趣事类故事
写作导图
一、矛盾冲突构建技巧
（通过制造紧张/尴尬/意外增强故事吸引力）
1. 句式倒装增强画面感
例：So nervous was he that he dropped the electric carving knife.
译：他紧张得连电动雕刻刀都掉落了。
解析：倒装句"So...that"结构突出紧张程度，掉落刀具的动作细节增强画面表现力。
2. 感官描写营造真实感
例：My palms got sweaty as the pumpkin started sliding down my forehead.
译：当南瓜开始从我额头滑落时，手心已满是冷汗。解析：触觉描写(sweaty palms)配合具体动作(sliding down)，增强场景真实度。
3. 夸张手法制造喜剧效果
例：My hair stood on end like a frightened hedgehog when mom shouted.
译：妈妈突然大喊时，我的头发像受惊的刺猬般竖了起来。
解析：明喻修辞(like a hedgehog)配合夸张描写，制造幽默效果。
4. 心理活动推动情节发展
例："What if they laugh at me?" I thought, hesitating to open the gift.
译："要是他们笑话我怎么办？"我盯着礼物盒迟迟不敢打开。
解析：内心独白配合犹豫动作，制造悬念推动后续情节。
二、快乐结局设计方法
（通过情感转变传递积极价值观）
1. 动作细节传递温暖
例：Granny winked and slipped a candy into my trembling palm.
译：奶奶眨眨眼，将糖果悄悄放进我颤抖的手心。
解析：眨眼(wink)和塞糖果(slipped)的细节体现人物温情。
2. 环境描写烘托氛围
例：Sunlight filtered through the pumpkin carvings, painting golden patterns on our smiling faces.
译：阳光透过南瓜雕刻，在我们带笑的脸上洒下金色花纹。
解析：光影描写(filtered/painting)营造温馨氛围，暗示问题解决。
3. 对话推进情感升华
例："Silly girl," Mom chuckled, "this is what family memories are made of!"
译："傻丫头，"妈妈轻笑，"这才是值得珍藏的家庭记忆呀！"解析：口语化用词(silly girl)与哲理语句形成反差，深化主题。
4. 象征手法传递成长
例：The cracked pumpkin on the windowsill suddenly looked like a smiling jack-o'-lantern.
译：窗台上裂开的南瓜忽然像个微笑的灯笼。
解析：物品的象征意义转变，暗示主人公心态变化。
三、情感表达升级策略
1. 复合结构增强层次感
例：Heart pounding, face burning, I finally managed to whisper: "It was me."
译：心跳如鼓，脸颊发烫，我终于挤出一句："是我做的。"
解析：并列分词结构形成情感递进，体现多重心理活动
2. 拟声词活化场景
例："Boing!" The rubber band snapped, sending pumpkin seeds flying everywhere.
译："嘣！"橡皮筋突然断裂，南瓜籽四处飞溅。
解析：拟声词(Boing)增强现场感，动词(snap/flying)形成动态画面
3. 比喻手法具象化感受
例：Embarrassment clung to me like sticky pumpkin pulp.
译：尴尬如黏稠的南瓜浆般粘在身上。
解析：生活化比喻(sticky pulp)使抽象情感具象可感
4. 多维度感官描写
例：The sweet scent of roasted pumpkin seeds mingled with our giggles in the crisp autumn air.
译：烤南瓜籽的甜香与我们的笑声，在清爽秋风中交织缠绕。
解析：嗅觉(scent)、听觉(giggles)、触觉(crisp air)多维度营造氛围高考真题演练
【真题1】2025年1月八省联考（ 彪悍机车党的柔软爱心）
I was in Philadelphia for a conference when I saw an ad in the hotel. A nearby theater was showing a
documentary (纪录片) about several local animal shelters that were helping to save abandoned dogs across the
country. I love animals, and I felt an urge to go to this fundraising event. However, none of my co-workers would
go with me, and I was worried about walking on the street alone at night.
I resigned myself to spending the evening in my hotel room, but as soon as I got back to my room I felt
restless and bored. The theater where the event was taking place was only about five blocks from the hotel, and the
area around the hotel didn’t seem particularly dangerous. So, I decided to brave it. I gathered up my wallet and
room key and set off.
