山东省潍坊市2024-2025 学年高二下学期阶段性调研监测（期末）英语试题
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
At nine years old, Charlotte went through more than the usual amount of
excitement and change for a girl. In the past few months, her stable life had
been turned upside down when
her father
was laid off from his job
(故事背景). This
brought about a series of events, including her parents losing(现在分词短语做结果状语)their
beautiful Victorian home and forcing their family into a fifteen-foot trailer
they had previously only used for weekend camping trips (经济原因下的家庭关系).
Life in the trailer was tough, yet it was filled with warmth. Though her
family possessed little , their door was never closed to those who had even
less(转折了，中心的偏移). Never will she forget the first time (部分倒装) they squeezed onto
the tiny couch together, which doubled as her parents’ bed at night. One
evening, as her mother was checking the last food they had, her voice
trembled, “We don’t have enough food to last the week.” Hearing
this
(现在分词段做方
式状语), Charlotte was seized by a sense of sadness, like a huge stone settled
in
her heart(过去分词做后置定语).
Moments later, her mother rose to prepare the modest chicken dinner.
Charlotte wandered outside where her dad was working on their broken-
down truck. Just then , a middle-aged man with dirty clothes emerged from a
winding path. Coming
right up to them
(现在分词短语做伴随动作), the man whispered in
hesitation with a mix of shame and hope, “I... I am a hiker and have got lost.
I’m hungry and wondering if you have any food to spare(鉴于前文的背景人物刻画，画风应该可以预
判).”
Charlotte’s heart tightened, countless thoughts racing in her mind (独立主格刻画人
物). They barely had enough for themselves ( 冲突点). The chicken for dinner
wouldn’t even fill three plates. “But the man seems to be in greater need of
food than we do,” she thought to herself.
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: “Of course!” The words escaped Charlotte before she even realized it.
Paragraph 2: Days later, the hiker returned with a big bag.
山东省潍坊市2024-2025 学年高二下学期阶段性调研监测（期末）英语试题
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇
完整的短文。
At nine years old, Charlotte went through more than the usual amount
of excitement and change for a girl. In the past few months, her stable life
had been turned upside down when her father was laid off from his job.
This brought about a series of events, including her parents losing their
beautiful Victorian home and forcing their family into a fifteen-foot
trailer(拖车)they had previously only used for weekend camping trips.
Life in the trailer was tough, yet it was filled with warmth. Though
her family possessed little, their door was never closed to those who had
even less. Never will she forget the first time they squeezed onto the tiny
couch(长沙发)together, which doubled as her parents’ bed at night. One
evening, as her mother was checking the last food they had, her voice
trembled, “We don’t have enough food to last the week.” Hearing this,
Charlotte was seized by a sense of sadness, like a huge stone settled in
her heart.
Moments later, her mother rose to prepare the modest chicken dinner.
Charlotte wandered outside where her dad was working on their broken-
down truck. Just then, a middle-aged man with dirty clothes emerged
from a winding path. Coming right up to them, the man whispered in
hesitation with a mix of shame and hope, “I... I am a hiker and have got
lost. I’m hungry and wondering if you have any food to spare.”
Charlotte’s heart tightened, countless thoughts racing in her mind.
They barely had enough for themselves. The chicken for dinner wouldn’t
even fill three plates. “But the man seems to be in greater need of food
than we do,” she thought to herself.
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: “Of course!” The words escaped Charlotte before she even
realized it.
Paragraph 2: Days later, the hiker returned with a big bag.
