江苏省南通市2025 年高二学年度质量监测英语试题
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
The Broken Skateboard Wheel
(有标题的题目，本身是比较简单的哦!)
Jack(人物1) loved skateboarding more than anything. Every afternoon after
school, he practiced tricks at the local skatepark. One day his own board had
a crack in it, so he asked his best friend Amanda(人物2) if he could borrow hers .
“Can I use your skateboard today?” Jack asked during lunch break.
“Mine’s broken.” Amanda hesitated. “Okay, but be careful. I need it back by 5
pm.”
“I promise!” Jack said happily.
That afternoon, Jack was attempting to jump over a low wooden fence at
the park when disaster struck (冲突点出现). As he lifted the board to clear the fence,
the front wheels caught the edge. Jack fell hard on his side, and worse, when
he picked up the board, he saw one wheel had completely come off(高潮部分).
Jack’s stomach dropped. Amanda would be angry. He quickly gathered all
the pieces and texted Melissa(人物3), his most sensible friend(人物性格描写), to meet him
at the park bench. Melissa arrived ten minutes later, her eyebrows shooting
up(独立主格刻画人物) when she saw the damage. “Wow, you really messed up Amanda’s
board.”
“I know!” Jack groaned. “What should I do?”
“Tell her immediately,” Melissa advised. “The longer you wait, the angrier
she’ll be(the more... the more...).”
With shaking hands Jack called Amanda. When he explained what
happened, there was a long silence before Amanda spoke in a tight voice:
“That’s my little brother’s skateboard. He has his first competition next
Saturday(进一步深化冲突)!”
Jack felt terrible. Amanda’s 12-year-old brother Tim(人物4) had been
practicing for months, dreaming of
holding that first-place trophy
(现在分词短语做伴随
动作). This competition meant everything to him. After another pause , Amanda
sighed. “It’s okay, accidents will happen. We’ll figure it out together.” Her
voice softened, easing
Jack’s guilt a little
(现在分词做伴随动作).
“I’ll fix it,” Jack promised. “just...don’t have money for a new one.”
注意.
1.续写词数应为150 个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: After school, Jack and Amanda searched online and found a
small repair shop across town.
Paragraph 2: On competition day, Jack nervously watched Tim compete.
江苏省南通市2025 年高二学年度质量监测英语试题
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
The Broken Skateboard Wheel
Jack loved skateboarding more than anything. Every afternoon after school.
he practiced tricks at the local skatepark. One day his own board had a crack
(裂缝) in it, so he asked his best friend Amanda if he could borrow hers.
“Can I use your skateboard today?” Jack asked during lunch break.
“Mine’s broken.” Amanda hesitated. “Okay, but be careful. I need it back by 5
pm.”
“I promise!” Jack said happily.
That afternoon, Jack was attempting to jump over a low wooden fence at
the park when disaster struck. As he lifted the board to clear the fence, the front
wheels caught the edge. Jack fell hard on his side, and worse, when he picked
up the board, he saw one wheel had completely come off.
Jack’s stomach dropped. Amanda would be angry. He quickly gathered all
the pieces and texted Melissa, his most sensible friend, to meet him at the park
bench. Melissa arrived ten minutes later, her eyebrows shooting up when she
saw the damage. “Wow, you really messed up Amanda’s board.”
“I know!” Jack groaned. “What should I do?”
“Tell her immediately,” Melissa advised. “The longer you wait, the angrier
she’ll be.”
With shaking hands Jack called Amanda. When he explained what
happened, there was a long silence before Amanda spoke in a tight voice:
“That’s my little brother’s skateboard. He has his first competition next
Saturday!”
Jack felt terrible. Amanda’s 12-year-old brother Tim had been practicing
for months. dreaming of holding that first-place trophy (奖杯). This
competition meant everything to him. After another pause, Amanda sighed.
“It’s okay, accidents will happen. We’ll figure it out together.” Her voice
softened, easing Jack’s guilt a little.