It was already getting dark and the streets were nearly deserted. I managed to find the street the theater was on,
but when I turned the corner, I stopped in shock. In front of the theater were a group of bikers–very big, tough-
looking bikers.
I’ve known lots of motorcycle enthusiasts and most are nice people. However, in this case, I was a woman all
alone, in a strange neighborhood, at night, and there were twenty or so very large men–all wearing insignia (徽章)
that indicated they were in some sort of club–standing before me. Warning bells began to sound in my head, and
my heart was pounding. Was I at the right theater? Had I misread the date of the event?
A sign outside the theater told me that I was in the right place on the right evening. Nevertheless, I wondered
if I should rush back to my hotel instead of walking through that crowd of bikers. I finally decided that I would be
safer inside the theater. Hopefully, the bikers would have gone away by the time the film was over.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: I hurried into the theater, only to find there were even more bikers inside.Paragraph 2: When the film began, I realized that the bikers were an animal rescue group.
【真题2】2021年1月浙江卷：万圣节南瓜卡头
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Pumpkin (南瓜）carving at Halloween is a family tradition. We visit a local farm every October. In the
pumpkin field, I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule
that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage — I carried an 85-
pounder back last year.
This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother, Jason, was
the winner. Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to
prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event. I’m
unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter, but it seemed to make
perfect sense at the time.
With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost, I bent over and pressed my head against the
opening. At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my
nose briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed to put my whole head into it, like a cork (软木塞) forced
into a bottle. I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders.
My excitement was short-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. “I’m going to set it down, now,” I said, and with
Jason helping to support its weight, I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when
I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. When I
pulled hard, my nose got in the way. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head
around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. “I can’t get it out!” I shouted, my voice sounding
unnaturally loud in the enclosed space.
注意：
1． 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2． 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3． 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4． 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer.
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That video was posted the day before Halloween.
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【真题3】2017年浙江卷：健忘而可爱的妈妈
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A vacation with my mother
I had an interesting childhood: It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of my mother-
loving, sweet, and yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a
lot about her.
My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a
few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip
approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew
if we’d ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books,
games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours
later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten.
David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving
while Dadslept:” You stand outside the door and play lookout while I go, and I’ll stand outside the door and
play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh,
Gosh… I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we
weren’t about to take any chances.On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some
time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we
could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never
could understand our objections.If a strange family showed up on her front doorsteps, Mom would have been
delighted. She thinks everyone in the world as as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.
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We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.
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模拟演练
1.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
One day, I found a wallet on the street. The wallet contained only three dollars and a very old letter. The
envelope was worn and the only thing on it was the return address. I started to open the letter, hoping to find
some information. Then I saw the date-1990, and the signature-Beatrice. The letter was written several decades
ago.Then I made every effort and found out that Beatrice was now working in a hospital. I showed her the
letter. The second she saw the letter, she took a deep breath and said, “Young man, this letter was the last
contact I ever had with Henry. He is my only brother. I loved him very much. I was only 16 at the time and my
brother is two years younger than me. If you can find him, tell him I'm still looking for him,” she said and tears
began to well up in her eyes. “Mother is waiting for him to come back home.”
When I walked out of the building with the wallet in my hand, the guard of the building recognized the
wallet, and with his help, I finally found its owner, Henry. I handed the wallet to Henry and he said, “Yes, that's
mine! It must have dropped out of my pocket this afternoon.”
“I read the letter in the hope of finding out who owned the wallet.” I said. The smile on his face suddenly
disappeared. He asked, “You read that letter?” “Not only did I read it, but also Beatrice read.” I replied. He
suddenly became excited. “Beatrice? You know where she is? How is she? Please tell me,” he begged. “She's
fine. She has been looking for you.” I said softly.
He grabbed my hand and said, “Sir, you know she is my only sister in this world. I've always missed her.”
Henry and I took the elevator (电梯) down to Beatrice's room. I walked over to her. “Beatrice,” I said
softly, pointing to Henry, who was waiting with me in the doorway. “Do you know the man?”
