浙江省温州市浙南名校2024-2025 学年高二下学期6 月期末英语试题
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
It was still light out(时间) and Dad wasn’t home yet. He worked all day cleaning
pools(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Mom told us we needed to wait for Dad so all of us could eat
dinner together. It meant I could spend more time outside playing basketball
with my brother.
Before COVID , there had been more money to spend and life had been normal.
Dad had bought us a backboard and hoop (篮筐) and had paid someone to install a
tall metal pole on the side of the driveway so we could have our own basketball
court.
We came pretty close to spending as much of the day as we could on the court.
We practiced all sorts of shots, holding
a ball
and sending
it into the air
and
waiting for
it to drop into the basket
( 现在分词短语做动作串). It felt like magic—all the
problems of the world seemed to fade away—and I felt like I was the magician
making the magic happen( 现在分词短语做后置定语) each time I
arced the ball
toward the
basket and watched it fly toward its destination.
Dad once told me he had felt pretty much the same way about cleaning
pools. It had been like being a magician, he said( 插入语), turning
the water from
cloudy to clear(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Lately, though, it didn’t seem like Dad had seen a lot
of magic anywhere. He told us he’d lost some customers to COVID, to job losses.
I heard the familiar engine clunk-clunking-click. It was earlier than when Dad
usually arrived home. “Hi guys!” Dad said as he got off the car. His shoulders sank
heavily, and he couldn’t hide the worry in his eyes. He stood a moment by the side
of the car to stretch his arms and catch his breath, and for a moment he closed
his eyes(刻画父亲的神态). In that moment his face was caught in the fading rays of the sun,
and the light revealed a lot more wrinkles than I remembered(环境描写，塑造父亲的形象). He
might have thought of himself as a magician with water( 推测), but he couldn’t make
these worry lines on his forehead or the new wrinkles around his eyes disappear.
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:“Want to shoot a few hoops, Dad?” I asked, thinking it might cheer him
up.
Paragraph 2: “Another shot tomorrow!” Dad said, “Mom is waiting for us to have
dinner now.”
浙江省温州市浙南名校2024-2025 学年高二下学期6 月期末英语试题
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
It was still light out and Dad wasn’t home yet. He worked all day cleaning pools.
Mom told us we needed to wait for Dad so all of us could eat dinner together. It meant
I could spend more time outside playing basketball with my brother.
Before COVID (新冠肺炎), there had been more money to spend and life had
been normal. Dad had bought us a backboard and hoop (篮筐) and had paid someone
to install a tall metal pole on the side of the driveway so we could have our own
basketball court.
We came pretty close to spending as much of the day as we could on the court.
We practiced all sorts of shots, holding a ball and sending it into the air and waiting
for it to drop into the basket. It felt like magic—all the problems of the world seemed
to fade away—and I felt like I was the magician making the magic happen each time I
arced the ball (投篮) toward the basket and watched it fly toward its destination.
Dad once told me he had felt pretty much the same way about cleaning pools. It
had been like being a magician, he said, turning the water from cloudy to clear.
Lately, though, it didn’t seem like Dad had seen a lot of magic anywhere. He told us
he’d lost some customers to COVID, to job losses.
I heard the familiar engine clunk-clunking-click. It was earlier than when Dad
usually arrived home. “Hi guys!” Dad said as he got off the car. His shoulders sank
heavily, and he couldn’t hide the worry in his eyes. He stood a moment by the side of
the car to stretch his arms and catch his breath, and for a moment he closed his eyes.
In that moment his face was caught in the fading rays of the sun, and the light
revealed a lot more wrinkles than I remembered. He might have thought of himself as
a magician with water, but he couldn’t make these worry lines on his forehead or the
new wrinkles around his eyes disappear.
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:“Want to shoot a few hoops, Dad?” I asked, thinking it might cheer him
up.
Paragraph 2: “Another shot tomorrow!” Dad said, “Mom is waiting for us to have
dinner now.”