“I’ll fix it,” Jack promised. “just...don’t have money for a new one.”
注意.
1.续写词数应为150 个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: After school, Jack and Amanda searched online and found a
small repair shop across town.
Paragraph 2: On competition day, Jack nervously watched Tim compete.
1. 文章分类与续写思路分析
文章类型：友情与责任+诚实合作类（主题围绕“意外损坏他人物品后的补救”
和“友情考验”）。
续写构思方向：
核心矛盾：Jack 需修复滑板以弥补过失，同时支持Tim 的比赛。
情感主线：从“愧疚”到“责任担当”再到“友情升华”。
关键任务：
修复滑板（行动线）；支持Tim 比赛（情感线）。
布局与框架：
段落
内容设计
衔接原文要点
第一段
Jack 和Amanda 寻找修理店
→ 突出合作与希望
承接“I’ll fix it”的承诺，需体现两
人共同解决问题
第二段
Tim 比赛结果（成功/失败）
→ 强调Jack 的愧疚或救赎
呼应“competition meant everything
to him”和Jack 的紧张
续写注意事项：
承接原文：
时间线：需明确“next Saturday”前的紧迫感。
人物性格：Amanda 的宽容（“accidents will happen”）、Jack 的责任感。
关键物品：滑板的修复状态需清晰交代。
巧妙设计：可加入修理过程的困难（如费用不足、零件短缺）以增强冲突。
比赛结果可设计为“虽未夺冠但Tim 感受到支持”，突出情感价值。
2. 故事山模式与原文分析
故事山模式：
阶段
原文内容
续写对应点
开端
Jack 借滑板
修理滑板的行动
发展
滑板损坏
寻找修理店的波折
高潮
Tim 比赛的重要性
比赛日的紧张与结果
结局
Amanda 的原谅
友情修复（如Tim 的感谢）
衔接点与关键分析：
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
人物刻画
Jack：冲动但勇于承担；
Amanda：宽容体贴
“Her voice softened, easing
Jack’s guilt a little.”
情感层次
从愧疚（“Jack felt terrible”）到缓
解（Amanda 的原谅）
“It’s okay, accidents will
happen.”
关键情节
点
滑板损坏 → 比赛倒计时 → 修复
行动
“He has his first competition
next Saturday!”
语言特色
对话推动情节，短句表现紧张感
“Wow, you really messed up
Amanda’s board.”
心理描写
Jack 的恐慌和自责
“Jack’s stomach dropped.”
动作描写
滑板事故的细节
“the front wheels caught the
edge. Jack fell hard on his side”
环境描写
缺少直接描写，续写可加入修理店
的杂乱或比赛现场氛围
无
隐含主题
友情与责任的价值
“We’ll figure it out together.”
情感转折
Amanda 从犹豫（“hesitated”）到
“Her voice softened”
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
原谅
伏笔冲突
点
伏笔：Tim 的比赛；冲突：滑板损
坏与时间紧迫
“He has his first competition
next Saturday!”
隐含线索
滑板对Tim 的意义（“dreaming of
holding that first-place trophy”）
续写需强调Jack 如何弥补这
一情感价值
解决方案
合作修理滑板 + 精神支持比赛
“After school, Jack and Amanda
searched online...”（续写开头
提示）
三、动作、心理、环境描写例句
1. 动作描写（Action Descriptions）
He fumbled with the broken pieces, his fingers trembling.
（他颤抖着手指，笨拙地摆弄着碎片。）
She bit her lip, hesitating before handing over the skateboard.
（她咬着嘴唇，犹豫了一下才递出滑板。）
Jack’s hands shook as he dialed Amanda’s number.
（杰克拨通阿曼达的电话时，双手发抖。）
Tim sprinted across the park, his sneakers pounding against the pavement.
（蒂姆飞奔穿过公园，运动鞋重重地踩在人行道上。）
The skateboard clattered to the ground, its wheels spinning wildly.
（滑板哗啦一声摔在地上，轮子疯狂地转动。）
He wiped his sweaty palms on his jeans before attempting the trick again.