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Beatrice adjusted her glasses, looked for a moment, but didn't say a word．
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About three weeks later I got a call at my office from Beatrice．
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2.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应
为150左右。
“I will have revenge(复仇) on him, and make him regret what he did to me,” said Philip to himself, his
face red with anger. Stephen, who happened at that moment to walk past and hear him talking to himself.
“Who is that you want to take revenge on?” asked Stephen. Philip looked at his friend and said, “You
remember my new ball given by my father? Look! It is punctured! It was farmer Robinson’s son who did this!”Stephen asked him why young Robinson had ruined it. “I was walking and kicking my ball.” Philip
replied, “By accident, when I was opposite the gate, my ball bumped over a bucket of water left in the pathway
by him.”
“He came up and began to yell at me. I assured him that what I had done was an accident, and that I was
terribly sorry for it. I also offered to fetch another bucket of water for him. But despite all I had said, he took a
nail out of his pocket and twisted it into the ball, as you see. I will make him pay for this.”
“Honestly speaking,” said Stephen, “he is already punished for what he has done, because nobody likes
him and he often walks around alone. He is just a lonely and miserable boy. This will be enough revenge for
you.”
“But the ball is my favorite gift and I enjoy playing with it so much…” murmured Philip.
“Now Philip,” said Stephen, “I think you can act better than him in terms of getting revenge. I will tell
you what happened to him not long ago.”
“A while ago he saw a bee hovering about a flower. He caught the bee and was going to pull off its wings
for fun. The bee, of course, stung him. The pain made him so angry that, like you, he decided to get revenge.
He got a stick, and pressed it into the beehive (蜂巢).”
“Immediately the whole swarm of bees flew out and stung him so badly that he had to spend a few days in
bed.”
“So you see, he was not very successful in getting revenge. What if he could act better and forgive the bee
for stinging him?” asked Stephen.
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“I must say,” replied Philip, “that your advice seems very good”.
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A few days afterward, Philip saw this young Robinson fall as he was carrying home a heavy log of
wood.
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During lunchtime，Emma suggested going to the zoo to feed the animals and her mom agreed.
“We’ll stop by the bakery and pick some bread up. Now hurry and eat and then we’ll go. It’s going to be a
lovely day. Grandma is coming with us. She’ll be here any minute，”mom said.
Emma ate her lunch and then ran into her room to get her shoes.The problem was that she could only find
one of them. She looked under her bed, but all she could see were dirty towels and pants. She moved some of
her toys out of the way，but still couldn’t find her shoe. After she’d checked everywhere in her room，she
ran into the kitchen. “Mom，I can’t find my shoe.Will you wait while I look for it？”she asked.
Her mom thought about how many times she’d told Emma to clean her room up. She whispered
something to Emma’s grandma and then said to Emma，“You will have to stay home.Your dad and I will
take Ryan to the zoo. Grandma will stay here with you.”
“No！Please wait for me. I want to go to the zoo，”Emma cried. “I’m sorry, Emma. I’ve told you a
dozen times to clean your room and you ignored me.You can’t find your shoe now. It’s your own fault for not
doing as I asked.You will stay home.”
Emma ran into her bedroom, crying. Her mom came to the door and said，“Emma，clean that room of
yours before I get home. I’ve told grandma not to give you any sweets until you finish the work.” She went out
to the car with Ryan and Emma’s dad and then they drove away.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Emma sat on her bed and cried for a long time.
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Emma and her grandma were sitting at the table，eating when her mom，dad，and Ryan came home.
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4.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节，使之构成一个完整的故事。Thanks to my conservative(保守的）family background,I didn't believe in angels(天使）.That is,not
until Christmas Eve of 1979, when an angel brought unexpected joy to my home.
After divorce,my two daughters not only lost the safety of a whole family,they also tearfully(泪汪汪地）
left behind neighborhood friends, a familiar school, and a large house. These had all been replaced with a
narrow two-bedroom apartment in a poorer part of town .
I arranged to take my vacation during my children's winter holiday. We spent evenings planning
activities: games, a pizza night , and evening car rides to view neighborhood holiday lights .With expectation ,
they seemed to be in good spirits .
The week before the school break, however, I was fired because of the company's poor performance. By
Christmas Eve,sadness covered our vacation plans. An afternoon outing did little to improve our mood .