1. 文章分类与续写思路分析
文章类型：家庭情感+人物成长类（聚焦疫情对家庭经济与亲子关系的影响，以
篮球为情感纽带）。
构思与布局：
步骤
具体内容
主题提炼
通过篮球活动修复父亲因疫情失业产生的消极情绪，强调家庭支
持与乐观精神。
框架设计
续写两段需分别解决“篮球互动”和“家庭晚餐”场景，形成
“缓解压力→情感升华”的递进。
实施要点
- 首段：通过篮球互动展现父子默契，暗示父亲重拾希望。
- 尾段：以晚餐场景回归家庭温暖，点明主题。
承接原文
- 延续“篮球=魔法”的隐喻（如父亲投篮时短暂忘记烦恼）。
- 呼应父亲“疲惫神态”与“皱纹”描写，需体现情绪转变。
巧妙设计
- 插入父亲回忆清洁泳池的细节（如擦汗时看到清水反射阳
光）。
- 用环境描写（如暮色、路灯）烘托氛围过渡。
2. 故事山模式与原文分析
故事山模式：
开端：疫情前家庭幸福 → 发展：父亲失业、经济压力 → 高潮：父亲疲惫归
家 → 转折：儿子提议打篮球 → 结局：家庭共进晚餐（待续写）
关键分析表：
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
人物刻画
父亲：勤劳但疲惫；儿子：体
“His shoulders sank heavily... the
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
贴乐观
light revealed a lot more
wrinkles...”
情感层次
从无奈（失业）→ 短暂快乐
（篮球）→ 家庭温暖
“It felt like magic... he couldn’t
hide the worry in his eyes.”
关键情节点
父亲提前归家（暗示工作减
少）；儿子提议打篮球（情感
转折点）
“It was earlier than when Dad
usually arrived home.”
语言特色
比喻（篮球如魔法）、动作细
节描写
“I arced the ball toward the
basket and watched it fly...”
关键词分析
“magic”象征快乐与掌控感；
“wrinkles”象征压力
“he couldn’t make these worry
lines... disappear”
心理描写
儿子希望通过篮球让父亲开心
“thinking it might cheer him up”
(续写首句)
动作描写
父亲下车时的疲惫动作
“stood a moment... to stretch his
arms and catch his breath”
环境描写
暮阳光线强化父亲衰老感
“his face was caught in the fading
rays of the sun”
隐含主题
家庭纽带能缓解外部危机
父亲对“清洁泳池如魔法”的
回忆（对比现实失落）
情感转折
从消极到希望
续写需通过父亲投篮时的笑容
体现
伏笔冲突点
伏笔：篮球设备是疫情前购买
（暗示经济变化）；冲突：父
“Dad had bought us a
backboard... lost some customers
to COVID”
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
亲现实压力VS 家庭温暖
隐含线索
“magic”重复出现，暗示找回
生活魔力需心态转变
父亲清洁泳池与儿子投篮的
“魔法”类比
解决方案
通过家庭互动重建信心
续写需展示篮球活动后父亲主
动提议晚餐（体现情绪缓解）
3. 续写内容衔接建议
首段衔接：
动作衔接：父亲勉强微笑接过篮球，投篮时模仿儿子动作（呼应“magician”身
份）。
心理描写：儿子注意到父亲“wrinkles”在夕阳下变淡（象征压力暂时减轻）。
尾段衔接：
环境过渡：路灯亮起，母亲在门口呼唤（空间转换到家）。
语言呼应：父亲说“Another shot tomorrow!”（与原文“magic”形成闭环，暗示
希望回归）。
3.英文例句 & 高级替换词
（1）动作描写
He dribbled the ball with practiced ease, his movements fluid and confident.
（他熟练地运球，动作流畅而自信。）
Dad caught the ball and took a deep breath before shooting.
（爸爸接住球，深吸一口气后投篮。）
The ball swished through the net, a perfect shot.