（他在牛仔裤上擦了擦汗湿的手掌，再次尝试那个技巧。）
Amanda’s eyes darted between the broken wheel and Jack’s guilty expression.
（阿曼达的目光在破损的轮子和杰克内疚的表情之间来回扫视。）
The mechanic tinkered with the skateboard, adjusting the trucks carefully.
（修理工摆弄着滑板，仔细调整着支架。）
Jack’s breath hitched as Tim prepared for his final trick.
（蒂姆准备做最后一个技巧时，杰克屏住了呼吸。）
She let out a relieved sigh when the wheel finally clicked into place.
（当轮子终于卡到位时，她松了一口气。）
2. 心理描写（Psychological Descriptions）
A wave of guilt crashed over him.
（一阵内疚感席卷了他。）
His stomach twisted into knots at the thought of disappointing Tim.
（一想到会让蒂姆失望，他的胃就揪成一团。）
Dread settled in the pit of his stomach.
（恐惧在他的胃里沉淀。）
Relief washed over him when Amanda didn’t yell.
（当阿曼达没有大吼大叫时，他松了一口气。）
His mind raced, searching for a solution.
（他的大脑飞速运转，寻找解决办法。）
A flicker of hope sparked in his chest.
（他的心中燃起一丝希望。）
He braced himself for Amanda’s anger, but it never came.
（他做好了迎接阿曼达怒火的准备，但怒火并未降临。）
The weight of his mistake pressed heavily on his shoulders.
（错误的沉重感压在他的肩上。）
His heart hammered against his ribs as he waited for her response.
（等待她的回应时，他的心砰砰直跳。）
A mix of pride and nervousness churned inside him.
（骄傲和紧张在他内心翻腾。）
3. 环境描写（Environmental Descriptions）
The skatepark buzzed with the sound of wheels grinding against concrete.
（滑板公园里回荡着轮子在水泥地上摩擦的声音。）
Golden afternoon sunlight streamed through the trees, casting long shadows.
（金色的午后阳光透过树木，投下长长的影子。）
The repair shop smelled of grease and old metal.
（修理店里弥漫着油脂和老旧金属的气味。）
A cool breeze ruffled their hair as they walked to the competition.
（他们走向比赛场地时，凉风吹乱了他们的头发。）
The arena lights glared down, making the skateboard’s scratches visible.
（赛场灯光刺眼地照射下来，让滑板上的划痕清晰可见。）
The wooden fence stood like a silent judge, watching Jack’s failed attempt.
（木栅栏像一位沉默的裁判，注视着杰克失败的尝试。）
The park bench felt cold and hard beneath him as he waited for Melissa.
（等待梅丽莎时，公园长椅在他身下又冷又硬。）
The trophy gleamed under the fluorescent lights, just out of reach.
（奖杯在荧光灯下闪闪发光，却遥不可及。）
The distant cheers of the crowd echoed through the skatepark.
（远处人群的欢呼声在滑板公园里回荡。）
The setting sun painted the sky in shades of orange and pink.
（夕阳将天空染成橙粉色。）
四、高级替换词 & 场景分类
1. 情绪类（Emotions）
基础词
高级替换词
适用场景
happy
elated, overjoyed, thrilled
成功、胜利时
sad
devastated, heartbroken, crestfallen
失败、失望时
angry
furious, livid, seething
冲突爆发时
基础词
高级替换词
适用场景
scared
terrified, petrified, panicked
紧张、危险时
nervous
anxious, jittery, on edge
比赛、考试前
例句：
Basic: Jack was happy when Tim won.
Advanced: Jack was elated when Tim secured second place.
2. 动作类（Actions）
基础词
高级替换词
适用场景
run
sprint, dash, bolt
紧急情况
look
glance, peer, scrutinize
观察细节
say
mutter, exclaim, murmur
不同语气
walk
stroll, stride, trudge
不同情绪
hold
clutch, grip, cradle
不同力度
例句：
Basic: Amanda looked at the broken skateboard.
