling Action）
同学欢迎Alondra，Mike
转变，跳舞或合照等细节
强化情感联结
“Seeing Alondra was welcomed,
Mike was relieved…”
结局（Resolution）
Mike 感受到亲情力量、
克服自我、感到自豪，实
现成长
自创 ending：如“Mike realized
he had just had the best night of his
life.”
三、原文语言特征与衔接分析表格
分析角度
内容
原文反映句
人物刻画
Mike 内敛但善良，是一个很受
欢迎的大男孩，Alondra 幽默慈
爱
“Mike said, his eyes fixed on his
phone.” “Alondra laughed.”
情感层次
矛盾→妥协→感动→骄傲
“Mike disliked the idea…
However… he loved Alondra.”
关键情节点Mike 邀请祖母，祖母答应出席
“I want to make your dream come
true.” “Alondra… went to the prom
with Mike.”
语言特色
对话自然，情绪含蓄
“Will you, um, be my date tonight?”
关键词分析
prom, dream, sigh, bonding,
persuade
“I want to make your dream come
true.”，“bonding time for her and
Mike.”
心理描写
Mike 羞涩、挣扎
“Mike disliked the idea.” “he sighed.”
动作描写
Rose nudged Mike；祖母开门、
着装
“Rose nudged Mike.” “Alondra put
on her finest dress.”
环境描写
舞会场景为后续提供空间铺垫
“the school hall”（待续写展开）
隐含主题
勇敢表达爱，代际亲情联结，成
长
暗示：愿望实现、最受欢迎男孩的
转变
情感转折
Mike 从尴尬转向感动
“Seeing Alondra was welcomed,
Mike was relieved.”
空间转换
家中→学校大厅
“drove to Alondra’s house” →
“school hall”
时间过渡
下午 → 舞会当晚
“on the afternoon of prom day”
类型
内容
原文反映
伏笔
Alondra 说自己从未参加过舞
会，引出“圆梦”主题
“I’ve never gone to one!”
冲突点
Mike 内心羞于带祖母，怕被笑话“Mike disliked the idea.”
类型
内容
原文反映
隐含线索
Mike 内心其实深爱祖母、富有同
理心
“Most importantly, he loved
Alondra.”
解决方案
勇敢面对，选择行动表达爱，获
得大家认可和情感升华
“Seeing Alondra was welcomed,
Mike was relieved…”（为下文铺
垫）
3. 情境描写语料
动作描写
英文例句
中文翻译
1. Mike hesitated for a second before taking
Alondra’s hand.
Mike 迟疑了一下，然后牵起了
Alondra 的手。
2. She gently adjusted the brooch on her dress.
她轻轻地整理了一下衣服上的胸
针。
3. The students turned around, eyes widening in
surprise.
学生们转过头来，惊讶地睁大了
眼睛。
4. Mike straightened his shoulders and stepped
forward.
Mike 挺直肩膀，向前迈步。
5. A few clapped hesitantly before applause filled
the hall.
有几个人犹豫地鼓起掌，然后掌
声响彻大厅。
6. She gave Mike’s arm a comforting squeeze.
她安慰地轻轻捏了捏Mike 的胳
膊。
7. Mike offered a shaky smile as he guided
Alondra to the dance floor.
Mike 带着勉强的微笑牵着Alondra
走向舞池。
8. The DJ paused the music, sensing something
special was happening.
DJ 暂停了音乐，意识到一些特别
的事正在发生。
9. She waved politely at the curious onlookers.
她礼貌地向好奇的学生们挥了挥
手。
英文例句
中文翻译
10. Mike bowed slightly and invited Alondra to
dance.
Mike 微微鞠躬，邀请Alondra 跳
舞。
心理描写
英文例句
中文翻译
1. Mike’s heart pounded as he stepped into the
hall.
当Mike 走进大厅时，他的心怦怦
直跳。
2. A wave of anxiety washed over him.
一阵焦虑涌上心头。
3. He felt the weight of every gaze in the room.
他能感觉到房间里每一个目光的重
量。
4. Doubts screamed in his mind, but he pushed
them aside.
疑虑在他脑中尖叫，但他强迫自己
忽略它们。
5. Embarrassment burned on his face.
脸上烧起了尴尬的火焰。
6. Yet beneath the nerves, there was pride.
但在紧张之下，藏着一丝自豪。
7. He feared judgment, but longed for
acceptance.
他害怕被评判，却渴望被接纳。
8. Gratitude swelled in his chest.
感激之情在他心中涌起。
9. He felt like a hero in that moment.
那一刻，他感觉自己就像个英雄。
10. Her joy melted his hesitation.
她的喜悦融化了他的迟疑。
环境描写
英文例句
中文翻译
1. The hall was decked out with twinkling
fairy lights.
大厅装饰着闪闪发光的小彩灯。
2. Music drifted through the air like a gentle
breeze.
音乐像微风一样在空气中飘荡。
3. Laughter and chatter filled the decorated
space.
布置一新的空间中充满了笑声与交
谈。
英文例句
中文翻译
4. A disco ball cast shimmering lights across
the walls.
