中原名校联盟2025 届高三英语高考适应模拟考试
52. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was born and grew up in a small seaside town. In my childhood, I often played on the
beach with my elder sister, chasing the waves and enjoying the seaside scenery.
One sunny summer afternoon, my sister and I were playing on a big rock quite a distance
from the beach. We were so happy that we didn’t notice the water rising. When we decided
to go back, we were shocked to find that the rock had almost been covered by water and
there was no way back to the shore. Meanwhile, the wind blew harder and harder. We got
into a panic, waving and shouting crazily towards the shore. Suddenly, I slipped and fell
into the sea. My sister stretched out her hand to catch hold of me.
However, she could
not stay still, and slid off the rock into the sea, too.
“Help! Help!” We cried. I could feel my body tingling as I tried to breathe for air. I
attempted to swim back to the rock but the water was too deep and the waves were too
strong. What made things worse was that the rough water made it almost impossible for
anyone to hear our cries. Tears mixed with the water as I struggled in the sea. My sister,
although using all her strength, wasn’t able to pull me in. Instead, she was being pushed
apart from me by the big waves. The two of us, scared to death, kept crying.
Luckily, two boys playing on the beach happened to see us. They quickly found a stick
nearby and approached us cautiously, hand in hand. They tried to pull us ashore with the
stick. But the stick was too short for us to reach. Worse still, the wind was getting so strong
that the two boys were rocked from side to side, unable to stand steadily. Eventually, they
had no choice but to go back to the shore to look for other people to help us.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Another huge wave crashed over my head and pulled me under
_________________________________________________________________________
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Paragraph 2: Fortunately, the two boys managed to find a lifeguard.
中原名校联盟2025 届高三英语高考适应模拟考试
52. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I was born and grew up in a small seaside town. In my childhood, I often played on the
beach with my elder sister, chasing
the waves and
enjoying
the seaside scenery
(现在分词短语
做伴随动作).(交代背景信息)
One sunny summer afternoon, my sister and I were playing on a big rock quite a distance
from the beach. We were so happy that we didn’t notice the water rising. When we
decided to go back, we were shocked to find that the rock had almost been covered by
water and there was no way back to the shore(转折事件). Meanwhile, the wind blew
harder and harder(环境描写). We got into a panic(心理描写), waving and shouting crazily
towards the shore(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Suddenly, I slipped and fell into the sea. My sister
stretched out her hand to catch hold of me. However, she could not stay still, and slid
off the rock into the sea, too(事件曲折度增加).
“Help! Help!” We cried. I could feel my body tingling as I
tried to breathe for air
. I
attempted to swim back to the rock but the water was too deep and the waves were too
strong. What made things worse(主从) was that the rough water made it almost
impossible for anyone to hear our cries(表从). Tears mixed with the water(状态描写，心理刻画) as
I struggled in the sea. My sister, although
using
all her strength
(现在分词做伴随动作), wasn’t able
to pull me in. Instead, she was being pushed apart from me by the big waves. The two of
us, scared to death(adj 做主语补语), kept crying.
Luckily, two boys playing
on the beach
(现在分词短语做后置定语) happened to see us. They quickly
found a stick nearby and approached us cautiously, hand in hand. They tried to pull us
ashore with the stick. But the stick was too short for us to reach. Worse still, the wind
was getting
so
strong
that
the two boys were rocked from side to side
, unable to
stand steadily(adj 短语做补语). Eventually, they had no choice but to go back to the shore to
look for other people to help us.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: Another huge wave crashed over my head and pulled me under
Paragraph 2: Fortunately, the two boys managed to find a lifeguard.