Advanced: Amanda scrutinized the damaged wheel, her brow furrowed.
3. 物品类（Objects）
基础词
高级替换词
适用场景
broken
shattered, damaged, wrecked
严重损坏
old
worn-out, weathered, vintage
描述物品
new
pristine, brand-new, flawless
新物品
基础词
高级替换词
适用场景
small
tiny, compact, miniature
尺寸描述
fast
swift, rapid, lightning-fast
速度描述
例句：Basic: The skateboard was broken.
Advanced: The front wheel was shattered, its fragments scattered on the ground.
常见搭配（Collocations）
Bite one’s lip（咬嘴唇 → 犹豫）
Heart skips a beat（心跳漏一拍 → 紧张）
Let out a sigh（叹气 → 放松/失望）
Eyes light up（眼睛亮起来 → 兴奋）
Shoulders slump（肩膀耷拉 → 沮丧）
词法解析（Lexical Analysis）
His stomach dropped." → 比喻恐惧/震惊（非字面意思）
"Her voice softened." → 语气变化（情绪缓和）
"The wheel clicked into place." → 拟声词（成功修复）
可积累语料（Words & Phrases）
单词/短
语
词义
词
性
近义词
反义词
例句
Hesitate
犹豫
v
pause,
waver
decide
She hesitated before
answering.
Grimace
痛苦表
情
n/v
scowl,
frown
smile
He grimaced at the broken
wheel.
单词/短
语
词义
词
性
近义词
反义词
例句
Clatter
哗啦声
n/v
rattle, crash
silence
The skateboard clattered to the
ground.
Relieved
如释重
负
adj
reassured
anxious
Jack felt relieved when
Amanda smiled.
Trophy
奖杯
n
prize,
award
-
Tim dreamed of holding the
trophy.
升级替换词 & 例句
普通词
升级词
例句
Fix
Repair, mend
Jack promised to repair the skateboard.
Quickly
Swiftly, hastily
He swiftly gathered the broken pieces.
Look
Glance, peer
Amanda peered at the damaged wheel.
Happy
Elated, thrilled
Tim was thrilled with his performance.
Sad
Devastated, crestfallen
Jack felt devastated after the accident.
例句积累：
"The mechanic tinkered with the skateboard, his brow furrowed in
concentration."
"A wave of relief washed over him as the wheel finally snapped into place."
"Tim’s eyes lit up when he saw the repaired skateboard, its wheels spinning
smoothly."
"Jack’s shoulders slumped in defeat, but Amanda’s encouraging smile lifted his
spirits."
5. Possible Versions(3)
Version 1
Paragraph 1:
After school, Jack and Amanda searched online and found a small repair shop
across town. They rushed there before closing time, the broken skateboard
carefully tucked under Jack’s arm(独立主格). The shopkeeper examined the board and
said it could be fixed before the weekend—for a fee. Jack pulled out his wallet and
froze. He didn’t have enough. His heart sank. He looked at Amanda, shame
burning in his cheeks(独立主格刻画人物). For a brief moment, he thought of staying silent.
But then Melissa’s voice echoed in his mind: “Tell her immediately. The longer you
wait, the angrier she’ll be.” Taking
a deep breath
(现在分词短语做伴随动作), Jack turned to
Amanda. “I... I can’t afford the repair,” he admitted, eyes downcast(独立主格). Instead of
scolding him, Amanda gave him a look of quiet understanding. “We’ll figure it out
together,” she said. She added some money from her backpack. “It’s not just about
the board. You owned your mistake. That matters.” Jack nodded, grateful
beyond
words(adj 做主语补语).
Paragraph 2:
On competition day, Jack nervously watched Tim compete. From the sidelines,
he clutched his hands, every spin and landing making his heart skip a beat(独立主格).