1. 读后续写类型分析
该文章属于 "道德困境与人性抉择" 类型的读后续写，主题围绕贫困中的善良
与互助展开。
构思思路与布局
步骤
具体内容
主题提炼
通过家庭困境与陌生人的求助，体现“无私帮助”的价值观。
框架设计
第一段：Charlotte 一家如何分享食物；第二段：陌生人的回报（物
质或精神）。
关键承接
需呼应原文的“温暖”“匮乏”“犹豫”等情感，延续动作和心理
描写的细腻风格。
伏笔利用
原文“door was never closed to those who had even less”暗示后续帮
助行为。
续写注意事项
承接原文：
保持Charlotte 一家善良的基调，避免突兀转变（如突然富裕）。
延续“颤抖的声音”“心紧”等心理描写，体现挣扎与决心。
设计技巧：
通过环境描写（如黄昏、食物的香气）烘托氛围。
用动作细节（如母亲分食物的手势）强化人物性格。
2. 故事山模式与原文分析
故事山模式
阶段
原文内容
续写方向
开端
家庭陷入经济困境，搬入拖车生活。
维持困境的真实性。
阶段
原文内容
续写方向
发展
母亲发现食物不足，陌生人求助。
Charlotte 决定分享食物。
高潮
Charlotte 内心挣扎后答应帮助。
描写分享的过程与情感变化。
回落
陌生人离开。
铺垫回报（如留下线索）。
结局
无（待续写）。
陌生人回报，点明主题。
关键分析表
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
人物刻画
Charlotte 善良但犹豫；父母
坚韧乐观。
“their door was never closed to those
who had even less”
情感层次
从悲伤（食物不足）到同情
（陌生人求助）。
“a sense of sadness, like a huge stone
settled in her heart”
关键情节
陌生人出现是转折点，考验
家庭价值观。
“The man whispered in hesitation
with a mix of shame and hope”
心理描写
通过比喻和身体反应体现情
绪。
“Charlotte’s heart tightened,
countless thoughts racing in her
mind”
动作描写
细微动作反映状态（如“母
亲颤抖”“父亲修车”）。
“her mother was checking the last
food”“her dad was working on the
truck”
隐含主题
贫困中的善良比物质更重
要。
“Life in the trailer was tough, yet it
was filled with warmth”
伏笔冲突
食物不足 vs. 帮助他人。
“We don’t have enough food to last
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
the week” vs. “any food to spare”
隐含线索
拖车曾用于“露营”，暗示
家庭曾有一定经济能力，增
强反差。
“a fifteen-foot trailer they had
previously only used for weekend
camping”
解决方案
物质回报：陌生人带回食物或工作机会（呼应父亲失业）。
精神回报：陌生人留下感谢信，强化“帮助他人终有回报”的主题。
续写段落示范（框架）
Paragraph 1
动作衔接：Charlotte 转身跑进拖车，母亲已开始撕开半只鸡。
心理描写：她盯着鸡肉咽口水，但想起陌生人苍白的嘴唇。
环境烘托：暮色中，三人挤在折叠桌旁，分享面包和仅有的汤。
Paragraph 2
主题升华：父亲说：“原来最少的食物，能换来最饱的肚子。”（双关：物质
与精神）
3. 动作、心理、环境描写例句及翻译
动作描写（Action Descriptions）
She tore the bread in half with trembling fingers.
（她用颤抖的手指将面包撕成两半。）
Her mother ladled the thin soup into cracked bowls.
（母亲将稀薄的汤舀进有裂痕的碗里。）
The man shuffled forward, his boots scraping against the gravel.
（男人拖着脚步向前走，靴子在碎石上摩擦。）
Charlotte’s father wiped his grease-stained hands on his overalls.
（Charlotte 的父亲在工装裤上擦了擦沾满油污的手。）
She clutched the edge of the trailer door, hesitating before stepping out.
（她紧紧抓住拖车门边，犹豫着是否要走出去。）
The hiker’s shoulders slumped in exhaustion as he leaned against the tree.
（徒步旅行者疲惫地耷拉着肩膀，靠在树上。）
Her mother’s hands fluttered over the meager ingredients, calculating silently.
（母亲的手在寥寥无几的食材上徘徊，默默计算着。）
He extended a calloused hand, offering a crumpled dollar bill.
（他伸出一只粗糙的手，递出一张皱巴巴的钞票。）
The wind howled outside, rattling the trailer’s thin walls.
（风在外面呼啸，震动着拖车薄薄的墙壁。）
She tucked her knees to her chest, trying to conserve warmth.
（她把膝盖蜷缩到胸前，试图保持体温。）
心理描写（Psychological Descriptions）
A pang of guilt twisted in her stomach.
（一阵内疚感在她胃里翻腾。）
Her mind raced with conflicting thoughts—selfishness versus kindness.
（她的脑海里充斥着矛盾的想法——自私还是善良。）
A flicker of hope ignited in her chest, fragile but persistent.
（一丝希望在她胸口点燃，脆弱却顽强。）
She swallowed hard, pushing down the lump in her throat.
（她艰难地咽了咽口水，压下喉咙里的哽咽。）
Doubt gnawed at her, whispering that they couldn’t afford generosity.
