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2026 届武汉九月调研考试(武汉九调)英语试题
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
It was a typical busy noon at the downtown fast-food spot.The smell of 
sizzling patties and crispy fries lingered in the air(无灵主语句),and the place was packed 
with folks rushing 
 
 to grab a quick meal
 
 .(现在分词短语做后置定语)I'd just gotten off a long 
morning at work,and my stomach was empty as
    I   finally reached the front of
 
  
the line and got my order—a burger,fries,and a cold drink(名词并列).
As I set the tray
 
   down on a small table by the window
 
 ,I glanced over and saw 
two firefighters in the corner. Their uniforms were heavy with faint spots(人物描
写),like they'd just stepped away from a smoky scene,and their boots still held a 
hint of damp from the morning dew( 无灵主语句).They stood in the back of the line, 
shoulders relaxed but eyes tired(独立主格刻画人物,伏笔). 
I was just about to pick up my burger—the cheese melted perfectly—
when a loud, sharp siren cut through the noise of the restaurant.The two 
firefighters froze for half a second, and then moved. No hesitation,no exchange 
of words—just muscle memory( 人物刻画).One grabbed his helmet off the nearby 
counter, the other adjusted his radio on his shoulder,and they turned toward the 
door, their steps quickening( 独立主格刻画人物).I watched them go,and my fork paused 
mid-air(伏笔,人物情绪描写).
My empty stomach served as a quiet reminder of how long I'd waited for 
this meal.
I'd stood in that line for 15 minutes,my feet aching(独立主格) from the morning's work. 
Giving them my lunch meant I would have to wait again—maybe another line, 
maybe my break slipping away faster. I bit my lip, staring
 
   at
    the
 
   tray
 
 (现在分词短语做伴宿动
作).Then I thought of their uniforms,the spots,the way(名词并列)they'd act upon hearing 
the siren like it was a call they couldn't ignore.They didn't get to pause for a meal when 
emergencies hit(无灵主语句).They'd probably go hours without eating,running 
 