1. 文章分类与续写思路分析
文章分类：该文章属于“冒险与救援”类型的读后续写。文章描述了两个孩子在玩
耍时遇到危险，最终被救援的情节。
续写思路构思：
布局：续写应分为两段，第一段描述主人公在巨浪中的挣扎，第二段描述救援的过
程。
提炼框架：第一段应突出主人公的绝望和挣扎，第二段应突出救援的紧张和成功。
实施：第一段可以通过描写主人公的心理和动作来增强紧张感，第二段可以通过描
写救援人员的行动和主人公的感受来增强救援的紧迫感。
承接原文事项：续写应承接原文中的紧张氛围和救援的迫切性，注意保持情节的连
贯性。
整体注意事项：续写应保持原文的情感和紧张感，避免情节的突兀转折。
巧妙设计续写内容：可以通过描写主人公的心理变化和救援人员的行动来增强故事
的紧张感和情感深度。
2. 故事山模式与续写衔接分析
故事山模式：
起始：孩子们在岩石上玩耍。
上升：水位上升，孩子们被困。
高潮：孩子们掉入海中，拼命呼救。
下降：救援人员尝试救援。
结局：救援成功。
续写衔接：
第一段：描述巨浪将主人公拉入水中的情景，承接原文中的紧张氛围。
第二段：描述救援人员找到救生员并成功救援的情景，承接原文中的救援情节。
原文反应句：
心情：“We got into a panic, waving and shouting crazily towards the shore.” 反映了孩
子们的恐慌。
动作：“My sister stretched out her hand to catch hold of me.” 反映了姐姐的救援动作。
关键转折点：“Suddenly, I slipped and fell into the sea.” 是故事的关键转折点。
伏笔处和冲突点：
伏笔：水位上升，姐弟两人没有注意到。
冲突点：姐弟两人掉入海中，拼命呼救。
隐含线索：岸边的孩子们的危险处境和救援的迫切性。
解决方案：救援人员找到救生员并成功救援。
3. 原文多角度分析表格
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
人物刻画
姐妹天真、勇敢但无助；男孩热心
但能力有限
“My sister stretched out her hand... two
boys... approached cautiously”
情感层次
从快乐→恐慌→绝望→希望
“We were so happy... scared to death...
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
tears mixed with water”
关键情节点
涨潮被困、落水、男孩救援失败“the rock had almost been covered by
water... slid off the rock into the sea”
语言特色
短句突出紧张感，动词生动
（chasing, slipped, stretched）
“I slipped and fell... waved and shouted
crazily”
心理描写
通过动作和环境反衬恐惧
“Tears mixed with the water... scared to
death”
动作描写
挣扎、呼救、救援尝试
“waving and shouting... tried to pull us
ashore”
环境描写
海浪、风势加剧危险
“the wind blew harder... rough water... big
waves”
隐含主题
人与自然对抗中的互助与希望
“Luckily, two boys... to help us”
情感转折
从“happy”到“panic”再到
“helpless”
“We were so happy... got into a panic...