（怀疑啃噬着她，低声说他们承担不起慷慨。）
A warmth spread through her, despite the cold reality around her.
（尽管周围环境冰冷，一股暖流却在她体内蔓延。）
Her heart hammered against her ribs, loud enough to hear.
（她的心在胸腔里狂跳，声音大得仿佛能听见。）
She bit her lip, weighing the consequences of her decision.
（她咬着嘴唇，权衡着决定的后果。）
A strange calm settled over her, as if fate had already decided.
（一种奇怪的平静笼罩着她，仿佛命运已经做了决定。）
The weight of responsibility pressed down on her small shoulders.
（责任的重量压在她瘦小的肩膀上。）
环境描写（Environmental Descriptions）
The trailer groaned under the force of the wind, its metal frame creaking.
（拖车在风中呻吟，金属框架嘎吱作响。）
The last rays of sunlight filtered through the grimy window, casting long
shadows.
（最后的阳光透过脏兮兮的窗户照射进来，投下长长的影子。）
A musty smell clung to the air, a mix of damp fabric and old wood.
（空气中弥漫着一股霉味，混合着潮湿的布料和陈旧的木头。）
The forest loomed dark and endless beyond the narrow path.
（森林在小径之外显得幽暗而无穷无尽。）
Raindrops tapped against the roof like impatient fingers.
（雨滴像不耐烦的手指一样敲打着屋顶。）
The flickering candlelight painted wavering shapes on the walls.
（摇曳的烛光在墙上投下晃动的影子。）
The cold seeped through the thin walls, making every breath visible.
（寒气透过薄薄的墙壁渗入，每一次呼吸都清晰可见。）
The scent of boiled potatoes and salt hung in the cramped space.
（煮土豆和盐的气味在狭小的空间里挥之不去。）
Outside, the world seemed vast and indifferent to their struggles.
（外面的世界似乎广阔无垠，对他们的挣扎漠不关心。）
The night pressed in, silent except for the occasional rustle of leaves.
（夜色笼罩，除了偶尔的树叶沙沙声外一片寂静。）
高级词汇替换 & 常见搭配解析
高级词汇替换（场景分类）
基础词
高级替换（情感/动作/环境）
Sad
Melancholic (忧郁的), Wistful (惆怅的)
Hungry
Famished (极度饥饿的), Ravenous (贪婪饥饿的)
Cold
Bitter (刺骨的), Numbing (麻木的)
Small
Cramped (狭窄的), Meager (贫乏的)
Give
Offer (主动提供), Bestow (赐予)
常见固定搭配 & 词法解析
Turned upside down（彻底改变）
近义词：Overturned, Disrupted
反义词：Stabilized
例句：
Her life was turned upside down after the accident.
The sudden news turned their plans upside down.
Seized by a sense of...（被某种感觉攫住）
近义词：Overcome with, Gripped by
反义词：Unfazed
例句：
He was seized by a sense of dread when he heard the noise.
She was seized by a sudden urge to run away.
Whispered in hesitation（犹豫地低语）
近义词：Muttered uncertainly, Stammered
反义词：Declared boldly
例句：
She whispered in hesitation, afraid of being judged.
The boy whispered in hesitation before admitting his mistake.
Squeezed onto the tiny couch（挤在小沙发上）
近义词：Crammed into, Packed onto
反义词：Sprawled comfortably
例句：
The family squeezed onto the tiny couch, trying to stay warm.
We squeezed onto the bench, barely fitting.
A mix of shame and hope（羞耻与希望的混合）
近义词：Conflicting emotions, Ambivalence
反义词：Pure confidence
例句：
His expression showed a mix of shame and hope.
She felt a mix of shame and hope as she asked for help.
可积累的生词短语
Laid off (v.)（被解雇）
近义词：Dismissed, Terminated
反义词：Hired
例句：
He was laid off due to company downsizing.
Many workers were laid off during the recession.
Modest (adj.)（朴素的，适度的）
近义词：Humble, Simple
反义词：Lavish
例句：
They lived in a modest house with few luxuries.
She wore a modest dress to the event.
Trembled (v.)（颤抖）
近义词：Shook, Quivered
反义词：Steadied
例句：
Her voice trembled as she spoke.
His hands trembled from the cold.
Wander (v.)（徘徊）
近义词：Roam, Drift
反义词：March purposefully
例句：
She wandered outside, lost in thought.
He wandered the streets aimlessly.