Tim, unaware
of
what the board had been through(adj 短语做主语补语), performed
confidently. The crowd cheered as he nailed his final trick, and when his name was
announced as the winner, his eyes lit up. He raised the board above his head like a
trophy itself. “This board’s magic!” he shouted. Jack and Amanda exchanged a
glance—relieved, amused, and deeply moved(adj 并列). Amanda leaned in. “See? He
didn’t even know. But your honesty—that made this happen.” Jack smiled, a quiet
pride blooming in his chest(独立主格刻画人物). He hadn’t fixed everything alone, but he
had done the right thing. That day, he didn’t just witness a victory on the ramp—
he learned that being honest, taking responsibility, and being forgiven(动名词短语并列做主语)
could build something even stronger than a perfect skateboard: a lasting friendship.
语言表达亮点与写作语料积累
地道表达与固定搭配：
表达意图
高分短语/句式
替换表达
感到羞愧
shame burning in his cheeks
flushed with guilt / turned red with
embarrassment
不足以支付
费用
didn’t have enough / couldn’t
afford it
was short on money / lacked the money
表达歉意
admitted, eyes downcast
apologized sincerely / confessed with
regret
不责怪
Instead of scolding him
Not blaming him / Without getting angry
情感升华
grateful beyond words
deeply touched / moved to the core
情绪/动作描写亮点：
类型
描写词汇短语
情绪
heart sank, shame burning, eyes downcast, a quiet pride blooming,
deeply moved
动作
pulled out his wallet, turned to Amanda, clutched his hands, raised the
board above his head
心理描写
thought of staying silent, took a deep breath, froze with guilt, pride
blooming in his chest
写作素材升级表达推荐：
基础词汇
升级表达
示例句
say sorry
admit responsibility /
apologize sincerely
He admitted his mistake with eyes
downcast.
help
lend a hand / offer support
Amanda offered support without hesitation.
feel bad
be filled with guilt / be
eaten up by remorse
He was eaten up by remorse when he saw
the broken wheel.
win
take first place / be awarded
the trophy
Tim took first place, holding the board
high.
Version 2
Paragraph 1:
After school, Jack and Amanda searched online and found a small repair shop
across town. Knowing(现在分词短语做伴随动作)time was tight, Jack offered to bike there right
away, while Amanda
volunteered to call ahead
. The shop owner said they could
replace the wheel, but only if they arrived before 6 p.m(设置冲突). Jack pedaled as fast as
he could, his heart pounding(独立主格). At every red light, he reminded himself he
owed it to her and Tim and it was his responsibility. When he arrived
breathless, the mechanic took one look and shook his head. “It’s tricky, but I’ll try.”
Jack waited anxiously, fingers crossed(独立主格), until the man returned with a smile.
“All set. It’ll hold.” Jack paid with the cash he had saved for a new pair of
sneakers, knowing(现在分词短语做伴随动作)this was more important. Holding
the repaired
board tightly(现在分词做伴随动作), he whispered, “Please let it be enough.”
Paragraph 2:
On competition day, Jack nervously watched Tim compete. Though he wasn’t
in the spotlight, Jack felt more nervous than ever. As
Tim
mounted the board
,
Jack’s palms turned sweaty. But the repaired wheel held firm, even during the
toughest tricks. Amanda stood beside Jack, quietly watching(现在分词做伴随动作), then
gave him a grateful nod. “He’s flying,” she whispered. When Tim landed his final
jump and the crowd erupted in applause, Jack felt something lift off his shoulders.
Not just guilt—but pride. The announcer called Tim’s name for first place, and Jack
couldn't help but cheer the loudest. That night, as they all celebrated with pizza,
Tim thanked him with a wide smile, not knowing
everything
(现在分词短语做伴随动作) Jack
had gone through. Jack simply smiled back, realizing that taking responsibility
didn’t shrink him—it made him stronger.