 from one call
 
  
to the next.(现在分词短语做伴随动作)(伏笔就要写自己的行为了)
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: My hesitation melted away.
Paragraph 2: I went back to the counter,only to find the manager was waiting for me.
2026 届武汉九月调研考试(武汉九调)英语试题
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
It was a typical busy noon at the downtown fast-food spot.The smell of 
sizzling patties and crispy fries lingered( 弥 漫 )in the air,and the place was 
packed with folks rushing to grab a quick meal.I'd just gotten off a long morning 
at work,and my stomach was empty as I finally reached the front of the line 
and got my order—a burger,fries,and a cold drink.
As I set the tray( 托 盘 )down on a small table by the window,I glanced over 
and saw two firefighters in the corner.Their uniforms were heavy with faint 
spots,like they'd just stepped away from a smoky scene,and their boots still held a 
hint of damp from the morning dew.They stood in the back of the line,shoulders 
relaxed but eyes tired.
I was just about to pick up my burger—the cheese melted perfectly—
when a loud, sharp siren( 警 报 )cut through the noise of the restaurant.The two 
firefighters froze for half a second,and then moved.No hesitation,no exchange 
of words—just muscle memory.One grabbed his helmet off the nearby counter,the 
other adjusted his radio on his shoulder,and they turned toward the door,their steps 
quickening.I watched them go,and my fork paused mid-air.
My empty stomach served as a quiet reminder of how long I'd waited for this 
meal.
I'd stood in that line for 15 minutes,my feet aching.from the morning's 
work.Giving them my lunch meant I would have to wait again—maybe another 
line,maybe my break slipping away faster.I bit my lip,staring at the tray.Then I 
thought of their uniforms,the spots,the way they'd act upon hearing the siren like it was 
a call they couldn't ignore.They didn't get to pause for a meal when emergencies 
hit.They'd probably go hours without eating,running from one call to the next.
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: My hesitation melted away.
Paragraph 2: I went back to the counter,only to find the manager was waiting for me.
一、文章分类与续写思路分析
该读后续写属于善良回环类,聚焦于普通人的善心瞬间与情感转变。故事
以快餐店为背景,通过观察消防员的紧急出动,引发主人公内心的矛盾与最终
的决定,强调奉献、同情与回报的主题。
1. 构思与布局
构思方向:续写应延续主人公的心理转变,突出“给予”带来的积极回报,保
持情感真实性和情节合理性。
段落布局:
第一段(开头语:My hesitation melted away):描述主人公主动将食物送给消
防员的过程,包括动作、对话及周围反应,强化情感升华。
第二段(开头语:I went back to the counter, only to find the manager was waiting 
for me):聚焦回报与主题升华,如经理的赞赏、免费餐食或社会认同,体现
善有善报。
2. 提炼框架
冲突:个人需求(饥饿、时间) vs 他人需求(消防员的奉献)。
转折:主人公克服自私念头,决定赠餐。
高潮:消防员的感激或意外回报。
结局:情感满足与主题升华。
3. 实施要点
保持原文细腻的心理和动作描写。
延续紧张与温暖并存的气氛。
使用原文关键词(如uniforms, siren, tray)衔接。
4. 承接原文注意事项
情节承接:消防员刚离开,主人公追出送餐。
细节呼应:提及汉堡、托盘、制服斑点等元素。
情感延续:从犹豫到坚定,最后满足。
5. 整体注意事项
避免续写偏离主题(如突发灾难)。
控制节奏,两段分别解决行动和回报。
结尾积极但不夸张,符合生活逻辑。
6. 巧妙设计
添加细微互动,如消防员的惊讶表情。
用环境描写烘托气氛(如阳光、人群目光)。
通过经理的对话点明主题(如“我们感谢这样的善心”)。
二、故事山模式分析
开端:主人公排队取餐,观察消防员。
发展:警报响起,消防员紧急离开。
高潮:主人公内心斗争,决定赠餐。
回落:送餐行动及回报(经理的认可)。
结局:情感满足与主题升华。
三、原文衔接点、心情与动作描写、转折点、伏笔与冲突
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
人物刻画
消防员:敬业疲
惫;主人公:普通
上班族,善心内
敛。
"Their uniforms were heavy with faint spots... 
shoulders relaxed but eyes tired." / "I'd just 
gotten off a long morning at work..."
情感层次
从饥饿自私到同情
敬佩。
"Giving them my lunch meant I would have 
to wait again... I bit my lip, staring at the 
tray."
关键情节
警报响起(转折
"a loud, sharp siren cut through the noise..." / 
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
点
点);主人公决定
赠餐(高潮)。
"My hesitation melted away."
语言特色
简洁细腻,多用感
官描写(气味、声
音)。
"The smell of sizzling patties... lingered in the 
air." / "a loud, sharp siren..."
关键词分
析
siren(象征紧
急)、uniforms
(象征职责)、tray
(象征选择)。
多处提及关键词。
心理描写
内心斗争:自私 vs 
无私。
"I bit my lip, staring at the tray." / "Then I 
thought of their uniforms..."
动作描写
消防员迅速离开;
主人公暂停动作。
"they turned toward the door, their steps 
quickening." / "my fork paused mid-air."
环境描写
快餐店忙碌氛围,
突出日常与紧急的
对比。
"typical busy noon... packed with folks 
rushing to grab a quick meal."
隐含主题
平凡人的善心与奉
献的价值。
无直接表述,通过对比暗示。
情感转折
从犹豫到坚定。
"My hesitation melted away."(续写开头)
空间转换
从柜台到餐桌,再
到门外(续写需延
伸)。
"set the tray down on a small table by the 
window..."
时间过渡