（球“唰”地穿过篮网，完美命中。）
He wiped the sweat off his forehead with the back of his hand.
（他用手背擦去额头上的汗水。）
My brother passed me the ball with a quick flick of his wrist.
（我哥哥手腕一抖，迅速把球传给我。）
Dad stretched his arms, trying to shake off the fatigue.
（爸爸伸展双臂，试图摆脱疲劳。）
I sprinted to retrieve the ball as it bounced off the rim.
（球从篮筐弹开，我冲过去捡球。）
He adjusted his stance, bending his knees slightly for better balance.
（他调整站姿，微微屈膝以保持平衡。）
Mom called out from the doorway, waving us inside.
（妈妈在门口呼唤，挥手示意我们进去。）
Dad ruffled my hair playfully before heading inside.
（爸爸进屋前，顽皮地揉了揉我的头发。）
（2）心理描写
A flicker of joy crossed his face, though his eyes still held weariness.
（他脸上闪过一丝喜悦，但眼神仍带着疲惫。）
For a moment, the weight of the world seemed to lift from his shoulders.
（有那么一瞬间，他肩上的重担似乎减轻了。）
I hoped this small moment could make him forget his worries, even just for a
while.
（我希望这个小小的瞬间能让他暂时忘记烦恼。）
His smile was faint, but genuine—like sunlight breaking through clouds.
（他的微笑很淡，但很真诚，就像阳光穿过云层。）
A pang of sadness hit me as I noticed how much older he looked.
（看到他苍老了许多，我心里一阵难过。）
The familiar rhythm of the game brought back happier memories.
（熟悉的比赛节奏唤起了更快乐的回忆。）
I could tell he was forcing himself to stay present, to enjoy this moment.
（我能看出他在强迫自己专注，享受这一刻。）
His laughter, though rare these days, warmed my heart.
（他的笑声，尽管近来很少听到，却让我心里暖暖的。）
I wished I could do more to ease his burden.
（我真希望能多做点什么，减轻他的负担。）
The game made him feel like his old self again, if only briefly.
（这场比赛让他短暂地找回了曾经的自己。）
（3）环境描写
The golden hues of dusk painted the sky as we played.
（我们打球时，暮色的金光染红了天空。）
The air was crisp, carrying the faint scent of freshly cut grass.
（空气清新，带着一丝新割的青草味。）
Shadows lengthened across the driveway as the sun dipped lower.
（太阳西沉，车道上拉长的影子逐渐延伸。）
A cool breeze rustled the leaves, a welcome relief from the day’s heat.
（凉风吹动树叶，缓解了一天的炎热。）
The streetlights flickered to life, casting a soft glow over the court.
（路灯亮起，在球场上投下柔和的光。）
The distant hum of traffic reminded us that the world was still moving.
（远处车辆的嗡鸣提醒着我们，世界仍在运转。）
The fading sunlight caught the sweat on Dad’s face, making him look almost
golden.
（渐暗的阳光照在爸爸脸上的汗水上，让他看起来像镀了一层金。）
The rhythmic thud of the ball against the pavement echoed in the quiet evening.
（篮球撞击地面的节奏声在宁静的傍晚回荡。）
The scent of Mom’s cooking drifted through the open window, warm and
inviting.
（妈妈做饭的香味从敞开的窗户飘出，温暖而诱人。）
The stars began to peek out, tiny pinpricks of light in the darkening sky.
（星星开始闪烁，在渐暗的天空中点缀着微光。）
高级替换词 & 固定搭配
（1）高级替换词（按场景分类）
普通词
高级替换词
适用场景
happy
content, elated, joyful
情感描写
sad
melancholic, somber, downcast
情绪低落
tired
weary, exhausted, drained
疲惫状态
look
gaze, glance, peer
视觉动作
walk
stroll, stride, trudge
行走方式
（2）固定搭配 & 词法解析
"a flicker of [emotion]"（一丝……情绪）
例句: A flicker of hope crossed his face.
