重庆市巴蜀中学2026 届高三8 月适应性月考(一)英语试卷
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文。
In the heavy summer heat, I watched an elderly woman struggle with a walker,
weighed down
with bags of groceries
(过去分词做后置定语). Slowing
down
(现在分词做伴随动作), I
opened the window and called out, “Need a ride? Let me help you with your
groceries.”
Getting out of the car( 现在分词短语做伴随动作), I placed her walker and bags into my
trunk. “Bless you, child,” she said. We were off. She directed me to go south. It
seemed too far for her to walk. She explained that she usually took a bus but had
missed the last one. She worked as a bagger at the nearby grocery store.
We chatted as if we'd known each other for years. Her name was Ida. She had
grandchildren.Suddenly, I realized we were on the“wrong side of town.” It was
starting to get dark, and I began to feel uneasy. We continued down unfamiliar streets
until she finally pointed to an old apartment building where she lived(怎么突然想到了那13 串气球).
Several young men in their early twenties had gathered around the entrance. They
were smoking something and appeared threatening. Some were on motorcycles, and
one, wearing
a hoodie (
连帽衫
) over his bushy
(现在分词做伴随动作), long hair, was staring at
me intently —— too intently —— and smiling(读到这里想到的是2025 届八省联考).
I was getting more and more uncomfortable, but Ida seemed fine. I stopped the
car. Ida directed a couple of the guys to help with her groceries. She thanked me, and
I drove away as fast as I could.
Suddenly I heard the roar of a motorcycle behind me. I recognized the biker
from the apartment house —— the one with the hoodie and bushy hair who kept
smiling at me. He didn't pass me but continued to drive at the same speed as me. I
realized he was waving for me to stop.
It would soon be getting dark. No way was I going to stop for a suspicious
stranger on a deserted street( 部分倒装句). In a panic,I reached down for my purse to
grab my cell phone. I had to call 911. But my purse wasn't there!(这个题目吧，好像综合了好多题目的原
形，有高考真题，但是中心一定是不可以貌取人)
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: “She stole my purse! So much for acts of kindness,” I thought.
Paragraph 2: I was speechless as I handed him his grandma's purse.
重庆市巴蜀中学2026 届高三8 月适应性月考(一)英语试卷
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短
文。
In the heavy summer heat, I watched an elderly woman struggle with a walker,
weighed down with bags of groceries. Slowing down, I opened the window and called
out, “Need a ride? Let me help you with your groceries.”
Getting out of the car, I placed her walker and bags into my trunk. “Bless you,
child,” she said. We were off. She directed me to go south. It seemed too far for her to
walk. She explained that she usually took a bus but had missed the last one. She
worked as a bagger at the nearby grocery store.
We chatted as if we'd known each other for years. Her name was Ida. She had
grandchildren.Suddenly, I realized we were on the“wrong side of town.” It was
starting to get dark, and I began to feel uneasy. We continued down unfamiliar streets
until she finally pointed to an old apartment building where she lived. Several young
men in their early twenties had gathered around the entrance They were smoking
something and appeared threatening. Some were on motorcycles, and one, wearing a
hoodie ( 连帽衫) over his bushy, long hair, was staring at me intently —— too
intently —— and smiling.
I was getting more and more uncomfortable, but Ida seemed fine. I stopped the
car. Ida directed a couple of the guys to help with her groceries. She thanked me, and
I drove away as fast as I could.
Suddenly I heard the roar of a motorcycle behind me. I recognized the biker
from the apartment house —— the one with the hoodie and bushy hair who kept
smiling at me. He didn't pass me but continued to drive at the same speed as me. I
realized he was waving for me to stop.
It would soon be getting dark. No way was I going to stop for a suspicious
stranger on a deserted street. In a panic,I reached down for my purse to grab my cell
phone. I had to call 911. But my purse wasn't there!
注意:1.续写词数应为150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: “She stole my purse! So much for acts of kindness,” I thought.
Paragraph 2: I was speechless as I handed him his grandma's purse.