从中午排队到紧急
"I'd stood in that line for 15 minutes..."
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
事件发生,瞬间转
变。
伏笔与冲突
伏笔:消防员制服斑点、潮湿靴子(暗示刚结束任务);警报声(预示新任
务)。
冲突:主人公饥饿与时间压力 vs 消防员的无私付出。
隐含线索:社会对奉献者的忽视(如消防员无法正常用餐)。
解决方案:主人公主动分享食物,弥补社会缺失的关怀。
三、动作心理环境渺小而与高级词汇
1. 动作描写
英文: Without a second thought, I scooped up the entire tray and hurried towards the 
exit.
中文: 我毫不犹豫地端起整个托盘,急忙向出口走去。
英文: He reached out and accepted the tray, his calloused hands a stark contrast to the 
glossy cardboard.
中文: 他伸出手接过托盘,他粗糙的双手与光滑的纸板形成了鲜明的对比。
英文: A warm smile spread across his smoke-smudged face as he nodded in gratitude.
中文: 一股温暖的微笑在他被烟雾熏黑的脸上绽开,他感激地点了点头。
英文: She waved away my offer of payment, insisting it was on the house.
中文: 她挥手拒绝了我付款的提议,坚持说这是店里的心意。
英文: I pushed through the glass door, the midday sun momentarily blinding me.
中文: 我推开玻璃门,午后的阳光瞬间让我睁不开眼。
英文: He swiftly grabbed his helmet, its surface reflecting the fluorescent lights 
overhead.
中文: 他迅速抓起他的头盔,其表面反射着头顶的荧光灯。
英文: Their retreating figures merged into the flow of pedestrians on the busy street.
中文: 他们离去的身影融入了繁忙街道上的人流中。
英文: I extended the tray towards them, my arms feeling both heavy and light at the 
same time.
中文: 我把托盘递给他们,我的手臂感觉既沉重又轻盈。
英文: The manager gestured for me to come closer, a kind look in his eyes.
中文: 经理示意我走近些,眼中带着和善的目光。
英文: She slid a fresh, steaming bag across the counter towards me.
中文: 她把一个新鲜的、冒着热气的袋子从柜台那边滑向我。
2. 心理描写
英文: A sense of profound satisfaction washed over me, erasing all the fatigue from 
the morning.
中文: 一种深刻的满足感席卷了我,消除了早晨所有的疲惫。
英文: The internal battle between my growling stomach and my conscience was brief 
but intense.
中文: 我咕咕叫的肚子和我的良心之间的内心斗争短暂而激烈。
英文: I felt a pang of guilt for my earlier hesitation.
中文: 我为之前的犹豫感到一阵内疚。
英文: A wave of empathy for the selfless first responders overwhelmed my selfish 
desires.
中文: 对无私急救人员的同情心淹没了我的自私欲望。
英文: The weight of my decision suddenly felt insignificant compared to their daily 
burdens.
中文: 与他们日常的重担相比,我的决定的重量突然感觉微不足道。
英文: Curiosity and anticipation mingled within me as I approached the counter 
again.
中文: 当我再次走向柜台时,好奇和期待在我心中交织。
英文: My heart swelled with a quiet joy that no meal could provide.
中文: 我的心中充满了一种任何食物都无法提供的宁静的快乐。
英文: The thought of their potential hunger gnawed at me more than my own.
中文: 想到他们可能挨饿,这比我自己饿更让我感到难受。
英文: All doubts vanished, replaced by a clear, unwavering purpose.
中文: 所有疑虑都消失了,被一个清晰、坚定的目标所取代。
英文: I knew, without a shadow of a doubt, that I had made the right choice.
中文: 我确信无疑,我做出了正确的选择。
3. 环境描写
英文: The sun shone brilliantly, as if affirming my decision.
中文: 阳光灿烂地照耀着,仿佛在肯定我的决定。
英文: The distant wail of the siren faded into the city's hum.
中文: 远处警报器的哀鸣渐渐消失在城市嗡嗡的背景音中。
英文: The once overwhelming noise of the restaurant seemed to soften into a gentle 
murmur.
中文: 餐厅里曾经压倒一切的噪音似乎柔和成了轻轻的低语。
英文: A few patrons glanced up from their meals, their expressions a mix of curiosity 
and understanding.
中文: 几位顾客从他们的餐食中抬起头来,表情混合着好奇和理解。
英文: The cool breeze from the door provided a refreshing contrast to the stuffy air 
inside.
中文: 从门吹来的凉风与里面闷热的空气形成了令人耳目一新的对比。
英文: The smell of grease and salt was now mingled with a sense of human 
connection.
中文: 油脂和盐的味道现在与一种人与人之间的联系感交织在一起。
英文: The fluorescent lights overhead now felt warm and inviting rather than harsh.
中文: 头顶的荧光灯现在感觉温暖而诱人,而不是刺眼。
英文: The busy street outside continued its relentless pace, unaware of the small act 
of kindness within.
中文: 外面繁忙的街道依旧保持着它无情的节奏,对里面发生的小小善行一无
所知。
英文: The polished countertop reflected my own surprised expression back at me.
中文: 光滑的柜台台面将我惊讶的表情反射给我自己。
英文: The air, once thick with the urgency of quick meals, now felt lighter, more 
hopeful.
中文: 曾经弥漫着快速用餐的紧迫感的空气,现在感觉更轻快,更有希望。
4. 常见单词高级替换词 (Advanced Vocabulary)
场景
常见词
高级替换词 (含词性)
简要释义
“说”
said
stated (v.) / uttered (v.)
陈述/说出
insisted (v.)
坚持说
exclaimed (v.)
惊呼
“拿/
抓”
took/got
grabbed (v.) / seized (v.)
抓取
scooped up (v.)
(迅速) 抱起,端起
retrieved (v.)
取回
“快”
quick/fast
prompt (adj.) / swift (adj.)
迅速的/敏捷的
brisk (adj.)
轻快的
without hesitation (phr.)
毫不犹豫地
“好”
good
superb (adj.) / admirable (adj.)
极好的/令人钦佩的
gracious (adj.)
仁慈的,优雅的
heartwarming (adj.)
暖心的
“累”
tired
fatigued (adj.) / weary (adj.)
疲劳的/疲倦的
场景
常见词
高级替换词 (含词性)
简要释义
exhausted (adj.)
精疲力尽的
drained (adj.)
耗尽的
四、语言点解析与语料积累
1. 地道搭配与词法解析 