Version 3
Paragraph 1:
After school, Jack and Amanda searched online and found a small repair
shop across town. But when they arrived, the store was already closing. Jack begged
the owner, explaining everything in one breath(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Moved
by the story
(现
在分词做伴随动作), the man agreed to help. As he worked, Amanda stood quietly beside
Jack. “You know,” she said softly, “I was really angry, but I saw you trying and
sincere honesty.” Jack glanced at her, surprised(过去分词做adj 补语). “Thanks for not giving
up on me,” he said. The repair was quick, but solid. The owner even tightened all
four wheels and then Jack and Amanda checked it in turn. Jack tried to pay, but
the man waved them off. “Pay it forward,” he smiled. That night, Jack couldn’t sleep,
worrying(现在分词做伴随动作) the wheel might still fail. He wrote a short note to Tim,
apologizing and promising(现在分词短语做伴随动作) to be there on competition day no matter
what.
Paragraph 2:
On competition day, Jack nervously watched Tim compete. The skatepark
buzzed with excitement. Tim’s face was focused, determined. As he sped up for the
first jump, Jack held his breath. Smooth. The repaired board held firm. Trick after
trick, Tim’s moves flowed like water. Amanda clapped beside him, whispering(现在分
词做伴随动作), “He’s got this.” Jack smiled, tension slowly melting(独立主格). When Tim
nailed the final trick and the judges raised high scores, Amanda threw her arms
around Jack in relief. “He did it.” Jack shook his head. “He did it. I just tried to fix
what I broke.” Later, when Tim received
the trophy
, he waved the board in the air
and shouted, “Thanks, Jack!” For the first time in days, Jack laughed freely.
语言亮点与语料积累表（共用）
地道表达与固定搭配：
原表达
地道替换
be nervous
feel on edge, be tense
fix the board get the board repaired, restore the board
be angry
be furious, be upset
feel guilty
be filled with guilt, be eaten up by guilt
thank sb.
express gratitude, be deeply thankful
情绪、动作描写亮点：
描写类型
词汇短语
情绪描写
his heart pounding, palms turned sweaty, guilt burning on his face,
relief washing over him
动作描写
pedaled as fast as he could, clapped in relief, stared out the window,
wrote a note, held his breath
心理变化
from guilt to growth, from anxiety to pride, from fear to calmness
同义词、联想词替换表：
原词
同义替换
联想表达
fix
mend, repair
restore, patch up
nervous anxious, on edge tense, worried, shaky
proud
satisfied, honored fulfilled, uplifted
shout
yell, exclaim
cheer, cry out
写作语料积累例句（推荐背诵）：
Only when you take responsibility do you truly grow.
What matters is not the mistake, but what you do afterward.
Sometimes the quietest victories are the most important.
He didn’t win a prize, but he won something more valuable—respect.
官方读后续写
After school, Jack and Amanda searched online and found a small repair
shop across town. With heavy hearts, they rushed to the shop. The elderly
shop owner, Mr. Rossi (不该增加人物吧), examined the broken wheel and scratched his
beard. “This isn’t cheap, kids. About $50.” Jack’s heart sank; he only had $12
saved. Seeing
his depression
(现在分词做伴随动作), Amanda squeezed his shoulder,
“We’ll split the cost,” she insisted. Mr. Rossi, noticing
their sincerity
(现在分词做伴
随动作), gave in, “I’ll knock off $20.” Grateful(adj 做主语补语), they agreed. Two days
later, the skateboard looked brand new. Holding
it (现在分词做伴随动作), Jack breathed a
sigh of relief. “We made it,” Amanda smiled.
On competition day, Jack nervously watched Tim compete. Tim soared
through his routine, landing
every trick
(现在分词做伴随动作) with the repaired board
flawlessly. When he came first , the crowd erupted into thunderous
applause. Beaming(现在分词做伴随动作), Tim ran to Jack and Amanda, “This board’s
even better than before!” he exclaimed. Hearing
that
(现在分词短语做伴随动作), Jack felt a
heavy load lifted off his mind. Watching
Tim holding his trophy
(现在分词短语做伴随动
作), Jack realized honesty and responsibility weren’t burdens—they were
bridges turning mistakes into moments that strengthened friendships.