一、文章分类与续写思路分析
该读后续写属于人际温情+冲突反转类（善良/误解-化解-感动）类，聚焦于
陌生人之间的善意互动、误解与化解，强调人性温暖与信任主题。故事通过紧
张氛围的营造和反转，传递“不要以貌取人”的深层含义。
构思思路：
情绪转折：从恐慌（以为被追威胁）到恍然大悟（对方是归还钱包），需突出
心理变化。
主题升华：通过误会解除，强调善意与信任的价值，呼应原文“帮助他人”的
初衷。
逻辑衔接：需紧密承接原文的伏笔（如失踪的钱包、年轻人的微笑、Ida 的淡
定）。
布局与框架：
第一段（开头已给）：聚焦主角的恐慌与误解，通过内心独白强化冲突，可加
入环境描写（如昏暗街道、摩托车声）烘托紧张感。
第二段（开头已给）：解决误会，揭示年轻人真实意图（归还钱包），通过对
话和动作描写完成情感转折，结尾点题。
实施要点：
承接原文：
必须解释钱包为何在年轻人手中（Ida 无意中拿走？掉落车中？）。
需呼应原文“hoodie 青年”的微笑和Ida 的淡定（伏笔：青年实为善意）。
设计巧思：
加入细节反转（如青年举起钱包的动作、焦急的表情）；
通过对比主角前后的心理变化（恐慌→羞愧→感动）增强故事层次。
注意事项：
保持人称和时态一致（第一人称、过去时）；
语言风格匹配原文（口语化对话、心理描写丰富）；
控制节奏：第一段紧张急促，第二段舒缓温暖。
二、故事山模式分析
阶
段
内容描述
开
端
主角帮助Ida 回家，展现善意
发
展
进入“危险区域”，遇到神秘青年，氛围紧张
高
潮
青年追击主角，主角发现钱包丢失，误以为被威胁
转
折
青年归还钱包，揭示善意
结
局
误会解除，主题升华（善意与信任）
三、原文要素分析与续写衔接表
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
人物刻画
Ida：善良乐观；青年：外表威
胁实为善意；主角：热心但易
焦虑
“She seemed fine”; “smiling
intently”
情感层次
从善意→紧张→恐慌→羞愧→
感动
“I began to feel uneasy”; “In a
panic”
关键情节
青年追击并要求停车；钱包丢
“He was waving for me to stop”;
分析角度
内容
原文反应句
点
失
“My purse wasn’t there!”
语言特色
口语化对话，心理描写细腻
“Bless you, child”; “So much for
acts of kindness”
关键词分
析
“hoodie”“smiling”“purse”为伏笔
词
“hoodie”“smiling”“purse”
心理描写
主角的紧张与误解
“I was getting more and more
uncomfortable”
动作描写
青年挥手、追击；主角翻找钱
包
“waving for me to stop”; “reached
down for my purse”
环境描写
昏暗天色、偏僻街道烘托紧张
氛围
“It was starting to get dark”;
“deserted street”
隐含主题
勿以貌取人；善意与信任的价
值
Ida 的淡定与青年的微笑（伏笔）
情感转折
由恐慌转为羞愧与感动
原文无直接描写，需在续写中体
现
空间转换
从公寓楼到偏僻街道
“drove away as fast as I could”
时间过渡
天色变暗，时间紧迫感增强
“It would soon be getting dark”
伏笔与冲突点：
伏笔：Ida 的淡定（暗示青年无害）、青年的微笑（实为友好）、钱包失踪（后
文归还）。
冲突点：主角的误解（以为被威胁）vs. 青年的真实意图（归还钱包）。
隐含线索：青年是Ida 的孙子或熟人（原文Ida 指挥年轻人帮忙）。
解决方案：青年澄清误会，归还钱包，主角反思偏见。
续写段落示范（基于分析）
Paragraph 1:
“She stole my purse! So much for acts of kindness,” I thought. My heart pounded as
the motorcycle roared closer. I stepped on the accelerator, but he matched my speed,
still waving urgently. Was this a trap? My mind raced with headlines about roadside
robberies. I fumbled for my phone again, forgetting it was in the missing purse. Just
then, he pulled alongside my window, his hoodie flapping in the wind. I glimpsed his
face — not threatening but anxious. He shouted, “Stop! You forgot something!” But
fear deafened me. I swerved into a narrow alley, hoping to lose him.