Lingered in the air: linger (vi.) 表示“徘徊、弥漫”,与 in the air 搭配非常地
道,常用于描述气味、感觉等。
Heavy with faint spots: heavy 此处不是指重量,而是“布满的、带有浓厚痕迹
的” (weighted down with or full of),是一种比喻用法,非常生动。
A hint of damp: a hint of 表示“一丝、一点”,比 a little 更优雅,常用于描述
细微的气味、味道、感觉 (a small amount of something).
Muscle memory: 固定术语,“肌肉记忆”,指无需思考的熟练动作 (the ability 
to move a part of your body without thinking about it).
Served as a reminder: serve as 是固定搭配,“作为...,起到...的作用” (to be 
useful or helpful for a particular purpose).
Act upon hearing: act upon/on 表示“根据...行事” (to do something because you 
have been advised or told to do it).
Pause for a meal: pause for 是停顿下来做某事的常见搭配。
Hesitation melted away: melt away 形象地描述了“犹豫”像冰一样“融化消
失”的过程 (to disappear or make something disappear gradually).
2. 可积累语料 (Useful Phrases & Vocabulary)
生词/短
语
词意
词
性
近义词
反义词
例句
linger
徘徊;
弥漫;
留恋
v
i
.
remain, stay, 
persist
vanish, 
disappear
The smell of 
coffee lingered in the 
kitchen long after 
breakfast. / 
She lingered outside 
the door, too nervous 
to enter.
sizzle
(油炸食
物时) 
发出咝
咝声
v
.
crackle, 
frizzle
The bacon 
was sizzling appetizin
gly in the pan.
faint
微弱
的;模
糊的
a
d
j
.
slight, dim, 
vague
strong, 
clear, 
distinct
There was 
a faint smell of 
roses. / I have 
a faint recollection of 
the event.
hesitation
犹豫,
迟疑
n
.
doubt, 
indecision, 
reluctance
decisivenes
s, certainty
After a 
moment's hesitation, 
he agreed. / She 
accepted the job offer 
without hesitation.
adjust
调整;
适应
v
.
adapt, 
modify, alter
He adjusted his tie 
before the meeting. / 
It took time 
to adjust to the new 
climate.
生词/短
语
词意
词
性
近义词
反义词
例句
emergenc
y
紧急情
况
n
.
crisis, 
urgency
In case of emergency, 
press the red button.
ignore
忽视,
不理睬
v
.
disregard, 
overlook
acknowledg
e, notice, 
heed
He 
completely ignored m
y question. / 
She ignored the 
warning signs.
profound
深刻
的;极
大的
a
d
j
.
deep, intense, 
sincere
superficial, 
shallow, 
slight
The news had 
a profound effect on 
her. / I have the 
most profound respect 
for them.
gratitude
感激,
感谢
n
.
thankfulness, 
appreciation
ingratitude
I would like to 
express 
my gratitude to 
everyone for their 
help.
on the 
house
(饮料或
食物等) 
由店家
免费招
待
i
d
i
o
m
complimentar
y, free
The manager sent us a 
dessert, on the house.
五、Possible Versions (4)
Version 1
Paragraph 1: My hesitation melted away. A  s I 
 