kept crying”
3. 动作、心理、环境描写的推荐英文例句及翻译
动作描写：
She stretched out her hand to catch hold of me.: 她伸出手来抓住我。
I attempted to swim back to the rock. 我试图游回岩石。
The lifeguard swam with powerful strokes. 救生员用有力的划水动作游了过来。
He wrapped his arm around me and pulled me towards the shore. 他用胳膊搂住我，把
我拉向岸边。
I kicked hard, trying to reach the surface. 我用力踢水，试图浮出水面。
The boys approached us cautiously, hand in hand.男孩们手拉手，小心翼翼地靠近我们。
They tried to pull us ashore with the stick. 他们试图用棍子把我们拉上岸。
The wind blew harder and harder. 风越刮越大。
The waves crashed over my head.海浪拍打在我的头上。
I struggled to surface, but the water was too strong. 我挣扎着浮出水面，但水太强了。
心理描写：
We got into a panic, waving and shouting crazily towards the shore 我们陷入恐慌，疯狂
地向岸边挥手和喊叫。
I could feel my body tingling as I tried to breathe for air. 当我试图呼吸空气时，我能感
觉到身体发麻。
Desperation set in as I realized we might not make it. 当我意识到我们可能无法成功时，
绝望感袭来。
I thought of our parents, our home, and all the moments we had shared.我想到了我们的
父母，我们的家，以及我们共同度过的所有时光。
I couldn’t let it end like this. 我不能让这一切就这样结束。
The two of us, scared to death, kept crying. 我们俩吓得要死，不停地哭。
I felt a mix of relief and exhaustion.我感到既松了一口气又筋疲力尽。
I was shaken, but unharmed.我受到了惊吓，但没有受伤。
It was a day I would never forget.那是我永远不会忘记的一天。
I felt a strong arm wrap around me, pulling me towards the shore.我感到一只强壮的胳膊
搂住我，把我拉向岸边。
环境描写：
The water was too deep and the waves were too strong.水太深，浪太强。
The wind blew harder and harder.风越刮越大。
The rock had almost been covered by water.岩石几乎被水覆盖。
The rough water made it almost impossible for anyone to hear our cries.汹涌的水面几乎
让任何人都听不到我们的呼救声。
The waves crashed over my head. 海浪拍打在我的头上。
The churning water made it difficult to see.翻滚的水面让人难以看清。
The lifeguard ran towards the water.救生员跑向水面。
The two boys were rocked from side to side, unable to stand steadily.两个男孩被风吹得
左右摇晃，无法站稳。
The water was too strong, and my limbs felt like lead.水太强了，我的四肢像铅一样沉
重。
The waves were relentless, and I felt myself being pulled deeper.海浪无情，我感到自己
被拉得更深。
常见单词的高级替换词：
场景: 危险与救援 单词: "panic" → "terror" 例句: "We were filled with terror as the
waves grew stronger."
场景: 动作 单词: "stretch" → "extend" 例句: "She extended her hand to catch hold of
me."
场景: 心理 单词: "desperation" → "despair" 例句: "Despair set in as I realized we might
not make it."
场景: 环境 单词: "rough" → "turbulent" 例句: "The turbulent water made it almost
impossible to hear our cries."
场景: 救援 单词: "rescue" → "salvage" 例句: "The lifeguard managed to salvage us from
the water."
4. 高中语法现象及语料分析
语法现象：
过去进行时: "We were playing on a big rock." 例句: "We were playing on the beach
when the storm hit."
过去完成时: "We had almost been covered by water." 例句: "By the time the lifeguard
arrived, we had almost drowned."
现在分词: "The wind blew harder and harder." 例句: "The wind was blowing harder and
harder as we struggled."
不定式: "I attempted to swim back to the rock." 例句: "I tried to swim back to the shore,
but the waves were too strong."
被动语态: "The rock had almost been covered by water." 例句: "The rock was almost
covered by water when we noticed."
常见搭配：
get into a panic: 陷入恐慌 例句: We got into a panic when we realized we were lost.
stretch out one’s hand: 伸出手 例句: She stretched out her hand to help me up.
attempt to do something: 试图做某事 例句: He attempted to climb the mountain, but it
was too steep.
make it: 成功 例句: We finally made it to the shore after a long struggle.
be scared to death: 吓得要死 例句: I was scared to death when I saw the snake.
生词短语：
tingling (adj.): 发麻的 近义词: numb 反义词: comfortable 例句: "My legs were tingling
after sitting for so long."
rough (adj.): 汹涌的 近义词: turbulent 反义词: calm 例句: "The rough sea made the
boat rock violently."
cautiously (adv.): 小心翼翼地 近义词: carefully 反义词: recklessly 例句: "He
approached the dog cautiously, not wanting to scare it."
relentless (adj.): 无情的 近义词: unyielding 反义词: merciful 例句: "The relentless rain
continued for days."
exhaustion (n.): 筋疲力尽 近义词: fatigue 反义词: energy 例句: "After the marathon,
he felt a deep sense of exhaustion."