Paragraph 2:
I was speechless as I handed him his grandma’s purse. He grinned, wiping sweat from
his forehead. “Grandma Ida told me to catch you. Your purse slipped under her bags
when you loaded them.” He added, “She worries about good people like you.” Shame
warmed my cheeks. I stammered, “I thought you were…” He laughed, “Because of
my look? Grandma says I need a haircut.” We both smiled. As he drove off, I
realized: kindness isn’t just about helping; it’s about trusting enough to receive it too.
四、动作、环境、心理描写
动作描写
He frantically waved his arms, signaling me to pull over.
(他疯狂地挥舞着手臂，示意我靠边停车。)
My fingers trembled as I futilely groped for the absent phone.
(我的手指颤抖着，徒劳地摸索着那个不在了的手机。)
I slammed my foot on the accelerator, desperate to put distance between us.
(我猛地踩下油门，拼命想拉开我们之间的距离。)
The biker pulled alongside my car, motioning for me to roll down the window.
(那个骑摩托车的人开到我的车旁，示意我摇下车窗。)
He reached into his jacket, and my heart leaped into my throat.
(他把手伸进夹克衫，我的心一下子跳到了嗓子眼。)
I risked a glance in the rearview mirror, seeing his persistent figure.
(我冒险瞥了一眼后视镜，看到了他紧追不舍的身影。)
He produced my purse from his backpack, holding it out cautiously.
(他从背包里拿出了我的钱包，小心翼翼地递过来。)
I reluctantly brought the car to a halt, my hand still gripping the gearshift
tightly.
(我不情愿地把车停下来，手仍然紧紧抓着换挡杆。)
A wave of relief washed over me, causing my shoulders to slump.
(一阵宽慰感席卷了我，让我的肩膀一下子松了下来。)
I managed a weak smile as I accepted the returned possession.
(我挤出一丝无力的微笑，接过了失而复得的物品。)
心理描写
A paralyzing fear seized me, freezing all rational thought.
(一种令人瘫痪的恐惧攫住了我，冻结了所有理性的思考。)
My mind raced, conjuring up every worst-case scenario imaginable.
(我的大脑飞速运转，想象出所有能想到的最坏情况。)
A torrent of regret for my impulsive kindness flooded my heart.
(一股对自己冲动善举的后悔之情涌上心头。)
Suspicion and fear gnawed at the edges of my mind.
(怀疑和恐惧侵蚀着我的思绪。)
I chastised myself for being so naive and trusting.
(我责备自己太天真、太轻信。)
The initial panic gradually gave way to burning curiosity.
(最初的恐慌逐渐让位于燃烧的好奇心。)
I was utterly bewildered by this unexpected turn of events.
(我被这意想不到的转折完全搞糊涂了。)
Mortification replaced fear as I realized my grave mistake.
(当我意识到自己严重的错误时，羞耻感取代了恐惧。)
A profound sense of shame washed over me for misjudging him.
(我因错怪了他而感到深深的羞愧。)
My initial terror melted into heartfelt gratitude and humility.
(我最初的恐惧融化为衷心的感激和谦卑。)
环境描写
The deserted street was bathed in the eerie orange glow of the streetlights.
(空无一人的街道沐浴在路灯诡异的橙色光芒中。)
Shadows lengthened and twisted, making familiar shapes seem menacing.
(阴影拉长并扭曲，让熟悉的形状也变得吓人。)
The only sound was the menacing roar of the motorcycle engine.
(唯一的声音是摩托车发动机威胁性的轰鸣。)
The approaching nightfall cast a shroud of uncertainty over everything.
(夜幕的降临给一切都蒙上了一层不确定性的阴影。)
The narrow alley felt like a trap, closing in on me from all sides.
(狭窄的小巷感觉像个陷阱，从四面八方向我逼近。)
A cold breeze whistled through the streets, raising goosebumps on my skin.