 pictured the two firefighters 
 
 
skipping their meal
 
  to dive into yet another dangerous task
 
 ,   without a second 
thought, I picked up the tray and hurried toward the door, my stomach still 
protesting in silence(独立主格刻画人物,衔接与原文). As I reached the exit, they were already 
stepping into their truck, helmets on(独立主格),  ready 
 
 to vanish into the unknown
 
 (adj 做主语
补语). I raised the tray, calling out(现在分词短语做伴随动作), and one of them turned, his eyes 
flashing both surprise and gratitude(独立主格刻画人物). Handing 
 
 the food over
 
 (现在分词短语做伴随
动作), I felt the hunger fade into a quiet warmth that filled me more than any burger 
could have. For the first time that day, my tired feet no longer seemed to ache.
Paragraph 2: I went back to the counter, only to find the manager was waiting 
for me. With a knowing smile, she said “Not everyone would do what you just 
did,” sliding 
 
 another tray toward me
 
 (现在分词短语做伴随动作). “Lunch is on the house.” For 
a moment, I was speechless, struck 
 
 by
  (过去分词短语做原因状语) how kindness had doubled 
back so quickly. As I carried the fresh meal to my table, I realized it wasn’t simply 
food I’d received—it was the reminder that small choices could ripple far beyond 
ourselves(同位从). That noon, the taste of the burger lingered, but the lesson stayed 
longer.
Version 2
Paragraph 1:  My hesitation melted away
 
 . R  eplaced by a sudden rush of 
 
 
resolve(过去分词做原因状语), c  lutching 
 
 the tray
 
 (现在分词短语做伴随动作), I ran outside and caught up 
with the firefighters just before they climbed into the truck. Breathless(adj 做主语补语), I 
held out the meal. “You’ll need this more than I do,” I managed to say. One of them 
paused
 
 ,  glanced at the steaming burger, and gave me a brief nod before taking 
it(动作串描写). Their boots pounded against the pavement as the siren g
 
 rew louder
 
 , and 
within seconds they were gone, leaving 
 
 only the echo of urgency behind
 
 (现在分词短语做结果
状语). My hunger still lingered(无灵主语句,衔接原文), but my heart felt unexpectedly light, as 
though I, too, had answered a call.
Paragraph 2: I went back to the counter, only to find the manager was 
waiting for me.  W
  ith a tray already prepared
 