5. Possible Versions(3)
Version 1
Paragraph 1: Another huge wave crashed over my head and pulled me under. I
struggled to surface, but the water was too strong, and my limbs felt like lead(描写状态). My
sister’s voice was faint, and I could barely see her through the churning water.
Desperation set in(情绪描写) as I realized we might not make it. I thought of our parents,
our home, and all the moments(名词并列) we had shared. I couldn’t let it end like this.
Summoning the last of my strength(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I kicked hard, trying
to reach the
surface(现在分词做伴随动作). But the waves were relentless(环境描写), and I felt myself being pulled
deeper. My sister, though equally exhausted(后置定语), managed to grab my arm, pulling
me closer(现在分词做伴随动作). We clung to each other, our breaths shallow and our hearts
pounding(独立主格，刻画人物状态). The cold water numbed our senses, but the fear kept us alert(状
态描写，心理刻画). As
we
were
struggling
, the two boys reappeared(衔接原文).
Paragraph 2: Fortunately, the two boys managed to find a lifeguard. They rushed
back to the shore, shouting
for help
(现在分词做伴随动作). The lifeguard, a tall and strong man,
immediately grabbed a rescue buoy and ran towards the water. He swam with
powerful strokes, reaching
us in no time
(现在分词做伴随动作). I felt a strong arm wrap around
me, pulling
me towards the shore
(现在分词短语做伴随动作). My sister was also being rescued by
another lifeguard. As we
were carried to
safety
, I felt a mix of relief and exhaustion(心
理描写). We were alive, and that was all that mattered. The lifeguard checked us over, and
though we were shaken, we were unharmed. It was a day I would never forget. The
boys who had initially tried to help us were standing on the shore, their faces filled
with relief(独立主格刻画人物). We thanked them and the lifeguard, knowing that without their
quick actions, the outcome could have been very different.
亮点词汇短语：
情绪描写: Desperation set in, relief and exhaustion 升级替换: panic → desperation, calm
→ relief
动作描写: clung to each other, pulled me closer 升级替换: held onto → clung to, drew
me closer → pulled me closer
积累语料：
短语: summoning the last of my strength 同义词: gathering my remaining energy 例句:
Summoning the last of my strength, I managed to climb the hill.
单词: "relentless" 同义词: "unyielding" 例句: "The relentless rain continued for days."
Version 2
Paragraph 1:
Another huge wave crashed over my head and pulled me under. Choking
on
seawater(现在分词做伴随动作), I was beaten wildly, my limbs growing heavier with
exhaustion(独立主格，刻画人物状态). Just as my vision blurred, my sister’s desperate cry pierced
through the chaos—she was swimming toward me against the current, her face
contorted with effort(独立主格刻画姐姐的勇敢). “Hold on!” she gasped, her fingers clamping
around my wrist like a
string
(独立主格刻画姐姐的动作). But the ocean was merciless; every stroke
drained her remaining strength, and her movements turned sluggish(动作链刻画姐姐的勇敢). My
lungs screamed for air, and a chilling thought struck me(描写我的状态): We might not make
it. The waves mocked our struggle, their relentless force dragging us further from
safety(独立主格刻画人物状态).Just then, the screaming of the two boys offered hope to us
again(衔接原文).
Paragraph 2:
Fortunately, the two boys managed to find a lifeguard. With the urgency of a man who
had faced such crises countless times, the lifeguard plunged into the raging sea, his
muscular arms cutting through the water like blades(独立主格刻画保安的动作). In moments, he
reached us, his grip firm and reassuring(独立主格补充信息). “I’ve got you!” he shouted above the
wind, hauling
me onto his rescue buoy
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)before turning back for my sister.
The boys, now joined by other beachgoers(补充信息), pulled me ashore, their faces a mix of
relief (独立主格刻画人物). As I collapsed onto the sand, coughing
up seawater
(现在分词做伴随动作), I
watched the lifeguard towing my sister to safety, her limp body a stark contrast to his
unwavering strength(独立主格刻画姐姐). Tears of gratitude welled up—we were alive, thanks to
these strangers’ bravery.