近义词: a glimmer of, a trace of
"shake off [feeling]"（摆脱某种情绪）
例句: He tried to shake off his fatigue.
近义词: shrug off, cast aside
"bring back [memory]"（唤起回忆）
例句: The song brought back childhood memories.
近义词: evoke, recall
"cast a [light/shadow]"（投射光/影）
例句: The streetlight cast a long shadow.
近义词: project, throw
"drift through [air/space]"（飘过）
例句: The scent of flowers drifted through the air.
近义词: float, waft
生词短语
单词/短语
词
性
词义
近义词
反义
词
例句
fade away
v.
逐渐
消失
disappear,
vanish
appear
The sound of laughter faded
away into the night.
catch one’s
breath
v.
喘口
气
pause, rest
rush
He stopped to catch his
breath after running.
ruffle sb’s
hair
v.
揉乱
头发
tousle, mess
up
smooth
Dad ruffled my hair
affectionately.
swish
through
v.
嗖地
穿过
swoosh,
glide
thud
The ball swished through the
net.
peek out
v.
微微
露出
emerge,
appear
hide
The moon peeked out from
behind the clouds.
"The worries of the day seemed to fade away as we played."
（我们打球时，一天的烦恼似乎渐渐消散。）
"He paused to catch his breath, his chest rising and falling rapidly."
（他停下来喘口气，胸口剧烈起伏。）
总结
动作描写：多用动态动词（dribble, swish, sprint）增强画面感。
心理描写：结合比喻（如 sunlight breaking through clouds）提升情感深度。
环境描写：利用感官细节（scent, light, sound）营造氛围。
高级替换词：避免重复，如用"elated"代替"happy"。
固定搭配：如"a flicker of hope"，让表达更地道。
5. Possible Versions(4)
Version 1
Paragraph 1: “Want to shoot a few hoops, Dad?” I asked, thinking it might
cheer him up. “Sure,” he said, opening
his eyes
and smiling
a weary smile
(现在分词
短语做伴随动作). My brother rushed to grab the ball while I passed it to
Dad
. The moment
his fingers gripped the ball, something shifted—his hunched shoulders
straightened slightly, and a tiny spark lit up behind those tired eyes. We started
shooting in turns, laughing
every time
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)the ball bounced wildly or
missed the net entirely. Dad’s third shot swished through the net, just like old
times. My brother cheered, and Dad chuckled—a real, warm chuckle that felt like
sunlight. I watched him closely: the wrinkles were still there, and the worry hadn’t
disappeared, but for that moment, he wasn’t just a tired worker—he was our
magician again, pulling
joy out of thin air with each shot
(现在分词短语做伴随动作). It
reminded me of how he used to make the pool water sparkle. Now it was his
laughter making the evening glow.
Paragraph 2: “Another shot tomorrow!” Dad said, “Mom is waiting for us to
have dinner now.” So, the three of us walked in. I noticed the soft rhythm in
Dad’s footsteps—not quite as heavy as before. He reached out and ruffled my
brother’s hair, then placed a strong hand on my shoulder. That familiar gesture
used to mean “I’m proud of you,” and tonight it felt like a quiet promise that things
were going to be okay(同为语从句). Sitting
around the dinner table
(现在分词短语做伴随动作),
everything felt warmer—brighter—even if the lights hadn't changed. The
backboard outside still had a crack, the driveway still needed repainting, but
inside our little home, something had healed(简单句并列). Maybe not fully, maybe not
forever, but enough. Dad wasn’t just fixing pools or fighting bills; he was still the
man who believed in small magic. And all my family did.