Emerge (v.)（出现）
近义词：Appear, Surface
反义词：Disappear
例句：
A figure emerged from the fog.
The truth slowly emerged after the investigation.
建议：
动作描写：多用具体动词（如 clutch, ladle, shuffle）增强画面感。
心理描写：善用比喻（如 a pang of guilt, a flicker of hope）深化情感。
环境描写：结合感官细节（声音、气味、触觉）渲染氛围。
高级替换：在关键情绪或场景使用更精准的词汇（如 famished 代替 hungry）。
固定搭配：掌握 turned upside down, seized by, whispered in hesitation 等自然表
达。
5. Possible Versions（4）
Version 1
Paragraph 1:
“Of course!”
The words escaped Charlotte before she even realized it.
She
rushed to the trailer to bring out their only chicken dish her mother was ready to
cut, her hands trembling slightly(独立主格). Her father paused from fixing the truck,
glancing
at the hiker
(现在分词做伴随动作), then back at Charlotte. After a moment, he gave
her an approving nod. When the food was handed over, the man looked stunned, as
if he hadn’t expected kindness from strangers. “Thanks” he repeated in disbelief and
gratitude. Then, he sat on the trailer step and slowly ate, savoring each bite(现在分词做
伴随动作) as though it were gold. Her mother watched silently, then turned and prepared
their own meals from their limited supplies, her father showing his the right
way out(独立主格).They didn't eat together that night, but something unspoken passed
between them all—a quiet understanding that being human sometimes meant
giving up your portion for someone in greater need(同位语从句).
Paragraph 2:
Days later, the hiker returned with a big bag.
Charlotte was outside sweeping
the steps when she saw
the familiar figure
approaching
. She called for her parents,
and the family gathered as the man opened the bag. “This isn’t much,” he said, “but
I wanted to thank you properly.” Inside were
rice
, canned meat
, instant soup
packs
, and a small
sugar
pack
for
Charlotte
(名词并列)(完全倒装句). Charlotte’s father
grinned. That night, a decent dinner made, Charlotte’s mother whispered, “It feels
like... things are turning around.” The trailer no longer felt so small, and their spirits
no longer felt so heavy. Kindness, given
freely and without expectation
(过去分词做后置定语),
had opened a door to something deeper—connection, hope, and never ending
kind circles(名词并列).
Version 2
Paragraph 1:
“Of course!”
The words escaped Charlotte before she even realized it.
Her
voice caught both her parents by surprise. Her mother glanced at her, then at the
nearly empty pan, hesitant for a moment(adj 短语做补语). But Charlotte stepped forward
and added firmly, “We still have enough.” Her father walked over, patted her
shoulder, and said(动作串), “Let’s make it work.” Together, they plated the chicken with
care—cutting
it into four
, adding
a few crackers
, and even
sharing
their last
piece of fruit. The man sat under a tree nearby, overwhelmed by the generosity(过去
分词做adj，补语). He muttered thanks between bites, visibly touched(过去分词做adj 补语). Charlotte
watched him eat, and her father told him where he should head. That night, as
they lay shoulder to shoulder on the cramped couch-bed, her mother whispered, “You
did something beautiful today.” And Charlotte fell asleep with a quiet smile, heart
full despite
a little
hunger
(独立主格).
Paragraph 2:
Days later, the hiker returned with a big bag. Charlotte had just returned from
collecting water when she
spotted him waving from the road
. He walked up slowly,
carrying
the bag with both hands
(现在分词做伴随动作). “I remembered what you gave me
when you
all
had so little,
” he said. “I want to give something back.” He handed
over dry goods, a warm blanket, and even a tool kit(名词并列). Charlotte’s father let out
a low whistle. “That’s more than enough,” he said gratefully. As they unpacked the
items, laughter filled the trailer again. The blanket now covered Charlotte and her
mother during the cold nights, and the tools helped fix the truck. That day, Charlotte
learned something profound: a kind act, no matter how small, often grows bigger
once it’s shared. And sometimes, hope doesn’t knock—it walks back down the
same path it once left.
地道搭配 & 升级词汇：
基本表达
升级表达
very tasty
delicious / flavorful / savory
said thanks murmured with gratitude / expressed heartfelt thanks
gave food
offered their last portion / shared what little they had
laughed
laughter bubbled up / chuckled softly
poor
struggling / in hardship / down on their luck
情绪描写 & 动作短语（推荐积累）：
Her voice caught in her throat.