Version 3
Paragraph 1:
Another huge wave crashed over my head and pulled me under. The saltwater burned
my throat
as I fought to resurface
, but the force was too strong. Nearby, my
sister battled the waves, her strokes growing weaker with each passing second(独立主格刻画
人物状态). “Stay… with me!” she panted, her voice barely audible over the storm(独立主格补充人物
状态). Just as despair threatened to consume me, a distant shout echoed(无灵主语句)—the two
boys had returned, this time dragging a long rope between them(现在分词做伴随动作). One boy
waded into the shallows, his arms straining against the current(独立主格，刻画男孩) as he
hurled the rope toward us. Hope flickered(无灵主语句), but the waves
snapped it back
like a
whip(无灵主语，环境描写), leaving
us stranded once more
(现在分词做伴随动作).
Paragraph 2:
Fortunately, the two boys managed to find a lifeguard. The moment he arrived(the moment
一...就), he assessed the situation with a seasoned eye, then barked orders to the boys.
“Anchor the rope!” he commanded, tying
a loop around his waist
before diving in
(救人动作的
细节刻画，人物描写). The boys, now joined by a fisherman, planted their feet deep in the sand,
forming
a human chain
(现在分词做伴随动作). The lifeguard swam with powerful strokes, his
body a shield against the waves(独立主格刻画人物). When he reached us, he secured the rope
around my sister first, his voice calm but firm(独立主格刻画人物): “Hold tight—we’re pulling
you in.” As they
dragged
us ashore
, the wind
died down abruptly
(环境描写), as if the sea
itself had conceded defeat(比喻，环境描写). Gasping
on solid ground
(现在分词做伴随动作), I clutched my
sister’s hand, our silent tears mingling with the rain(独立主格刻画人物).
Version 4
Paragraph 1:
Another huge wave crashed over my head and pulled me under. Darkness swallowed
me(无灵主语句，刻画环境), and for a terrifying moment, time seemed to freeze—I saw flashes of our
childhood, building
sandcastles on this very shore
(现在分词短语做伴随动作), never
imagining
(现在分词
短语做伴随动作) it would betray us
. My sister’s hand suddenly gripped mine, her nails
digging into my skin(独立主格，细节刻画)“Together!” she cried, but her voice was thin, her
energy
exhausted
(独立主格刻画人物). The ocean yanked us apart, and I watched helplessly as
she was swept farther away. This can’t be the end, I thought, my body numb with cold
and fear(独立主格刻画人物状态). Then, a miracle—the two boys reappeared, they
screaming
like a
battle cry.(独立主格刻画人物状态)
Paragraph 2:
Fortunately, the two boys managed to find a lifeguard. He charged into the water
without hesitation, his movements
a blend of precision and raw power
(独立主格刻画人物).
Within seconds, he reached my sister, hoisting
her onto his back
before turning to me
(现
在分词做伴随动作). “Your turn!” he yelled, extending
a calloused hand
(现在分词短语做伴随动作，细节刻画人物). As
he
dragged me toward
the shore
, the boys cheered from the beach, their faces alight
with triumph(独立主格，刻画人物状态). The lifeguard’s strength was superhuman as the
waves
lashed
at his shoulders
. When
my feet finally touched sand
, I crumpled to my
knees(细节动作描写), my sister
collapsing beside me
(独立主格刻画人物状态). The lifeguard knelt too, his
breathing steady despite the ordeal(独立主格，刻画人物形象). “You’re safe now,” he said, his words
simple but carrying the weight of a promise(独立主格，刻画人物形象). The setting sun
cast a
golden glow over us(寓情于景), its warmth
a stark contrast to the sea’s cruelty
(独立主格，补充信息).