(一阵冷风吹过街道，让我起了一身鸡皮疙瘩。)
The dimly lit surroundings amplified every little noise into a potential threat.
(光线昏暗的环境把每一点细微的声响都放大成了潜在的威胁。)
The sky deepened from twilight to an inky blue, offering no comfort.
(天空从暮色变成了墨蓝色，让人丝毫感觉不到安慰。)
The headlights of his motorcycle cut through the growing darkness like a blade.
(他的摩托车头灯像一把刀一样划破渐深的黑暗。)
The world outside the car window seemed hushed, holding its breath.
(车窗外的世界似乎寂静无声，屏住了呼吸。)
常见单词高级替换词 (Advanced Vocabulary Replacement)
常见词
高级替换词 (场景分类：情绪/状态)
释义
Afraid
Apprehensive (更正式，表示焦虑的预感)
忧虑的，担心的
Terrified (程度更深，极度恐惧)
十分恐惧的
Panic-stricken (被恐慌席卷的)
惊慌失措的
Happy
Elated (极度高兴，兴高采烈的)
兴高采烈的
Content (心满意足的，平静的满足)
满意的
Overjoyed (非常高兴的)
欣喜若狂的
Sad
Despondent (绝望的，沮丧的)
沮丧的，失望的
Melancholy (忧郁的，沉思的悲伤)
忧郁的
Heartbroken (心碎的，极度悲伤)
心碎的
Beautiful
Exquisite (精致的，近乎完美的)
精致的，优美的
Picturesque (风景如画的)
如画般的
Breathtaking (美得令人窒息的)
激动人心的，壮观的
Important
Crucial (至关重要的，决定性的)
决定性的，重要的
Pivotal (关键性的，起枢纽作用的)
关键的
Paramount (至高无上的，最重要的)
至高无上的
常见地道搭配
Heavy heat: 沉重的闷热（比 hot weather 更生动）。
Weighed down with: 被...压得直不起腰，满载。
The wrong side of town: 城镇中治安较差、较落后的区域（固定说法）。
Stare intently: 专注地凝视。
The roar of a motorcycle: 摩托车的轰鸣声（roar 比 sound 更具体）。
In a panic: 惊慌失措地（常用介词短语）。
Acts of kindness: 善行（act 常用复数形式表示行为）。
Wave for someone to do sth: 挥手示意某人做某事。
Put distance between A and B: 拉开A 和B 之间的距离。
A wave of (emotion) washed over me: 一股（情绪）向我袭来（非常地道的情绪
描写）。
词法解析与可积累语料
1. intently (adv.)
词意: 专注地，专心地，急切地
词性: 副词
近义词: attentively, keenly, fixedly, closely
反义词: absently, distractedly, inattentively
例句:
The dog watched its owner intently, waiting for the command.
He listened intently to every word she said, not wanting to miss a detail.
2. groan (v./n.)
词意: (v.) 呻吟，叹息；(n.) 呻吟声，抱怨声（可用于描写旧物、风声等）
词性: 动词、名词
近义词: (v.) moan, sigh, creak; (n.) moan, creak, complaint
反义词: (v.) cheer, rejoice; (n.) cheer, applause
例句:
The old floorboards groaned under his weight. (环境描写)
She let out a groan of disappointment when she saw the test results.
3. futilely (adv.)
词意: 徒劳地，无益地
词性: 副词
近义词: vainly, unsuccessfully, fruitlessly, in vain
反义词: successfully, effectively, fruitfully
例句:
He futilely searched his pockets for the lost key.
They futilely tried to convince him to change his mind.
4. apprehension (n.)
词意: 忧虑，担心，恐惧（对未来的不安）
词性: 名词
近义词: anxiety, worry, unease, dread, misgiving
反义词: confidence, calmness, assurance, certainty
例句:
A feeling of apprehension hung in the air before the big storm.
She felt a surge of apprehension as she walked into the dark room.
5. menace (n./v.)