 ,  “They deserve our respect,” he said 
softly, “and so do you.” His words made my cheeks flush, and gratitude swelled 
within me(无灵主语句). Sitting 
 
 down with the new meal
 
 (现在分词短语做伴随动作), I looked out the 
window where the truck had disappeared, and I couldn’t help but think: sometimes 
the smallest sacrifices can speak the loudest.
Version 3
Paragraph 1: My hesitation melted away. The moment I recalled the soot and 
dust on their uniforms and the weariness in their eyes, I felt an urge to send my 
respect. Compared 
 
 with the dangers
 
 (过去分词做方式状语) they faced, what was my empty 
stomach? Gathering 
 
 courage
 
 (现在分词短语做伴随动作), holding
 
   up
    my
 
   tray
 
 (现在分词短语做伴随动作), I 
hurried after them and pressed the tray into their hands. The younger firefighter 
muttered a quick “thank you,” his voice rough
 
 ,   with
 
   a    feeling
 
   of
    exhaustion
 
  but
 
  
sincere(独立主格刻画人物). As the siren pulled them away(无灵主语句), a strange calm settled over 
me(无灵主语句), as if I had shared not just food but also strength.
Paragraph 2: I went back to the counter, only to find the manager was waiting 
for me. H  olding 
 
 a replacement meal
 
 ,  “Consider this our thank-you,” he said 
warmly. For a second, emotion caught in my throat(无灵主语句), and I could only nod. 
Sitting 
 
 down once more
 
 (现在分词短语做伴随动作), I realized that generosity is a circle: what 
you give has a way of returning. That noon, amid the noise of clattering trays and 
chatter, I felt a rare silence inside me—the quiet satisfaction of doing the right 
thing(同位语补充说明).
强调句:It wasn’t simply food I’d received—it was the reminder that small 
choices could ripple far beyond ourselves.
非谓语动词:Handing the food over, I felt the hunger fade…
倒装:Only then did I realize that kindness had doubled back so quickly.
定语从句:the heroes who never get to pause.
 地道搭配 & 同义替换
melted away → faded / dissolved / vanished
on the house → free of charge
speechless → lost for words / at a loss
gratitude swelled → gratitude surged / thankfulness welled up
filled me more than any burger could have → gave me more comfort than 
food ever could
 情绪/动作描写亮点
情绪:
hesitation → doubt, uncertainty, wavering
warmth → comfort, reassurance, relief
gratitude → appreciation, thankfulness, indebtedness
动作:
clutched the tray → gripped, tightened hold on
boots pounded → boots thudded, footsteps echoed
siren pulled them away → the siren carried them off, drew them away
 积累语料 & 升级替换
to linger → to hang in the air / to remain / to stay on
without a second thought → instantly / at once / in a heartbeat
struck by how… → amazed by / taken aback by / deeply moved by
do the right thing → make the right choice / follow one’s conscience
例句积累:
Her doubts melted away as soon as she saw his smile.
The sound of applause lingered long after the curtain fell.
Without a second thought, he jumped into the river to save the child.
I was struck by how quickly kindness can change the atmosphere.
官方第二节
Paragraph 1: My hesitation melted away. My hands were a little shaky, but I 
walked over to them quickly, catching 
 
 up just as they reached the door
 
 (现在分词做伴宿动作). 
"Wait!" I shouted. They turned, surprised(过去分词做adj 补语),  their helmets
 
  still in their
 
  
hands(独立主格刻画人物). "Here," I said, holding 
 
 out the tray
 
 (现在分词短语做伴随动作). "You need this 
more than I do. I'm not in a rush — but you are." They thanked me repeatedly and 
took the lunch. I stood by the door, watching them run toward the fire truck(现在分词短
语做伴随动作), their uniforms fading into the distance(独立主格), a sense of relief lingering in 
my chest(独立主格).
Paragraph 2: I went back to the counter, only to find the manager waiting for 
me. "That was really nice of you," she said with a grin. When I reached for my 
wallet to pay for a new burger, she shook her head. "Kindness like that shouldn't go 
unrewarded." A wave of warmth washed over me(无灵主语句), and tears nearly blurred 
my vision(无灵主语句). Sitting 
 
 back down with my fresh meal
 
 (现在分词短语做伴随动作), I took a 
bite — and it tasted better than anything I'd had in a long time. That day, I didn't 
just feed two people. I became part of a circle of kindness — the kind that makes 
this busy, messy world feel a little softer.