His hands trembled slightly as he accepted the plate.
She smiled despite the growl in her stomach.
He paused, eyes moist, before speaking.
Hope flickered like a candlelight in the dark.
同义替换 & 词群积累：
原词
替换/近义词
示例句
help
assist / support / lend a hand
They didn’t expect help, but they gave it
anyway.
happy content / fulfilled / warmed
She felt fulfilled despite the cold night.
tired
exhausted / drained / weary
The man looked weary, but hopeful.
share offer / divide / pass around
They divided the food without a second
thought.
kind
generous / compassionate / warm-
hearted
It was a warm-hearted gesture from a
child.
Version 3
Paragraph 1:
“Of course!” The words escaped Charlotte before she even realized it. Her
parents turned to her, exchanged a knowing glance. Without hesitation, her
mother cut the chicken into four portions, smaller than usual(独立主格), and placed one
on a plate for the hiker. Charlotte offered the dish with both hands, noticing(现在分词做伴随
动作) how his eyes lit up with disbelief and gratitude. He sat by the trailer quietly,
savoring
every bite as if it were a feast
(现在分词短语做伴随动作). As the family ate together
on
the couch
later that night,
there was no complaint—only a shared warmth that
seemed to replace the emptiness in their stomachs. Lying in bed(现在分词做伴随动作),
Charlotte stared at the ceiling, unsure(adj 做主语补语) whether her stomach felt full, but
her heart definitely did. In the quiet, she realized what it meant to give even when
you had little—kindness didn’t subtract, it multiplied.
Paragraph 2:
Days later, the hiker returned with a big bag. Charlotte was outside collecting
firewood when she saw the familiar figure approaching with a bright smile. The man
explained he had made it safely to town and had returned with food—canned
goods, bread, and even a fresh chicken(名词短语并列). “I owe you more than a meal,” he
said, eyes full of emotion(独立主格). Charlotte’s mother gasped, while
her father
simply nodded, lips trembling slightly. As they unpacked the bag, Charlotte noticed
something else: a folded note. It read, “Your kindness saved me. I hope this brings
back a bit of what you gave me.” That evening, around a fuller table, the family
laughed louder and smiled wider. The trailer hadn’t changed, but something
inside them had—a belief in kindness that in giving, they had found something
far richer than what they gave away.
语言亮点与表达提升
类别
表达
升级与替换建议
搭配
lit up with gratitude / savor every
bite / shared warmth / eyes full of
emotion
→ be overwhelmed with
thankfulness, taste every
mouthful, a warmth settled over
them, tear-filled eyes
同义替换
empty stomach → growling belly /
little food → scarce supply /
kindness → generosity,
compassion
动作描写亮点
offered with both hands / turned,
stunned / unpacked the bag / lips
trembling slightly
情绪描写词汇
disbelief, gratitude, overwhelmed,
emotional, full-hearted, choked-up
高分语法点
- 非谓语：Noticing how his eyes
lit up...
- 强调句型：It was not the food,
but the kindness that filled her
heart.
- 倒装句：Only after he left did
Charlotte realize the weight of her
choice.
官方读后续写
“Of
course!” The words escaped Charlotte before she even realized it.
She
turned to her dad, who nodded without hesitation. With light steps, Charlotte
went inside and told her mum. They invited the man to have dinner together
and Charlotte’s mother divided the chicken into four portions instead of three,
the biggest share for him ( 独立主格). The man’s face lit up with gratitude as he
took a bite , “The most delicious chicken in my life.” As they ate together in the
trailer
, laughter bubbled up—stories were shared, and for a moment , the
bitterness of their life was left behind. After dinner, her father showed the
hiker the right way. He thanked them repeatedly and hit the road.
Days later, the hiker returned with a big bag. Inside the bag were some
canned foods ( 完全倒装句), fresh bread and even a small bag of candies for
Charlotte ( 名词并列). “I couldn’t forget your kindness,” he explained gratefully.
Charlotte hugged him, her eyes sparkling (独立主格刻画人物状态), while her father
clapped
him on the back
like an old friend
. That evening, they feasted on a proper
meal, a warm atmosphere flowing in the trailer (独立主格，环境描写), as if hope itself
knocked on their door. The hiker’s gesture not only filled their stomachs but
also warmed their hearts. It was a reminder that even in the darkest times,
kindness has a way of circling back when least expected.