On returning to our apartment, we were astonished to see a beautiful,six-foot Christmas tree propped(支
撑）against our front door. In silent wonder, we looked back and forth, from the tree to one another and
around the empty street. Excitement built,and the girls begged to keep the tree.
"Maybe it's for us,"my older daughter guessed.
"Yeah,"repeated my younger child,"I bet an angel brought it to us!"
I laughed aloud at the idea of an angel bringing a Christmas tree to my family. Caught up in their
happiness, I announced the tree "ours".
We moved it inside and headed out to the only upermarkets in our small town open that late on
Christmas Eve. With holiday goods down to half price,I agreed to buy a tree stand(底座）,two boxes of
colorful balls , some colorful lights , and one paper angel.
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Back home , we moved "our" tree into our tiny living room .
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The annual winter holiday became a family tradition.
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5.阅读下面短文，根据所给情节，使之构成一个完整的故事。
After dinner, Mrs. Quimby told the family that Grandma, who lived on a farm, had sent in a lot of
pumpkins for jack-o’-lanterns (空心南瓜灯) for the neighborhood children. There was one in the basement
waiting to be carved, she added. Ramona sprang to her feet and dashed down to bring it up, but it was too
heavy for a second-grader. Finally Mr. Quimby gave a hand.
“Let’s make it smile like last year,” exclaimed Ramona.
“Hmm. Let’s see.” Mr. Quimby studied the pumpkin, turning it to find the best side for the face. With a
pencil he sketched (素描) a nose-shaped nose, not a triangle. Then the mouth turned up on both sides.
“smiling!” Ramona clapped her hands.
Mr. Quimby nodded with a smile, cut a circle around the top of the pumpkin and lifted it off for a lid.
Without being asked, Ramona found a big spoon for scooping out the seeds. Picky-picky, the Quimbys'
shabby old cat, came into the kitchen to see if something had been put in his dish. When he found that it had
not, he paused, sniffed the pumpkin smell and angrily walked out with his tail twitching.
Mr. Quimby began to whistle as he carved with skill and care, first a mouthful of teeth, each one neat
and square, then eyes and eyebrows. He was working on two ears shaped like question marks when Mrs.
Quimby announced it was bedtime for Ramona. Unwillingly Ramona ran, took a shower and quickly returned.
Now, Mr. Quimby had just carved a few C-shaped curls (卷发) around the hole in the top of the pumpkin. He
reached inside and dug a candle holder in the bottom.
“There,” he said, putting down his knife. “A work of art.” Mrs. Quimby found a candle stub (残根),
inserted it in the pumpkin, lit it and set the lid in place. Ramona turned off the light. The jack-o’-lantern was
smiling with a flickering flame. “Wow!” Ramona threw her arms around her father before going to bed with
great satisfaction.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2． 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: In the middle of the night Ramona awoke to a noise.
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Paragraph2: On the table their jack-o’-lantern no longer had a whole face.
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3.阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was at least two months before Christmas when nine-year-old Almie Rose told her father and me that
she wanted a new bicycle. Her old Barbie bicycle was just too babyish, and besides, it needed a new tire.
As Christmas drew nearer, her desire for a bicycle seemed to fade, —or so we thought, as she didn’t
mention it again. Merrily, we started purchasing the latest fashion—Baby Sitter’s Club dolls—and beautiful
story books, a doll house, a holiday dress and toys. Then, much to our surprise, on December 23rd, she
proudly announced that she “really wanted a bike more than anything else.”
Now we didn’t know what to do. It was just too late, with all the details of preparing Christmas dinner
and buying last-minute gifts. So here we were—Christmas Eve around 9:00 p.m., having just returned from a
wonderful party, looking forward to our evening ahead—hours of wrapping children’s presents, parents’
presents, a brother’s presents and friends’ presents. With Almie Rose and her six-year-old brother, Dylan, lay
comfortably in their beds. Now we could only think of the bicycle, the guilt and the idea that we were parents
who would disappoint their child.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: “What if I make a little bicycle out of clay (黏土) and she can trade it for a real one
later?” my husband Ron thought.
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Paragraph 2: On Christmas morning, we were excited for Almie to open the package with the clay bike.
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