旋转的迪斯科球在墙上洒下闪烁的光
点。
5. Tables were lined with snacks and colorful
drinks.
桌上摆满了小吃和彩色饮品。
6. The room buzzed with teenage excitement. 房间里充满了青少年的兴奋气息。
7. The scent of roses and perfume floated in
the air.
空气中弥漫着玫瑰和香水的香味。
8. Banners reading “PROM NIGHT” hung
above the stage.
舞台上方挂着写有“舞会之夜”的横
幅。
9. Students clustered in groups, some
dancing, some chatting.
学生三五成群，有的跳舞，有的聊
天。
10. A soft spotlight followed Mike and
Alondra as they entered.
一道柔和的聚光灯追随着Mike 和
Alondra 走入大厅。
高级词替换
场景
常见词
高级替换词
适用句型
情绪描写
happy
overjoyed, ecstatic
She looked overjoyed to be here.
紧张/尴尬
nervous
uneasy, anxious, self-
conscious
He felt self-conscious under the
spotlight.
外貌描写
beautiful
elegant, graceful,
radiant
She looked radiant in her vintage
dress.
称赞人物
good
admirable, impressive,
inspiring
Her courage was truly admirable.
表现勇敢
brave
courageous, daring,
bold
It was a bold move to bring her to
prom.
常见地道搭配
搭配
说明
示例句
fall silent
短语动词，表示突然安静下The room fell silent as they
搭配
说明
示例句
来
entered.
make one's dream
come true
固定短语，表达“实现愿
望”
I want to make your dream come
true, Grandma.
be welcomed with
open arms
比喻热情欢迎
She was welcomed with open
arms.
nudge someone
动作动词，常用于含蓄提示Rose nudged Mike gently.
put on one’s finest
dress
穿上最好的衣服
She put on her finest dress.
词汇积累
词汇
词性中文意思
近义词
反义词
persuade v.
劝说，劝服convince, urge
discourage, dissuade
sigh
v./n. 叹气
exhale, murmur
cheer, exclaim
bonding n.
情感联结
connection, attachment alienation, detachment
hesitate
v.
犹豫
waver, pause
decide, advance
reluctant adj.
不情愿的
unwilling, resistant
eager, willing
persuade
She persuaded her son to take his grandmother to the prom.
It took some time to persuade him, but he finally agreed.
sigh
Mike gave a deep sigh before speaking.
With a sigh, she looked at the photo.
bonding
The prom turned out to be a great bonding moment.
Activities like this help build bonding between generations.
hesitate
Don’t hesitate to follow your heart.
He hesitated before answering.
reluctant
Mike felt reluctant at first.
She gave a reluctant smile and nodded.
情境续写万能语料模版整合
动作描写句型模版（可替换主语与动作）
模版句型
功能
适用场景
He/She reached out a trembling hand to...
表现紧张/感动
牵手、开场互动
With a deep breath, he/she stepped forward
and...
内心斗争后采取
行动
面对挑战/跳舞邀
请
He/She adjusted his/her [clothes/accessory] and
smiled.
紧张中的整理动
作
舞会入场、表演
前
His/Her lips curved into a nervous smile.
情绪转化、缓解
尴尬
面对大众
He/She glanced around the room, eyes
searching for...
环境互动
寻找人物/情感焦
点
心理描写模版
模版句型
功能
情绪类型
A mix of fear and hope swirled in his/her chest.
内心冲突
不确定、犹豫
His/Her heart fluttered with anticipation.
期待感
即将登场
模版句型
功能
情绪类型
A wave of warmth and pride flooded him/her.
情绪爆发
情感转折、高光时
刻
He/She couldn’t help but feel a sense of belonging. 接纳与改变情感升华结尾
Doubts faded, replaced by a growing sense of
confidence.
情绪由低转
高
高潮处
环境描写模版
模版句型
功能
场景提示
The hall shimmered with soft golden lights, casting a
dreamlike glow.
氛围渲染
舞会/盛大活
动
Music floated in the background, wrapping the room in
magic.
营造情境
舞会现场
Every corner of the room buzzed with laughter and
whispered excitement.
动态描写
人群活动
The space felt both overwhelming and inviting.
心境与环境
融合
初入舞会
Students turned as one, creating a moment of electric
stillness.
突出重点事
件
入场时刻
高频续写素材大全
类别
内容
示例或常用表达
情绪层次
紧张 → 期待 → 喜悦/自豪
uneasy → hopeful → fulfilled
人物关系
家人支持、陌生人鼓励、师生
互动
Grandma smiled proudly; A teacher
nodded approvingly
环境设置
灯光、音乐、声音、气味、装
饰
shimmering lights, upbeat music, sweet
perfume
亮点句式
高分句式结构（with/分词/倒
装/强调）
With a shy smile, she stepped into the
spotlight.
类别
内容
示例或常用表达
内心独白
引导心理变化，增强共鸣
“Maybe this was worth it after all,” he
thought.
句子连接
承上启下/情节过渡
Just as he was about to give up,
something unexpected happened.
推荐积累模板结尾句
That night, more than a dance was shared — a memory was made.
It turned out that courage wasn't loud; it was a quiet step taken with love.