Version 2
Paragraph 1: “Want to shoot a few hoops, Dad?” I asked, thinking it might
cheer him up. “Sure,” he said, opening
his eyes
and smiling
a weary smile
(现在分词
短语做伴随动作). My brother and I raced him to the driveway, laughing, bouncing the
ball(现在分词短语做伴随动作)as the sky faded into dusk. Dad’s movements were slower than
before, but as he took his shot, his body remembered. The ball soared in an arc, the
same way it used to when he taught us how to aim, and landed perfectly in the net
with that satisfying swoosh. He raised his arms in triumph, and I saw something
change in his expression—a flicker of who he used to be before
the pandemic
wore him down. We kept playing, and though his breath came faster, his eyes
glowed with that old sparkle. The lines around them, those wrinkles I’d just
noticed today, didn’t look so tired anymore—they looked earned. Each laugh that
escaped him felt like another crack in the wall of stress. The magician hadn’t
disappeared. He’d just needed a court to reappear on.
Paragraph 2: “Another shot tomorrow!” Dad said, “Mom is waiting for us to
have dinner now.” He picked up the ball and placed it gently beside the driveway.
As we entered the house, I noticed him pause in the doorway, as if savoring the
moment. I lingered behind for a second, glancing
back at the hoop
(现在分词短语做伴宿动作)
standing
tall against the sunset
(现在分词短语做后置定语). It was a little rusty, the net slightly
torn(同构省略或独立主格)—but to us, it had become a beacon. At the table, Dad sat upright,
passing dishes and telling a joke(现在分词短语做伴随动作) that made Mom smile. Something
had shifted. His shoulders were still broad but no longer weighed down(对比描写). Maybe
money was still tight, and maybe not all the pool jobs had come back, but I saw it
clearly now—the light hadn’t gone out, just dimmed. Tonight, it flickered back
to life in the sound of bouncing balls and shared laughter. And tomorrow, we’d
shoot again. The magician may not turn water clear these days, but he’d given us
something purer: a glimpse of how love, even under pressure, still finds its way
home.
写作亮点词组&表达积累
情绪表达
动作描写
升级替换词
原词→
升级词
a weary smile → a
fragile but real smile
placed a strong hand on
my shoulder
tired → worn, drained
flicker of who he used
to be
arched perfectly,
bounced wildly
smiled → chuckled,
grinned, beamed
laughter escaped him
stood tall against the
sunset
walk → stride, head up the
steps
the light hadn’t gone
out, just dimmed
straightened slightly
tired eyes → eyes with the
weight of the day
Version 3
Paragraph 1: “Want to shoot a few hoops, Dad?” I asked, thinking it might
cheer him up. He glanced at me, then at the basketball resting(现在分词短语做后置定语)near
the
driveway
. “Why not?” he said, stretching his arms(现在分词短语做伴随动作) as he walked
over. The sun was low now, painting
the rim gold
(现在分词短语做结果状语). I passed him the
ball, and though his fingers wrapped around it a little slower than usual, his form
was still there—smooth, practiced(adj 做补语). My brother cheered for him. His first
shot missed, bouncing
off the rim with a dull thud
(现在分词短语做结果状语). “Bit terrible,” he
chuckled, shaking
his head
. “Let’s try a free-throw contest,” I suggested. As we
traded
shots
, I could see the tension in his shoulders easing. When I missed one, he
patted my back and said, “You’ll get it next time, champ, also glancing at my
brother.” That one word—“champ”—brought back all those afternoons when things
were simpler, before
the pandemic
took away so much
. Slowly, his eyes began to
shine again—not with magic, maybe, but with something real, something warm.
Paragraph 2: “Another shot tomorrow!” Dad said, “Mom is waiting for us to
have dinner now.” His voice carried a playful tone, but there was a softness
underneath. As
we
walked inside
, the golden light streaming from the kitchen
seemed to wrap around us like a blanket(环境描写). Dad gave me a half-hug with one
arm, his fingers rough and warm against my back(独立主格). “You know,” he said
quietly, “playing out there reminded me who I am.” I looked up at him,
surprised(adj 短语做补语), but didn’t say anything. At dinner, he cracked a small joke, and
Mom laughed in a way she hadn’t in weeks. I realized then that the ball we
passed wasn’t just a ball—it was hope. The same hope he once held while
cleaning pools, turning
cloudy to clear
(现在分词做伴随动作). Maybe the magic was never
really gone. It just needed a spark. And tonight, with every bounce, every laugh, we
helped him find it again.