词意: (n.) 威胁，危险的人/物；(v.) 威胁，恐吓
词性: 名词、动词
近义词: (n.) threat, danger, hazard; (v.) threaten, intimidate, endanger
反义词: (n.) safety, security; (v.) protect, guard, reassure
例句:
The dark clouds held a menace of rain. (环境描写)
His quiet tone somehow menaced more than shouting would have.
五、Possible Versions(4)
Version 1
Paragraph 1:
“She stole my purse! So much for acts of kindness,” I thought. My hands
trembling on the wheel(独立主格), I pressed the accelerator harder, my heart pounding
wildly(独立主格), imagining(现在分词短语做伴随动作) myself in tomorrow’s headlines. Meanwhile,
the guy on the motorcycle stayed close, signaling
for me to stop
(现在分词短语做伴随动作), his
headlight flashing like a warning beacon(独立主格). Fear surged through me(无灵主语句)
until, glancing
sideways
(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I spotted a purse lying on the passenger seat
—brown, old, and definitely not mine(adj 短语做补语). At that instant, he drew up beside
me, waving
my own purse frantically
(现在分词短语做伴随动作), his face anxious but not
hostile. My mind froze. Could it be that I had misunderstood everything?
Paragraph 2:
I was speechless as I handed him his grandma’s purse. “She picked it up with
her groceries by mistake,” he explained, his tone surprisingly gentle(独立主格).He gave
me a nod, then sped off, disappearing
into the shadows of the street
(现在分词短语做结果状语).
Sitting
behind the wheel
(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I felt both relieved and ashamed, my
earlier fear melting into gratitude(独立主格). Wanting
to reward him
(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I
grabbed a few bills, waving
desperately for him to return
(现在分词短语做伴随动作), but he
was gone. Staring
into the night
(现在分词短语做伴随动作), I murmured a quiet “Thank you.”
At that moment, I realized how quickly we jump to conclusions. Appearances
deceive, but kindness is often hidden in the least expected faces.
Version 2
Paragraph 1:
“She stole my purse! So much for acts of kindness,” I thought. The words
echoed bitterly in my mind(无灵主语句), my palms slick with sweat (独立主格)as I clutched the
steering wheel. The motorcycle’s engine roared beside me(无灵主语句), the rider
gesturing wildly for me to pull over(独立主格). Out of the corner of my eye, I spotted
something lying on the floor—another purse, stuffed
under the seat
(过去分词短语做伴随动作).
Confusion swept over me(无灵主语句). Before I could process it, the biker pulled level, his
hand raised high(独立主格), holding
my familiar purse
(现在分词短语做伴随动作). His smile was no
longer menacing, but reassuring, almost protective(adj 短语做补语).
Paragraph 2:
I was speechless as I handed him his grandma’s purse.
The young man
accepted it politely and returned mine through the half-open window. “Grandma
didn’t realize she picked it up, wrong,” he said, his voice calm(独立主格), carrying
no
trace of hostility
, or
anger
(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Then, with a wave, he vanished into the
night, the taillight fading like a distant star(独立主格). I sat motionless, replaying
the
scene(现在分词短语做伴随动作), my cheeks burning with guilt(独立主格). Earlier, I had feared the
worst; now, I could only admire the best. Sometimes, I reflected(插入语), people are
angels in rough disguise. Perhaps what matters(主从) is not where they live or how
they look, but the warmth they carry in their hearts.
Version 3
Paragraph 1:
“She stole my purse! So much for acts of kindness,” I thought. Anxiety clawed
at me(独立主格)as I sped up, the biker tailing me like a shadow(独立主格). He leaned
forward, signaling
for me to pull over
(现在分词短语做伴随动作), his headlights flashing
insistently(独立主格). My breath caught when I noticed a small purse on the
passenger
seat—clearly not mine. Shock hit me like a wave(无灵主语句). At the same moment, the
biker rode up beside my car, waving another purse—my purse—(现在分词短语做伴随动作)his
expression urgent but not unfriendly(独立主格). My pulse eased just enough for reason
to return. Had I been wrong all along?