And for the first time, he understood what truly mattered.
Perhaps, in the glow of fairy lights, they all learned something about kindness.
It was not just a prom, but a moment that stitched generations together.
5. Possible Versions
Version 1:
Paragraph 1: As Mike walked into the school hall with his grandmother, the
whole place fell silent. For a moment, Mike’s heart sank(心理描写刻画). He could almost
hear his own breathing in the hush(状态描写). Just as he was preparing for a round of
mockery, someone clapped. Then another. Slowly, the clapping spread like
wildfire(无灵主语句). “Go Mike!” someone shouted. Alondra held his arm tightly,
confused but smiling(adj 做主语补语). Mike stood taller, the corners of his mouth lifting
slightly(独立主格刻画人物的神态). The school band even changed the tune into a swing-style
welcome beat. Clearly, the tide was turning(场景描写). Some of Mike’s friends walked
over, giving
him a thumbs-up and
nodding
to Alondra respectfully
(现在分词短语做伴随动
作). Mike whispered, “Thanks for coming, Gran.” Alondra beamed. She felt, for the
first time in decades, young again.
Paragraph 2: Seeing Alondra was welcomed, Mike was relieved, and soon
the party got started. They found seats near the dance floor, and Alondra
immediately began tapping her foot to the beat(场景词汇). When the host invited
everyone to dance, Alondra surprised Mike by confidently stepping onto the floor.
“Let’s show them some real moves,” she said with a wink(状态描写灵动哦). They spun,
stepped, and even attempted a simple twirl(场景词汇，动作串), which earned applause.
Mike started laughing freely—so did everyone else. The lights glowed golden(环境描写，
无灵主语), casting a magical hue over the room(现在分词做结果状语，环境描写). Later, while sipping
the
soft
drink
, Alondra said, “You know what? You’ve given me something I
thought(插入语，可省略) I’d missed forever.” Mike looked into her shining eyes and
smiled. That night, he wasn’t just the most popular boy at school(与原文衔接)—he was
the proudest grandson alive(递进描写).
亮点词汇短语分析
情绪描写：his heart sank, stood taller, beamed, shining eyes, proudest
动作描写：held his arm, stepped onto the floor, spun, twirl, sipping punch
环境描写：the lights glowed golden, the hush, swing-style beat
积累语料与升级替换
原词
高阶替换
同义词/联想词例句
happy
thrilled
delighted
She was thrilled to be part of the celebration.
walk
stride
step
He strode into the room, heart pounding.
laugh
chuckle
giggle
The memory made her chuckle uncontrollably.
excited exhilarated
overjoyed
He felt exhilarated to dance with his
grandmother.
good
heartwarming meaningful
It was a heartwarming sight to see them dance.
Version 2
Paragraph 1: As Mike walked into the school hall with his grandmother, the
whole place fell silent. It felt as if time had frozen(场景过渡句). Mike looked around, his
palms sweating(独立主格，刻画人物神态), but Alondra gently squeezed his hand. “Just smile,”
she whispered. Someone near the serving table let out a low whistle, followed
by murmurs(过去分词做后置定语). “Is that his grandma? She looks fabulous!” a girl said.
Laughter broke out—not mocking, but admiring. Slowly, people began
approaching. One offered to take their photo. Mike nodded in disbelief. He had
prepared for humiliation(过去完成时，表示自己的提前预判), but instead received admiration. His
classmates seemed impressed by his courage and touched by the gesture. A
teacher even said, “This is the most genuine thing I’ve seen at a prom.” Mike
smiled, suddenly proud of his choice(adj 做主语补语).
Paragraph 2: Seeing Alondra was welcomed, Mike was relieved, and soon
the party got started. Music thumped in the background(环境描写) as students danced
and joked. Alondra sat first, sipping
juice
(现在分词做伴随动作), but was soon pulled onto the
dance floor by a cheerful girl. She moved with a rhythm that surprised everyone.
“You go, Grandma!” someone yelled. The crowd cheered. Mike joined her,
laughing so hard he nearly tripped(现在分词做伴随动作). The school photographer
captured the joy-filled moment. As the night wore on(很好的时间过渡语), Alondra told
stories of her youth, drawing
a small crowd
(现在分词做伴随动作). On the way home, she said
softly, “Thank you, Mike. I’ll never forget this.” Mike leaned back in the car, eyes
closed(独立主格刻画人物神态), a soft smile on his face(独立主格刻画人物神态). It had turned out to be
the best night after all.
亮点词汇短语分析
情绪描写：palms sweating, smiled in disbelief, a soft smile on his face
动作描写：squeezed his hand, pulled onto the floor, laughing so hard, leaned
back
环境描写：music thumped, crowd cheered, joy-filled moment
积累语料与升级替换
原词
高阶替换同义词/联想词例句
nice
sincere
heartfelt
His compliment was heartfelt and unexpected.
look
gaze
glance
Her gaze swept the dance floor in awe.
happy content
satisfied
She looked content as the music played.
say
whisper
murmur
“Just smile,” she whispered, calming his nerves.
story
anecdote tale
She shared a charming anecdote from the 1960s.