地道搭配：
shoot hoops（投篮）
crack a joke（讲笑话）
calloused palm（粗糙的手掌）
bounce back（恢复状态）
fading rays / twilight（余晖）
hand... something like it’s precious（郑重递给）
roughness in his voice（声音中带情绪）
近义词/替换：
tired → weary / drained / worn out
smile → grin / beam / smirk
heavy → burdened / weighted / loaded
remember → recall / think back to / reflect on
play → shoot hoops / dribble / mess around with the ball
情绪描写亮点：
a real smile emerged / the sparkle returned to his eyes
something deeper than words could say
weight hung over him for too long
whispered with red eyes
a silence filled with understanding
动作描写亮点：
grabbed the rebound with surprising agility
did a little victory dance
patted my back / ruffled my hair
placed the ball gently by the porch
stretched his arms and winked
读后续写写作语料
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短语/单词
同义词
联想词
例句1
例句2
bounce back
recover,
rebound
stand up again
He bounced back
quickly from a
tough day.
We knew he would
bounce back, just
like before.
sparkle in one’s
eyes
light up,
gleam
twinkle, shine
The sparkle
returned when he
smiled.
There was a
forgotten sparkle in
his tired eyes.
weary smile
faint grin,
tired
expression
exhausted face
He gave me a
weary smile and
nodded.
That weary smile
told me he was
trying.
nothing-but-net perfect shot
swish, clean
basket
His shot was
nothing-but-net,
smooth and easy.
We cheered as the
ball went nothing-
but-net again.
calloused hand
rough palm,
worn skin
hardworking,
father’s hands
His calloused hand
rested on my
shoulder.
I felt the strength in
his calloused hand.
官方：
“Want to shoot a few hoops, Dad?” I asked, thinking it might cheer him
up.“Sure,” he said, opening
his eyes
and smiling
a weary smile
(现在分词短语做伴随动作).
“We still have a little time before dinner, don’t we?” The three of us decided to
shoot foul shots from the edge of
the driveway
to see who went first. Dad’s first
shot arched beautifully, swishing
through the net
(现在分词短语做伴随动作) with that perfect
“swoosh” sound we both loved. “Beginner’s luck!” I teased, “Watch this one!” But
my shot was off target. Dad grabbed the rebound with surprising agility. “Pressure
goes to you, champ?” He winked, lining up
his next shot
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)—another
nothing-but-net. “Whoa, what a shot!” Dad said. He did a little victory dance, lifting
his hands and waving them over his head(现在分词短语做伴随动作). “Best of five?” I
challenged, secretly thrilled to see his real smile emerge(adj 短语做主语补语)—the one that
crinkled his eyes and showed his slightly crooked tooth. Just as he was about to
take his third shot, Mom’s voice cut through our laughter(无灵主语句) that dinner was
ready(同位从).
“Another shot tomorrow!” Dad said, “Mom is waiting for us to have dinner
now.” So, the three of us headed upstairs for dinner. Dad gave my shoulder a firm
squeeze, his calloused palm lingering for a second longer than usual(独立主格刻画父亲的心理).
“Thanks, kid.” he murmured, the roughness in his voice betraying something
deeper(独立主格) than words could say. I noticed his shoulders seemed less burdened
and his steps more relaxed. The time we’d spent on the driveway—laughing,
missing shots, celebrating the occasional swish(并列)—had done something I hadn’t
seen in months: they’d brought him back to himself. When he was happy it felt like
everything fit into place, including
the basketball
(现在分词短语做伴随动作), which dropped
through the net without even touching the basket. The pandemic may have taken
Father’s clients and income, but when he stood before
the fading backboard
and
released that
perfect arc
, we recognized once more the magician with light in his
eyes.