Paragraph 2:
I was speechless as I handed him his grandma’s purse. He nodded, placed my
purse safely in my hands, and with a simple “Take care,” he disappeared down the
road, leaving
me staring after him
(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Hoping
to
say
thank
s
properly(现在分成短语做伴随动作), I rolled down the glass to call him back, but the night
had already swallowed him whole(无灵主语句). Alone in the car(adj 短语做主语补语), I realized how
quick I had been to judge, blinded
by fear and prejudice
(过去分词短语做原因状语). Who was
I to decide who looked dangerous or trustworthy? It dawned on me: true
kindness does not shout from the rooftops—it often rides silently by our side,
waiting
to be noticed
(现在分词短语做伴随动作).
clutch the wheel = grip the wheel 紧握方向盘
pulse raced = heart pounded / heartbeat quickened 心跳加速
relief washed over me = I felt greatly relieved 如释重负
fear welled up = panic surged 恐惧涌上心头
misjudge sb. = misunderstand / take sb. the wrong way 误解某人
worth offering = worth giving / rewarding 有价值的
2. 情绪描写亮点词汇
fear/anger/relief/gratitude/shame/regret/embarrassment
voice trembling / throat dry / face flushed / heart pounding
3. 动作描写亮点词汇
pressed harder on the gas pedal → stepped on the accelerator
fumbled for → searched clumsily 摸索
cast nervous glances → shot uneasy looks 紧张地张望
tightened my grip → held firmly 紧握
panting / breathlessly → 上气不接下气
4. 升级语料替换
dangerous → menacing / threatening / intimidating
kindness → compassion / goodwill / benevolence
suddenly → all of a sudden / out of the blue
important → vital / crucial / essential
5. 例句积累
Relief washed over me when I realized it was only a misunderstanding.
My heart pounded so violently that I could hardly breathe.
He misjudged me because of my appearance, which was unfair.
Compassion, though sometimes misunderstood, is always worth showing.
官方：【参考范文】
“She stole my purse! So much for acts of kindness, ” I thought. Meanwhile,
the guy on the motorcycle stayed close and even tried to get in front of me, signaling
for me to stop(现在分词短语做伴随动作). Out of the corner of my eye, I noticed a purse on the
floor of my car. Yes, there was a purse, but it wasn't mine. Then I saw the guy right
outside my window, waving
my purse
(现在分词短语做伴随动作)! I couldn't believe my eyes. I
pulled over to the curb, and the young man stopped his motorcycle by the passenger
side. Through the window I had opened, he handed me my purse. “Grandma sent me
to give you this. She picked it up by mistake. She is so sorry.” He was still smiling.
This time, his smile didn't appear threatening, simply gracious(adj 做补语).
I was speechless as I handed him his grandma's purse. Then he took off. After
retrieving a few dollars, I waved for the young man to stop, hoping
to reward
him(现在分词短语做伴随动作), but he had disappeared into the night. I did manage to yell, “Thank
you!” I had assumed he was a criminal because he looked“wild,” but he was really
an angel who went out of his way to help a stranger. Sometimes, we misjudge a
person's character because they don't conform to what we believe is proper. They
may not drive a stylish car, live on the“right” side of town, or dress in what we
consider to be fashionable, but who's to say they are not equal to or better than we
are?(这个设问很好)
开头段首承接（误会升级）
首句：“She stole my purse! So much for acts of kindness,” I thought. → 引
出心理误会和情绪。
逻辑推进：摩托车青年紧追（伴随动作），主人公越来越恐惧。
关键转折：意外发现——车上有另一个钱包，青年手里举着自己的钱包
→ 真相呼之欲出。
逻辑功能：先“误会加深”，再“真相揭示”。
第二段（误会化解 → 升华主题）
首句：I was speechless as I handed him his grandma's purse. → 自然承接
第一段的结尾（误会解开）。
动作衔接：归还钱包 → 想要表达感谢，但青年已消失。
心理层次：从紧张害怕 → 惊讶 → 感激 → 反思。
升华主题：不要以貌取人，善意值得被相信。
逻辑功能：冲突解决 + 主题升华。
